New ff on Rabir(note on page 10) 15-07-2014 - Page 4

Originally posted by: cuteangelasya

Wow very nyc update👏

So they friends now...

Wht happened 2 vihaan eagerly wanting 2know😛

Update soon...

Rachna's past will be reveal soon. Maybe in the next chapter

Originally posted by: diti96

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No dear all suggestions are welcome. If is good and needed i will use it in the chapter

Chapter 5

It was 8am. Kabir was busy in making the breakfast. He made sime sandwiches with scramble egg, coffee, juice and some oranges. This all was for breakfast. He saw Rachna entering the kitchen. Here face was sad and here eyes were red and swollen. She sat on the chair and murmured a good morning. She noticed that the breakfast was mafe by kabir. Ohh sorry u totally forgot that Maria and Peter are on leave.why did you bother? I would have made smthg. No it is alright he said. They finished their breakfast quietly. Rachna stood up and said kabir I have written a letter for you. I wanted to apologies for my behavior. I am sorry to Rachna Kabir said. I didn't know that my question would hurt you so bad. No it's fine Kabir. The letter is on the table. If you have time please read it. I am going to my room to rest. Ok fine Rachna i will read it. You know Kabir I have a strange feeling inside me. Something inside me said me to talk with you but I don't have the courage to talk with you. That's why I decided to write a letter. Rachna left for here room while Kabir took the letter from the table and decided to read it.

