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Posted: 13 years ago
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aish, rupali and mysti

U all are welcome and thanks for lovely responses,😛,,sorry late post kiya..lekin kya kru..thoda busy thi..iss liye😛

I agree with rupali..dakshnafans most of the time think and feel alike...👏...and thanks buddies once again.🤗..I knew u all will love it..😍

@mysti

In dakshu's language point noted my lord...Will let naina win this time in next pillow fight😉..its a deal👍🏼
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: lucky.m

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aish, rupali and mysti

U all are welcome and thanks for lovely responses,😛,,sorry late post kiya..lekin kya kru..thoda busy thi..iss liye😛

I agree with rupali..dakshnafans most of the time think and feel alike...👏...and thanks buddies once again.🤗..I knew u all will love it..😍

@mysti

In dakshu's language point noted my lord...Will let naina win this time in next pillow fight😉..its a deal👍🏼

lucky,
tu late post karegi to bhi chalega...roz tu jo FF lagati he, poora din ban jata hai...
[ 😆😆😆i kno, borrowd line,
but teknicali its mine😆😆😆]
...luv ur posts🤗🤗🤗
ps : pillo fight ke liye fir se thnku. nd mysti ka idea bhi😉
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Posted: 13 years ago
Hello..I am back😛

Jyada love potion nahi hain..a simple cute scene( yaar..public main hain😉..)

Dakshna on shopping spree❤️(honey moon contd)

Daksh and naina out on shopping.sabke liye gifts le liya...ab bachi hamari jodi ki shopping..😉

Daksh;tho kahiye mam..sab ke liye shopping hogaya..ab aapki baari..kahiye, kaha jaana hain??
Naina; Main soch rahithi ki main kuch sarees khareedloo..
Daksh; kapde.??😲.honeymoon par kapdo ki kya zaroorat😆..jo laaye hain wahi bahut jyada hogaye hain..ab aur...😆..😆
Naina; bas bhi karona daksh..har waqt..😡..points at a shop'uss shop mein chalte hain
Daksh; bows down his head ;jo hukum mere aaka...smiles ,😛while his beautiful wife also gives him a cute smile.😛

Both go..inside

Naina takes out one by one saree..and asks dakh; ye kaisa lag raha hain? dakshu tho bas khoya hua hain.apni pyare patni ko dekhte huye😍❤️.( as usual)
.naina (usko jagati hain)😆.; daksh kaha khogaye??...kaho ye kaisa lag raha hain mujh par
Daksh about to answer naina stops him and says' ye mat kehna ki tum par tho saare rang ache lagte hain..😆
Daksh; ye tho mera line hain.,phir se chori karliya...main yahi kehnewala tha..😆
Naina; pata hain mujhe..ab jaldi batavo kaunsi clour lu? pink ya red ya greeen..kuch samaj mein nahi aa raha hain
Daksh; teeno lelo..maina kab mana kiya.😉..(seeing naina's face) mujhe lagta hain tum par red bahut acha lage ga..aur pink bhi...aur...😛
Naina; bas bas...main red aur green leti hoon..


Daksh nods his head, gives a thumbs up .👍🏼; tho wapas chale..naina says abhi nahi.,she keeps covers at that particular counter..and asks sales men about gents section...

Daksh; naina..waha kyu? mujhe..😲

Naina; daksh hum tumhare liye kuch T-shirts karidenge.😛..main tang aachukhi hoo tumhe formals mein dekh kar😆( humbhi naina..pls apna husband ka dress code chage karo yaar)..daksh thoda KP look deta hain😡

Naina; tum formals mein bahut cute lagte ho ..lekin honeymoon par bhi.formals😕...sirf raat ko night wear mein pehenthe ho t-shirts..aisa lag raha hain kisi office trip pe aaye hain.😆...kuch naya try karte hain na daksh.mujhe lagta hain tum t-shirts mein aur smart aur..handsome lagoge😳( even we feel same dear, what say guys)

..daksh ke chehre par cute cute pink kp ka rang aane lagta hain😳( of course patni ne taarif jo kiya)

Naina pls...pls pls..mere liye.

Daksh(;baby face) pls mat kaho..main already pigal chuka hoon.meri jaan,tum mujhe cartoon banachahti ho..ya kuch aur..tumhe poora haq hain...permission granted..😉

Naina pulls his cheek; so sweet.😛.maina tumhe cute cute sa cartoon banavungi aur ayi baba sab shock ho jayenge ki kya ye hamara chintu hain?😆..chalo..

