Dakshna FF(Fan fiction) - Page 25

Originally posted by: lucky.m

Dilwale dulhe😆 le jayenge (New version of DDLJ on dakshna)- fiction-

Hey guys

I am so pissed off with current track, like u, thought of coming with something new.Romance and cute FF;s part is being taken care of very well,so I thought of lil more intense fiction..😉

Here we go😛

Background of the story

Ayi came to know about dakshna's love, but dakshna are not aware of this.Ayi takes a promise from naina asking her to go way from dakshs life, as its too late(KYUNKI SHAADI KA DATE KARREB AA RAHA HAIN),but tells daksh shouldn't know this as he will never agree for this (ayi is under sohini effect and all this drama happens after psycho leaves from PH after doing enough damage, no ekta mata's track)

.Naina first resists but gives up and agrees to it( sacrifice bhoot), but she says she needs some time as she can't end relation just like that and ayi agrees, and asks her to do this ASAP.Naina tries to do this by avoiding daksh intially

As per vachan naina starts avoiding daksh.Daksh gets mad ( common)

.A lil confrontation

Daksh keeps waiting on terrace but naina doesn't turn up.He calls her lot of times, but no responsejust then he sees naina's office light is on.so he goes there

He opens the door and finds naina doing her work

Daksh; acha to tum yaha ho..mein tumhara terrace par wait kar rahatha.Kamse kam call tho lift karti.Itna bhi busy mat ho javo ki tumhare paas mere liye waqt nahi hai

Naina doesn't respond

Daksh' naina mein tumse baat kar raha hoo.

.still no response and naina continues with her work.Daksh gets angry and he closes the file naina is working on

Naina; daksh, kya kar rahe ho?

Daksh; mein kya kar raha hoo? tumhe pata bhi tum kya kar rahi ho.Mein kabse tumse do pal baat karne ke liye taras raha hoo aur ek ho tum ki tumhe tho meri parwa hi nahi

Naina; aisi baat nahi hain daksh..bas kuch kaam tha

Daksh comes closer takes naina hands into his and says naina..mera bhi kaam hai lekin tum mere liye sabse pehli aati ho.sabse pehle.❤️.Tum jaante hona ki ye paagal tumse kitna pyar karta hai..😛

aww...dakshu cutie😍

Naina gets lost but remembers ayi vachan and releases her hands from daksh and says bahut raat ho chuki hain..hume sona cahaiye

Daksh; haan tho phir maine kab manakiya..chalo sote hain😆😆

Naina; daksh...

Daksh; okay sorry baba,mazzaq tha..kya naina pehle kaam, phir neend...do min bhi teek tarah baat nahi karpaya,, nahi.pele tum mere saath thoda waqt bitavo..phir jayenge..do din se dekh raha hoo, tum tho mujhe avoid karne par lagi ho

Naina is lil surprised thinking if daksh got an hint of her thoughts

Daksh' arey, itna seriously mat dekho. mujhe pata hain tum mujhe avoid nahi karoge and he comes closer and with intense look and says " mein karne nahi doonga..kabhi bhi nahi", agar aisa koi plan hain tho drop kardo..samjhi..

Naina keeps looking at daksh and daksh says " agar tum mujhe aisa hi dekhte rahoge tho tumhara neend udd jayenge waise tum mere neend baut pehle cheen chuki ho...he looks at her with all that pyar in his eyes and says" I love u naina" and he hugs her. Naina starts saying love u too lekin phir rukh jaati hain

bechari..confusion mein pad gayee ki bete ka baat maanu ya uski ayi ka..kya karu??😲😲

Daksh waits for response and is disappointed on unresponsiveness of naina.

Naina; chale daksh

Daksh nods and both starts moving towards PH

Daksh; lagta hain aaj maam ka mood theek nahi hain love u nhai bola..😕

Naina walks lil ahead and says

Naina; roz bolna zaroori hain kya?ek din nahi bataya th kya hojayega

Daksh holds her hand , she turns back and daksh says; "jaan chala jayega"

maar dala yarr...kya dialog hai...👏

Naina puts an hand on his mouth and says aisa mat kaho daksh..pls

Daksh pulls her lil closer and says, agar meri itna chinta hai tho..jaan bacha sakthi ho..tumhara haath mein hain..

Naina is completely lost, both looking into each other eyes and naina says love u daksh and hugs him with tears rolling down...daksh too hugs her

Aur ayi ussi waqt kidki mein se inn dono ko dekhthi hain

Contd...

👏taliya...taliya...waiting 4 next part

Originally posted by: sweetaish

hiya there🤗...here is naina's surpris part 2...

hope it lives upto the first part 😉

Daksh knows he's gonna be ultra late, so he calls home and tells Ayi and Naina.

