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Posted: 13 years ago

It was the pitter-patter of rain that woke Naina up sometime later during the night. She got out of bed and ran towards the windows taking in the sight that was in front of her. Excited she opened the windows and without a single thought stepped out into rain, her arms out-stretched and head thrown back. Laughing merrily she twirled around as the hard drops hit her face with a steady beat. The moonlight cast a silvery glow to the dimly lit pool area as Naina ran skipping from one puddle of water to another, enjoying herself with abandon.

At the other end of the pool, the SUV pulled into the garage across the lawns and dumping his coat in the car itself, Daksh made a dash across the pool towards the dry haven of his room. 'What ill timing', he cursed his impulsive decision to come back here and not go home to the Patwardhan Mansion.

Stopping to take shelter against a small cabana on one side of the pool, Daksh peered through the sheets of rain to gauge how far it was to his room, and that is when he saw her. She was completely drenched to the bone in her soft pink night salwar kameeze. Her arms were outstretched and her face was turned up towards the sky as if receiving a benefaction from the gods! Daksh just stood and stared at the uninhibited joy that shone on her face. 'Was that music playing somewhere', he wondered as violins began to strum inside his head.

Sensing his presence Naina turned towards the cabana slowly and saw his shadowy figure leaning against the wall. She walked towards him hesitatingly to be sure that is was really him and not a figment of her imagination.

When she neared and saw it was Daksh, she smiled and motioned gracefully with her hands, for him to come out and join her. Like a machine on remote control, Daksh stepped into the rain and towards her. As always, there was nothing around him but Naina at that moment. He was like a puppet and the strings were in those hands right now.

She grabbed both his hands in hers and pulling him towards her continued her twirling ignorant of the effect she was having on him. Daksh swallowed hard and tried to get his attention away from that delectable body partially visible under her drenched clothes. Suddenly aware of his silence and stalled movement, Naina stopped, realizing where they were.

They started at each other in the rain, holding hands, letting the water wash down their faces. It was Daksh who tugged gently at her hands and pulled her towards himself, till she came to a stop millimeters away from his drenched torso.

Naina could only stare as his eyes held her completely enthralled. Slowly, his eyes never leaving hers, he took her right hand and placed it on his shoulder, while his own he placed on her waist, where it applied gentle pressure to bring her flush into his own body. He continued to hold on to her other hand as he moved slowly to the damn music in his brain, never breaking eye contact with her.

He saw with raw pleasure, the effect his proximity was having on her, as her eyes left his to close in a swoon. He immediately moved closer placing his wet cheek against hers, practically fusing them together. She was soft and pliant against him, and he bent a little and placed tiny kisses on the exposed part of her neck and shoulder. Naina shivered and moved closer, now clutching him with both her hands. With his other hand also free now, Daksh held her head gently while he continued to graze sensuously at her sensitive skin.

When she felt herself backed up against a wall, did Naina open her eyes and look at him. He had deftly moved them away from the rain and sheltered against the wall. He had stopped kissing her neck and was looking down at her with his desire filled eyes. 'We need to talk', he whispered huskily taking in her drugged expression, his one thought only to possess her.

'Ummm'' Naina murmured wondering why he had stopped kissing her, all rationality leaving her at that moment.

'Naina,' he groaned, seeing the longing in her eyes. It was taking all of his self-control not to take those trembling lips for his own right now, and she was not helping one bit.

With a hoarse cry of defeat, he decided to deal with what was going on between them later, and took those soft lips against his in a passionate kiss. Naina's own lips parted as a tremor passed through her. That was all the invitation Daksh needed, as he deepened the kiss and pressed her into the wall behind her, with all his weight.

'What are you doing to me?' he asked softly after a while, lifting his lips from her still quivering ones. 'I can't get one straight thought into my head, when I look at you' 'you are haunting my every living moment''

Pleased at seeing the effect he was having on her; the unfocussed look on her face, Daksh took the decision to continue this talk at a later date. He gently picked her up and strode towards her room, where he took her straight to the bathroom and draped a fluffy towel around her.

She kept staring at him, as if she had never seen him before, and Daksh halted his thoughts, which had already carried her across to that bed in her room.

'No,' he thought with some resolution. 'It was not going to be like this'. He wanted to make it perfect for her, when they finally became each other's completely.

'Will you be okay', he asked her gently watching her standing there like a sad drenched pup. Naina could only nod, as she felt incapable of any speech right now.

'We'll talk tomorrow, then,' he promised and walked out of her room, before he could regret his decision and watch his resolve crumble.

HOPE YOU ALL LIKE THIS FF!!!!

