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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: saravathi

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Kabir is so mad on Rachna,loved that

what a story line..its too different👏
</div><div>Rachna so rich,I guess she has a strong past
very much excited to know what happened in past
and a very big tons n tons of thanks for updating in English
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You are welcome dear. I am glad that you like my ff. I am trying to do something new and different. I will really appreciate it when I'll get more of such comments and love.
Edited by sandjanarai - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#22
another mind blowing update..

i am really curious to know about rachna's past...

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Posted: 11 years ago
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another mind blowing update.]i am really curious to know about rachna's past..
Thank you dear
It will reveal soon hihi
Glad that you like it
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Posted: 11 years ago
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oww missed two parts and this parts were great, dont know but i think vihaan is dead, hope she gets well soon,
waiting for rabis story
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Posted: 11 years ago
#25
when will be ur next update
pls pm me when there is one
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Posted: 11 years ago
#26
Chapter 4
Back with chapter 4 guys. Please forgive my mistakes my spelling and grammar faults. I am writing for the first time so I need to adjust to a lot of things. It will take time but I am really working toward it. Enjoy reading an leave your long comment and like. The one who wants pm can you please mention it in your comment?

Back to the hospital Kt was only thinking about Rachna. How come this girl is so rich? Who is she? Suddenly he felt a hsnd on his shoulder he turned and saw a girl. Hi Kt I am Mahi
Kt: Hi Mahi
M: How is mam?
Kt: She is still unconscious. They said that the next 24 hours wilk be critical for here
M: Omg I hope nothing happens with mam
Kt: is there someone who we should inform about this accident and here health?
M: Ni sir there is no one. Rachna mam lives alone
Kt: alone?
M: Yes sir I am working almost an year for mam and I never saw someone else there. I only know that here family lives in india
Kt: ohh oke

At 3am he saw the nurse running with the doctor to Rachna's room. He called the doctor but the doctor asked him to wait. The doctor comes frrim here room and informs Kt that Rachna is really critical. Here body isn't responding to the medicines. Kt wad shocked he thought I can't lose ms Garg. He went inside here room and sat near here bed looking at here beautiful face. Tears were flowing from his eyes. He held Rachna's and kissed it. He said I promise ms Garg nothing will happen to you. Suddenly he heard a soft voice saying Vihaan are you there.He immediately left here hand. Rachna opened here eyes and saw someone else there and not here Vihaan. She asked where I am? And who are you? What are you doing here? Kt called the doctor and he said lucky you mr Kt your friend is fine now. Kt was relieved hearing it. The doctor said yo Rachna. He was really worried ms Garg. So please don't scare him again by not responding on your medicines. If he didn't brought you here on time maybe you shouldn't be here today. After saying thatthe doctor left. Rachna was shocked when she heard the doctor saying that. She closed here eyes and flashback started in here mind. How she losy controle over the steer wheel and how she rammed to a tree. She opened here eyes and saw Kt looking at here. She smiled and said thank you friend. Btw (buy the way) I am Rachna Garg and you are Kabir Tripathi right? Yes ms Garg. I attend your fashion show today. Kabir laughed and said not today ms Garg but yesterday. Rachna smiled abd said yeah right. Thank you Kt for saving my life. Come on Rachna i am your friend right? So no sorry snd and thank you in our friendship. Rachna smiled snd said yed sir! Kt said please Rachna you should rest now. I am leaving now. I will be back in the morning. Please go to sleep. I will be there about 7o' clock. Ok Rachna said. After Kt left she closed here eyes and dozed off. A loud voice waked here up. She heard slme loude voices asking sime questions. Suddenly she heard Kt's voice saying just shut up and leave from here. She needs rest now. Please leave here alone. He came inside here room and Rachna asked the paparazzi right? Yes Kabir answered. I knew it she said. Being famous is not always pleasant. I know kabir said especially if you are a young top rich beautiful and successful model. Rachna said fo you know that i am a model? Yes know that you are a top model ms Garg. Ohh oke she said. How could I ask him that? Obviously he knows who I am. Rachna, Kt called here.where are your thoughts? I am talking to you and you are dreaming here. Btw were you dreaming about me he laughed. Ohh sorry she said and no absolutely not about you. What were you saying. Ohh yeah the doctor said that he will discharge you onl one condition and that is if you will take really good care after yourself. Hmm ok. I promise I will take good care after myself but please I want to go home. Ok fine he said I will drop you home and after that I will go to my hotel. Hotel?? She asked. Yes hotel ms Garg. I am staying in a hotel. Ohh kabir I wanted to say something. Yes Rachna please say. Kabir stay at my house. I mean you saved me so it is my duty to fo something for you too. But Rachna he said how can I stay at your house? I mean we hardly know each other. How can I be your guest? Come on Kabir she said we are friends right. And actually I would really like it if you stay at my hime. Please dhe asked with a sweet voice, which kabir couldn't refuse. Ok he said fine. Can you do me a favor kabir? I need a nurse to take care of me. Can you arrange one for me? Nurse? he asked. Come on Rachna if I am staying at your home how can I hire a nurse for you? I will take care of you. But Kt , no ms Garg he said. If i am staying at your homr I will take care of you. Ok ok sir she smiled. Then lets go.

