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Posted: 14 years ago
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Till eternity Part 12

Priya is shocked and shattered as her parents wrote their property in Ramesh's name and left to Bangalore.
One day Ramesh comes back late.
P:Where were you?
Ram:I went to my house to ask those people to leave the house.But its difficult for them to leave the house now.
P:You did'nt want that house to be vacant.But now why are you asking them to leave?
Ram:Because i thought of shifting to my house.
P:What?Are you mad?After snatching my property from me you are trying to dominate over me?Are you not ashamed?
Ram:No.The day after tomorrow we are shifting to a small house.I'm giving this house for rent.
Priya is shocked:No,i won't come.
Ram:Ok,but where will you go when the new people come?
P:You cheat!
Ram:I threw my house and job for you.Since the office is the result of your father's sweat,i'm not throwing that job.Like i promised your dad,i will take care of his business.

Since there is no other option Priya shifts to the new house with Ramesh.But to the shock,it's near to Maya and Jeev's house.
P:Inorder to put me down only you brought me to a small house ..that also near to Maya's house.
Ram:Priya...only the life inside the house determines the size of the house.Anyways..let us visit them.They don't know that we are their new neighbours.
P:No,i'm not coming.That Maya will try to make fun of me.
Ram:Ok,then i will go alone.

When Ramesh goes there,they get surprised to know that he and Priya are their new neighbours.
Maya can't believe that Priya has come to stay in that small house.
M:Why did'nt you bring Priyaji?
Ramesh keeps silent.
M:She may not be interested.Right?
J:Maya..don't talk unnecessarily.
M:I'm not talking unnecessarily.Because of her only Ragini didi left that house.She was so upset about leaving that house.
Maya's words strike Ramesh.

After reaching home Ramesh goes near Priya immediately.
Ram:If i ask you something you should tell me the truth.Ragini bhabhi left our house by herself or you made her leave the house?
Priya is petrified for a moment.
P:That liar Maya must have lied to you.
Ramesh raises his voice:Stop lying and tell me the truth.Don't try to make me a fool again.I can understand things.
P:Ok then hear.Yes,i only complelled her indirectly to leave the house to avoid the rumours about your relationship with her.
Ramesh slaps her.
Ram:You feared whether you will lose me if bhabhi is with us.Ragini bhabhi is like my mother.You tore her heart.God will punish you.
P:I don't care if God punishes me.She was a bit too free with you.I did'nt like it.So i punished her.For that only i spread the false news.
Ram:False news?What is that?
P:No letter about Anmol bhaiyya's death had come.I simply lied.
Ramesh becomes really angry.
Ram:So Anmol bhaiyya is alive?
P:I don't know.Since there is no news about him,i just guessed that he is no more.
Ram:You are very cruel.How did you born for a nice couple?
Priya loses her control and bursts into tears.
Ram:Poor bhabhi.We don't know if Anmol bhaiyya is alive or not.But if he comes back bhabhi will be so happy.

Ramesh keeps avoiding Priya.That hurts her a lot.

Ramesh dresses up.
P:Are you going anywhere?
Ram:Yes,to visit Ragini bhabhi.
P:Can i come with you.I want to see Ragini bhabhi.
Ram:Why?You tortured her enough.Still you are not satisfied?
Priya's eyes are full of tears.
P:Ramesh..please..i understand my mistakes now.
Ram:Don't do any drama again.I don't want such scenes to be enacted here.
Priya cries.
Ram:Ok.Come with me.
She tries to smile with tears in her eyes.

Ramesh and Priya enter Ragini's compound.
Ragini can't believe her eyes.
The eyes of Ramesh and Ragini are wet.
R:Ramesh..Priya..
Ram:Bhabhi..can we come inside?
R:Why are you asking like this?
Ram:We are strangers for you now no.You are not even visiting us.
Ragini does'nt know what to say.
Priya's eyes also become wet.
P:Not because bhabhi considers us as strangers,but she considers us her dear ones...she wants us to be happy.That's why she did'nt visit us.
Ragini finds calmness in Priya.
Ram:But Bhabhi..if you thought i will be happy and peaceful in your absense,you were wrong.
R:Come inside.My parents and Bal have gone out.
They come inside.
Sweta comes.Though Priya recognises her,RAmesh does'nt recognise her.
R:This is Sweta.She is studying for fashion designing.She is very close to us now.
S:Hi..
Ram:Hi..i'm..
S:I can guess.Ramesh and Priya.Right?Ragini didi always tell about you both.
They smile.
Ragini goes to the kitchen to make tea for them.Sweta comes to the kitchen to help her.
S:Didi..i heard that Priya has caused a lot of problems in your life.Then how are you able to be so sweet to her?
R:Priya has never troubled you.What you have heard are just rumours.
Priya overhears it with tears.She thinks:I tore the heart of such a nice lady.Should i tell her that there came o letter about Anmol bhaiyya's death.But if he is not alive,again she will be shattered.It's better not to tell the truth.

