Till eternity climax updated on 23 may AnginiFF - Page 6

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hey yaar ow well you write. I just loved this part. YOu are simply awesomeee. Very nice. Plz continue fast.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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How beautifullly you write yaar., I love angini so much and it is really cool part. Plz continue fasttt.
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Posted: 14 years ago
#53
loved it dear very nice and interesting keep up the good work
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Posted: 14 years ago
#54
So nice the part seems very interesting !!

Ragini is missing anmol I hope with sweta 's help she will see him soon

Please continue soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Till eternity Part 9

Sweta becomes close to Maya's family.They all like her very much.
Jeev rings up Savitri:How is Sweta?Is she troubling you?If so,i will try to change her place.
S:No need.She is not at all troubling us.We were simply getting tense.SHe is really nice.
Jeev smiles.

Maya comes back after meeting Sweta.
Jeev:How many lies did you tell Sweta like you told Priya?
M:I did'nt lue at all.Instead of that i told her honestly that because of financial problems i'm not able to wear what i want to.She is willing to help me.She will take me for shpping.Hopefully will be able to buy grand clothes.
Jeev is irritated:Are you facing poverty?Are you starving?
M:Even if we are starving,if we wear nice costumes nobody will know that we have financial problems ans thus we can save our self reputation.
J:Nonsense!By the way why are you seeking Sweta's help to buy clothes?I will buy nice dresses for you.
M:For that you know only to select old fashioned dresses.If you buy the costliest modern clothes for me,i will send Sweta to a hostel.
J:So you made Sweta stay in your house for your benefit?But Sweta is prasing you without knowing her true colour.
M:I dream of a luxurious life.I want to show my lifestyle to Priya.She insulted me that much.Through Sweta we will have a good life Jeev.
Jeev is out of mood.

Jeev rings up Sweta.
J:Hi Sweta..I'm Jeev.
S:Hi Jeev.What a pleasant surprise!
J:Can you please come to the Sheeba icecream parlour?I want to talk to you something.
S:What is the matter Jeev?
J:I will tell that directly.
S:Ok,i will come.
J:Don't tell anyone that you are coming to meet me.
S:Ok.
She thinks:Strange!

Sweta and Jeev meet at the icecream parlour.
J:Which icecream do you want?I will pay the bill.
S:What about your icecream?
J:I don't want icecream.
S:Even i'm not in a mood to have icecream.Tell me what do you want to talk to me?
J:My wife Maya...she is a peculiar character.Veey different.
S:Yes,she is very different.She has a unique personality.Very helpful.
J:You are wrong.She is not helping you.She is just using you.She loves rich people.She uses them for her benefit.If they are not useful,she will irritate them.She is like..trying to show off someone..very stubborn and adamant.Sometimes when i see her behaviour i feel that she is mad.Beauty parlour..shopping..please don't encourage her to go for all these things.I'm tensed about my wife's life style.
S:I used to respect you.But after hearing what you said about your wife..chee..
J:So you don't believe me.Ok..but one day you will realize everything and you will struggle hard to get out of the trap.
S:Even if that happens nothing will happen to me.I know how to handle such situation.
J:If so,it's good.
S:Ok bye..
She goes.
Priya who was there with her friends watches it with a naughty smile.She giggles.


Her friends:Why are you simply laughing?
P:I'm thinking about the comic scenes which are going to take place in some people's life and having fun.

Priya comes back very late.
Ramesh:Where were you?
P:Accidently i met some old friends and were hanging out.
Ram:That's fine.But it's too late.I mean it's better not to riam about at night.
P:Since we wnt out i understood your Ragini bhabhi's family's real colour.
Ram:What?
P:I think that Maya..she avoids Jeev and now she is after some rich person for money with her new lies.
Ram:Don't talk nonsense.Maya tries to show off.But she will never stoop so slow.
P:You don't know Ramesh..may be because Jeev is upset with his wife he has found a girl who is prettier and modern than Maya.She is a high class girl.
Ram:What?
P:I saw Jeev romancing a girl in the ice cream parlour.
Ram:Priya!
P:If you can't believe you enquire.You will know the truth.I understood that the whole family is bad.Who knows how Ragini bhabhi is?Anmol bhaiyya must have committed suicide knowing his wife's true colour.
Ramesh loses his control and slaps her.Her eyes become red.
P:I know how to slap you back.But i'm not doing that.If my father comes to know this he will...
Her dad was watching it.
Her dad Maanigir:I will not do anything.Because you said something which he can't tolerate.Anybody will lose control in this situation.
P:Ramesh...you managed to keep my father on your side.I will show you who i am.
She goes to her room.
Ramesh is frustrated.He stands close to the wall.
M:Ramesh!
He looks at Maanigir.

