New ff on Rabir(note on page 10) 15-07-2014 - Page 6

Originally posted by: sandjanarai

hi friends. sorry for the delay. Actually I tried to update yesterday but unfortunately my laptop crashed. I will try to update tomorrow. Today is a really busy day for me. I was thinking to stop this ff because I am not satisfied with the comments and likes. updating takes maximum 1-2 hours. I am trying to update in my free time but every time I look at the comments it seems like you guys don't like my story. tomorrow is the last update I think because if I don't get enough comments and likes I will stop this ff in the middle and I don't care what people will say or think. Thank you

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Hey nothing like that Dr there r many fans for ur ff n infact i was waiting for ur update...

Hi guys here is chapter 7. hope you gys like it. please comment and like because it means a lot to me. and it gives me the inspiration to write further. I don't think that I am asking to much. so please its a request comment.

Chapter 7
Kabir wanted to design smtg extra ordinary for rachna. He made 5 sketches but none of them were the perfect one. Finally at 2am he designed smtg out of the world for her. It was a pink backless dress with a deep v cut . It had little flowers on it. The flowers were silver and they were shining. After contacting his tailor who was 24 hours available he went to bed. It was 9 am. Rachna was already in the kitchen. She thought of making dome breakfast. She mafe some toast, coffee, juice. She was surprised that kabir wasn't up yet. Maybe he's really tired she thought. She decided to surprise him with breakfast in bed. She knocked on the door but he didn't responded. She opened the door and saw him sleeping she smiled when she saw that he was smiling in his sleep. Maybe he's dreaming smtg good. She went to his bed took his finger and put it in the cup with the steaming hot coffe. Kabir screamed and rachna laughed. But suddenly she tripped over the floor mat and cup with coffee fell on kabir's hand. Kabir screamed while rachna was shocked. He rushed to the bathroom and washed his hand. Rachna was feeling really guilty. His hand was red and rachna who was still shocked started to cry. I am so sorry kabir. I didn't know how I tripped over the mat. I am sorry. Please forgive me. No rachna he said it's not your fault. It's ok. Please stop crying and please apply some medicine for me. Rachna took the first aid kit and a ointment for him. Lets have breakfast he said i am hungry. Kabir tried to eat but because his hand was hurt he couldn't. Rachna saw it and felt guilty. She decided to feed him. Kabir was shy but inside he felt really happy. After breakfast they decided to see the tailor. Rachna who was ready decided to go to kabir's room. Maybe he needs smtg he needs some help. She saw him standing in front of the mirror fighting with the button of his shirt. She cleared her throat. Can I help you kabir? Kabir turned and saw rachna standing in a brown short dress with high heels and a bag. Her hair was tied in a ponytail. He smiled when he saw her. Out of the world he murmured. Can I help you kabir? Rachna asked. Ohh uhmm yes actually I can't button my shirt because of the bandage. Ohh I see she said. Let me help you. While saying that she walked to his bed and put her bag on it. She walked towards him and buttoned his shirt. Kabir felt smtg inside him when rachna's fingers touched his bare chest. He closed his eyes while rachna was blushing. Done she said. Thanks he replied. They went to the garage. Suddenly kabir said, rachna you should drive. I can't my hand hurts. Yeah sure dhe said. Kabir I think that you should see a doctor. It hurts nah? Yes rachna it hurts a little bit and no thank you I don't need a doctor. Are you sure? she asked. Yes my dear i am sure. Oke. She started her black BMW and drove to the tailor shop. She parked the car. They went inside the shop. The tailor wad already done with the dress. He asked her to try it. She saw the dress and was in love with it. Kabir was mesmerized by her beauty. Rachna who noticed this, blushed. Kabir how do I look? Amazing he said. They paid the tailor and drove away. Rachna her phone rang she answered. Yes mahi. Ohh god I totally forgot. Thanks for reminding me. Yes I will be there in 15 min. Bye. Kabir she said. I actually forgot I have I photo shoot today. I need to rush. Do you want to come with me? Or are you wanting to go somewhere else.? No rachna I want to go with you. Ok she said. They reached the venue. It was a photo shoot for Vogue. Hi rachba said. I am so sorry i am late. Not a problem dear a man said. Guys meet him this is my friend mr kabir tripathi and kabir. Kabir please make yourself comfortable i will see you after the shoot. Oke kabir said. Rachna quickly went to change. Her first costume was a yellow top with white shorts. Kabir kept staring at her the whole photo shoot. He saw her posing snd smiling in front of the camera and het ine million dollar smile