Dakshna FF(Fan fiction)

First Previous

Page

Next Last

Frequent Posters

lucky.m

@lucky.m

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#531

After shopping spree,Dakshna in restaurant😍

Daksh; mujhe samaj mein aagaya ki ladkiyan ladko ko shopping ke liye kyu leke aati hain

Naina; acha ..kyu?😲

Daksh; ek..bill paykarega aur doosra..muft main coolie miljayega sara shopping bags utane ke liye😆..kyu sach keh raha hoon na?

Naina; nods her head; very smart ,bahut jaldi samajgaye tum( smiles)😛

Daksh; aur..ye shopping kitna tire some hota hain🥱

Naina;... bas..itne se shopping se thak gaye..tumhe pata hain mein aur shirsthi..ganto ganto shopping karte the..tumhra pehli baar hian iss liye...

Daksh; kitna bada dil hain aap ka memsaab... mere khatir aapne..jaldi khatam kardiya ( in a funny way)..smiles😛

Naina also smiles..; bahut thak gaye hona..main jaake kuch lavo.khaane ke liye( self service guys..iss liye)

Daksh nods his head...Naina gets something to eat. A drink..( some milkshake..cool drink etc etc)

Daksh; sirf ek drink.?.mera kaha hain?😲

Naina; offo buddu..drink ek hain..lekin straws..( shows two straws in her hand)😛

Daksh; broad smile 😃;wah ..mrs patwardan...ek drink aur 2 straws hmmm...I am impressed...👏

Naina pulls his cheek and says; ... mujhe pata hain mr patwardan aapko acha lagega...

Daksh rubbing his cheeks; dekho baar baar aisa mat karo dard ho raha hain aur tum teek se compensate bhi nahi karti

Naina; ooo..iss baar jaroor karenge..jaane ke baad😛

Daksh; acha..tho hamri deal yaad hain na..50 aur shop mein ek baar tumne gaal kicha.uske liye do aur abhi ke liye do.. so total hua 54..yaad rakho..ek bhi kam nahi chalega..main count karunga😆😉

Naina asks daksh to come lil closer and says; agr mera 60 dena maan bhi kiya na tho sirf 54 doongi..baaki kal ke liye..hum bhi paake hain number ki😆

Daksh; maine bas itna kaha ki kum nahi..jyada hoga tho bhi chalega...koi prblm nahi😉

Naina; mujhe pata hain tum yahi kahoge..ab aapka maths kahtam hogaya tho..signals at drink..both share the drink..looking into each others eyes😍..holding hands...drink khatam hogaya..lekin inka..aankhon ki gustakiyaan nahi.😳...lekin baaki log..hamare pyare jodi ko dekh kar mushkurahe hain.😆..

Phir dono duniya mein aate hain...bill pay karke wapas room pahuch gaye..

Contd...

Quote

DakshnaFan

@DakshnaFan

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#532

Naina asks daksh to come lil closer and says; agr mera 60 dena maan bhi kiya na tho sirf 54 doongi..baaki kal ke liye..hum bhi paake hain number ki😆

Daksh; maine bas itna kaha ki kum nahi..jyada hoga tho bhi chalega...koi prblm nahi😉

Loved it Lucky Loved it... Liked Naina in this avatar😆...

bahut miss kiya tujhe yaar... 🤗 Aage ka scene is gonna be something special 😉 Can't wait 😍

Edited by DakshnaFan - 13 years ago

Quote

Looks like you are new here. Register for free, learn and contribute.

lucky.m

@lucky.m

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#533

@rupali,

Thanks yaar

Me too dear..missed u a lot.🤗.lekin kya karti..iss net ne tho.😡.anyways I have written few more parts..will post ASAP...😉

Quote

lucky.m

@lucky.m

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#534

CONTD...

Dakshna room...❤️

Dakshna come back..relax a bit..naina shopping ka samaan nikhal rahi hain..daksh falls on bed and is relaxing..

Naina;( pyar bhara looks) 😍..she goes to cupboard , takes out dakhs's night dress..comes near daksh and says ;daksh..thoda frsh hojavo..thakan door ho jayega..chalo uto..

Daksh nods his head..picks his night dress and goes to wash room.Meanwhile naina clears all the shopping bags from bed..aur sab kuch suitcase mein rakhleti hain..leaving one bag outisde..

Daksh comes out..sits on bed..naina is near suitcase..he looks at bag.left and says

Arey naina lagta hain tum isse rakhna bhool gayi..ye lo.he holds the bag

Naina looks at bag..; arey main tho bhool gayi... she comes to take the bag.

