1/3 - Poetry for the leads

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Kumud's feelings -

Your eyes weaken me and draw me towards you...

Your looks are so pure and powerful...

However, of what use are these when they don't want me...

As a part of your life...so you need not see me...

You began the conversation with a - No - from your side...

I promise to end it with a - No - from mine...

Either tell your Dad about your refusal...

Or come over here and you can tell it to mine...

Saras's feelings -

What a beauty, who is still unseen...

She talks sense and looks quite keen...

To make her point in a classic style...

Which has set me thinking now for a while...

Was I wrong in rushing up my feelings...

Should I have waited for things to move on...

Oh - I cannot understand what's happening?

Is it she and her world that I belong?


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Posted: 12 years ago
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Loved d poem must say u have a creative mind looking forward to such poetic treats in future.,
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Anki_KJSG

Loved d poem must say u have a creative mind looking forward to such poetic treats in future.,


Thanks...a lot

I try to post one per day for each episode...
Posted: 12 years ago
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oh yeah oh yeah, i found ur post...yupii🤣
i wont say anything today cz tu jaanti hai main kya bolungi...
but
i found ur post
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Tishana

oh yeah oh yeah, i found ur post...yupii🤣

i wont say anything today cz tu jaanti hai main kya bolungi...
but
i found ur post


Shukriya...Thank you...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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oh girl, you are really creative...I love how you use such simple words yet portray the exact feelings of the characters...hats of to you anušŸ‘
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Wow this is creative now !!! I loved your poem and the way you described their feelings in exact words
Good job girl :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Wow ! You write so well dear !! ā­ļøšŸ˜³ Loved both the poems ! <3 šŸ‘

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