He reaches home and lets himself in quietly so as to not wake everyone up, then goes to his room. The light is on.He opens the door gently. He has a gift for Naina [sari; i know its cliched, guys, par right now kuch innovativ nahi mil raha, bear with me😆].

how bout payals, Daksh can put it on her and hear her footsteps wherever she is, although they can both hear each others heart beat anyway.

D : Naina?
She's not seen, and he wonders what she could be doing. The room is neat, the bed is made, his trackpants are laid out on the bed. There is a card on top of it, so he picks it up.
It is adressed to MR. Cute KP.
He smiles and opens it.
It reads..
Daksh,
Thoda sa kam baki reh gaya hai, kal ke liye. tum change kar ke so jao, me jaldi aa jaungi.
Naina.
Daksh is slightly disappointed wit d unromantic letter,then spots a thermos of coffee and an "I love KP" mug on his table.
He smiles, picks up Naina's gift [i know, i know but kya kare lets make do wit d sari for now😛] and goes to her office.

Daksh could try put it on her, they might be both useless at wearing saree, and they end up just draping it round each other or daksh ends up wearing it.

Again, the light is on and he pushes the door open, but this time the lights go off once he is in.
The whole place is lit up with candles,there is a cake on her table with more candles around it.
He smiles, and calls out to her softly.
She doesnt respond, so he calls again, louder this time.
She hugs him from behind. "Aa gaya mera KP ghar..."
D : Ha. mene tumse kaha tha na ki tum time pe so jao..
N : To phir tumhe surprise kaun deta..
He smiles and turns around, takes her in his arms.
D : Aur me tumhe surpris dene wala tha.
Naina laughs. "Itna late aakar?"
He just smiles back, and gives her the package.
She smiles back. "Abhi kholu?"
D : Nahi, kal subhe kholna.
N : Theek he to me gues kar lungi.
D : Kar lo. Tum to bahot hoshiyar ho na..
She laughs.
D : Cake kis liye?
N : Bas yu hi..Ek bat kahu?
Daksh tho is lost in her eyes [he always goes moony like that na😆😆].

LOL

D : [happily] Kaho..
N : Me chahti hu ki tum humesha, humesha khush raho. Jaise abhi ho.
[he nods] D : Tum ho, to ha..humesha.
Naina too is slightly fuzzy now, but as usual she recovers first.

thats true actually

"To phir humesha KP mat bano. Aise zyada cute lagte ho." she pinches his nose lovingly.

too cute

D : Agar subah ko KP banke muje itni sari surprises milengi, to kyu nahi KP banu..Roz banunga. [cutsie smile, guys😊]

gr8 dialogue

She shakes her head,smiling.
D : Thank you.
N : Kis liye?
D : [smiles lovingly] Password,desktop,coffee mug,cake,yeh [indicates the candles], aur wo sari smiles jo tumne aaj mujhe di he..

double aww

N : To tumhe acha laga.
D : Ha.
N : Kitna?
D : Bata du..[kisses her right cheek]..Ya dikha du?[kisses her other cheek]

cheeky

Naina blushes; "Daksh..abhi nahi."😳
D : Kyu? Sab to so gaye he vaise bhi.
Naina shakes her head again, smiling shyly.
D : Pati hu tumhara, license he kuch bhi, kahi bhi karne ka[raises her chin]..tum meri ho

very authorative

[eyelock,forum wasiyo...😍]
N : Ha, bas.. abhi nahi..
He frowns. "Kyu?"
N :[softly] Tum darwaza khula chod aye..
And then it dawns on him. "Oh."
Naina laughs, and he joins in too.
D : To phir band karu...?
Uska jawab Daksh ko Naina ke naina dete he

luv the way u put it

, baki😳😆...jusst imagine..as usual, hum censor nahi karenge😆😆

out of ideas for now, guys...hope u guys liked dis one 2😛

cheerios😆!

ps : mene ek-do ideas udhar liye hai dakshu ke gift ke liye, lik d mug...hop u guys don mind😊

halo guys🤗 removed my laast post...kisi ko daraya he to sry yar...unintentional, bliv me😃...nyway, i got over my temporary insanity [ in case u guys din c my last post, i was gonna writ this heavy, emo stuff...😛 ending was okay with the usual hugs nd kisses, but still...blame it on a stupid impulse to check the topic headings on the forum😆 ; which by the way r gettin scarier by d day😕aj nahi padungi😊] . so 'm okay nw. wont tortur u guys with emo posts.😊 take care, all...

