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loved the update
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Beautiful !! 😃 waiting for next update..thanx for pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
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I jus love the way how u fit the songs in btw ur writing... Seriously I really luv it... M wondering how Saras n kumud wld be separated so far their love story is going great... I also like yash n meera... Juhi n mayaank's pair was also very cute... I really wish to see Arjun n Sanaya together in a show... U fulfilled my wish by showing them together in ur story.. Thanks :)
I hope Saras propose kumud in a bindaas style :D
Waiting 4 next part!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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I desire you Part 7




Kumud told Anurag and Prerna:I want to tell you both about an important matter.

Prerna:What Kumud?

Anurag:Tell beta.

Kumud stammered:That is'that is'

Geet smiled:I will tell.Kumud is in love.

Anurag and Prerna were excited.

Anu:My Kumud is in love.That's a happy news.

Kumud smiled.

P:To say this you were so shy.

Kumud was so shy that she hugged Prerna.

K:His name is Saras.He is very nice.

Anu:We know that Saras is nice.Because he is our Kumud's choice.Our Kumud can never be wrong.

Kumud was very happy.

K:There is a surprise.Sooraj Bhayya and Manjari bhabhi are coming in the afternoon.Because I mailed them about Saras.

They were surprised:Wow!Sooraj and Manjari are coming.

Anu:That's a happy news.


They all went to the airport to pick Sooraj and Manjari.

Geet and Kumud were excited:Bhayya bhabhi'

They ran to them and hugged them.

Prerna:When you saw your sisters you forgot your parents?

Soo:Sorry mom.You know that my sisters are my weakness.

They all smiled.

They reached home.

Soo:By the way Kumud'I want to meet Saras.

Kumud blushed.

Anu:He will be very handsome.After all he is my future son in law.

Kumud smiled.

Anu:Kumud beta'we are dying to meet Saras.

Suddenly Kumud's phone rang.It was Saras' call.

S:Kumud,there is a happy news.I was scared whether mom will agree to our relationship.Right?But surprisingly she agreed.She wants to meet you.

Kumud was very happy.

K:Here my parents,,brother and sister in law are waiting to see you.

S:Tomorrow me and mom will come there with the proposal.

Kumud was surprised.After the keeping the phone she did'nt know how to react.

Geet:What happened Kumud?

K:Tomorrow Saras and his mom are coming here with the proposal.

They all were excited:Wow!

Kumud was shy.

Sooraj:But I can't wait till tomorrow to see my brother in law.So I and Manjari will meet him at Yash-Meera's sangeet function.

Kumud smiled.

Prerna:Unfortunately we both can't be present at the function as we have an important meeting in the evening.

Sooraj:It's ok mom.I and Manjari will give you the exact details.

They smiled.


Meera-Yash's Sangeet function'

Saras looked for Kumud.When Kumud entered his eyes glowed.
Kumud smiled seeing him.

Kumud was followed by Sooraj and Manjari.Manjari saw Kumud blushing seeing Saras.

Manjari whispered in Sooraj's ears:Sooraj'I think that is Saras.

Sooraj looked at Saras.

Soo:Kumud,that is Saras.Right?

K:How did you recognize Saras?

Manj:Seeing your facial expression seeing him itself we understood that it was Saras.

Kumud blushed.

Kumud took them to Saras.

K:Saras'they are my bhayya bhabhi'

S:Namaste bhayya bhabhi..

Sooraj hugged Saras.

Soo:I am so happy that Kumud found her soul mate.

Kumud and Saras smiled at each other.

Sooraj made them stand together.

Soo:Wow!What a sweet Jodi.

Manjari smiled:Yes.Made for each other.

Kumud was so shy that she ran away.


Kumud lit the lamp.She covered the lamp with her hand to protect it.Suddenly Saras sat near her and he also did so.
Their eyes touched each other beautifully.A beautiful eye lock.

Tu hi ye mujhko bata de, Chaahun main ya na..
Apne tu dil ka pata de, Chaahun main ya na
They saw everybody being engrossed in music and dance.Saras and Kumud smiled at each other.

Tu hi ye mujhko bata de, Chaahun main ya na..
Apne tu dil ka pata.. de, Chaahun main ya na


He extended his hand:Kumud'will you dance with me?

Itna bata dun tujhko, chahat pe apni mujhko
Yun toh nahin ikhtiyaar, phir bhi ye socha dil ne
Ab jo laga hoon milne, poochun tujhe ek baar.. oho..





She blushed.Saras held her hand and led her to the dance floor.There they danced together.

Tu yeh mujhko bata de, Chaahun main ya na..
Apne tu dil ka pata de, Chaahun main ya na..

While all were busy dancing Saras took Kumud to another room.
K:Saras?
He took a bangle from his pocket which surprised Kumud.He adorned her hand with the bangle.She smiled.
Aasi kabhi pehle hui na thi
khawahishein.. oh..
Kisi se bhi milne kina kithi koshishein
Uljhan meri sujha de, Chahun main ya naa
Aankhon aankhon mein jata de
Chaahun main ya na..

He took her to another room.
K:Saras,why did you bring me here?
He smiled.
Mere chhote chhote khwaab hai, Khwaabon mein geet hain
Geeton main zindagi hai, Chahat hai, preet hai
Abhi main na dekhun khwaab woh
Jin mein na tu mile, le khole hoth maine
Ab tak the jo sile


He moved closer to her.She blushed.
She turned back and stood close to the mirror.With a smile Saras stood very close to Kumud leaving no distance between them.


Mujhko na jitna mujhpe, Utna is dil ko tujhpe
Hone laga aitbaar, Tanha lamho main apne
Bunti hun tere sapne
Tujhse hua mujhko pyaar.. oh.. o..



Poochungi tujhko kabhi na, Chaahun main ya na
Tere khwaabon main ab jeena, Chaahun main kyon na..
They were lost in each other's sweetness.
Tu yeh mujhko bata de, Chaahun main ya na..
Apne tu dil ka pata de, Chaahun main ya na..(Aashiqui).

Edited by jasminerahul - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#69
Wow!!! Really nice update!! :)
Kumud's bhaya bhabhi seems to be nice n I luved their brother sister love :)
Hayee Samud romance is jus awesome!!! :)
Can't wait for Saras proposal for kumud :)
Keep up the good work!! :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
#70
AWEE loved all d updates,
ur way of writing is very diff,n wid d pic this ff looks more interesting..
the story is going grt,
keep it up👏

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