Daksh obedient husband ki tarah naina ko follow karta hain..just then uski nazar padti hain..ek night gown par😳( lil short).(Silk Chemise Nightgown with Lace and Chiffon Accents).he holds naina's hand

http://couponsapparel.com/nightdress/del-rossa-short-100-silk-chemise-nightgown-pearl-white-large-a0759crmlg(something of this sort)

Daksh; naina..ye dekho..mujhe lagta hain tumhe ye try karna chahiye honeymoon par..tum bahut( comes near ear and whispers) sexy lagoge.😳.😉😉

Naina; daksh.ssshhh.chup karo.. koi sunlega..aur ye... nahi nahi..bahut chota hain..
..
Daksh; naina.. mujhe pata hain ki tum nahi pehnoge..bas waise hi try mar raha tha.(gigles..)😆
Naina; very funny..chalo...

Naina trys out lot of t-shirts on dakshu aur..finalises few...
They come to the bill counter...naina goes to pick sarees left at counter..meanwhile daksu bill karvaraha hain//tho naina aagayi.bill pay karliya...

aur hogaya shoppig trip sampurn...they both sit down in restaurant..shopping karke thak gaye hai na..iss liye brk.le rahe hain...

PS...Yaar...tum bhi lo ek brk..kyunki honeymoon abhi baaki hain mere dost

Contd...

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Posted: 13 years ago
Daksh(;baby face) pls mat kaho..main already pigal chuka hoon.meri jaan,tum mujhe cartoon banachahti ho..ya kuch aur..tumhe poora haq hain...permission granted..😉
aw...cho chweet😊😊😊...
poora, poora sweet he yar👏👏👏...
lovd d t-shirt wala idea 👍🏼...vaise evn i ws thinkng ki Naina cud get him somethin othr dan 4mals ['cours he luks gr8 in dem but stil😆]...ab tu kahegi connectn he dil ka sare dakshna fans ka😆... haina...i kno😛 i bet baki sab bhi isi line pe soch rahe hai😊😊😊...
ps : loved ur PS😉😆😆😆

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Posted: 13 years ago
Wow Lucky 👏 Simple and too sweet scene 😛 Ha Ha pata hai public place main hum bhi nahi chahenge kuch jada romance yaar... 😉

Agree Dakshu needs a makeover 😆 He looks good in formals (Aish sachi sab Dakshna fans ke dil ke connections ek hi direction main sochte hai) but T-shirts main aur smart dikhega yaar 😛
Dakshu ko ek hi baar T-shirt main dekha hai (not nite suit) when he was in Darjeeling that too with formal pants (how boring) 😆 remember guys...

Vaise Lucky just curious to know did Dakshu buy that gown for Naina (for surprise)?...😳

Thank u dear 🤗Loved the scene 🤗

(Nice saree choice Lucky... and the nite gown is too sexy... aise hi dakshu pagal hai usme Naina ko dekhega to poora pagal hojayega 🤣🤣)
Edited by DakshnaFan - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: lucky.m

Hello..I am back😛

Jyada love potion nahi hain..a simple cute scene( yaar..public main hain😉..)

Dakshna on shopping spree❤️(honey moon contd)

Daksh and naina out on shopping.sabke liye gifts le liya...ab bachi hamari jodi ki shopping..😉

Daksh;tho kahiye mam..sab ke liye shopping hogaya..ab aapki baari..kahiye, kaha jaana hain??
Naina; Main soch rahithi ki main kuch sarees khareedloo..
Daksh; kapde.??😲.honeymoon par kapdo ki kya zaroorat😆..jo laaye hain wahi bahut jyada hogaye hain..ab aur...😆..😆
Naina; bas bhi karona daksh..har waqt..😡..points at a shop'uss shop mein chalte hain
Daksh; bows down his head ;jo hukum mere aaka...smiles ,😛while his beautiful wife also gives him a cute smile.😛