Rachna's letter
Vihaan and I met during a party. It was the birthday party of my friend Sania. Vihaan came there with his friend Raj. Raj is the fiancee of Sania. Vihaan was a flirting type. He was popular because he was the number 1 racing-car driver. When he saw me he came to me and said why is this beautiful girl standing alone? I am waiting for Sania replied. Ohh oke btw you are really beautiful can I dance with you? No I saidi don't dance with strangers. Ohh hi i am Vihaan Agarwal i am from profession a racing -car driver and i am 25 years old and you? I laughed and said hi i am Rachna Garg. I am from profession a model but i am new in the industry I am 21 years old. So we aren't strangers anymore right? So can we danxe? I smiled and said ok. We danced the whole night. Finally it was 2am . He offered to drop me home. I was living in a apartment. He dropped me home. The same morning he stood in front of my door with flowers and a ring. He said Ravhna I love you. I want to know you better but i am afraid that I can't wait. Before someone else proposes you I wanted yo propose you and make you mine. I was shocked, didn't know how to react but I was happy inside because yes I had fallen in love with him the first time I saw him. Can you please give me a chance? I agreed and said fine. Actually I think that I have fallen in love with you too because I was thinking yhe whole night about you. So do i he said. He put the ring in to me finger. It was a pretty diamond ting. We hugged each other. He said today I have a race and I want you to come with me. And I know that I will win because I have my lucky charm with me. When saying that he kissed me and said love you baby. At the stadium I saw so many girls around him. I felt really jealous. I turned my face because I couldn't see him with some one else. He noticed it held my hand and said . He girls meet my fiance Rachna Garg. I smiled when the others gasped. He kissed me in front of everyone and said wish me luck baby I was shy but I kissed him snd wished him luck. Finally Vihaan won the race. I was so happy for him. He brought me to his home. This villa when ge said stay with me baby. I want to see your face every morning because that makes my day good. I was shocked didn't know what to say but I finally said. But Vihaan. .. no he hugged me snd saif please baby. I can't stay away from you. We will stay in separated rooms. I only want to admire you. I smiled and said ok then but let me bring my things here. He smiled snd and said ok baby but only important things no clothes etc. I will arrange for everything. Ok I smiled and said but Vihaan I want to continue with m modeling. I need to give some auditions. I want yo reach the top become the biggest model of London. Sure baby he said. I want the whole world to know that my fiance us a top model. I laughed and said first let me do the auditions nah. I need one opportunity to do a fashion show and become famous. After thar you can tell the whole world that your fiance is a top model. He smiled and said I will arrange for everything baby. You go and take a look at the house I will make a few calls and join you in a few minutes. I was admiring a picture of him in the wall when he held me from back and said. Why are you admiring the photo? Admire the real Vihaan. He came close to my ears and whispered all us done baby you have a fas show after a week. You are the show stopper of D&G. I was so happy I turned around and kissed him. Thank you baby. So lets do some shopping he suggested. Finally we finished our shopping . When we reached home I decided to call my mom and inform them about Vihaan. They were really happy for me. I didn't say that I am living with him. It was almost 4 mon since we were together. Vihaan yold me every thing about himself. He told me that sonali was his first girlfriend but she always misused him. She was only interested I his property. I never knew that Vihaan was one of the youngest millionaire in London. We decided to announce our engagement in public since I became famous and successful after the show of D&G. I was really happy. We got engaged in front of the media. I felt lucky. A few weeks after our engagement Vihaan snd I had our first fight. Vihaan was still in touch with sonali. But he never told me. I wad furious ehen I discovered it and the same day he suddenly he decided to go to Bhopal. He wanted to go there because his mom was ill. I wanted to go to but I had a fashion show to attend so I decided to go after the fashion show after 4 days. The same night I dreamed tha the plane crashed in which Vihaan was traveling. I was so scared I pleaded him not to go but he fought with. He said that nothing will happen to him. Once he reached Bhopal safely he called me. I was relieved that he reached there safely. Finally the day came for my flight. I wad going back to Bhopal after 3 years. I heard the last 3 days nothing from Vihaan. I thought maybe he us really busy with his mom. I finally reached Bhopal. I went to home. My parents were really happy when they saw me. They asked ne about Vihaan. I said that he's already here but because his mim is ill I couldn't get in touch with him. I decided to drive to his home. I saw the door open I wanted to go inside when I heard sime voices. I saw Sonia there with Vihaan. I heard Vihaan saying I lied to Rachna I said here that my mom is ill I even ignored here phone calls what do you want now sonia? I want your property vihaan I am pregnant I want the half of your property. Are you mad he said? I transfered all the property on Rachna's name and I can't give you anything. I was shocked I didn't know that vihaan transfered all his property on my name. I only came here because you threated me to kill Rachna because you know that I am scared for losing hete. Now I am not scared anymore. I am going to say here every thing. No sonia said if you told here anything I will te the media that you raped me. I didn't noticed that there wad a vase on the table when actually my hand hit the table snd the vade fell. Vihaan turned snd and saw me standing there. He was shocked. He saw me crying. I started the car and decided yo drive fast. Vihasn followed me because he was a racing-car driver he managed to stop his car in front of mine. I came crying out of the car. He hugged me and asked me to forgive him. I kissed him and said pkease forgive me baby I thought so wrong about you. I said lets go to Home now. I saw on my phone that my mom was calling me. I said I need to go baby. Mom is waiting for me. I wanted to start my car but it couldn't start. Again my phone rang he saw it and said go home baby with my car. I will call a mechanic and come home with your car. I didn't want to leave him alone but again I saw on my phone thay my mom wad calling me. Finally I said ok fine. I hugged and kissed hi. Love you baby he said. Love you too baby. I started the car and drove to home. My phone rang I saw a unknown number I decided to take the call. Maybe it's one if my friends from here I thought. I answered the call. A girl said ypu love your vihaan right? Go and safe him. Let me see how much you loves him. I was shocked who are yo? What do you want? I screamed. That's not important she said. Go and safe him. Het near the Hanuman temple. I rushed outside started the car and drove towards the temple. I saw vihaam laying in the ground eith blood. His shirt was torn and there wad blood on it. I rushed to him. Saw him breathing I screamed for help. He hekd my hand and said I love you baby. Please take care if yourself. No vihaan nothing will happen to you I said. Some people came to help us. Say you love me baby he said. I love you baby I kissed his forehead. I hugged him and said love you baby. Suddenly I couldn't feel his breath on my skin. I screamed vihaan when I realized that he left me forever alone.

Kabir wad crying when he finished reading the letter. He went to here room and hugged here.

So guys this was chapter 5 hope you guys like it. Enjoy reading. Leave your likes and comments

So.. finally the past is out...

one chapter full of vihaan

Vina romance was nicely written

love you baby dialogue

love you baby dialogue n my lucky charm their kiss scene]am blushing reading it again n again[/DIV][DIV]sry I am getting over excited posting it 3

I am really happy dear that you liked it .
I am so happy with your comments
Thanks a lot for your comments it means a lot for me

A huge apology but all the parts were amazing and so sweet of u that one whole update of vihaan all the sweet memories of vihaan and rachana were moving around my head😳

A huge apology but all the parts were amazing and so sweet of u that one whole update of vihaan all the sweet memories of vihaan and rachana were moving around my head😳

Thanks dear I am glad that you like it. I wanted to apologies for my grammar, spelling or writing mistakes. It is so annoying. 😡