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Posted: 14 years ago
#61
Very nice part..Priya gets slapped for unnecessarily interfering in people's business..

Sweta seems sweet I hope her character remains consistent..

Ragini and Anmol the garland scene was so sweet.. I want him to recover soon and come back

Please continue soon !!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Till eternity Part 10

Sati:How could you cheat your wife who loves you madly?Are you born in my womb?

Maya:I'm not rich and educated.So when he got someone who is rich and educated Jeev fell for her.

Jeev:Stop it.You people are blabbering without knowing the truth.I called her to say something else.I told her that you are just exploiting her.

Maya is shocked and embarrassed.

J:But she trusts you.

Maya is relieved.

Sweta enters the house.

S:Hi mAya..we have to go for shopping no.

She sees the broken pieces of show pieces.

S:What happened to the show pieces?

M:You came here to take me for shopping or to see Jeev?

S:What do you mean?

M:Are you sent by Priya to destroy my life?

S:Why are you talking like this?

J:She is angry as I told you what her real character is.She is scared as her mask is getting torn.To cover her face,she is trying to cook up stories.She heard that we both met at the ice cream parlour.So she is suspicious of her relationship.

Sweta is shocked.Jeev goes out of the house.

Maya weeps:I always longed for a luxurious life.When a person insulted me as I have no luxurious in my life.So I thought I can have a fun life through you.But because of that if I lose Jeev everything will be a waste.I don't want any precious item from you.I want only my Jeev.Please don't place your evil eyes on Jeev.You should not stay in my house.You should leave the house.

Sweta feels upset.

S:Your suspicious nature is not good.

M:Shut up.Who are you to advise me?

She pushes her out:Get out!

Sati:Maya..what are you doing?

M:So you also side Sweta?I considered you as my own mother.But you are supporting her?Is it because I'm not as rich as Sweta?Or I'm not as pretty as her?If you are planning to replace me with her in this house it will not happen.

Sati never expected Maya to speak like that.

Sati:Maya!



Sweta tells everything to Maya's family members.

Bal:We came to know everything.Maya called and told us everything.But we don't believe her.She is jealous of others.

S:I will shift to a hostel.I think that's better.

Savitri:Hostel?No way.You should stay here itself.We know Maya's character.We trust you Sweta.

Ragini:Don't feel bad about what Maya said.You stay here only.

Sweta's eyes get welled up with tears:I'm so lucky to have such nice people around me.Yiu all treat me like your family member.But I have to go home tomorrow.

Sav:wHy are you going home?We told you..we trust you.

S:Not because of that.Tomorrow my brother Charlie is coming.I'm longing to see him.

Everybody smiles.

Sav:Very good.


Ragini is sad about Maya's married life's problems.She closes her eyes.Anmol appears.
A:Why are you so sad Ragini?Don't you know that i can't bear your pain?

R:I'm upset about Maya and Jeev.She is suspivious of Jeev and this is causing a lot of problems in their married life.
A:Don't worry.Just relax.Maya will be convinced of the truth in the near future.Then they will have a happy married life again.Now my dear wife smile..
She smiles slightly.
A:This is not enough.Open your heart and smile.
She smiles with full heart.
He smiles:When you smile you look so pretty.
She blushes.




Sweta goes home.She is excited seeing Charlie.

S:Charlie.

She hugs Charlie.

S:How are you?

C:Cool.I got a job here.

S:Really?That's cool.

C:You are staying in a house.Right?How are they?

S:They are so loving.

C:Did you see Anmol?

S:Yes.Poor chap.I feel sad seeing his condition.You are great for doing such a good deed.

He smiles.



Anmol tries hard to lift his hand to take the water flask from the near by table.

The flask falls down and breaks.Everybody comes to the room hearing the sound.

They are surprised to see Anmol's hands and fingers moving slightly. They feel very happy.

Vilsy:Thank Jesus.

Fernandus:Praise the Lord.
Edited by jasminerahul - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#63
Very nice part !!
maya will lern to beleieve jeev and her marriage as Anmol said

Sweta is a sweet girl..
And Anmol is getting better I am so glad I think he will slowly start getting his sense back

Thanks for a wonderful update please continue
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Posted: 14 years ago
#64
@jasmine.nice update..
maya-jeev misunderstanding again..
anmol always there for ragini in her bad moments.
how he brought back her smie and told ragini maya-jeev problems will be solved soon..
finally anmol is getting better.a good sign ...
keep it up..👏
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Posted: 14 years ago
#65
Very nice part.👏
Charlie asking about Sweta and also asking about Anmol
Anmol trying to move his hand ..
Mayve some improvement
I hope somehow Ragini gets to know where Anmol is
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Posted: 14 years ago
#66

Till eternity Part 11

Sweta comes back.
Ragini:Sweta...you are back..we missed you very much.By the way your face looks very happy.Any good news?I mean marriage got fixed?
Sweta smiles:No..no...i met my brother after a long break.That's why.There is one more good news.Charlie had brought with him a paralysed man.He is showing improvement now.He has started moving his hands.The doctor said very soon he will be able to walk.Hopefully he will be able to walk then.We pray for that.
R:That's a good news.I will also pray for him.He will be a complete healthy man.

Maya thinks:I'm a fool who gave milk to a poisonous snake.I will not let Sweta snatch my Jeev.You and your fashion designing..you thought since you are educated and i'm not educated,you can capture others' heart very easily.I will teach you a lesson.

Sweta comes home with tears.
Savitri:What happened Sweta?
S:Maya..she and her friends spread some false news about me in the college...that i'm bad.The college authorities said they don't want a girl like me in their college.My studies got stopped.
Ragini:My God!