was making him crazy. Rachna finished the shoot. She came to kabir. Lets go kabir i am finished. Yes he replied and btw you are mafe to stand in front of the camera. Rachna smiled snd said thank you. They were driving and rachna said i am really hungry lets have smtg. Yes he said i am hungry too. Lets have Burger King she said. Oke. They went to BK and ordered their burgers. They were waiting for there burgers when rachna said: kabir tell me smtg more about yourself. Hmm what do you want to know? He asked. Letd have a game she said. I will ask you questions and you will give the answers. Oke he said. Favorite color? Blue. Favorite car? Audi. Favorite food? Italian food. Hobbies? Designing. Any girlfriend? No. Are you in love with someone? Yes. He said but rachna didn't hear that because the waiter brought their burgers. They quietly finished their burgers. It the car rachna said to kabir. Tomorrow us a big day for you right? Yes he replied. I have a appointment with the beautician tomorrow. Hmm how much do you want to be beautifu?l rachna he asked? Haha am I beautiful? Yes he said really beautiful. Thanks she smiled snd said. They reached home. I need to take a shower rachna said. Me too kabir said. I will see you after 30 min she said. Ok he said. After taking her bath rschna went to kabir's room. She knocked in the door but no response. She opened the door and saw him busy with his laptop. Hi she said I thought of changing your bandage. Ohh yes he said. She changed his bandage? Busy? ? She asked. Not really he said. Lets have coffee together dhe suggested. Hmm ok he said. They went to the kitchen. Rachna made the coffee. Lets go and sit in the garden he said. Good idea she said. They went to the garden and sat on the bench. Ready for tomorrow he said. Yes she replied. Rachna I wanted to say you thank you. Thank you for being my show stopper. You're welcome she said. They talked till 12'o clock. Omg is so late she said. You need to rest he said because you're the show stopper. And you the designer she said. They laughed. And finally after biding each other good they went to bed. Kabir couldn't sleep the wlole night because he was thinking about rachna. And rachna she couldn't sleep to because she was thinking about kabir. Tge next morning she woke up and made breakfast and got ready. She had an appointment so she didn't want to be late and she wanted to do some shopping. She wanted to buy smtg for kabir. She quickly changed. She was wearing a blue short dress. Yesterday night she thought of wearing a green dress but she didn't know why she chose the bue one. She quickly wrote a note and placed it on the table. She started the car and drove off. Kabir woke up. He didn't hear any voice. He decided to take a shower. After taking a shower he went to the kitchen and calling for rachna but there was no response. Suddenly the front door opened and kabir saw and old woman coming inside. Yes he said. Sir i am miss Elena. Rachna madam called me yo bring the clothes for dry clean. Ohh I see he said. Look the clothes are here she said. She took the basket with clothes murmured a have a nice day and closed the door. Kabir saw a note laying on the table. He took it snd began to read.
.Good morning Kabir. I have an appointment with the beautician and after that I will do some sh. See you in the evening. p.s miss me x rachna
Kabir smiled after reading the note. Rachna came home. Hi she said. Hi kabir replied. You look tired he said. Yes I am she said. I want to take a bath and sleep. I'm hungry. Did you had your lunch? She asked. No nit yet I was waiting for you. Lets have lunch together he replied. Oke so it means that you made lunch? She asked. Yes I made lunch. Ohh how sweet and what did you do in my absence? Hmm nothing much he said. I just did some pending work. Lets have lunch aftee that you can rest. Yeah she said. They went to the kitchen. Today I made typical spicy indian food. Spicy indian?she asked. Yes he said don't you like Indian food? No I love indian food she said but actually I never est spicy food before doing a show. Spicy food gives me tummy ache. Ohh i am so sorry he said I didn't know it. Not a problem she said i will have a paratha. Yummy she said while taking a bit. You know kabir the girl whone you will get married to will be really lucky. You know why? Because you're a great cook, a great designer, and a gem of a person. Thank you he said and the guy whom you will get married to will be really lucky because you are beautiful, succesful , funny and rich. And the most important thing you are a great human being. Thank you she said. Enough now mr tripathi. I am really tired I want to take some rest otherwise i will be the worst show stopper ever. You are not the worst but the best show stopper. Hmm i am going to bed. See you. Yes dear he said. It was 4'o clock when rachna woke up. She slept well for 2 hours. She opened her door and saw kabir standing in front of the door. Hi he said I thought of waking you up. Get ready we have to leav. Yes she said