New ff on Rabir(note on page 10) 15-07-2014 - Page 2

Sorry am late...

heyy dear,

this ff looks really good, you should definitly continue

Hey guys I am back with an other update. Hope you will like it. This time the comments snd views needs to be better. Enjoy reading.

Chapter 3
Rachna thought if doing some shopping. After hours of searching she finally bought a purple one shoulder dress, designed by Guess, high heels of Prada and jewelry of Tiffany
She drived back home when she thought if having some lunch. She stopped at a pizza parlor bought some pizza and went home. In the evening she was getting ready when here phone rang. It was here mom from Banaras so she decided to answer the call.
R; hi mummy kaise hai aap?
S, hi beta mai theek hoo tum kaise ho?
R; thiek hoo ma, ghat par sabh kaise hain?
S; sabh thiek hai beta, magar tumhare papa ke tabiyet kuch thiek nahi rehti hai
R; kya huwa papa ko?
S; pata nahi kal reports ayenge to pata chalega. Lekin beta tumhare papa tumhe bohut yaad karte hai. Tum 1 hafte ke liyea papa se aker milena.
R; mummy mudjhe yaha bohut kaam hai iss month but next month I'll try.you known nah mummy mudjhe Banaras wapas nahi aana hai
S; haan beta I know lekin kap tak tum aise he apne atiet se bhagogi. Be brave and face it.
R; thiek yai mummy mai manager se baath kar ke book karleti hoon
S; haan beta
R; ok mummy mujhe ek fashion show attend karna hai is liye mai phone raki hoon.apne aur baki sabh ka khayal rakhna
S; thiek hai beta enjoy. Tum bhi apna khayal rakhna
R; bye mummy
S; bye beta

Hotel
Meanwhile Kt waso so excited for his fashion show and nervous because working with sonali is really a headache. Yeh ladki ki nakhre mudjhe bohut irritate karti hain. He was getting ready when he thought about the girl on the cover ms Rachna Garg. Is she really pretty? I hope that I will see here tonight .she is so simpel and that makes here really beautiful.

The show was about to start when Kt noticed a girl standing in the corner. He couldn't see here face because she was talking to someone. He only could see here purple dress and here long black hair. The event manager announced that the show would start. The gil turned around and he saw that it was ms Garg. Omg it is real ms Garg she is looking so beautiful but why suddenly here face turned so red? He turned and saw that she was looking at sonal. The show started everybody appreciated his creations. There was an after party he was searching for Ms Garg when he heard some noices from the green room. He rushed there and saw ms Garg slapping ms sonali. He was shocked he couldn't move. Someone like ms Garg is slapping ms sonali but why. Suddenly he heard the conversation between ms Garg and Ms Sonali.
R; what happend bitch yeh 2 thapae kafi nahi the?
S; why did you slapped me?
R; don't scream. First tumhari wadje se maine apna Vihaan khoya; after that tumne mera sabh kuch harpne ke koshish ki. Woh sabh kuch djo mera vihaan mere naam pe kiya aur ap yeh Armani ka contract djo vihaan ne mere liye arranged kiya tha woh tumhne bhi tjhien kiya mudjhse sonali. Why? Why do you hate me so much?
S; mai kyu tumse nafrat na karoo? Vihaan ne mudjhe thukra kar tumhe choona. I wad his first girlfriend then why did he transferd every damm thing of his on your name?
R; because I was his fiancee
S; aur woh contract maine bribe karke apne naam pe kiya. Because I wanted to show you that I am the best.
R; yeh mudjhe fashion show mai akar pata chala. Mr Mac told me how you bribed his assistant and the wrote your name.i never expected this from you sonal I ki tum itni giri huei harkat karogi? Let me clear one thing sonali every thing that vihaan left for me is mine. His villa, his cars, his property everything is mine.
S; I will destroy you
R; tum mudjhe kya barbaat karogi sonali. You are already destroyed. And yeah I recorded everything you said. Agar tumhne apne cleverness dekhane ki khoshis ki mai yeh proof police ko dedongi. And you know ki bribe deni ki zaza kya hoti hai nah?
Kabir was totally shocked when he saw Rachna so furious. Who the hell is this Vihaan? And is ms Garg arranged? He left from there. He wanted to talk yo Rachna but how? She doesn't know me. He saw Rachna outside going to here car. He wanted to stop here but before he could di or say something he saw here racing away with here red lamborgini. Here driving speed made him speechless. He rushed to his car which he had rented from a car rental an audi and followed here. He lost here of his sight. He saw a crowd and was shocked. One of the men stopped him and said that there a accident happend and if he could help them. Kt agreed and was walking towards the accident spot when he saw a red car. He rushed there and saw Rachna lying on the ground with blood.