Did they not celebrate rakhi bandhan on SSBN

Originally posted by: sweetaish

Halo everyone🤗...Today i've kept it simpl, bas muje wadde wadde ideas nai mil rahe the😆😆...hoping u guys'l lik it😊..

Note : Unles otherwise mentioned, all my FFs wil be post Dakshna's marriage..its the way i like it best😉

Daksh is going to be late, so Naina decides to wait up for him. Everyone else has gone to bed, so she settles down on the front room sofa with some work of hers.

Daksh comes home around 11, and sees Naina who's fallen asleep on the couch with a file in her lap.
He goes to her and presses a kiss onto her forehead.
She smiles up at him.
N : Aa gaye tum.
D : Ha. Aur tum meri bat kabhi nahi manti ho. Kaha tha na wait mat karo..
N : Adat pad gai hai wakil saheb, apke bina theek se neend nahi ati.

Aww
D : Acha ab me aa gaya hu, ab so sakti ho na.. [helps her up]
N : Pehle batao tum kha ke aye ho ki nahi.

every wife I know asks her husband this question third afte ar u ok, what u doiing, I find it so funny.
D : [thinks for a second] Ha baba ab tum so jao, me bus abhi ata hu.
N : KP, tumhe jhoot bolna ata hi nahi he. Aur mujse to bilkul nahi. [smiles] Tum ye sab rakh ke ao, me khana lagati hu.
D : Tumne khana khaya?
N : [confidently] Ha, kyu? Muje bahot bhook lagi thi. Mene pehle hi kha li.
Daksh smiles and nods; D : Tumhe jhoot bolna ata hai.

The can't sleep or eat with out each other
Naina laughs and walks off to the kitchen, while daksh goes to keep his things in.

[Dakshna in their room]
Dinner over and done, Daksh is waiting for Naina and going through a file.
Naina comes out in her pjs, toweling her damp hair, and smiles when she sees him with the file.
She sets the towel aside and hugs him from behind. "KP, thoda kam kal ke liye bhi chod do tum."

LOL
He sets the file aside and gets up from the chair; she hugs him, he hugs her back.
N : Missed you...
D : [kisses her hair] Missed you, too.
N : Thoda sa jaldi nahi aa sakte the..
D : [lightly] Mere paas aj bas do hi options the..Ya to me late au, ya phir ghar hi na au..
Naina pulls back, alarmed. "Kya!"
D : Are tum itna ghabra kyu gayi. Mera matlab tha, agar me late nahi ata to mujhe rat ko wahi rukna padta...[smiles] Aur meri Naina ko mere bina neend nahi ati, to bas, late hi sahi..
N : Acha? To tumhe mere bina neend aa jayegi-[tries to pull back]
He doesnt let go; D : Neend aa jayegi par phir muje subhe tumhare bina uthne ki adat nahi he.[trademark cutie smile😊]

luv ur dialogues
N : [nods,smiling] Theek he. Ab batao aj ka din acha tha?
D : Theek tha..
N : Bas? Tum subhe ko time pe gaye the, tumne aj ka sara kam nipta liya,kal ka bhi adha kar liya hoga aur tumhara mood bhi acha tha.
D : Tumhe kaise pata?
N : [smiles] Mujhe pata chal jata he.
D : din acha to tha par kuch kami thi...
N : Kya?
D : Meri Naina nahi mili na sham tak..[the eyelock 😍; he is about to kiss her]

Double aww
N : [softly] Daksh.
D : [stops midway, slightly annoyed at the interruption] Aj darwaza band he Naina.

LOL
N : Lights tho on he na..
D : Kya..
She takes advantage of his momentary confusion and ducks out of his embrace.
D : Naina! [choti si chase, people, with lots of dodging😆, near misses😍 and lots of laughs😊]
She gets to the swithboard and the lights go off.
N : [giggles] Goodnight, Daksh.
D : [resolutely] Pata hai. night to achi hi hogi.😛

She laughs again. He finds her, and pushes her onto the bed.

can i make a suggestion that Daksh turns off the light instead of Naina a Naina is scared of the dark, thus she calls out to him and he goes to her, then daksh says 'I'm sorry, main light on karta hoon, then Naina says 'Light off rehne do, jab tummere paas ho, mujhe darne ki koi zaroorat hai/mujhe kuch bhi daar nahi lagata, mujhe tumhari baahon mein bohot safe mehsus karti hoon'

As usual, the end i'm leaving out 4 u peopl😆...Fill in the rest, everyone...😉
Cheerios😆!

Originally posted by: storytellerSSBN

Did they not celebrate rakhi bandhan on SSBN

Originally posted by: storytellerSSBN

what did you think of them getting wrapped up in the saree