I desire you Samud SS Last part - Page 6

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Posted: 12 years ago
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I desire you Part 5


Saras went near Kumud:Kumud,please listen to me.

K:Don't talk to me.I on't want to talk to you.And please don't disturb me.

Saras was torn by Kumud's rude words.

Kumud went away.

Saras was very upset as Kumud was avoiding him completely.

Juhi felt very upset as she was unknowingly responsible for Samud's condition.

She rang up their classmate Mayank.

J:Hi Mayank…how are you?How is your health?

Ma:I am ok now.Tomorrow I will come to college.

J:You did'nt come to college for 3 days because of fever.But so much happened.

Ma:What happened?Is everything alight?

J:Kumud thinks that I and Saras have an affair.So she is angry with Saras.I feel very sad.Because of me their friendship broke.

Ma:Oh nooo.But it was not friendship thatwas broken,but love.

J:What?

Ma:Ya.Otherwise why should Kumud be upset with Saras?She is jealous.

J:Ya…

Ma:Don't worry.Tomorrow we both will clear her misunderstandings.

Juhi smiled with relief.


The next day…

Juhi went near Kumud:Kumud!

Kumud walked off ignoring her.

J:Kumud!

Juhi held her hand:You are misunderstanding me.I have no love relationship with Saras.He is just my friend.

Kumud stared at Juhi.

Suddenly Mayank came pulling Juhi closer to him:Juhi is mine.I am her boy friend.Saras is the only person who knew about our secret love.Our cupid.

Kumud was surprised.She was relieved.

K:I am sorry.

J:By the way why were you angry seeing me with Saras?Is it because of love or something?

Kumud was shy.

J:Before Saras gets broken completely patch up with him.

Mayank and Juhi went away with a smile.


Interval time..

Everyone was sitting out.Kumud was alone in the class room.Saras entered her classroom.

K:Saras!

She did not know how to face him.

S:I am sorry.I did'nt know that you were here.Sorry to disturb you.

Saras was about to go.

K:Saras!I am sorry.

He stared at her:After breaking my heart by tearing our friendship why are you apologizing Kumud?Do you know how much pain I had when you broke our friendship?

Kumud did'nt have words.She wept silently.

Her tears hurt him.He went close to her and wiped her tears.She was relieved.

He asked softly:Kumud,tell me why you got angry seeing me with Kumud?

She was stunned as she never expected that question from him.

K:Let me go Saras.

He held her hand:I won't let you go without answering this question.

K:Leave my hand.

She tried to free herself from him and run out.But with a naughty smile he held her hand again and pulled her towards him.

They shared a beautiful eye lock.

S:Did you fall in love with me?
Pehla pehla pyar hai, Pehalee pehalee bar hai
Pehla pehla pyar hai, Pehalee pehalee bar hai
Jan ke bhee anjana, Kaisa meraa yar hai
Pehla pehla pyar hai, Pehalee pehalee bar hai

Kumud was shocked by his question.

He smiled looking at her deeply:Tell me Kumud.You were jealous seeing me with Juhi.If what we have is only friendship why should be so angry seeing me with Juhi?

She was shy and nervous.
Uskee najar, Palko kee chilman se mujhe dekhtee, uskee najar
Uskee haya, apanee hee chahat kaa raj kholatee, uskee haya
Chhup ke kare jo wafa, aisa meraa yar hai
O o o

S:But can I tell you something?I understood the feeling of love from you.You taught me to fall in love.You are my first and last love.
Pehla pehla pyar hai, Pehalee pehalee bar hai

She looked at him unbelievingly.Slowly she blushed.He smiled seeing her expression.

S:Kumud,I love you.I don't want any answer from you to know what you feel for me.Because I know that you love me.

She blushed.
Woh hai nisha, woh hee meri jindagee kee bhor hai, woh hai nisha
Use hai pata, uskae hee hatho me meree dor hai, use hai pata
Sare jahan se juda, aisa mera pyar hai

With a smile she tried to run away.She was very shy.With a smile he held her hand
and pulled her inside…close to him.

They shared a romantic eye lock.
Pehla pehla pyar hai, Pehalee pehalee bar hai
Pehla pehla pyar hai, Pehalee pehalee bar hai(Hum Aapke Hain Koun).
He caressed her hair.Then removed her hair plates.

S:You look so beautiful with open hair…

Slowly she smiled.

The bell rang.

K:Go Saras.Others will come now.

Saras smiled:Ok..

He went out.Their hearts jumped with joy thinking of their beautiful confession.
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I desire you Part 6



The college days are getting over.

All were upset about that.

Saras:Kumud,when our college ends will you go away from me?

K:Saras!

She saw pain in his eyes.

S:Kumud…my parents passed away when I was very young.My step mom is very busy with her work.So I got ignored.I got love only from you.So distancing from you is like losing love.I am scared whether I will lose you.After many years I got love.I am very happy.So I am scared whether my happiness will get snatched from me.Kumud…will you leave me and go?

Kumud kept her hand on his lips.

Kumud was very emotional.

K:Don't say anything more.I will never leave you.Because I can't leave my life.You are my life Saras.