So guys here was part 3a I decided to split this chapter because I need to rudh now. I have a lot of work to do. I will update the second part later. Forgive my mistakes and please enjoy reading. Leave your huge comments and likes. Pm's will be send later.

very nice update
so vihan is rachna's past..
and kabeer is in love with rachna..

can't wait for the next update

wow Vihaan is here,now I would never miss ur updates

Guys I decided to update chapter 3b. Enjoy reading. Actually my hindi is not so good but I'm still trying to write some things in hindi. If I get more like and comments I would really appreciate it.

It was almost 2 hours since Kt came to the hospital with Rachna and still ahw was in the operation theater. He searched hwee bag ans found some papers, here driving licenses, keys and here cellphone. He checked here phone and saw last call from Mahi. He called and Mahi answered.
M; hi mam all fine? How wad your fashion show?
K; hi is this Mahi
M; yes and who is this? Where is Rachna mam?
K; hi I am Kt actually ms Garg met an accident
M; what accident? How? When? Where is she? Is she fine?
K; I am with here at the hospital. Can you come here?
M; actually sir my sister's kids are with me now at my house. And there is alsi a baby. I can't come right now because my sister is not home but I promise as soon as she returns home. I will come directly. I am so sorry.
K; ok not a problem. Can you please tell me where she lives? I need to bring some clothes for here. And do you have any idea where her house key is?
M; yes sure sir the keys are always in mam's handbah
K; ohh oke I guess I have found it
M; ok sir. Thanks for being there for my Rachna mam
K; ok mahi. Bye
M; bye sir

Kt entered the huge villa of Rachna. He wad shocked when he saw here house. It was like a mini palace. Here house inside was high class designed. He saw in the hall a big sofa and antique furnitures. On the wall he saw photos of hereand a guy. He entered here room and saw near the bed on the walla painting of here with the same guy. They were getting engaged and she was smiling. The same smile he saw on the cover of the magazine. He walked to here walk in closet and he was shocked again when he saw the number of clothes she has. He took some clothes for here., closed the door and was walking down when he saw a door open. He decided to close the door but he stopped. He saw here garagewith so many cars. From the latest sports car to the suv. All of them were expensive cars like lamborgini, bmw, audi, bugatti etc. He thought how rich this girl is? Who is she exactly? How come she is so young and rich? Who is the guy on the photos? And were is he?

He closed the door and thought about Rachna.
Flashback
Ms Garg, ms Garg please open your eyes.
Ms Garg can you hear me? Kabeer shouted
Omg ms Garg please open your eyes for my sake I nees to talk to you. I wanna know you. I like you ms Garg. Suddenly Rachna opened here eyes a little bit and said vihaan please save me. I love you vihaan don't leave me. Vihaan come back soon l. Please. After that she closed here eyes. Kabeer raced to the hospital. He wanted to kill the doctor when hw said that he need to bring the police first. The shouted so loud that the doctor was shocked and immediately put here on the stretcher. Rachna was holding his hand ans said stay with me vihaan.
Flashback ends
He closed here house drived to the hospital. The doctor informed him that the next 24 are critical for here. It is possible that she will be in coma. He was shocked he felt tears in his eyes.
So this was chapter 3b hope you guys like it. Leave your likes ans comments. Please ignore my mistakes.
P.S. for Saravathi: dear I will try to update only in English. Sorry dear I didn't know that you don't understand Hindi This one is in English. Hope you enjoy it.
Lots of love Sandjana

well i will surely read n cmmnt but an advise whenever u update edit topic heading as wt chapter no update is on what page no. it will be easier to knw that a new chap is updated

Originally posted by: AnjaliPunia

well i will surely read n cmmnt but an advise whenever u update edit topic heading as wt chapter no update is on what page no. it will be easier to knw that a new chap is updated

Thanks for the advise dear. I will work through it

Originally posted by: saravathi

wow Vihaan is here,now I would never miss ur updates

n Kabir furious to see,to talk Rachna was brilliant,I enjoyed it thoroughly 👏 In next chap more Rabir scens waiting I guess.. I really wish I would have known hindi😭

I am sorry dear I didn't know that you don't understand hindi.
I will try to write only in English

👏 Kabir is so mad on Rachna,loved that