Both go..inside

Naina takes out one by one saree..and asks dakh; ye kaisa lag raha hain? dakshu tho bas khoya hua hain.apni pyare patni ko dekhte huye😍❤️.( as usual)
.naina (usko jagati hain)😆.; daksh kaha khogaye??...kaho ye kaisa lag raha hain mujh par
Daksh about to answer naina stops him and says' ye mat kehna ki tum par tho saare rang ache lagte hain..😆
Daksh; ye tho mera line hain.,phir se chori karliya...main yahi kehnewala tha..😆
Naina; pata hain mujhe..ab jaldi batavo kaunsi clour lu? pink ya red ya greeen..kuch samaj mein nahi aa raha hain
Daksh; teeno lelo..maina kab mana kiya.😉..(seeing naina's face) mujhe lagta hain tum par red bahut acha lage ga..aur pink bhi...aur...😛
Naina; bas bas...main red aur green leti hoon..


Daksh nods his head, gives a thumbs up .👍🏼; tho wapas chale..naina says abhi nahi.,she keeps covers at that particular counter..and asks sales men about gents section...

Daksh; naina..waha kyu? mujhe..😲

Naina; daksh hum tumhare liye kuch T-shirts karidenge.😛..main tang aachukhi hoo tumhe formals mein dekh kar😆( humbhi naina..pls apna husband ka dress code chage karo yaar)..daksh thoda KP look deta hain😡

Naina; tum formals mein bahut cute lagte ho ..lekin honeymoon par bhi.formals😕...sirf raat ko night wear mein pehenthe ho t-shirts..aisa lag raha hain kisi office trip pe aaye hain.😆...kuch naya try karte hain na daksh.mujhe lagta hain tum t-shirts mein aur smart aur..handsome lagoge😳( even we feel same dear, what say guys)

..daksh ke chehre par cute cute pink kp ka rang aane lagta hain😳( of course patni ne taarif jo kiya)

Naina pls...pls pls..mere liye.

Daksh(;baby face) pls mat kaho..main already pigal chuka hoon.meri jaan,tum mujhe cartoon banachahti ho..ya kuch aur..tumhe poora haq hain...permission granted..😉

Naina pulls his cheek; so sweet.😛.maina tumhe cute cute sa cartoon banavungi aur ayi baba sab shock ho jayenge ki kya ye hamara chintu hain?😆..chalo..

Daksh obedient husband ki tarah naina ko follow karta hain..just then uski nazar padti hain..ek night gown par😳( lil short).(Silk Chemise Nightgown with Lace and Chiffon Accents).he holds naina's hand

http://couponsapparel.com/nightdress/del-rossa-short-100-silk-chemise-nightgown-pearl-white-large-a0759crmlg(something of this sort)

Daksh; naina..ye dekho..mujhe lagta hain tumhe ye try karna chahiye honeymoon par..tum bahut( comes near ear and whispers) sexy lagoge.😳.😉😉

Naina; daksh.ssshhh.chup karo.. koi sunlega..aur ye... nahi nahi..bahut chota hain..
..
Daksh; naina.. mujhe pata hain ki tum nahi pehnoge..bas waise hi try mar raha tha.(gigles..)😆
Naina; very funny..chalo...

Naina trys out lot of t-shirts on dakshu aur..finalises few...
They come to the bill counter...naina goes to pick sarees left at counter..meanwhile daksu bill karvaraha hain//tho naina aagayi.bill pay karliya...

aur hogaya shoppig trip sampurn...they both sit down in restaurant..shopping karke thak gaye hai na..iss liye brk.le rahe hain...

PS...Yaar...tum bhi lo ek brk..kyunki honeymoon abhi baaki hain mere dost

Contd...

@ green,
SPOILT! SPOILT!! SPOILT!!!🤣😉 if aayi - baba knows what has become of his once-diciplined son, they would hide their faces in shame🤣🤣 but he was right😉 there is no need for clothes bcz it is their honeymoon😆😆😆
@ cute pink😊,
i love when dakshu wears t shirts😊...i like seeing him in track suits more...looks really kwl and handsomeDay Dreaming and i think Naina did a good job by teaching him to fold his shirt sleeves up...he looks so dashing then😃😃😃😃😃than when wearing the shirts the normal way...
@ orange,
awww! she should have bought that😭 looks very sexy and elegant and Naina is anyway pretty..😊 anything looks good on her...hope she wears something beautiful for the night😊then daksh wont be able to sleep peacefully😆😆😆
@ blue,
dont make the break too long lucky😉 and im glad that the honeymoon isnt over yet😃😃😃
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: DakshnaFan

Wow Lucky 👏 Simple and too sweet scene 😛 Ha Ha pata hai public place main hum bhi nahi chahenge kuch jada romance yaar... 😉


Agree Dakshu needs a makeover 😆 He looks good in formals (Aish sachi sab Dakshna fans ke dil ke connections ek hi direction main sochte hai) but T-shirts main aur smart dikhega yaar 😛
Dakshu ko ek hi baar T-shirt main dekha hai (not nite suit) when he was in Darjeeling that too with formal pants (how boring) 😆 remember guys...

