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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: sweetaish

Woo hooo...😎Here i come my dear dosto🤗... aj ka idea is simpl again, no big surprises😆...bas ek chota sa domestic thingy...Have fun, guys...

Bedtime, and Dakshna are in their room. [same setting, i know, par muje terrace pe scene set karna acha nahi lagta, anybody can tapkofy as the kebab me haddi there😛...so bedroom it is, again😆..]
LOL, true, but its FF, it will only happen if you write it
Naina has bunched up her hair using a pen to hold it there [ freaking ingenious technique if u ask me😆.
I think so too
..vaise bhi muje karna nahi ata😛], and is fixing a button on a shirt of his.
Dakshu tho is in a romance karne ka mood, and is trying to get her attention.
Ms. Hoshiyar, [Mrs. KP, i know], pretends to ignore the signals he's throwing her way.
Finally he gets up and goes to her, thoda sa annoyed.
D : Naina..
N : [looks up, all innocent smiles] Ha Daksh?
D : Tum ye kya kar rahi ho.
N : [with an "obviously" wala expressison] Button laga rahi hu tumhari shirt pe.. Kya hua?
D : [annoyed] Kuch nahi.[frowns at the shirt and stalks off]
Daksh is in full KP mode, decides to sulk; he sits down with some random file.
Naina is done with the shirt now, smiling to herself cos she knows exactly what he wants [mystique poochna mat yar😛]
LOL

She goes upto him.
N : Daksh.
Daksh still has his back to her and is flipping through the pages.
D : Ha.
N : [keeps her hands on his shoulder] Tum kya keh rehe the?
D : Kuch nahi.
She smiles and puts her arms around him.
N : Muje to laga tha ki tum kuch keh rahe the.
D : [mutters] Acha. Ho gaya tumhara-
[Naina is holding back a laugh now]
N : Ha. ho gaya. Ab batao na..
D : Kyu? Tumhare pas mere liye time kaha he. Tumhe to aur bhi important cheeze karni he, jaise shirt pe button lagana, bal banana-

N : [half to herself, touching her hair] bal? [she's mystified as to whats wrong with her hair now]
D : [continues as if she didnt interrupt] Ek kam karte he, me cupboard me dekhta hu teen-char shirt aur honge jinke button nikal gaye he. Tum wo bhi fix kar dena, uske bad aram se so jana.
N : [almost laughing] Par muje to ab neend nahi ayegi.
D : Kyu?
N : [leans down so she can hug him properly] Kyu ki mera KP mujse rooth gaya he.
D : Kya farak padta hai [puts the file down and gets up]. Tumhe nahi sona he to muje sona he, Good night.
[he goes and sits down on the bed]
N : KP... [she goes and sits next to him] Acha batao ab time kya hua hai?
D : [frowns at the clock] 11...
N : Aur subhe kab uthna hai?
D : [frowns at her now] 6.
N : [smiles] To abhi se subhe ke 6 baje tak ka sara time sirf tumhare liye hai. Tum jo bhi kaho, sun lungi. [touches his face] Ab to maan jao..
D : [he's cute wen he's stubborn isnt he😆] Nahi.
Yes
Naina plants a kiss on his cheek.
He shakes his head.

N : Ab kya hua?
Suddenly he is all smiles, and pulls the pen out of her hair. All those silky strands are splayed out beautifully now..
D : [runs his hand through her hair] Mujhe tumhare bal khule ache lagte hai.
Naina smiles back and hugs him.
N : Tum KP bante ho to bahot cute lagte ho.
D : Tum manane ati ho usse bhi zyada pyari lagti ho.
She laughs.
D : Pata hai Naina..
N : Nahi. [he smiles at that]
D : Ye light ki switch na, yahi kahi lagani chahiye thi..
your cracking me up
She laughs again.
N : Off karke ati hu.
She comes back, he pulls her in.
N : Daksh..
D : Hmm..?
N : [softly] I love you.
He kisses the top of her head;
D : I love you too...
...and they both go off to sleep. Cuddly cuddly.😉 [aj sone do guys..roz end me hum censor karne ki bat karte hai na😆😆]
my tummy hurts from laughing now

ohk so thats it 4 today😊...ideas do, peopl...nahi to me aise bina surprises wale chote chote [ahem😛] FFs hi likh paungi😉...
if I had ideas I wud have written them myself
cheerios😆!