.lekin dakshu iti aasani se dene walo mein se nahi hain na..he holds the bag and keeps changing hands..kabhi upar kabhi neeche..Naina is trying hard to get the bag..😆

Naina; daksh kyu tang kar rahe ho..mujhe bhi fresh hona hain..dona pls..but no😉..dakshu mazaa le raha hain naina ko tang karte huye

Daksh; pakdo..( ek dum shararat wali tone)..pakdo

Naina thinks of something and suddenly hugs daksh and says; lo pakadliya😆 maine..they both fall on bed..naina upar daksh neeche an cute eyelock...Naina says love u in his ear and gives him a kiss on cheek and a soft tender kiss on lips😳.daksh ka khel tho khatam hogaya😆..he is just lost

Naina takes advantage of situation and snatches bag from daksh's hand..daksh comes to this world..

Naina gets down the bed , showing bag; dekha ab bag mera haath mein hain.and says.kahi tumne bag ko pakadne ke liye nahi kaha,😆 mujhe laga ki kuch aur hain😆(teasing him) is about to go daksh gets up and pulls her back to bed...ab naina neeche daksh upar...😍

Daksh;stroking her cheeks; Very smart. ab jum tumne pakadhiliya tho...iss tarah beech mein chodkar chale jaana..not fair naina..😕..comes closer.about to kiss

.Naina pushes him away and runs from there..

Daksh still on bed.. ( cute baby face..pampered voice) calls... naina...

Naina.about to go into washroom;.ab kya hua daksh?she turns towards him..looking at daksh and his eyes.. she gets a hint of whats running through his mind.Ek shy si smile dekar..; bas do min..😳

Daksh; shows her watch' and says ;sirf do min..jyada nahi...( like issuing a warning)..

Naina goes into the washroom..daksh keeps waiting; oh..ye naina bhi kitna dher laga rahi hain aane mein..naina jaldi karo..

Naina; haan hogaya.

.wash room ka door open hua...daksh turns towards door.just then naina steps out and daksh is just dumbstruck...Naina is in same night gown which he was reffering to in shopping mall..😉

Daksh tho gaya kaam se ..ek min ke liye uska hosh awaaz sabkuch ud gaye..he can't believe his eyes.he pinches himself to confirm its not his dream... .he just keeps staring at naina with his eyes speaking lots of things..naina feeling lil shy,as daksh ki nazar usse chub raha hain.and lil uncomfortable,.daksh stand up from bed... daksh starts moving towards naina in slow steps.and both them can feel their hr8beat racing..naina trembles lil bit as cool breeze is touching her..

As daksh comes closer and closer,naina closes her eyes...after few min she feels daksh's arms around her with a blanket..She opens eyes and sees daksh wrapped her in a blanket from back,Naina is moved at this gesture of daksh...daksh hugs her from back and whipsers in her ear; I love u naina.and drops a sweet kiss behind her ear..

Naina turns towards daksh..lowering her face with shy😳 and lil hestitation...daksh holds her chin and lifts up her face..both share an eye lock..a love filled one..❤️

Naina starts to say something;; daksh.woh main...

.Daksh silences her with his finger on her lips and says; chup..ek dum chup(in a very low soft tone).and plants a kiss on forehead...naina hugs him and daksh responds in same way.🤗.🤗After few min daksh lifts naina into his arms...naina arms around daksh's neck..Eye lock..walKs towards bed.slowly puts her down to bed.Naina opens her blanket and lifts up her arms looking at daksh...daksh ek romantic sa smile lekar.. joins naina in her blanket ☺️

.Phir kya...lights off...😉

Contd...

Quote

DakshnaFan

@DakshnaFan

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#535

Super duper hot and sexy hai Lucky 😳 I loved Naina in this FF 😉 Superb 👏 Daksh's gesture of wrapping Naina in blanket... Cool hmm... Loved the whole scene to infinity 🤗 🤗
Naina taking advantage of Daksh was something different and new... 😆 bechara pyaar ka maara😆
Thank u for giving such a beautiful scene 🤗
Nice surprise Naina buying the gown... Liked it 😛 🤗

Quote

Aishwarya

@Aish_21

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#536

heyyy😊😊😊...u r back...missd u lucky🤗🤗🤗🤗...nd thnku 4 aaj ka lovely lovely lovely FF🤗🤗🤗🤗

ps : ditto 4 all wat rupu said😉😆😆😆

Edited by sweetaish - 13 years ago

Quote

lucky.m

@lucky.m

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#537

Rupali😛..this is 4 ru first part..happy b day dear.❤️..

Dakshna room..