He smiled.

They shared an emotional eye lock.


Farewell party…

They all were enjoying the party.

Saras saw Kumud sipping a drink.A guy offered him a drink.

"Hey Saras,at least on the farewell party you drink.Don't be so orthodox".

Saras took the glass and tasted it.But he started vomiting.Kumud was shocked.

K:Saras!

She ran to him.

K:Saras,what happened?

The others laughed:He drank for the first time.Just one sip.Immediately he vomited.Peculiar character.

K:Saras,why did you drink now?

S:Seeing you drink I thought I need to be modern to match you?

K:Oh!How could you think that you need to drink to match me?We are already a good match.Because our hearts are already tied up together.

Saras looked at her deeply.Kumud's eyes were stuck on him.

K:I was not drinking alcohol.It was just cola.

Saras was embarrassed.Kumud giggled seeing his face expression.He also laughed.


Yash and Meera announced…

Y:Hey guys…we are getting married.

They all were surprised.

Geet:So soon?

Meera:Enough of dating.So we decided to get married soon.After all we both are almost settled now as we got job in the campus selection.

Kumud:I am so happy for you guys.

Saras:All the best.

Yash:That is not enough.You guys have to attend our wedding functions.

G:Do you need to invite us?We will be there.

They all smiled.
After the party they all parted their ways.Saras and Kumud were sad.
S:Kumud...why should we be sad?Because we are not getting separated.When you want me you just look for me...I will be there...in your dreams.
They both smiled.
Kumud missed Saras like hell.
Naye naye naina mere dhoonhe hai
Dar-badar kyun tujhe
Naye naye manzar yeh takhte hai
Iss kadar kyun mujhe
Zara zara phoolon pe
Jhadhne laga dil mera..
Zara zara kaaton se
Lagney lagaa dil mera..


Then she thought of Saras' words.
K:Yes Saras...I want you now...
Her eyes craved for Saras.
Then she felt that he was near her.
Her face blossomed.
Immediately he disappeared.She became shy.
K:Don't tease me like this Saras.Come to me.
Main pareshaan pareshaan
Pareshaan pareshaan
Aatishein woh kahan
Main pareshaan pareshaan
Pareshaan pareshaan
Raanjishein hai dhuaan
Haan..(Ishaqzaade).
Saras and Kumud meet each other at Meera's mehendi ceremony.
Meera blushed seeing the letter 'Y' on her palm written with mehendi.
Geet looked at the mehendi design.
G:Wow Meera.It looks so bright.Yash loves you a lot.
Meera was very happy.
Kumud smiled.
Meera saw Yash smiling at her:See how much I love you.
She was shy.
Kumud thought:If the letter 'S' is written on my palm...
Saras noticed her eyes.He said in his mind:Kumud...I know what you are thinking.Your wish will be fulfilled.
Kumud went to the terrace.Suddenly Saras who was hidden behind the door pulled her to him.She was stunned.
K:Saras!
He smiled.He made her sit and draw 'S' on her pam with henna.
She was surprised.
K:You are reading my mind Saras.
S:Yes...after all you are my mind.
They both shared a sweet eye lock.

Kumud wore a beautiful dress when the guests started coming.Saras could'nt take his eyes off her.She blushed.But she pretended to be serious and went out.Saras followed her:Kumud!
K:Why were you staring at me?

S:Because you look that gorgeous Kumud.I have no words.

She smiled.He also smiled seeing her smile.

They both sat.
K:Finally Yash and Meera are ending their long courtship.When will our turn come?

Saras smiled:Very soon Kumud.Very soon.You don't have to wait for long for that blissful moment.
She was very happy.
He showed her the shining moon:I swear on that bright moon.This moon is the witness.

gumsum chaandani ho, naajani ho, ya koi hoor ho
dilnashi ho, dilkashi ho ya jannat ka noor ho
maasha allah, maasha allah, maasha allah

She was very happy.Saras was happy seeing her happy.

tum saba ho ya ghata ho kehkasha ho saayba ho
subah ki pehali kiran ki jaisi, bebaak alhad pawan ki jaise
khushbuyein tum lutaati ho masti mein chur chur
maasha allah, maasha allah, maasha allah...
S:Kumud...now your face is shining like this moon.You are beautiful like this moon.
She blushed.

tum haya ho, tum rida ho, tum wafa ho, tum nasha ho
khaamosh nazarein sada jaisi tumhaari baatein duwaayon jaisi
har nafas mein tum samaayi ho phit bh ho itani door
maasha allah, maasha allah, maasha allah...
Saras' mobile rang.
S:Yash's SMS.He is searching for me.I have to go inside.
K:Ok.Even Meera and Geet may be searching for me.
Saras went inside.
Kumud was very happy.
K:That means very soon Saras will propose to me?
Kumud could'nt control her happiness.
Though Saras was with Yash that time he was also smiling thinking of what he told Kumud.

gumsum chaandani ho, naajani ho, ya koi hoor ho
dilnashi ho, dilkashi ho ya jannat ka noor ho
maasha allah, maasha allah, maasha allah...(Saawariya).

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