Savitri informs this to Jeev.
Jeev slaps Maya.
J:How could you destroy a nice girl's life?Because of you Sweta got a bad image now.God will not forgive you.Get out of this house.We don't want you to kill us with your poisonous mind.
Maya cries:Please Jeev..don't desert me.I did eerything to gain you.So if you desert me..no...please...i will tell the truth to Sweta's college authority.She will be able to continue her studies.Please don't tell me to go away.
Maya runs to the college.She tells everything to the Principal.
Pri:What?That was just a prank played by you and your friends?Sweta was the most brilliant student of this college.Because of you,we all misunderstood her.You played with a nice girl's life.
Maya looks at Sweta:I'm sorry.I misunderstood you a lot.
Sweta smiles:Ok.But you should live as Jeev's ideal wife.
M:You are great.Because you forgave me.You will have a good life.
Sweta smiles.

Maya is standing at the terrace.Siddarth comes.Her face is dull.She is nervous about how he will react.He comes towards her.She is tense.He puts his arms around her shoulders.She looks at him unbelievingly.He has a cute smile on her face.
She is relieved.She also smiles.

Ganga is lying in the bed.She is really weak.Her light yellow saree is full of her own blood.

Ragini visits Ganga.
R:I know how much you love Palak.Then why did you give her to them?
Ganga's tears fall down.
G:My time is near.That's why...
R:What?
G:I'm suffering from blood cancer.I'm dying.Then why should i make her stay with me?Let her be happy with her own parents.
Ragini is shocked.She feels very sad.
R:Treatment..?
G:It's too late.Otherwise i would have spend any amount of money for that.
Ragini really feels pain.

Ragini tells herself:Today is Anmolji's birthday.She closes her eyes.Anmol appears.
She is very happy:Happy birthday Anmolji..
A:Thanks a lot.You did'nt even dress well on my birthday?You know that i want you to be always well dressed.Wear the green saree which i gofted you last year.You look very pretty in that saree.
She smiles.Ragini wears that green saree.
A:Wow!You are looking so beautiful Ragini.
She smiles.
A:But something is missing.You should wear a matching necklace.
He takes green necklace from the cupboard and places it on her neck.
Her face is dull.
A:Why there is no happiness on your face?
R:I'm sad that we can't celebrate your birthday with everyone.
He becomes upset.But he smiles.He pulls her towards him.
A:But you are there with me on my birthday.This makes me feel that i'm in the heaven.
R:But i wish everything was normal like before.
A:Everything is normal Ragini as long as our love is strong.Our love is eternal.Right?
She nods her head with a smile.
A:You look very ravishing after wearing this necklace.
She smiles.
A:Can i make this birthday entertaining by cracking jokes?
She laughs.He smiles:I feel happy when you smile like this.

She looks at him.
A:I know that you will make fun of me if i joke.So i'm going to do something else.
R:What?
He goes closer to her and looks deeply into her eyes.
He sings with passion:Dil ye kiun mara shor kary...{Kites}.
Slowly they dance.

Ragini goes to the temple and prays with tears.
Sweta sees Ragini coming back with tears:Why are you crying Ragini didi?
R:Today is my husband's birthday.
She goes to her room.
Savitri comes.
S:Aunty..Ragini didi is crying.
Sav:She is missing her husband.He has an unexpected death.We did'nt even get his body.
S:Can i see their wedding album?
Sav:Sure.
Savitri shows her the wedding album.
Sweta is shocked to see Anmol.
S:Anmol!Poor Ragini didi.Thinking that he is dead,she is crying.If she sees Anmol's present stage,she will be even more upset.She will be shattered.So let him be better.Then i will tell her the truth.

Ganga dies.Ragini is shattered.
Mother superior informs this to George and Malini on the phone.
MS:Ganga was hiding the fact that she is a dying a patient.She did'nt want Seleena to be an orphan again.That's why she handed over her to you.She loved her that much.
M:Mother..we know how much Ganga and Seleena loved each other.But she is our daughter.Still she has'nt accepted us.So we can't take her to see Ganga.Seleena should never know this sad news.
MS feels upset.

Bal tells Sweta:Ragini didi loves Anmol bhaiyya very much.Even though he is no more,she has'nt accepted the fact that he is no more and still she puts sindoor.We are scared about her being in an imaginary world.
Sweta feels guilty:I know that Ragini didi's imagination is not a waste.I know the truth.Am i cheating them by hiding the truth?

Priya rings up Maya:I pity you Maya.Even though your dearest husband is walking after another girl,you could'nt do anything.You are very weak.
M:Priyaji..i'm not the Maya who is foolish to believe rumours.So don't try to brainwash me.I trust my husband.He will never cheat on me.
Priya is irritated.Jeev who overhears it becomes happy.

Sweta's mobile rings.
S:Hello..Charlie..
C:There is a good news.Anmol's condition has improved a lot.He sits now.He talks a little bit.
S:Wow!That's great news.I will surprise them..I'm so excited.
Edited by jasminerahul - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#67
Fantastic part Jasmine.👏

Happy to read Anmol's condition has improved.😃

Please Jasmine I want to read Ragini and Anmol meeting soon.😃
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Posted: 14 years ago
#68
Very interesting part !!👏
I like the twist and turns you give in your storyline
Anmol improving makes me so happy !!
Ganga's death is very saddening

I hope sweta tells Ragini's abt ANmol atleast seeing the love she has she will help Ragini get to her Anmol !!


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Posted: 14 years ago
#69
awesoem part continue soon good work
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Posted: 14 years ago
#70
Very nice part .. Please continue soon ..

I am glad Anmol is improving well. Sweta will tell ragini i hope about Anmols whereabouts !

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