Dakshna on bed and I dnt think u need a special mention on "in same blanket"

After long romantic night...😳.❤️

Naina just comes out of her dreamworld... slowly opens her eyes and looks for daksh thinkinh he would be alseep..but daksh is awake on bed..and is lost looking at naina

Naina; sleepy; utt gaye? Itni jaldi...neend nahi aarahithi kya?

Daksh doesn't reply..still keeps looking at naina

Naina;ab aisa kya dekh rahe ho mujhe??

Daksh;tumhe pata hain tum sote huye kitni pyari lagti ho? ?

Naina ; pata hain..(smiles)😃

Daksh Cmes closer and Presses his lips on naina's shoulder rests his head on her shoulder.naina puts her arms around him...and they stay in embrace for few moments..😍😍

Daksh; naina..kuch poocho tumse..

Naina; kuch bhi..(running her fingers through his hair)😛

Daksh lifts up his head looking into naina's eyes..; woh night gown..tumne...mere liye...naina mujhe pata hain ki tum uncomfortabl feel karoge..mainae bas waise hi kaha..

Naina;acha tho vakeel saab ko ye lag raha hain ki main uncomfortable thi..

Dakh' haan.aur...

Naina puts a finger on daksh's lips and stops him..😳..

Naina;aisa koi baat nahi hain daksh.sach hain iss pehle maine kabhi pehna nahi..lekin.tum mujhe uss night gown mein dekhan chahthe the...aur.(pulls him closer😳) mujhe jaise chahu..jisme chaho.waise dekhna ka haq tho sirf tumhara hain.

(points a finger).aur ab tum jyada emo mat ho javo.iss baat ko lekar...😆samjhe.

Daksh; haan maam samajgaya( head butt)😍..waise tumne ye liya kab?hum dono saath mein the😲

Naina; woh jab main saree's pick up karne gayi thi tab..woh sab chodo..aur waise tumne mujhe bataya nahi ki main kaise lag rahithi usme😳..shopping mall mein kuch keh rahethe

Daksh ek cute sa smile deta hain😛 phir woh naughty smile😉 main badal jaata hain..Looks into naina;s eyes comes closer.; batadu,😳

Naina nods her head saying yes...daksh comes near her ear whispers some thing( dnt ask me what..fill wahtever u want)😆 and naina ki chehre par lal rang aajatahain☺️ she covers her face with two hands( like typical heroines do aur daksh saare heroes ki tarah..slowly uksa haath nikaltah hain..phirse eye lock)😛😳

Daksh; tumhe pata hain..tumhe sharamthi huye aur cute lagati ho..

Naina(lil attitude) pata hain..lekin tumse jyada nahi..jab tum sharmathe ho aur bhi cute lagte ho(pulls his nose)..bas ab naina ke chehre ka rang daksh ki chehre pe aagaya..naina smiles and says..dekho bilkul aise..sooo cute..pulls his cheeks.😆.

Daksh gets up and starts rubbing his cheeks, naina gets up..and says; oh bhool gayi..sorry..and as per their deal gives him 4 kisses on both cheeks. hugs him from back and says; waise humara deal poora hogayana😲

Daksh; main nahi jaanta, mujhe pata nahi...

Naina; kyu tum tho count karnewale the na..kyu nahi kiya?😲

Daksh; turns towards her..hands around her neck; tumhari wajah se... mera dimaag kaam kare tab jaake count karunga😆..tumhe uss NG mein dekha..bas dimaag kharab hogaya..paagal hogaya tha main.😆.😆.jab thoda kaam karne laga..tum tumhare deal poora karne mein lag gayi.(comes closer..puts her down to bed).runs his finger through her face..😍..😍bahut mushkil se 10 tak ginpaya.😛..uske baad kya hua?..kuch yaad nahi.😆...kuch bhi nahi. sirf tum dikahyi de rahithi aur kuch nahi..aur ye sab...tumhari wajah se, paagal banadiya mujhe..😛

Naina; Bahane mat banavo daksh...maanlo ki tum count nahi kar paye..agar main hothi tho..pakka count karti😆

Daksh; acha..tho teek hain..abhi decide karlenge...tum 10 tak bhi nahi ginpavoge.lagi shart.haaar javoge..sochlo😆😉

Naina' haan..lagi shart..jo bhi haar gaya..usse doosre ki har baat manni padegi..kal poora din...Man joor.??

Daksh; haan manjoor hain..tho shurru kare..naina nods her head..

Kiski jeet huyi aur kiski haar.❤️.next episode..

Edited by lucky.m - 13 years ago

Quote

DakshnaFan

@DakshnaFan

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#538

Thank u Thank u Lucky🤗🤗... U made my day dear... Superb👏👏... Loved Naina 😉 The best gift... Tune aur Aish ne to din bana diya mera aaj... Mere paas words nahi hai... Loved it to infinity... 😃

This is for u ... Will wait for ur PM...