Vaise Lucky just curious to know did Dakshu buy that gown for Naina (for surprise)?...😳

Thank u dear 🤗Loved the scene 🤗

(Nice saree choice Lucky... and the nite gown is too sexy... aise hi dakshu pagal hai usme Naina ko dekhega to poora pagal hojayega 🤣🤣)

@red... agree with u dr...sari tho tha hi nice😊😊😊...nd nightgown...if he did buy t 4 her...dakshu to gaya kam seROFLROFLROFLROFL
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Posted: 13 years ago
@aish,mysti and rupali

thank u thank u ...Thanks for all the detailed responses buddies...🤗🤗.. 🤗

Acha laga ki sarees aur night gown ka choice pasand aaya..😛.aur ab tho sabit hogaya ki dakshnafans think alike😉..daksh needs amake over.( as told by rupali)

@mysti

Yaar..ayi ko tho hr8 attack aajayegi galati se bhi daksh ki baatein sunliya tho😉..waise bhi tune apne FF mein ayi aur kaki ko zindag ibar ka shock jo dediya😆🤣(🤣rembr what I am speaking about)

@aish

Yaar..tujhe dakshu tho har haal mein pasand aayega😛..I knwo he's sooo sweettt😳..luv him

@rupali

Night gown ?? ka kya hua?..jaldi hi pata chal jayega yaar😉

Edited by lucky.m - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: lucky.m


Contd...❤️Dakshna honeymoon❤️

Daksh and naina are getting ready..naina daksh ke collar teek kar rahi hain😍..and asks; tho aaj hum kaha jayenge❓
Daksh puts hands around naina;😛 hum soch rahe hain ki hum apni pyare patni ko jisne hamare morning ko itna pyara banaya,😳,shopping par le jayenge😛,(small stroke on naina's cheek)

Naina ; wow..😃shopping..main tho bhuligayi..yaha se wapas jaate waqt ghar mein sab ke liye gifts le ke jayenge.ayi, baba, kaki,aku,kaka,,sab ke liye..puts up his shirt sleeves...

Daksh; haan baba..sab ke liye..pehle tum ye sochlo ki tumhe kya lena hain aur tum ladikiyan shopping ka naam se itna khush kyu ho jaate ho?😲

Naina;; kyunki yahi ek mauka..pati ka jeb khali karne ka..iss liye hmm.tumne ach se soch tho liya na..baadmein ye mat kehna ki mere poora jeb khali kardiya..😆.

Daksh; bilkul nahi..tumahre liye hamri jaan hazir hein😍..shopping tho kuch bhi nahi..
Naina; oh daksh..tumhe tho best pati ka ward milna chahiye.(.kiss on cheek)😳😛
Daksh; acha.tho agar mein best pati tho best patni ko kaha se dhoondu? smiles😆
Naina; lil angry😡 ;dhoondege. shopping se aate waqt shayad miljayegi..goes way from him..
Daksh comes near naina; turns her towards him and says; arey main best pati iss liye hu kyunki meri patni aisa maanthi hain..tumhare bina main best thodi hoon.😛.(head butt)😍 and a cute eye lock
Naina;; chalo bahut dher hogaya..

Daksh; haan chalte hain..lekin main pehli keh raha hoo naina...tum jaante ho n amujhe shopping ki itni aadat nahi woh bhi ladkiyon ki saath tho bilkul nahi😆.😆..sirf tum akeli ladki ho jiske saath mein shoppingpe gaya..tumhe yaad hain!

Naina; haan yaad hein..kuch shirts karidne ke liye..gaye the..lekin aaj tho tumhe meri help karne padegi selction mein..aur aapke paas koi choice bhi nahi MR.Daksh patwardan😉
Daksh; acha..tho tumhe mere valuable opinion ki zaroorat hein??