Too cute dialogues and scene yaar, loved it all.
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: storytellerSSBN

what did you think of them getting wrapped up in the saree

LOL...i kno, dat wud b hilarious😆😆...they'd both try nd end up all tangled and laugh it off cos both f dem r hopeles at it...and then...[here comes my fav ending 2 all such scenes😉] they'd stop laughing nd get lost ankho hi ankho me and then...😳...censored..censored...😆😆😆
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Posted: 14 years ago
wow...!! its superb!
Lucky i am waiting for next part...
sweetaish, pls do write... more.. love it
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: DakshnaFan



I liked this idea of Both ending up getting wrapped in the saree... Aww kya scene Hoga.. 😳

i kno yar😆😆...pata he mene uspe do line ki FF bhi likhi he 😃...bas thodi der pehle..all credit goes 2 storyteller🤗...kya idea hai jaanu...infinite potential🤣...
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Posted: 14 years ago
😆Guys,

I am sorry to say this will be my last fiction😭 on cute moments between dakshna bcos after watching todays episode I cant imagine daksh saying and doing romance with naina..not any more.I wrote this part before watching todays's episode😡

Honeymoon scene continution

Daksh and naina return from their sight seeing to their room..Its almost night

Dakshna return their home and naina goes to wash room and gets changed in night gown and she comes out and sees daksh changing his shirt.He notices some marks on daksh's back, she goes near daksh and says

Naina; daksh, ye tumhare peeth ke peech nishan??😲
Daksh;nishan?? woh ye nisahan? woh kya haina aaj kal raat ko ek jungli billi mujhe pe attack kar rahi hey tho...😆
Naina; kya jungli billi?😲
Daksh; haan, uske bade bade naakun hey..bahut badey, bilkul tumhari naakun ti tarah..saying this he smiles naughtily😉

Naina; looks at her nails and she understand what daksh meant to say and feels emabarssed😳( I think u ppl understood woh kiske naakun ke nishan hain)

Daksh aur bhi romantic ho jaata hain aur naina ke paas aata hain.Naina keeps going backwards, daksh keeps coming forward and finally naina reaches the wall and daksh puts his hands on wall o either side of naina😳( I think u can imagine the scenario)..He comes really closer to naina..ek dum superclose and we focus on their faces.daksh looks into naina's eyes and says❤️

Daksh; Ab ye tho nahi poochoge ki ye nishan kab ,kaha, kaise aur kyu lage hain aur kisne lagaye hein..agar tum chahti ho tho mein bata saktha hoo ...batavu?( as usaul cute sa smile naughtywala)😉😆
Naina feels shy.☺️.very shy and says...sorry
Daksh; decides to pull naina's leg for sometime 'Sorry?? Acha iska matlab hein tumne jaan bhucke kiya..mujhe par apna gussa nikalrahi ho?

Naina; nahi nahi..jaanbhucke nahi woh...
.
Daksh keeps hand on naina's lips and stops her from completing the sentence and is about to kiss her.she pushes him and runs away😳
Daksh ;naina... runs for her .both get tired and fall on bed..besides eachother

Daksh; Ek baat kahu naina..tum apna nakun nikaldo warna jab tak honeymon khatam hojayega mera kaam tamam ho jayega..😆😉

Naina takes a pillow and beats him and says daksh...daksh continues teasing her.

Daksh; Woh kya hain na tum kabhi kabhi itna wild ho jaati ho ki😆...acha hua ki nisahn peet par lage hain..agar chehre aur kahi aur lagjaate tho mein kya kahunga logon se?? saying this he laughs😆
Naina gets lil angry😡..gets up and sits.daksh is in same sleeping still

Naina; haso haso..aur haso..bahut mazaa aa raha haina ..aise bol rahe ho ki jaise sab kuch maine akele hi kiya aur tum kuch nahi kar rahe ho...
Daksh catches naina hand and pulls her toward him and says "maine aisa tho nahi kaha" agar bhura laga sorry