It was almost lunch time when they arrived at Rachna's home. She opened bthe door and said home sweet home. Kabir smiled and said what a mini palace you have Rachna. Rachna laughed and said thank you. She showed him here house and finally here room. And your room is there opposite of mine room. She showed him the rokm and suddenly she felt a little bit dizzy and sat on the bed holding here head. Kabir saw here and said please ms Garg go take some rest. Yes Kt but I am really hungry first I will make some lunch? Are you mad ms Garg? You are not feeling well and you will make lunch? No absolutely not. I will arrange for the lych ms Garg don't worry. Go to your room if luch is ready I will calk you. No Rachna said we will order something. Actually Maria and Peter my cooks are on keave for 2 weeks. So I can't bother you. We will order something. No ms Garg I insist let me cook. Ok sure she asked? Yes Rachna go to your room now. Rachna slept for almost 2 hours. She woke up and went to fresh up. She entered the kitchen and saw Kabir laying the table. She smiled and said smells good mr Tripathi. Kabir looked at here and saw here. She was wearing a red sleeveless blouse with white shorts. Beautiful he murmured. He kept starring at here. She smiled and said Kabir can we eat now? I am really hungry. Yes ms Garg he said. Rachna and Kt were sitting at the dining table when Rachna switched on the tv. She saw headline of today. TOP MODEL MS RACHNA GARG MET AN ACCIDENT.And she saw the pictures on tv. Here face became pale. Kabir noticed this and changed the station. Look ms Garg he said my favorite movie KKHH (kuch kuch hota hai). Ohh I also like this movie nice nah? Our tastes are so similar he thought. After finishing their lunch they went to te living to watch the movie. Kabir saw Rachna crying while watching the movie. He suddenly wanted to give here his shoulder to cry, hold here hand and wipe here tears but he thought no I can't do it. He was looking at the wall when he saw the photos of here with the guy. He walked to the photos and said nice photos ms Garg btw who's the guy? He turned and saw Rachna leaving from there. Ohh God what did I asked here? It is here personal matter. I should apologize. He knocked on the door but she didn't respond. He opened the door and saw here sitting on the floor hugging a photo and crying. He called here. She looked at him and said leave me alone. Ms Garg he said leave me alone she said again. But ms Garg leave me she shouted. He was shocked when she shouted. He left here room saying sorry leaving a crying Rachna alone.

So guys how was it? Please ignore my mistakes. Hope you like it. Leave your comments and like. Thank you
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Posted: 11 years ago
#27
Kabir kissed her hand..wow
Rachna behaves more matured here..
Is Vihaan dead..omg😭
They are friends now, n I think Rachna will work for Kabir soon
last scene was so emotional
on the whole,I loved it..
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Posted: 11 years ago
#28

Originally posted by: saravathi


Kabir kissed her hand..wow

Rachna behaves more matured here..
Is Vihaan dead..omg😭
They are friends now, n I think Rachna will work for Kabir soon
last scene was so emotional
on the whole,I loved it..



Thank you dear I really appreciate your comment. I am always looking forward to your comments. More off rachna's past will be revealed in the next chapter. Like your guessing. Thank you.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#29
Wow very nyc update👏
So they friends now...
Wht happened 2 vihaan eagerly wanting 2know😛
Update soon...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#30
Nyc story
I want to give sum suggestion if u dont mind

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