I desire you Samud SS Last part - Page 5

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Khushi and arnav are both going together for their studies.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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AND THAT WAS WONDERFUL,REALLY LOVED IT.HOW DID THAT CONCEPT CAME?I NEARLY😭.WONDERFUL!PLZ WRITE SOON!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#43
part 3
nice part...
poor Kumud...
cont soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Beautifully written emotions for everyone. You do emotions very well dear. The hidden desires was tangible of Kumud...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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I desire you Part 4

I am really upset that for my 1st Samud SS only 2-3 Saraswathi Chandra viewers are commenting.The rest of the comments are posted by my loyal Maaneet-Arshi readers.Most of the comments are 1 word comments.That's really depressing bcz I put my heart & soul into this SS.Plz try to give a detailed comment.

I want to share a happy news with you all.This SS was selected as the OS of the week by Appy_Indy and she made a wonderful siggy as a prize.

Thanks to her.


The next day'

Kumud and Saras were helping their friends who had programmes that time in college.

Unknowingly they sat next to each other.

Kumud and Saras felt something different in the fragrance.

Kuch na kahein, bas chup rahein
Khamoshiyan hi keh jaaye
Tham jaaye, yeh jahaan
Aur pal bhi, theher jaaye


They turned to their side .They saw each other.They shared a cute eye lock.

Saras could'nt take his eyes off her.He was lost in her.She became conscious.Due to shyness she turned off her face.But tht did not stop Saras from looking at her.

Kumud was called by Geet.

G:Kumud'please come.Help me to wear my dance costume.

Kumud went to dress her up.

Geet did a beautiful dance.

The college bell rang.

G:Kumud,you go alone.You know that I am doing choreography for Juhi's team.I need to make them practice.

K:Ok.


Kumud was on her way.She saw a kid crying.She went near him.

K:What happened beta?

He:My kite flew away.

Kumud looked up.The kite was flying.

K:Don't cry.I will get it back for you.

Kumud said to herself:But how will I get it by myself?

Suddenly she heard a voice from behind:I will help you.

She turned back.She was surprised as it was Saras.She just smiled.

They both ran to reach the thread of the kite.Finally they caught the thread together.So they skin rubbed each others.They became shy.
They looked at each other sharing a beautiful eye lock.

Rahein na kuch bhi darmiyaan
Mitey yeh saari duriyaan
Milke bhi hain adhuri si,
Yeh daastaan...

Rehke bhi sang hain juda
Kyun nahi(?) bana kabhi jahan
Hain yeh alag hi daastaan...
Kumud removed her hand from him.They handed over the kite to the kid.

Kid:Thanks a lot.

Saras:Beta, be careful.Otherwise it will fly away again.

The kid ran away smiling.

K:Thank you for helping me to catch the kite.

S:I have to thank you also for the same reason.

She smiled.

S:And thanks for being a good dance partner.When my dance partner left me if you had'nt agreed to dance with me I would not have been able to dance.You were amazing.

Kumud smiled happily.

K:Ok bye.

She turned backward and walked.Saras called her.

S:Kumud!

She turned back.

S:Won't you be my friend?After all we were dance partners..

Kumud was very happy.She nodded her head with a smile.He walked towards her smiling and extended his hand.She held his hand.They shook their hands giving a beautiful beginning to their friendship.

After a few months'

Now Saras and Kumud are very good friends.

Kumud's eyes searched for Saras.Finally she saw Saras.But with Juhi.He was laughing and chatting with Juhi.Kumud fumed with jealousy.She could'nt tolerate the sight.Saras saw Kumud.Her eyes were wet and red due to anger.

S:Kumud!

She ran away.

S:Oh no'

J:What happened Saras?Why did Kumud run away seeing us together?

Saras did'nt have answer.Yash and Meera came seeing it.

M:Because Kumud felt that there was affair between you both.

They were shocked:What?
Edited by jasminerahul - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#46
loved the update
can't wait for the next update
want to see some of the present also
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Posted: 12 years ago
#47
part 4
nice...
Kumud and Saras are getting close...
cont soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Jealousy track getting very interesting. I am looking forward to the modern story and see the development of their love. I assume that Saras has not yet started feeling for Kumud as she has so it would be interesting to see how he realises his love. Thanks for the update and waiting for next.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#49
awesome update...

thnks for the Pm...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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nice update
thanks for pm
continue soon

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