Naina smiles and sleeps on his chest and says' bhura? bilkul nahi...Daksh spread his arms around naina and hugs her tightly.After few minutes naina lifts up her head and looking into dakshs face she says

Naina; daksh; kya mujhe sachmuch nakoon nikalne padenge, phir mein nailpolish kaha lagavungi?😲😆

Daksh; smiles and says; .. Acha..tumhe apne pati se jyada nail polish ki lagi hui hain...aaj kal ki patni yan bhi na.He slowly takes naina hair falling on his face slowly with his hand and puts at back of her ear and says

Daksh;Tumhe pata hain mujhe tumhare nakuun bhi bahut pasand hain.he takes her hand and kisses her nails aur jo darda inn ki wajah se hota hain woh bahut meetha hain..samjhi..tumhe naakun nikalne ki koi zaroorat nahi...khush
Naina gives a big smile and hugs him🤗
Daksh; naina ek kaam karo..ache se dekhlo ki peet ke peeche kaha kaha nishan nahi hai.ttaki tum waha...😉
Naina; bas bhi karona daksh warna mein mrs kp banjavungi
Daksh;(scared expression) nahi..mujhe bahut darr lag raha hai..

.Both smile looking at ecah other and daksh pulls up blanket ,slowly we see daksh's hand coming out of balnket and switching off lights besides bed...

Bas baaki tum imagine karo...😉


I am not quitting writing fiction but no more cute, I want to make an SSBN where all characters are natural and I am coming up some serious fiction. So I would be making a different post for that as I dnt want to spoil the essence of this cute fictions
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: ntsindia

wow...!! its superb!

Lucky i am waiting for next part...
sweetaish, pls do write... more.. love it

thanku dahlin😊...i'm soching right now ki nxt kya likhing😆...don expect long ones though, i'm on d idea drought again😛...luv 2 all🤗..nd dher sare smiles 2...😊😊😊... aish
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Posted: 14 years ago
lucky yar...awsum...loved d fultu naughty tone😆😆
ps : pls mat kaho ki no more cute scenes...😔yar CVs are havin a blast squashin sabke sapne nd sabke sapno se bhare naina, tum shuru mat ho jao yar...aaj to me almost scary FF likh padi thi almost...fultu emo, intense roing-shoing wala FF [i badly needed to get it out f my system so i did, bas yaha pe laga ke kisiko daraya nahi😆]...not u 2...pls pls pls...
pps : stay off d vids nd WUs for sumtim dr...kyu kha ma kha mood kharab karna he apna...CVs r crap nyway...don let dem win😉...
smiles,
aish
Edited by sweetaish - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: sweetaish

lucky yar...awsum...loved d fultu naughty tone😆😆

ps : pls mat kaho ki no more cute scenes...😔yar CVs are havin a blast squashin sabke sapne nd sabke sapno se bhare naina, tum shuru mat ho jao yar...aaj to me almost scary FF likh padi thi almost...fultu emo, intense roing-shoing wala FF [i badly needed to get it out f my system so i did, bas yaha pe laga ke kisiko daraya nahi😆]...not u 2...pls pls pls...
pps : stay off d vids nd WUs for sumtim dr...kyu kha ma kha mood kharab karna he apna...CVs r crap nyway...don let dem win😉...
smiles,
aish


Thanks yaar... Right now not in an mood to think about dakshna as its only daksh and naina now not dakshna..may be after everything becomes normal in SSBN I might..but sure will giv a try..😛
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: lucky.m


Thanks yaar... Right now not in an mood to think about dakshna as its only daksh and naina now not dakshna..may be after everything becomes normal in SSBN I might..but sure will giv a try..😛

If u need some serious fiction check out post dakshna dialogue(ff)..I think u can have fun😉

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Posted: 14 years ago
😊lucky...chill yar...me tho was in such a tempestuous mood jus afte rdng d topic headings ki poocho mat...almost wreckd d whol atmos here...phir i added "not rdng topic headings" 2 to my vrath wala list [i'v not gne 4 vids/Wus 4 quit sumtim now, my "vrath", mega achivmnt if u ask me😆]...and f cours needed some music therapy😆am much betr nw.. stay off those things na pls...for us bechare FF-wasi...we luv ur FFs😊...
Edited by sweetaish - 14 years ago

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