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Posted: 11 years ago
Nice update...Thanks for the pm

Waiting for the track in Dubai!
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Posted: 11 years ago
Wonderful update. Thank you for the PM. Am so eager to read about what happens in Dubai.
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Posted: 11 years ago
wishing u very happy lohari...
Happy Lohri
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Posted: 11 years ago
Sad update. Glad that MU is clear, thanks to Sunny. Look forward to see next update.
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Posted: 11 years ago
The Shell of love Part 15
I know that everyone was missed off seeing the waist scene of Saras-Kusum in Saraswatichandra show.Hope you all will be happy to see Sunny-Kusum waist scene.
Thanks a lot 4 reading this ss.This is the last part.So plz give a long comment on d last part.
Plz write ur fav scene,fav charac & why u liked it.plz give a long comment this time



10 years have passed.

Kumud was upset with Saras' busy schedule.
Kumud thought:Today is my birthday.Still Saras is not with me.


Kumari:Kumud di,Saras bhai came?
K:No.Your Saras bhai has no time.
Danny:Kumud bhabhi,don't worry.Bhaiyya will come now.
Kusum:Sunny is also busy with Saras jeejaji.But Still he comes home early on my birthday.


K:God knows whether he even remembers my birthday.Now a days he remembers only office matters.There is no space in his brain to store these days.


Saras came smiling:I don't suffer from memory loss.So I have not forgotten your birthday Kumud.
Kumud was surprised.
K:Saras!
S:I have entrusted Sunny to handle the meeting.Sorry Kusum.
Kus:No problem jeejaji.Today is yours and Kumud di's day.
Everyone else left the room.
Saras gave her a cover.
S:Wear this birthday girl.
She smiled.

Kumud came wearing the beautiful ghagra Saras gifted her.


Saras pulled her closer to him:Now you look so young Kumud.You don't look like the mother of 2 kids.
She blushed.
K:I never thought that you will come early.
S:How can I not come for my wife's birthday?And why I came early is only if i come before our children reach from school I will be able to romance my wife.
Suddenly Danny,Kumari,Kusum,Danny-Kumari's daughter Shagun,Sunny-Kusum's son Ranvijay,Saras-Kumud's children Roopa and Shlok came with a cake singing 'Happy Birthday to you...'
S:Kids came home early?
Shlok:Yes.Papa...you forgot.It's 4 o' clock already.We reach home by 3.
Kumud giggled seeing Saras' embarassment.They both burst into laughter.
Kumari:Kumud di.You look so stylish in this ghagra.Even in Kareena Karishma shop such a beautiful dress won't be found.Is it Saras bhai's gift?
Kumud smiled at Saras and said:Who else will gift me such a beautiful attire?
Kusum:It is Saras jeejaji's selection.That's why Kumud didi looks so beautiful in it.After all this gift is Saras jeejaji's love.
Kumud smiled at Saras.He smiled back.




Kumari looked at Danny:Danny,buy me nice dresses from Kareena Karishma shop when we go to India this time.
Danny:Kumari...i guess you will make my pocket empty.
Kumari gave him a kick.Everybody laughed.
Kusum:Anyways the cake looks yummy.Let us not wait anymore to cut the cake.



Kumud cut the cake and fed Saras,then kids,then Kusum,Kumari and Danny.


They all went to Ratnagiri during vacation.The whole Desai family welcomed them happily.Vidhyachathur,Guniyal,Dugbha were happy to see their children and grand children after a long time.
Dugbha saw Danny struggling hard to carry a big bag.
Dug:Why are you carrying such a heavy bag Danny?
D:What to do my dear sasuma?I have to obey my wife.Otherwise she will shout at me like hell.
Dugbha stared at Kumari:Kumari...this is how you should treat your husband?Good that Danny is soft.Otherwise you would have been kicked out of the house.
Kumari became dull.
Danny held her close to him and said:Don't scold my sweet wife Sasuma.I was just kidding.I told her not to carry it.Otherwise she would have carried it by herself and broke her back bone.Then I will have to take her to the hospital and to avoid that expense only I told her not to carry it.
Kumari gave him a kick on the shoulder.Everyone laughed.
D:This bag is full of gifts from Dubai.
All were excited.
Danny and Kumari distributed the gifts happily.


