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Posted: 15 years ago
#51
awesome yar thank u very much for updating daily
waiting.....................
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CHAPTER -9
All the couples reach their resort.Alekh and sadhana enter their room while ragvir enter theirs. Alekh sees sadhana drying her hair , he goes behind her and kisses her on the collar bone sadi blushes and closes her eyes he comes even close and kisses her on her eyes . He tells sadi i had the best day of my life .There in the other room ranvir sits on the bed and says ragini i am so tired i want something . She says don't worry ranvir i will order something . Ranvir gets little angry and mutters to himself she always thinks about everything else except me and my romance. He then asks her to come close to him. She comes .Then ranvir says from morning i didn't get kiss so pls do the honours it will activate me . Ragini says " no ranvir " . Then ranvir says i am not going to talk to u . Ragini says " fine no problem " , ragini walks away but sees ranvir sad so she comes back and kisses him on the cheek and runs outside, ranvir also runs behind her . He then sees a shadow in the dark and sneaks behind it and hugs it. He says see ragini i found u. Then he says why r u not talking sweet heart and why r u so strong suddenly. Then the figure turns and ranvir sees it is alekh (🤣). Alekh is all laughing😆😆😆. Ranvir is so shocked he says bhaiyya aap what r u doing here ??? i thought u were and suddenly ragini and sadhana come there , sadi asks alekh what is going on ? then alekh says thank god ragini u came my brother was go so over romantic that he started to romance with me and tells both of them what happend . ragini and sadi laugh out loud and ragini says ranvir how can think jijaji to be me. then ranvir says it was dark and u both are wearing the same color so i got confused . Alekh then tells to ragini take care of my bro otherwise problems will come. Ranvir blushes and walks of.
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Both the jodi's go to their respective room to sleep. After ragvir go alekh comes out and asks the manager to bring the champagne and the car. He and sadi slowly knock ragvir's door. Ragini opens it and says ranvir slept no probs and they all go to the pool and decorate it with all candles, flowers and balloons . Then they give ranvir a missed call . Ranvir wakes up and sees that ragini is not in bed . so he calls her name but he can't find her , he checks the bathroom , balcony but doesn't find her so he gets all worried runs outside and calls her name but no reply so he gets even more tensed . A small cute puppy comes to ranvir and gives him a note. Ranvir reads the note and runs to the pool side but he doesn't find her there and the place is all so dark. He then runs around and calls ragini but he still nothing happens. Ranvir then turns away and cries ragini whr r u ?????? but still no response . A voice from the background says u want to see ur wife then ranvir turns and says yes then u must do what i tell u to do?? ranvir says who r u ?? the man says is it important??? ranvir then asks why i can't see u whr r u, pls tell me whr r my wife is ???? the man then says ranvir close ur eyes and don't open till i tell u . Ranvir says ok i will and closes his eyes. Then the voice says ranvir open ur eyes and ranvir opens his eyes and sees " HAPPY BIRTHDAY RANVIR " on the water written rose petals and burning diyas. He also sees the whole place decorated and gets suprised . Ranvir then says thank u so much , i know u all did it now come from ur hiding place . Then alekh ,sadi and ragini come from the bushes and wish ranvir happy birthday. They cut the cake , alekh takes the champagne bottle and shakes it and pours it on ranvir he then hugs ranvir and says happy birthday bro. He gives ranvir keys and says here is ur birthday gift , ranvir says what is it bhaiyya then alekh points towards the car at the reception . Ranvir is so shocked to see a audi there , he hugs alekh and says thank u soo much bhaiyya. Sadi comes and gives ranvir a chain with a heart shaped pendant with RR written on it , she tells him that he should wear it all the time as it not just a pendant but her sister's heart . Then the party begins they all cut the cake and start dancing to the song "mein tera dhadkan teri " from ajab prem ki ghazab kahani.......😉

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Posted: 15 years ago
#53
hey priya very nice....................ur chapters r very romantic hope to read more of romance.....of both jodis......
and being big fan of ragvir i love their scene ...........😛😛
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Posted: 15 years ago
#54
hey thanks !!!!! read tomorrow's part it will be more exciting and romantic
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Posted: 15 years ago
#55
woweee i love the idea of celebrating ranvir's b-day!
amazing scenes i always look forward to reading them!
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Posted: 15 years ago
#56
raly a very romantic chapter
i rly liked the scenes btn ragvir nd saalekh
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Posted: 15 years ago
#57
waitng for the next chapter.....................
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Posted: 15 years ago
#58
such a cute epi.......sadhnas gift was very nice....i wonder what ragini will gift him.
update soon.....
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Posted: 15 years ago
#59
CHAPTER - 9 ( pg 8)

Ragvir and Saalekh after dancing and all masti return to their respective rooms. Once entering their room ranvir closes the door and goes behind ragini who is searching for something in the cupboard. Ranvir hugs her from the back and says i received gifts from everyone but i am waiting for yours. Then ragini finds her packet and gives it to ranvir. Ranvir asks her what is it???? she says " u open it and see" . Ranvir opens it and finds a book with ranvir and ragini written on it, he opens and finds his and ragini's childhood pic's all pasted together till their marriage, ranvir says ragini wow !!!! it is so great . Then ragini hugs ranvir and says ranvir i can't imagine a day in my life without u . That's why pasted our photos together . I love u soo much ranvir 😉. Then ranvir kisses her ........ ragini i love u too 😉. We are made for each other and are always together forever and ever.
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Alekh wakes up and sneaks out of their room. Sadhana wakes up and finds alekh out of bed she searches for him in the room but doesn't find him . She gets all tensed and starts worrying about him . Then she hears a knock on door and runs to open it. She finds a person holding flowers and but she can't find the persons face, she says who are you ??? and for whom these flowers are for ?? . Then the person says i am a dewaane husband madly in love with my wife don't leave and opportunity to express my love to her and moves the flowers from his face ( allu looked very handome 😃) sadi then sees alekh and says alekh what is this???? and hugs him and says i was so worried about u. pls don't scare me like this again . Then alekh lifts sadi's head and kisses her on the forehead , he then gives the flowers to sadi and holds his ears and says sorry darling i just wanted to get u the first flowers of this season . Then sadi comes close to him and kissses him 😃. After 1 minute they break apart and sadi blushes 😳😳😳 and realizes what she had just done and runs inside the room. Alekh too happily runs behind them and closes the door and walks to sadi. Sadi then turns to him and wipes the sweat from his face with her pallu and i am so lucky to have u !!!!!!!! then alekh says no i am too lucky to have u and they both have a cute and sweet argument about who is lucky to have who?????
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Ragvir smile from the other room hearing their argument. Then ranvir shouts and says bhaiyya and bhabi this is a small announcement from both ranvir and ragini, u both are soo lucky to have lovely sister and devar like us. Now let me sleep i didn't pls ?? hearing this sadi smiles and comes near the wall says ranvirji i agree with u , u and jijjii bought me and allu ( ya she did call him that 😉😉) together and further adds u should see ur brother's face ranvirjii it as red as chilli but he is soo cute ⭐️⭐️ . Hearing this ranvir smiles and says ragini learn something from ur sister she is soo romantic then alekh joins the convo and says wow everyone are talking about me only !!!!!!!!!!!! i am so popular , to this ranvir replies and says ofcourse bhaiyya u r the lover boy 😉.


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Posted: 15 years ago
#60
awww chapter 9 is sooo sweeet
i love it
and sadhna kissed alekh!
wowowowoowoowo
i wish bidaai would actually show some saalekh scenes!

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