Sweta tells the truth about Anmol to everyone else other than Ragini.All are crying because of happiness.
Savitri:i don't know how to be thankful to you and your family.
S:No need of thanks.It's our pleasure.We will surprise Ragini didi by showing Anmol on her birthday.We shall celebrate her birthday in our house.
Maya tells Jeev:Jeev..we should gift a sindoor dabba to Ragini didi on her birthday.
He smiles.

Sweta tells celebrating Ragini's birthday in her house.
R:Celebration?No need.I'm not uncomfortable with that.
S:No excuse.On your birthday we all will go to my house.That's final.
Without Ragini could say anything Sweta goes.
Ragini thinks about her last birthday..
Anmol whispers to her 'Happy birthday' while she is sleeping.
She opens her eyes with a smile.
R:I forgot that today is my birthday.
A:You always think about other's happiness and celebrate other's birthday.So you forgot your birthday.
He gives a maroonish red saree.
A:My birthday gift for you.
R:Wow!I love maroonish red sarees.Thank you Anmolji.I'm lucky to have the best husband with me.
He smiles:You are the best wife too.
They both smile.
She wears the maroonish red saree and stands before Anmol.He is bowled over by her looks.He can't take his eyes off her.

Ragini becomes shy.
A:You look like a Goddess Ragini.
She blushes.

Anmol takes her to a beautiful hotel.Near the pool Anmol's friends welcome them.
They sing the birthday song:Happy birthday Ragini..
She whispers to Anmol:What was the need of throwing a party here?
A:Because i want my wife's birthday to be special.
She smiles.
They give her a bouquet.
R:Thankyou.
Friends:You both are a magical couple.
They smile.

Their friends play the song 'Pee loon tere neelay neelay nainon se shabnam
Pee loon tere geelay geelay hoto ki sargam
Pee loon hai peenay ka mausam
Tere sang ishq taari hai
Tere sang ik khumari hai
Tere sang chain bhi mujhko
Tere sang bekraari hai
Tere sang ishq taari hai
Tere sang ik khumari hai
Tere sang chain bhi mujhko
Tere sang bekraari hai
Tere bin jee nahi lagda, tere bin jee nahi sakda
Tujhpe hai haare maine vaare do jahan, kurbaan, meharbaan, ke main toh kurbaan
Sun le zara, tera kurbaan...'{Once upon a time in Mumbai}.
Anmol Ragini sway their bodies to the soft romantic song.
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Posted: 14 years ago
#72
i read all the missed parts dear. It's wonderful... Very intersting. And u have add pic too. Very nice.
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Posted: 14 years ago
#73
Jasmine I can picture the whole birthday sequence of Anmol and Ragini

Very nice episode.. Still loads in flash back ...

Ramesh comes to meet Ragini she was so teary eye seeing him. He misses his bhabhi and also Anmol
Sweta is introduced and priya recognises her ..
Interesting you have kept the story pace well

thanks continue soon !!👏
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Posted: 14 years ago
#74
@jasmine..read parts 11-12..beautifully written.the pics added are so lovely ...
finally anmol getting better ..
sweta knows about anmol and hope soon she announces the good news to ragini too.
priya still on her selfish attitude but seems she will have a change of heart.btw well done ramesh to put her on track..
sad part ganga's death..
maya also trusting jeev now after her misunderstanding and brainwashing by priya...
every angini scenes i could picturise them..
esp her birthday where she visualises anmol and how he made a surpsise birthday party for her..so much love between them..
hope they reunite soon..
do continue keep it up...👏
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Posted: 14 years ago
#75
Wonderful update Jasmine.👏

Want Ragini to meet Anmol and they unite soon.😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Jasmine, sorry. I shall read all the updated remaining parts soon as I have a lot of catching up to do😃
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Posted: 14 years ago
#77
Wonderful parts I loved them with the pictures which were missing earlier
Ramesh consoling Ragini
And Ragini Anmol's birthday party celebrations were wonderful !!