Naina; jee alampana..iss kaneez ki aap itna madat tho kar sakte hain na...( intrue kaneez style)
Daksh; haan haan kyu nhai..lekin mere intelligence ka tum free mein fayida nahi uta sakthi.😲.fees dena padega😉
Naina;( checking her hand bag) offo daksh; jab dekhu..penalty, fine fees, sazza hamesha aisa hi kuch kehthe rehto ho.😆.ab jaldi se kaho kitna dena padega??
Daksh; yahi kuch 50!
Naina; ah bas..sirf 50 Rs😆..teek hain
Daksh; hello excuse me.??.kya kaha tumne..50 rs.😆.mam hum yaha rupiyon ki baat nahi..😉😳
Naina; tho phir..kya pachas??
Daksh comes near naina,holds her hand😳..( naughty look); jyada smart ban ne ki koi zaroorat nahi..main ache jaanta hoon ki..tumhe jaanti ho mein kis 50 ke baat kar raha ho😳

Naina samajgayi lekin acts as if not understood.😆releases her hand from daksh;
oh..daksh kya keh rahe ho tum..goes near bed takes her hand bag..mujhe kuch samaj mein nahi aa raha😲
Daksh; acha..abhi samjatho hoon😆

Daksh comes near naina..holds her hand and turns her to his side suddenly.😍.He takes off handd bag from naina's hand and throws it on bed..Pulls her very closer ..hands on naina's waist...😳😳..Naina is looking into daksh's eyes with no exact clue of what he is going to do, but knowing for sure he is going to do some mischief😳. an intense eye lock...😍.Dakshu pulls her more closer takes her face into his arms gives her a very very long and hard kiss☺️.Naina initially struggles, but later gives up as she gets lost 😍

After few min;;;;.Khatam hone ke baad...daksh leaves naina...😳.. both gasp for breath.😳..
Daksh;(.offo naina tumhara ye lipstick.😉 looks at his lips.😉..( naughty look and smile) ..ab tho samajmein aagaya na ki main kis 50 ko baat kar raha tha...😆

Naina still in.sweet shock., blushing☺️..☺️.sits on bed to recover from it..daksh comes near naina; tum teek ho na..??

Naina looks at him (with loads of gussa;) daksh tumhe tho.😡..starts hitting him with pillows ..daksh moves way from bed. Naina starts throwing pillows at him😆...daksh lag gaya fielding mein...😆bed par saare pillows khatam ho gaye...( pillow fight decidated to aish)😉



.naina.;.;.kya daksh, saas bhi nahi lene diya (hits him)😳... .tum bhina..hamesha aisa hi karte ho.( lookin at her lips)..phir se lipstick lagana padega..javo tum..mujhe tumse baat nahi karni and angrily😡 goes off to the dressing table

Daksh;(cute bechara face banakar uske peeche jaata hain)😕; aisa mat kaho naina...sry sry...sry ..aur waise bhi agar tum naa samajhne ki natak nahi karti tho...sach batavo tumne jaanbhucke ye kiya na...taaki main tumhe ...bolo😉😆

Naina turns her head to other side and gives a secret smile😳 but looks at dakshu gives mrs kp look.😡.

Daksh;ok ok..galati meri hain,promise ...iss baar lipstick lagane ke baad biilkul nahi..jo kuch bhi karunga uske pehle 🤣
Naina; gives him small slap;badmaash..ho tum..
Daksh' ab kaho..deal ya no deal??
Naina Thinks for while..and says
Naina;teek hain..hume tumhara deal manzoor hain lekin abhi nahi..aur ye mat poocho ki kab..ab chale
Daksh;(smile aagaya.)😛.. haan,, ye huyina baat.chalo...😃

Both are out for shopping spree...

Contd...


That's atrocious,unacceptable, unpardonable.it is not fair.Every time naina is at the receiving end. My blood is boiling.Naina has to retaliate for the grave injustice caused to her.she has to take revenge.A tit for a tat.For every long and hard kiss there shd be long and hard double kisses.Then only justice will be done,and i will feel relieved.
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Posted: 13 years ago
sorry.. guys.. i cannot comment properly.. but i read all ur FFs. it is superb superb superb!!!!! pls continue writing this.,...!!!

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