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Neethu

@ntsindia

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Posted: 14 years ago

#231

oh.. wow!!! kitna romantic hai... loved all...

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DakshnaFan

@DakshnaFan

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Posted: 14 years ago

#232

Aish very cute & romantic yaar 😳... loved the dialogues 👏... Naina is the only one who can make Daksh Smile 😊 😉... & the surprises too good...👏😳 Loved it...😊

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Aishwarya

@Aish_21

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Posted: 14 years ago

#233

Originally posted by: DakshnaFan
Aish very cute & romantic yaar 😳... loved the dialogues 👏... Naina is the only one who can make Daksh Smile 😊 😉... & the surprises too good...👏😳 Loved it...😊

thanks dearie🤗...am sooo glad u likd t...😊😊...bahot acha lagta he wen u peopl say so..

ps : yar gimme some new ideas na...idea-drought ho gaya hai...ya phir sum1 giv anoder FF na pls pls pls...i've read al d FFs so far nd aj to koi idea bhi nahi aa raha khud likhne ke liye...

pps : i'l try sumtime later 2de, though. wish me luck😆

loads n loads f smil😊s,

aish

Edited by sweetaish - 14 years ago

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Aishwarya

@Aish_21

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#234

Woo hooo...😎Here i come my dear dosto🤗... aj ka idea is simpl again, no big surprises😆...bas ek chota sa domestic thingy...Have fun, guys...

Bedtime, and Dakshna are in their room. [same setting, i know, par muje terrace pe scene set karna acha nahi lagta, anybody can tapkofy as the kebab me haddi there😛...so bedroom it is, again😆..]

Naina has bunched up her hair using a pen to hold it there [ freaking ingenious technique if u ask me😆...vaise bhi muje karna nahi ata😛], and is fixing a button on a shirt of his.
Dakshu tho is in a romance karne ka mood, and is trying to get her attention.
Ms. Hoshiyar, [Mrs. KP, i know], pretends to ignore the signals he's throwing her way.
Finally he gets up and goes to her, thoda sa annoyed.
D : Naina..
N : [looks up, all innocent smiles] Ha Daksh?
D : Tum ye kya kar rahi ho.
N : [with an "obviously" wala expressison] Button laga rahi hu tumhari shirt pe.. Kya hua?
D : [annoyed] Kuch nahi.[frowns at the shirt and stalks off]
Daksh is in full KP mode, decides to sulk; he sits down with some random file.
Naina is done with the shirt now, smiling to herself cos she knows exactly what he wants [mystique poochna mat yar😛]
She goes upto him.
N : Daksh.
Daksh still has his back to her and is flipping through the pages.
D : Ha.
N : [keeps her hands on his shoulder] Tum kya keh rehe the?
D : Kuch nahi.
She smiles and puts her arms around him.
N : Muje to laga tha ki tum kuch keh rahe the.
D : [mutters] Acha. Ho gaya tumhara-
[Naina is holding back a laugh now]
N : Ha. ho gaya. Ab batao na..
D : Kyu? Tumhare pas mere liye time kaha he. Tumhe to aur bhi important cheeze karni he, jaise shirt pe button lagana, bal banana-
N : [half to herself, touching her hair] bal? [she's mystified as to whats wrong with her hair now]
D : [continues as if she didnt interrupt] Ek kam karte he, me cupboard me dekhta hu teen-char shirt aur honge jinke button nikal gaye he. Tum wo bhi fix kar dena, uske bad aram se so jana.
N : [almost laughing] Par muje to ab neend nahi ayegi.
D : Kyu?
N : [leans down so she can hug him properly] Kyu ki mera KP mujse rooth gaya he.
D : Kya farak padta hai [puts the file down and gets up]. Tumhe nahi sona he to muje sona he, Good night.
[he goes and sits down on the bed]
N : KP... [she goes and sits next to him] Acha batao ab time kya hua hai?
D : [frowns at the clock] 11...
N : Aur subhe kab uthna hai?
D : [frowns at her now] 6.
N : [smiles] To abhi se subhe ke 6 baje tak ka sara time sirf tumhare liye hai. Tum jo bhi kaho, sun lungi. [touches his face] Ab to maan jao..
D : [he's cute wen he's stubborn isnt he😆] Nahi.
Naina plants a kiss on his cheek.
He shakes his head.
N : Ab kya hua?
Suddenly he is all smiles, and pulls the pen out of her hair. All those silky strands are splayed out beautifully now..
D : [runs his hand through her hair] Mujhe tumhare bal khule ache lagte hai.
Naina smiles back and hugs him.
N : Tum KP bante ho to bahot cute lagte ho.
D : Tum manane ati ho usse bhi zyada pyari lagti ho.
She laughs.
D : Pata hai Naina..
N : Nahi. [he smiles at that]
D : Ye light ki switch na, yahi kahi lagani chahiye thi..
She laughs again.
N : Off karke ati hu.
She comes back, he pulls her in.
N : Daksh..
D : Hmm..?
N : [softly] I love you.
He kisses the top of her head;