I will be down in 20 min but first I need put some things in the car. My shoes; dress, make-up kit, ,jewellry etc. Let me put it for you he said. I need to put mine stuff too. Oke she said. Luckily I packed my bag already. Dhe hand him a bag over. You also get ready. See you in 20min. Yes he said. After 20 min she came down. Kabir didn't notice her. But suddenly he smelled her perfume. He turned and saw rachna standing in front of him in a black little dress. She didn't had any make-up on het face but she was looking really beautiful. I am readt she said. They sat in her Audi while kabir drived. They reached venue. Since the show was held in the ballroom of a hotel, rachna had her own room. They were welcomed by Peter. He saw rachna and kissed her cheeks. Hi gorgeous. Ready to set the stage on fire? Yes she said. They went backstage where all the models where getting ready. Hi rachna mam, hi kt sir they greeted them. Hi they replied. Mahi was waiting for rachna. Mam are you ready? Yes she said. All the best girls kabir said. The show started. Rachna came first walking on the ramp wearing the outstanding dress by kabir. The song Marjaawa of the fikm Fashion was playing in the background. She turned and they saw the creation from the back side. Suddenly kabir heard someone saying wauww look at the beaty her back. What if I could to her back and kiss her back. How wikk she react. Kabir turned and gave the boys an angry look. You are her to watch the show and nit the bavk if my model. The boy said what sir. Models are public property. They show their body and we watch and enjoy it. Sometimes we even imagine things. Kabir's felt that his blood was boiling. Luckily they called him on stage. He came on stage with rachna . Rachna kissed him on his cheeks. He knew it was smtg normal for her because it was so that the show stopper walks with the designer and hugg and kiss him/her out of appreciation. But he felt the kiss deep inside. The show was a succes. Rachna went to her room to change for the after party. She heard a knock on the door. Come in she said. It was kabir. Hi I came to check if you're ready. Ohh sorry I will be ready in 30 min. Ok I will wait for you outside your rokmu. Oke she said. It was already 25 min and rachna did csme out of the room . Kabir was ge impatient. How ling will she take? Hekknocked on the door but no response. He opened the door snd saw rachna standing near her bed fighting with her dress. She couldn't tie the strings of the dress on ger back. Need any help? He asked. No actually yes. Can you please send mahi in. I can't tie the strings of my dress. Actually I forgot to tell you that mahi went home. Her mom is ill. She asked me to inform yiu because she couldn't find you anywhere. Ohh oke. No problem. Rachna said. I will tie it for you kabir said. Are you sure? She asked. Yes sure he said. He walked towords her. He stood behind her and tied the strings. Rachna felt an electric shock ehen Kabir's hsnd touched her bare back. She closed her eyes. Done he said. She thanked him and turned. When she turned his mouth fell open. Her dress was super sexy. It was a white long sleeveless dress. Inthe back there were only strings and infront her perfect figure and the sexieness of the dress was making her look very hot. The dress covered her breast, after that there was an open place at the hips and a long slit from her left knee till the bottom. The dress had small little palette on it. The diamond set wad msking all complete. Her make-up was perfect and her lips were red. Her hair was pin upand there were some loose hair lock near her ears. She was wearing a dilver coloredhigh heel. His breath stucked. He couldn't takeshis eyes of her. Out of the world he said. Rachna blushed. Shall we she asked. Yes he said. Are you going I this dress? Yes she said. It's good nah? Hmm he said. Ohh god what is this girl doing with me he thought. Lets go. She put her arm in his srm and they walked yo the lift.


Sooo guys this wad chapter 7 hope you like it. Sorry for the delay and yes I want lo g comments because it us a long update. Please comment. Enjoy reading. Please ignore my mistakes. Pm will nr send later. For now I'm tired writing.

reading will comment later and love the way rachana was feeding kabir bcuz of his burnt hand😳

finally got the one which I was waiting for

Beautiful start and already very interesting

Originally posted by: saravathi

finally got the one which I was waiting for

Thank u so much for continuing

N the best thing in ur ff is its full of Rabir,

wondering how Rachna will fall for Kabir

but I think lot of misunderstanding might cum bcoz of Rachna's grace..ok I am imagining too much,

last not the least thank god Rachna poured coffee, how cute it was when Rachna fed him n put his button..

wish sslk is full of Rabir like in ur ff

Thank you dear. Actually I am not satisfied with the comments. Only 3 or 4 people comment. This is not done. I am really happy that you liked it. Yes indeed I hope that sslk was full of rabir only...