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Posted: 13 years ago
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after the phera's both the newly wed couples went towards the photos of the deceased ones ; sadhna and ranvir to seek their blessings.ragini,alekh and all the family were in tears.sakshi says aapka yeh parivar meri amanat ban keh rahega,aapki jagha to nahi le sakti par haan aapki beti ko bilkul aapki tarah bana sakoon yeh ashirward dijiye.alekh says 7 saal beet chuke hain sadhna lekin aaj bhi mein tumhe buhat miss karta hoon,tum mujhe aise akele chordh keh kyun chali gayi,mujhe aur khushi ko tumhari buhat zaroorat hai,plzz wapis aajao,nahi jiya jata tumhare bagair.saying this alekh burst into tears.then anmol talks with ranvir's photo and says buhat saal phele meine aapse aik wada kiya tha ranvir aur woh wada ab mera kartawaya ban chuka hai,mein tamana aur ragini ko kudh se ziyada pyar karta hoon thank u ranvir.but before ragini could say anything ,she felt sadhana and ranveer's presence.every one turned back and saw sadhna and ranveer souls standing there smiling.

babul keh angana thi naazon pali
aaj woh beti duje piya ghar chali
bhagawan ko bhi hai wahi bhaye
bidaai,bidaai kaise karen ge hum
haiii kaise sayeenge hum
meri har aaahhh pe tardpi hai tu hi
mere liye jiya tune har pal
ponch na sakain mein tu
kabhi tere ansoon
ashaq mere piya tune har dum
aaj kyun nighayeen yhun churain,churain
judaii,judaai kaise sahoon gi mein
tere bin akele kaise rahungi mein
haiii kaise rahungi main

sadhna and ranvir came towards alekh and ragini respectively .sadhna says par mujhe khushi hai aalekhji keh aapne 7 saal baad hi sahi magar kisi ko apna jeevan saathi to mana.to kya hua keh mein wapis nahi asakti,lekin haan mein uppar se aap sab ko dekh rahi thi aur khush horahi thi keh hamarai khushi ko aap jaise papa mile aur jiji jaise maasi maa.unho ne hamari khushi ko aik maa ki kami kabhi mehsoos nahi hone di.alekh says sadhna tum mujhe chordh keh kyun chali gayi,pata hai mein kitna akela pardh gaya tha tumhare bagair,buhat miss karta tha tumhe.sadhna says mujhse wada kijiye aalekh jii keh aap sakshi ka poora khayal rakhenge aur mujhe yaad karke kabhi nahi roenge.alekh promises to sadhana.ranvir says to ragini,ragini janti ho aaj mein buhat khush hoon kyunke tumne anmol ko apne dil se apna jeewan saathi swikhar kiya hai.tum dono keh milan se mein buhat khush hoon,aur tumne aur anmol ne milke tamanna ka buhat achi tarah se khayal rakh hai aur usse mere naa hone ka ehsaas bilkul bhi nahi dilya,thank u anmol.saying this both sadhna and ranveer moves towards their family and hugged them.sadhana says mamaji mujhe khushi hai keh aapne meri beti ko wohi sanskar diye hai joh aapne mujhe diye mamaji is crying seeing sadhana soul,mamijii bale hi aap mujhe pyar na de payen magar meri khushi ko aap ne buhat pyar diya hai,wohi meri liye buhat hai.vasu and everyone was in tears seeing sadhna and ranveer's souls.both sadhna and ranveer says humhe jaane dijiye,hamara waqt aagaya hai and both disappered and leaves to heaven
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Posted: 13 years ago
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19 views and no reply 😭
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Posted: 13 years ago
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@zoha...i just read it ..so well written OS..👏
its a mixed feelings..sad and happy moments..
alekh..ragini moving on in life with their new lifepartners ..
the souls of ranvir-sadnah giving them their blessings..emotional scene you have penned down..
i could visualise these scenes esp the alekh-sadnah..ragini-anmol-ranvir scene..how ranvir is relieved that anmol-ragini has taken good care of tammana and now he can go peacefuly to heaven..very emotional part..
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Posted: 13 years ago
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WOW...what a surprizzz... Sadhana and ranvir happy for alehk and ragini... I like it.. Well written..
Hope we can see more OS from u..
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Awesome OS , friend.👏

Loved the whole part,👏especially these moments stole my heart,❤️

.ranvir says to ragini,ragini janti ho aaj mein buhat khush hoon kyunke tumne anmol ko apne dil se apna jeewan saathi swikhar kiya hai.tum dono keh milan se mein buhat khush hoon,aur tumne aur anmol ne milke tamanna ka buhat achi tarah se khayal rakh hai aur usse mere naa hone ka ehsaas bilkul bhi nahi dilya,thank u anmol.

Please do write more.👏
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Very beautiful OS, Indeed for Ragini and Alkeh the turn of events which took place seven years back and then moving on and seeing greener pastures takes its time, and with people in their lives as Anmol and Saakshi

Anmol kept the promise he gave to Ranvir and he was a beautiful Dad for Tammy every man would wish the best for his child and the promise Anmol kept was beyond words to describe, Ranvir and Sadhana will always be a part of their lives and wishing them a future of happiness and tranquility is something they all would wish to see.

Quite emotional and well written , Please do write more again 👏👏👏

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