D : I love you too...

...and they both go off to sleep. Cuddly cuddly.😉 [aj sone do guys..roz end me hum censor karne ki bat karte hai na😆😆]

ohk so thats it 4 today😊...ideas do, peopl...nahi to me aise bina surprises wale chote chote [ahem😛] FFs hi likh paungi😉...

cheerios😆!

Edited by sweetaish - 14 years ago

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Aishwarya

@Aish_21

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Posted: 14 years ago

#235

Originally posted by: ntsindia
wow! wow! simply superb...

😳thanks sweety...

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lucky.m

@lucky.m

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+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#236

@sweetaish

Wow..superb..loved every part of ur FF(daksh's surprise)..gr8..keep posting ..ur FF's brought smile on my face😛..Still to read other FF of urs

@neetu

Yaar, mein kya bolu..as usual rocking aur naina ka surprise on daksh's birthday👏..lved it,😉 aur iss dialogue mein tumhare dhadkhan bhi pehchan sakta hoon"🤗.a hug for u...killer dialogue hai...dil chooliya❤️

@storyteller

Yaar, gr8, lekin abhi ko kyu include kiya.😕.I read ur old FF's already once, but it was damn fun reading once again with new dialogues 👏

@muniras

So..romantic..U reminded of Salman in MPK.( bday surprise), my fav..keep posting more👏

I kept few more pending for tommorow though tempted to read all😉..GR8 job guys and I am really happy to find new members in FF, otherthan storyteller, neetu, dakshna, me and sousou..😃.

Lets keep going and lets rock...👍🏼...

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Aishwarya

@Aish_21

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#237

lucky yar thanks🤗...missed ur FFs btw😊

ps : i'm not reading other topics for sanity's sake, lekin aj ke to headings wer so damn scary...age likhne ka mood down d drain..

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DakshnaFan

@DakshnaFan

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#238

Aish too cute yaar... Simple and sweet... And i agree kabhi to dono ko sona chahiye 😳 😉

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Aishwarya

@Aish_21

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#239

Originally posted by: DakshnaFan
Aish too cute yaar... Simple and sweet... And i agree kabhi to dono ko sona chahiye 😳 😉

😊thanku thanku *low bow*...😆😆

ps : i kno, kabhi to dono ko sone dena chaiye😆😆

Edited by sweetaish - 14 years ago

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lucky.m

@lucky.m

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+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#240

Dilwale dulhe😆 le jayenge (New version of DDLJ on dakshna)- fiction-

Hey guys

I am so pissed off with current track, like u, thought of coming with something new.Romance and cute FF;s part is being taken care of very well,so I thought of lil more intense fiction..😉