Loved teh song you used and teh dance..
dreaming about Anmol is really so sweet
You make teh story so interesting 👏
jasminerahul thumbnail
Posted: 14 years ago
#78

Thanx a lot 4 enouraging me 2 write thru ur long comments.Thanx 4 making my ff successful.I never expected such a nice response from u all.

This is d climax of Till eternity.plz write which is ur fav charac & favourite scene & y u like it.

Till eternity Part 13

Ragini's birthday..everybody wishes her happy birthday.
Sweta gives her a cover:This is a birthday gift.Open it and see.
R:Thanks.But there was no need of this gift.
She opens it and sees a maroonish red saree.
R:It's similar to the saree which Anmolji gifted on my last birthday.
Sweta smiles and thinks:She does'nt know that Anmol only chose this saree for her.
S:Wear this saree.Let us go to my house to celebrate your birthday.

Ragini wears the saree.They all go to Sweta's house.Everybody welcomes them with sweets.They all are observing Ragini as she is the heroine of the day.
S:Shall we give the birthday present to Ragini didi?
R:But you have already given a birthday gift.This saree.
S:There is one more birthday gift which you will never forget.Wait and watch.
All others are waiting eagerly to see Anmol.
Charlie brings Anmol.All are excited to see Anmol.Ragini can't believe her eyes.
R:Anmolji!
She runs to him.
R:My God!I can't believe my eyes.What am i seeing?
He smiles.
S:Did you like the birthday gift?
R:I knew that my Anmolji will come back to me.But i never expected him here.
Charlie tells her how Anmol landed up in their house.
R:Thanks a lot.I don't know how to express how grateful i am to you all.
She looks at Anmol with tears:Anmolji!
His caresses her hair.
A:They told me what all happened when i was out of my senses.I lost my mother.But i did'nt want to lose my wife and brother.When they said about you..i was waiting for you to come.
S:Be happy.Now you both will never get separated from each other.
A:Ragini..you look very pretty in this saree.I only selected this saree for you.Because i wanted you to be the most beautiful lady on your birthday.This is your favourite colour too.
She is surprised.
He looks at Ramesh.
Ram:Bhaiyya!
Ramesh hugs Anmol.They both weep.
Maya takes the sindoor dabba.
M:This is our birthday gift for you.
Priya:Give this to Anmol bhaiyya.
Maya gives it to Anmol.
Anmol fills Ragini's forehead with sindoor.
Bal:Ragini bhabhi looks more beautiful when Anmol jeeju put sindoor on her forehead.
Jeev:Yes.That's true.
R:Every wife becomes more glowy when her husband puts sindoor on the forehead.
Vilsy:Now let us cut the birthday cake.
Fernandus:Yes,the cake is baked by Vilsy.
Ragini blows the lit candles.
Anmol and Ragini hold hands together and cuts the cake.They feed each other with the cake.Everybody claps their hands.
R:Vilsy aunty..your cake is very tasty.
Vilsy is very happy.
S:Mom is really happy to get compliments about her cooking.Now there is one more thing to do.
Ragini is anxious to know it.Anmol simply smiles.

S:Let us leave this happy couple alone.Let them spend some time together privately.
Anmol and Ragini smile.

Sunset...
Anmol and Ragini walk along the beach holding hands together.They both sit down.
They open their heart and chat a lot.



The end
Edited by jasminerahul - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#79
Wonderful Jasmine.👏👏👏

It was an emotional reunion with the surprise gift.😃😃😃

Thank you for giving us this wonderful FF on Angini.🤗🤗🤗

Please come back with an other one.👍🏼⭐️⭐️

Edited by krithikas - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#80
Beautiful end !!👏👏👏

You gave us a very nice journey of Anmol and ragini

Sweta is my star who united Anmol and Ragini ⭐️

You have given a beautiful story...
Please write one more like this 😊


Indeed Anmol and Ragini went through a lot and finally united !!👏👏👏

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