IF YES PLEASE PRESS LIKE BUTTON

Edited by roshnidiya - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: sweetaish

Nite gwn aur shirt ki kya halat ho gayi...tsk. vaise jo bhi kehna tha dakshu aur naina ne keh di😛...i'm fallin short f wrds here😆
lucky...u outdid urself again, hon😆
ps : pillo fight reloaded ke liye thnku🤗...mysti ko bataya...?


Thanks buddy..🤗.in ur words* low bow*😉...mysti aur rupali ko PM kardiya baout post..hopefully they should read...😛

Pillow fight reloaded( khass mytsi aur tere liye daala)😉..happy u liked it
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Posted: 13 years ago
At the other end of the pool, the SUV pulled into the garage across the lawns and dumping his coat in the car itself, Daksh made a dash across the pool towards the dry haven of his room. 'What ill timing', he cursed his impulsive decision to come back here and not go home to the Raizada Mansion.

@Roshini diya

A very very beautiful romantic FF👏..and I like ur expression..gr8.👏.but i have a doubt

@ blue; y did u say raizada mansion??😲 was this FF supposed to be for arnav and khushi of IPKKND?.It would have been better if u said "patwardan mansion"😆

But I loved it😛..
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Posted: 13 years ago
ya because i didnt get the word patwardhan mansion but instead got it raizada mansion bec i saw dat serial now!!!!
hehehe
sory
i will edit it at once
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Posted: 13 years ago
i m planning to write a ff on daksh and naina
will be doing it tonight

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: sweetaish

Nite gwn aur shirt ki kya halat ho gayi...tsk. vaise jo bhi kehna tha dakshu aur naina ne keh di😛...i'm fallin short f wrds here😆
lucky...u outdid urself again, hon😆
ps : pillo fight reloaded ke liye thnku🤗...mysti ko bataya...?


Ditto Ditto
Superb Lucky... Bechare Kapad ke ye halat 😆😆😆 Loved each and every dialogue...kya kahu main...
Dakshna are getting better and better in ur FF's dear... Loved it to infinity😉 🤗

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Posted: 13 years ago
@ roshnidiya

Very beautiful FF😊... Very well expressed😊... Loved it👏... Please do write more...
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Posted: 13 years ago
CONTD...

❤️Pillow fight ( reloaded)😉😉

Daksh; naina..naina.ab bas bhi karo..subha subha pati ka katl karne ka iraada hain kya? 😆ouch..lag gaya.( acts).😉.sleeping on bed
Naina suddenly becomes concerned;throws off pillow comes near daksh;.tum teek hona.??..😛
Daksh opens his eyes..pulls naina closer;😳 ab teek hoon..tum mere paas jo ho..😛

Eye lock...😍...

Naina cools down..and hugs him;🤗 sach mein laga tho nahi...

Daksh; mazaq tha meri jaan..waise main tumhe naya ng laake doonga..ek nahi do..do😛

Naina; taaki tum phir se uska woh haal kar sako😆..koi zaroorat nahi...(gets up)..waise maine uss din ek nahi, do NG liye the😛(.tugging her hair up, after removinf feathers from them)

Daksh is surprised; kya? do?😲 gets up

Naina; haan.,starts removing feathers from dakshu's hair..;.kyunki mujhe pata tha ki tum aisa hi kuch karnewaale ho...😉

Daksh;..vry smart. mrs patwardan...running his hand through her neck😳..tho iska matlab tumhare pati ne tumhara expectation poora karliyana😉..releases her hair...😳
Naina(;lil shy)😳 haan aur aapne exceed bhi karliya...Mr.patwardan...( small slap)...ab chaloge...😛
Daksh; kaha?😲

Naina...gets up.from bed...;..nahana nahi hain kya? mrs kp aisa offer hamesha nahi deti..sochlo..😆
Daksh ; phir se line chori... hmmm; ( acts as if thinking seriously)sochliya...ki hum aapke offer ko accept karte hain😉

picks naina in his arms...Cute passionate eye lock...walks towards wash room.😉..😳.


CONTD......
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Posted: 13 years ago
xclusivly 4 lucky ok😉...
hey you...
sara din miss karvaya,
lekin tune FF lagaya,
wo bhi pillo fight ke baki wala...
isliye hum wo teen words kehne wale he ab...
jao maaf kiya😆😆😆😆
yar...nightgwn bhi reloaded😲😆😆😆😆...speechles😳😊😊😊😊...
luvd t re 👏👏👏👏...
Edited by sweetaish - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Loved it Lucky loved it 😉 Very very cute 😉 dialogues superb as usual 👏 It's getting more and more interesting with each scene... aaise offers Dakshu ko bar bar nahi milte 😉
Can't wait for the next dear 😍 😉

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