Here we go😛

Background of the story

Ayi came to know about dakshna's love, but dakshna are not aware of this.Ayi takes a promise from naina asking her to go way from dakshs life, as its too late(KYUNKI SHAADI KA DATE KARREB AA RAHA HAIN),but tells daksh shouldn't know this as he will never agree for this (ayi is under sohini effect and all this drama happens after psycho leaves from PH after doing enough damage, no ekta mata's track)

.Naina first resists but gives up and agrees to it( sacrifice bhoot), but she says she needs some time as she can't end relation just like that and ayi agrees, and asks her to do this ASAP.Naina tries to do this by avoiding daksh intially

As per vachan naina starts avoiding daksh.Daksh gets mad ( common)

.A lil confrontation

Daksh keeps waiting on terrace but naina doesn't turn up.He calls her lot of times, but no responsejust then he sees naina's office light is on.so he goes there

He opens the door and finds naina doing her work

Daksh; acha to tum yaha ho..mein tumhara terrace par wait kar rahatha.Kamse kam call tho lift karti.Itna bhi busy mat ho javo ki tumhare paas mere liye waqt nahi hai

Naina doesn't respond

Daksh' naina mein tumse baat kar raha hoo.

.still no response and naina continues with her work.Daksh gets angry and he closes the file naina is working on

Naina; daksh, kya kar rahe ho?

Daksh; mein kya kar raha hoo? tumhe pata bhi tum kya kar rahi ho.Mein kabse tumse do pal baat karne ke liye taras raha hoo aur ek ho tum ki tumhe tho meri parwa hi nahi

Naina; aisi baat nahi hain daksh..bas kuch kaam tha

Daksh comes closer takes naina hands into his and says naina..mera bhi kaam hai lekin tum mere liye sabse pehli aati ho.sabse pehle.❤️.Tum jaante hona ki ye paagal tumse kitna pyar karta hai..😛

Naina gets lost but remembers ayi vachan and releases her hands from daksh and says bahut raat ho chuki hain..hume sona cahaiye

Daksh; haan tho phir maine kab manakiya..chalo sote hain😆😆

Naina; daksh...

Daksh; okay sorry baba,mazzaq tha..kya naina pehle kaam, phir neend...do min bhi teek tarah baat nahi karpaya,, nahi.pele tum mere saath thoda waqt bitavo..phir jayenge..do din se dekh raha hoo, tum tho mujhe avoid karne par lagi ho

Naina is lil surprised thinking if daksh got an hint of her thoughts

Daksh' arey, itna seriously mat dekho. mujhe pata hain tum mujhe avoid nahi karoge and he comes closer and with intense look and says " mein karne nahi doonga..kabhi bhi nahi", agar aisa koi plan hain tho drop kardo..samjhi..

Naina keeps looking at daksh and daksh says " agar tum mujhe aisa hi dekhte rahoge tho tumhara neend udd jayenge waise tum mere neend baut pehle cheen chuki ho...he looks at her with all that pyar in his eyes and says" I love u naina" and he hugs her. Naina starts saying love u too lekin phir rukh jaati hain

bechari..confusion mein pad gayee ki bete ka baat maanu ya uski ayi ka..kya karu??😲😲

Daksh waits for response and is disappointed on unresponsiveness of naina.

Naina; chale daksh

Daksh nods and both starts moving towards PH

Daksh; lagta hain aaj maam ka mood theek nahi hain love u nhai bola..😕

Naina walks lil ahead and says

Naina; roz bolna zaroori hain kya?ek din nahi bataya th kya hojayega

Daksh holds her hand , she turns back and daksh says; "jaan chala jayega"

Naina puts an hand on his mouth and says aisa mat kaho daksh..pls

Daksh pulls her lil closer and says, agar meri itna chinta hai tho..jaan bacha sakthi ho..tumhara haath mein hain..

Naina is completely lost, both looking into each other eyes and naina says love u daksh and hugs him with tears rolling down...daksh too hugs her

Aur ayi ussi waqt kidki mein se inn dono ko dekhthi hain