Ram:Dad..i'm sorry.
M:Don't be upset.You have not done anything wrong.I know my daughter very well.She will change.But only you can change him.
He goes away.Ramesh is confused.

Ragini goes through her wedding album and sheds tears.She remembers her first wedding anniversary.
Anmol brings flower garlands.
R:Garlands?
A:I feel today is our wedding day.Let us get married again.
R:Marrying again?
A:Why not?
She smiles.
She takes the garland and puts it around his neck.He also puts the garland around her neck.
They hear Leela calling 'Ragini'.
A:Oh,why mom is calling you now.Could'nt enjoy to the fullest.
They both laugh.Ragini steps forward to go to meet Leela.Her leg slips and she is about to fall down.
Anmol catches her.
R:I got scared.
A:When i'm with you,no need of getting scared.Nothing will happen to you.I will always save you.
They both become emotional.They both look into each other's eyes deeply forgetting themselves.

Maya joins the women's club with Sweta.
Maya wears a stylish red saree and accessories to to the club.She poses like a model and talks to herself:I look cool now.


Priya rings up Maya.
M:Why did you call me?May be because you must have known that i'm enjoying a lot now.
Priya laughs:While enjoying you may not have known that you lost the gem of your life..Jeev.
M:What are you saying?
P:I saw Jeev with a stylish girl in the icecream parlour.I enquired about her and came to know that she is a fashion designer student..her name is Sweta.
Maya is shocked:No,you are lying.
Priya laughs:Relax.And the surprise is that she stays in your house.Yiu made your husband's girl friend stay in your house?First time i'm seeing a wife like you.Isit because you value your husband's happiness more?Your husband's happiness is Sweta.Right?
M:Stop it.
Priya laughs.
Maya has gone crazy.She breaks the show pieces.
Jeev and Sati come.
S:My God!What happened to Maya?
J:What are you doing?
M:You were against me making Sweta stay in my house.You were acting.Right?You are Sweta...and having fun at the ice cream parlour?
Jeev is shocked.

He thinks:How did she know that i met Sweta at the icecream parlour?
M:Priyaji told me everything.
S:You are misunderstanding Jeev.Priya is creating a rift between you both.
M:Let Jeev say that he did'nt go to the ice cream parlour with Sweta.
J:What Priya said is true.I only asked Sweta to come to the ice cream parlour.
Sati is shocked.
Maya bursts into tears.She pulls the collar of his shirt:You cheat!
Edited by jasminerahul - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#56
Awesome update Jasmine👏👏👏,You are too good in writing👏👍🏼.My most favourite part is ,😳❤️👏

Ragini goes through her wedding album and sheds tears.She remembers her first wedding anniversary.
Anmol brings flower garlands.
R:Garlands?
A:I feel today is our wedding day.Let us get married again.
R:Marrying again?
A:Why not?
She smiles.
She takes the garland and puts it around his neck.He also puts the garland around her neck.
They hear Leela calling 'Ragini'.
A:Oh,why mom is calling you now.Could'nt enjoy to the fullest.
They both laugh.Ragini steps forward to go to meet Leela.Her leg slips and she is about to fall down.
Anmol catches her.
R:I got scared.
A:When i'm with you,no need of getting scared.Nothing will happen to you.I will always save you.
They both become emotional.They both look into each other's eyes deeply forgetting themselves.

Continue soon 😃,it's Fantastic.👏👍🏼⭐️
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Posted: 14 years ago
#57
Very nice part !!👍🏼

I liked teh way Ramaesh slapped Priya .. Thsi women needs to get hold of her life rather than getting her nose into everyone else business...😆

Sweta seems to be since and sometimes a little worried also abt things around her..

Ragini and Anmol scene was really nice.. She was about to fall and Anmol holds her.. All these flashbacks seem to have a lot of affect on her.. I hope Anmol 's also thinking so much about her in the situation he is ...

Very well written .. please continue soon!!!👏
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Posted: 14 years ago
#58
@jasmine..nice part..
at last ramesh reacted to his wife bitter words and slapped her ..why not she was talking so bad about ragini..
good one and his father in law too agrees to his act as he feels he is the one to change his daughter's attitude.
priya already creating rift between maya-jeev relating about jeev-sweta..
jealousy and misunderstanding..
the most lovely part anmol-ragini scene.. can visualise it..how he holds her and prevent her from falling..
continue soon as its becoming interesting..
keep it up..👏
Edited by savee_k - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#59
Wow jasmine you are the besttt. Loved it galll
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Posted: 14 years ago
#60
well written yaar... nice.part... keep going...

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