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Posted: 13 years ago
@ aish, rupali

Shukriya ,shukriya...mere pyaaro...🤗aur kitna bada dil hain aapka aish ji.😉.hame maaf kardiya..thank u😆..
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Posted: 13 years ago
wow!!! all did wonderful..
superb superb...!!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
roshnidiya... i felt a professional apprach inur writings.. very nice.. don't ask "you like it..?" i loved it.. super..
Lucky, as usual.. full of romance. superb!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: lucky.m

At the other end of the pool, the SUV pulled into the garage across the lawns and dumping his coat in the car itself, Daksh made a dash across the pool towards the dry haven of his room. 'What ill timing', he cursed his impulsive decision to come back here and not go home to the Raizada Mansion.


@Roshini diya

A very very beautiful romantic FF👏..and I like ur expression..gr8.👏.but i have a doubt

@ blue; y did u say raizada mansion??😲 was this FF supposed to be for arnav and khushi of IPKKND?.It would have been better if u said "patwardan mansion"😆

But I loved it😛..

lucky.. u told the point.. most of the times i feel Arnav and Khushi have similaries to our Dakshna. arnav does not like khushi.. he has ego to say sorry to her. but he cannot undertnd what the reall feeling is. he goes to conference.. khushi has to accidently accompay him. she makes prak. arnav gets angry. khushi fells ill. arvan takes care of her. some goons come, arnav fight with them. etc.. i remembered Dakshna's Pune trip and goons kidnap incident in these days... [i am not a regular watcher of the serial]
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: DakshnaFan

@ roshnidiya


Very beautiful FF😊... Very well expressed😊... Loved it👏... Please do write more...

sure i will be updating in a few minutes
say it u liked it or nt
ok!!!!!!!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
Contd..

Dakshna hny moon ❤️

Naina; daksh ..bahut hogaya romance ab bahar chale..ya phir poora din yahi rahoge..😉
Daksh; mujhe koi problem nahi rehne mein😆
Naina; tumhe kisi baat se problem nahi..tumhe rehna he tho yahi rukh javo main jaa rahi hoon😛..daksh pulls her back
Daksh; bahut galat baat hain.. agar ander saath saath aaye hotho..bahar bhi saath mein jayenge, samjhi.😉...
Naina; tho phir chalona..ek gante se jyada hogaya hum yaha aaye huye😳..pls chalona
Daksh; oh..tumhara ye matlab hain ki baaki ka romance bahar jaaake continue karenge😆..tho chalo.😆.picks her in arms and comes out
Naina;daksh..neeche utaro mujhe..daksh😡..( starts hitting him)
Daksh; Naina..itna bhi mat maaro apne pati ko..subha tho ek round hogaya hain na😆..teek teek hain..puts her down..javo chod diya..

Naina; thanks..ab chalo holds his hand takes him near bed..beto yaha..( dakshu) follows the order, naina starts wiping his hair with towel..😍 standing

Daksh puts his hands around her; naina..tumhe nahi lagta ki tumne aaj jo offer diya usse life time ka offer banadoge tho..acha hoga na..😉

Naina; very smart. lekin sorry vakeel saab...mera aisa koi irada nahi hain..
Daksh;😕 teek hain..main tumhe similar offer deta hoon.😉.aceept karlo..😆.
Naina;( stops wiping)..mazaq mat karo daksh...yaha par tho sirf hum hain lekin waha ..paagal hogaye ho tum😛

Daksh; gets up puts his arms around naina's neck : paagal tho tumhare pyar main bahut pehle ho chuka hoon😍❤️
Naina; dimmag kharab hogaya hain tumhara😆
Daksh; stroking her cheek; jab tum paas ho thi ho tho..aisa hi hotha hain.😉.. eye lock for few seconds with cute smile from both.

Naina pushes him away..; jara socho..agar ghar mein kisni ne dekhliya tho kitna embarrsing hoga😳(taking out daksh's clothes from cupboard)..