Quote

lucky.m

@lucky.m

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#539

A Naughty talk and sweet fight b/w dakshna( Pillow fight reloaded version)

Dakshna honey moon contd.❤️...From last part, daksh wins the bet..and next day morning

8.00AM

Still on bed..in the balnket..its first naina to get up...daksh asleep on naina's shoulders with hand on her...naina tries to get up taking care not to disturb her hubby..sleeping like a kid with his mouth open😆.She looks at him, runs her finger through his hair😛..gives a smile and is about to get down bed..daksh holds her hand and pulls her back😍

Daksh; kaha jaa rhai ho tum..subha subha mujhe chodkar. mere pass rahona.🤗.hugs her tightly

Naina; ab thak tumhari pass hi thi..aur tumne time dekha...daksh roz ki tarah jid mat karo..ut javo.😛

Daksh; teek hain..utjavunga lekin.pehle kuch meetha tho hojaye.😳...comes closer picks his goodmorning kiss(es)..😆😳

Naina; daksh..chodo mujhe...phir se shru mat karo😳..warna shubha raat hojayegi..😉saying this she gets down bed wrapped in blanket

Daksh still on bed..site mar raha hai apni biwi ko.😉..😆

Naina ,as part of daily routine starts looking for her "clothes" on the floor..but she can;t find her NG😲...anywhere near bed...

Naina; daksh mera NG nahi milraha..kaha hain?❓

Daksh;woh..Ng??( chor nazar) mujhe se kyu pooch rahi ho.jaise maine tumara NG chori kar liya..mujhe nahi pataa ..😉

Naina; acha..jyada innocent banne ki koi zaroorat nahi...tumhe hi pata hoga kyunki tumne hi usse😳.(lil pause)...ab dhoondo.mujhe pehna hain.

Daksh; oh pls naina.,phir se NG pehnoge...phir dimmag kharab karne ka irada tho nahi😆...waise tumhe nahi lagta hume thoda brk lena chahiye.😆.raat bar(streching out his arms lazily)...tum samaj rahi hona..I need ... I mean we need a brk.😛.😛.(gigles)😆

Naina;oh shut up daksh...har waqt..aise hi kuch bholte rahethe ho...

Daksh; acha..tho phir pehle ye batavo ki mere kapde kaha hain??.kyunki tumne hi.😉..

Naina; acha baba...teek hain..chalo milke dhoondthe hain..lekin pehle kuch pehnelete hain..

Both start searching..finally finds their clothes very farway from bed😳..in some corner...Naina picks up her night gown...and is shocked to see its condition.😲

Naina; ahh.daksh dekho tumne kya kiya? 😡pehle itna door phek diya aur phir..shows him NG.al most.(tornoff into 2 pieces) )...

Daksh; haan haan..tumne kuch nahi kiya😆..zara mere shirt ki taraf dekho..kya haalat banadiya tumne iska..shows his shirt..😆😆.( torn off by nails😳..)..)..kya bigada mera shirt ne tumhara?...

Naina; agar wahi sawaal nG baare mein mian poocho tho?😲

Daksh; jawab hain mere pass😛..tumhare aur mere beech aa raithi..issliye phek diya😉,rahi baat shirt ki haalat ki waise galati tumhari nahi; ..raat ko tumhari ander doosre naina aa jati hain..jikso control karna mushkil hi nahi na mumkin hain.🤣..aur uski account mein pata nahi meri kitne saare shirts kurbaan hogaye..🤣.

Naina in process of turning into mrs kp😡

..DAKSH.(jumps on bed..with naughty look) 😉and says..aur naina waise tumhe khush hojaana chahiye) 😛 ,naina comes near bed with expression WHY?😲

daksh;tumne shayad notice nahi kiya..maine kal raat NG ko tumhe ek gante se jyada pehenne diya🤣..samjhi..actually roz adhe gante main hi...😳😳

Naina opens her mouth in shock😲 listening dakhs' naughty words..mrs kp😡😡 bangayi..daksh tumhe to... and pics up pillow aur uspe attck karti hain..this time dakshu can't escape as he is on bed and gets caught..naina uski achi se dhulayi karti hain..😆.now daksh also picks up a pillow😆😆😆

Daksh; dekho naina..ab mere paas bhi hatyar hein..soch samajh ke war karo...

and they start fighting...poora bed par pillow se nikale rahe feathers se bahr gaya...Finally daksh gives up..but naina rook ne ka naam nahi le rahi hain...😆😆

CONTD....