The kids enjoyed a lot with their grand parents.
Kumud asked Yash's mother:How are Yash,Kalika and their kids?
Yash's mother:But God's grace after a long struggle Yash got a supporting role in a Shah Rukh Khan movie.So they have decided to settle in Bombay itself.The kids got admission in a school there.
Kumud:Wow!That's such a nice news.
Kumari:That means now we can see Yash bhai in a movie.That also with Shah Rukh Khan.So cool.
Sunny:Yash is becoming a celebrity.We may have to go to the film city to see Yash.Why don't we all go to Bombay to visit Yash?
Kusum:That's a good idea.Let us get ready.
Kumari:Danny,before that let us do shopping in Kareena Karishma.
D:Why Kumari so urgent?
Kuma:There will be Shah Rukh Khan.He will see me.So I should be well dressed.
Everyone laughed.
Dugbha:This girl's childishness has not gone even after many years.She behaves as if she is younger than her child.
Everyone laughed leaving Kumari in embarassment.
Danny whispered in Kumari's ears:So you want to impress SRK?But you have already impressed me with the current clothes you have.So should we do shopping?
Kuma:You have already impressed.Right?So I don't need to impress you.but i need to impress Shah Rukh Khan.So I need to do shopping.
D:Oh my God!
Roopa asked Kumud:Maa...Will we see Shah Rukh Khan?
Kumud hugged Roopa:Yes beta.We will be able to see him there.
Saras:Since you are a Shah Rukh fan papa will take you there.
Roopa was very happy.



Kusum got ready.Sunny looked at her.Kusum smiled.
Kus:Sunny...Am I looking good?
Sun:Not that good.
Kus:What?
She never expected this kind of a reply from him.
Sun:I have to be frank.Kusum...
Kusum became very dull.
Sun:Kusum..you always forget something.
Kus:What did i forget?
Sunny took the waist chain.Her face glowed.He came towards her and tied the chain around her waist.When his fingers touched her waist she closed her eyes due to the sensuous feel.





Sunny smiled.
He moved towards her ear.She blushed.
Sun:Kusum...we got married 10 years back.Since then you have been forgetting to wear your waist chain.I know that purposefully you are forgetting to wear it.So that I will put it around your waist.Right?
She was embarassed,but she blushed.He smiled seeing yer blush.
Sunny looked at her romantically:You know what Kusum?I love making you wear the waist chain.If you had worn the waist chain I would have removed it and put it around your waist with my hand.


She blushed.



They all went to Bombay and met Yash,Kalika and kids.Yash took them to the film city where he was shooting with Shahrukh Khan.Sunny-Kusum,Saras-Kumud,Danny-Kumari and all the kids stood with SRK for photographs and enjoyed.

Like this they lived happily.

The End

Edited by jasminerahul - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Lovely ending
Nice to see them still so much in love
N the men romancing n teasing their partners every possible chance
Sorry this story has ended ...but thoroughly enjoyed
My fav character in this story has to be Sunny he's so nice n down to earth
Loved how he protected his wife n wouldn't let Danny speak ill of her in chapter 14 had to be my fav scene
U could see his love for her n her him just by the way she ran into his arms for protection n how he shielded her from everyone's anger

Thanks for pm n plz keep em comin my way




Omg omg just realized I'm first ...about time too I'm always running at tale end lol
Nice to be early for change ...first time in my life lol 😉 😃
Edited by YaSha0512 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Simply superb story. I loved the ending.
All the couples were so much in love.
All the husbands are teasing their wives. Love to see them all romancing each other.
I hated to see this story and the couples end.
👏
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Posted: 11 years ago
nce i loved ur ending a lot!!!
n must say gud edit of pics!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
Lovely ending

Loved it ❤️
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Posted: 11 years ago
wow excellent update and ending loved it thank you for pm.

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