Daksh; haan haan..tum sabko batake,invite karke avoge kya?. ki aayiye dekhiye hum kya kar rahe hain.🤣..🤣.hum dono saath mein ..( naina truns back gives a killer look)..😡
Daksh ; darwaja bandh hogana aur socho ki time bhi save hojayega aur tumhara pati ka mood tho😉
Naina;( gives daksh his shirt & pant)... tab office aur kaam chod kar ghar pe hi bete rahoge.😆..bas ab iss bhaare main aur baat nahi karenge...😆
Daksh; ok maam..😕

After both get dressed...daksh is cheking his mobile...and looks at naina..( naina is about to dump her NG and his shirt)
Daksh; naina..mat pheko na
Naina; kyu daksh??..inki haalat tho dekho😲

Daksh; rehne dona sweet memories ki tarah😉 aur jab hum yaha se wapas jayenge tho sab poochenge ki trip kaisa tha..tab bina kuch bataye..hum ye kapde dikhadenge..sab samaj jayenge ki.😆.😆.( starts laughing)

Naina; chup karo..besharam KP..😳
Daksh comes near naina, hugs her from back and says; tum kyu nahi chup kartati mujhe?😳
Naina turns towards him; acha..teek hain...Naina is about to put her hand on daksh's lips..; daksh holds her hand and says; aise nahi😳...😳
eye lock😍..cute naughty smile on both faces😛.naina brings her face closer to daksh...aur usko chup karadiya..( u knw kaise)😉


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Posted: 13 years ago
LOL lucky itna besharam Dakshu 🤣 🤣 loved dakshu's each and every dialogue ... U r just amazing Lucky 😉
Mere poore din ka stress Tere ye FF se door hoga 😆 Superb once again 👏 loved it 🤗 thank u dear 😉 ek Jadu ki jappi to Banti hi hai 🤗
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: DakshnaFan

LOL lucky itna besharam Dakshu 🤣 🤣 loved dakshu's each and every dialogue ... U r just amazing Lucky 😉
Mere poore din ka stress Tere ye FF se door hoga 😆 Superb once again 👏 loved it 🤗 thank u dear 😉 ek Jadu ki jappi to Banti hi hai 🤗

ditto ditto yar😆😆😆😆...itnaaa besharam KP🤣...aur itnaaa cute bhi😳😆😆😆
lucky...tu genius he reClapClapClap...jadu ki jhappi frm me 2🤗🤗🤗🤗
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Posted: 13 years ago
@ aish and rupali

Thank u thank u buddies..🤗

Ab hnymoon par he tho dakshu ko thoda besharanm tho hona padega na😆.😆.kyu?...I got bored watching today's episode.. aur tum dono bhi missing the poora din...😕 katti karna chahthi thi😡

Lekin comments padne ke baad..teek hoon😛...chalo ham ne bhi aap dono ko maaf kiya😆
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Posted: 13 years ago

Ok guys; u all know ki dakshna are in darjeeling for honeymoon.😉.assume that they are not in BV nor in any hotel..anjali had gifted them a small farm house, fully furnished.😛..jaha par dakshna baaki duniya se door..saath saath reh sakte hain

http://blog.propertynice.com/buyer-beware-farmhouse-dreams/

A SIMPLE AND CUTE SCENE B/W DAKSHNA😛

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Daksh ko chup karane ke baad😳...few min...daksh comes and sits down...Both on couch..naina sitting on daksh's lap

, as usual dakshna discuss their programme..like where to go..etc

http://cutcaster.com/photo/100320039-Couple-on-Couch/

Naina; daksh aaj na bahar jaana ka mann nahi hain..yahi par rehte hain(pampered)😛 hugs him

Daksh;( hugs her back) tumhe yaad haina ki tumhe poora din mera baat manna padega.main shart jeet gaya

Naina; haan baba.yaad hain..kaho mujhe kya karna hain..( still in hug)

Daksh;( hugs tightly) waise bahut kuch karsakte hain..😳.😆.//lekin. main bhi yahi soch rahatha..ki aaj hum poora din ek saath yaha rahenge aur..maine programme bhi banaliya

Naina; acha..kya?(Excited)😛

Daksh; batata hoon...aaj ka programme hoga..movie, saath mein coffee,kitchen mein khana pakana aur phir..😛 raat ko.😍.(gives a kiss on naina's hair) lifts up her face and is about to kiss😳...

Naina; bas bas..wahi par rukh javo.😆.raat hone ko abhi time hain...waise plan tho acha hain..pehle coffee banadu?

Daksh; tum nahi..aaj kitchen hum handle karenge..😉.coffee.khana ,sab kuch main banavunga( Daksh ki culinary skills dekh liya)

Naina; kya? tumne khana pakana aata hain ya phir...honeymoon se seedha hospital jaane ka irada hain kya( laughs)🤣

Daksh; haso haso..aata nahi hein lekin..koi prblm nahi..tum instructions deti javo aur main karta javunga..😉

Naina; nods her head and

daksh; tum utoge tab kuch karpaunga😆..na..agar tumhe aise betna acha lag raha hain tho...😉

..naina; oh sry... gets up from his laps..

Daksh; gets up...good.. now... follow me.. goes into kitchen ,naina helps him in tying apron..


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Edited by lucky.m - 13 years ago

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