*Rabir FF: True Love...Note, Chap 55 @ pg 143, 145 (2/1) - Page 106

Hi Nivi (can I call you that?)

I started skimming this during my lunch hour at work and the first thing I did when I got home is to reread the first chapter again. It's so cool how you took the characters from the show and created a completely new story out of them. The first part has me hooked since it seems like Rachna and Kabir were already in love but they separated, perhaps because Rachna is ill? I'm looking forward to reading ahead, yet I couldn't help but type out my reaction to the first chapter because it really fascinates me the way FF works. Like I said it's my first time reading any such thing so it's a completely new concept to me. Sorry if I sound like a dunce.

Oh I guess this story is completely different from the show. You seem to have just borrowed the characters and made the entire plot up yourself. Interesting to read, but it's going to take a bit of some getting used to. It's odd to think of Gunjan being Rachna's younger sister and her becoming pregnant before marriage. But I'll try my best to keep an open mind, since it's a unique concept. I hope my long comments are not boring you. Tell me if they are and I'll stop.

Woah, Rachna and Kabir were already married and they separated after that? That's a shocker that you organized the story this way. But I am starting to understand the reason of why you put that quote as the introduction to this story. Rachna and Kabir were separated, but once they reunite, nothing will have changed between them, hence it will be True Love. Very cleverly thought out. I hope I'm not taking too many jumps and rushing to conclusions. Both of the flashbacks you wrote about were very nicely described. It seems like they were both over the moon with their wedding, but that makes me even more curious to know why they drifted apart.

Ok so that was an intense chapter that left me feeling sad for poor Rachna. She ran away and was disowned by her family, after which I'm assuming she met Kabir and fell in love with him. However, if she was in contact with Sneha, why didn't Rachna tell her about Kabir and the wedding? I guess you might address that in future chapters. But to have lost both of her parents in such a drastic way makes me feel terrible for Rachna, though it appears that Sneha is a big support to her. I made some predictions early on, but they all seem to have been proven false within the first 4 chapters. This is really a completely new story that you've composed. Very unexpected and I'm looking forward to how it progresses.

A belated congratulations for your 500th post, though I see on your profile that you have over 1500 now so I'm a bit late I guess. I thought that was a very sweet update. The glimpses into Rachna's past of how she felt so down and depressed without her family made me very sad. It reminded me almost of how Rachna's family on the show had stopped supporting her when she decided to agree to KT's demands and help Bittu recover. Anyways, their first meeting seemed quite simple, albeit a bit filmy with its own twist of course. The bond between Rachna and Sneha appears to be like that of a mother and daughter. I hope we get to see more glimpses into the past and find out how Rachna and Kabir actually fell in love, since it seems like they were just a boss and employee during Rachna's initial months in Benaras.

Okay missy, I have to say that you weaved all those flashbacks together very well. Firstly, I love the way Kabir proposed and then of course the way Rachna announced her pregnancy. Both of those parts were insanely cute and made me feel mushy inside. Now I do wish that you had given us a few more details into their courtship period but I guess the chapter would have ended up being way too long then. Perhaps those details have been shared in future chapters, so I will have to read to find out.The miscarriage part was tragic as well as the fact that Rachna lost her parents very soon after that event. Now the most shocking part of the update was that Kabir's brother is Karan and apparently he is the one who did Rachna's parents' accident. Just judging by how you have thrown twists into the plot so far, I feel that there is more to this than you have let on in this sixth chapter so I will refrain from making any predictions that will only be proven wrong later. I must say though that I felt it wrong for Rachna to leave Kabir because of something his brother did, that too without sharing the reason why because it seems that she just told him to go away from her without giving any explanation.

Ooh that was a huge twist. Divorce papers? It makes sense that Kabir's mother tricked him into signing the papers, but how did Rachna sign something like that without being aware. Another thing, I liked that Sneha is talking to Rachna again, but I do feel that perhaps everything shouldn't have been sorted out so soon between them. After all, Rachna told so many lies to Sneha and hid so many truths that it seems kind of illogical for Sneha to forgive her so easily. I guess the twist of the divorce wouldn't have made too big of an impact if Sneha had also been angry with Rachna though so I will try and accept it as your creative liberty. Also, if Kabir's lawyer knew about the divorce papers being hidden into the property papers, that would mean that he was in on the whole plan with Kabir's evil mother. That's aggravating to me. Anyways, I find it safe to conclude now that you have crafted your story with plenty of unexpected twists so I should not even bother trying to make predictions. Instead, I should just read and follow the path that you have laid because ultimately it seems like everything should come together on its own. Again, sorry for the essays that I am leaving after each part but I was an English major in college so I can't help but analyze every single thing and share my thoughts about what I am feeling as I read each chapter. Bear with me, though if you absolutely hate the comments, I can stop and keep my mouth shut.

Nice disclaimer, though I myself have absolutely no knowledge of the legal system of India either so it's not like I would have caught on with the exaggerations. I live on the East coast of the US and have only been to India twice in my entire life. From the way you have given some descriptions of Delhi in your initial updates, it seems like you are quite familiar with India. If you don't mind me asking, do you live in India? You write very well, hence I was curious.

Okay woah. That was a lot happening all together. As I thought, Karan is not responsible for the accident that took the life of Rachna's parents. But again, this leaves the question of who is? Kabir's entry was totally fab! I loved the authoritative way that he said he wants all of his answers from Rachna. I'm guessing that the next part will be all about the confrontation and the entire truth coming out. But then I see that you have already written 54 parts to this story which makes me wonder if this entire misunderstanding will clear so soon. I clearly need to read ahead, but I just can't help myself from posting my thoughts here. One thing that stuck out to me is that Rachna recognized Karan from his eyes that look just like Kabir's (fabulous connection there) and the fact that she has seen a picture of him already. However, even if Karan never attended Rachna and Kabir's wedding, they had to have chatted on the phone or called each other on Skype no? So how come Karan doesn't recognize Rachna as his sister-in-law by her name or even her face? Just something that popped into my head. Sorry if I am reading too much into it.