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Posted: 15 years ago
#61
Thank you even i am waiting for saalekh's scenes too be shown 😉.
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Posted: 15 years ago
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I will be updating the next part tomorrow , i was thinking how abt writing some mystery, adventure along with romance with our jodis i jus want ur suggestion for this!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
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s mystery suspence adventurs toh hona hi chahiya lekin humari foursom ko seprate math karna
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Posted: 15 years ago
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ya sure i want to show them differently but i will never separate them ...................never ........................ever...................................
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Posted: 15 years ago
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i missed 2 chapters bt i read omg awsome gr888👏👏 u r truly a star⭐️⭐️ soo good and song from ajab prem.. was my fav main tera dhadkna teri..my favvvvvv gr88 plzz update soon awsome romance of saaalekhhhhhhhh
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Heheeeee😆 i love the song too. That's why i wanted to see them doing dance too . How did u like the barn scene, boat scene and the morning flower scene😉😉. I want to write a horse riding scene too but i jus thinking about the situation.........................................
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Chapter - 9 ( pg .10 )
Alekh and sadhana are walking in the lawn and sadi trips but alekh holds her and they share a sweet moment together then ragvir also come and see saalekh lost in eachother's eyes and allu is still holding her in his arms ( wow they look too awesome together 😉😉) . Ranvir clicks their pic and says wow ragini see morning romance that a titanic wala scene, kya baat hain then saalekh come back to their senses and sadi 😳 and goes to ragini and hugs her 😃. Ranvir pats on alekh's shoulder u should try in hollywood films bhaiyya i mean u both ur jodi will cause problems for the hottest jodi in the world brangelins jodi 😆. Then alekh holds ranvir hand and says no jaanu i want to be with u , remember how u hugged me that night i fell in love with u . sagini give alvir (alekh+ranvir ) a disgusted look😕. Then alekh comes to ragini , kneels down and says pls ragini don't separate us we love eachother soo muchh. Ranvir comes to ragini and takes her from there and goes to alekh and says sorry bhaiyya i will never disturb u both again i promise no plsssss leave it. Alekh keeps hand on ranvir's shoulder and says my dear bro now lets go for some site seeing, ranvir says k then lets go. All the four go for site seeing in the beautiful gardens of assam . Ranvir and alekh see a cycle shop they both get two cycles and ask their wifes to climb them and they all ride merrily on the beautiful hillside. They all have a lunch in the gardens enjoyiing the nature then they roam around till the evening then ranvir takes ragini to the top of a cliff and shows her the sunset then kisses her on the forehead and says love u sooo much , ragini replies mee too then saalekh come from the back and says we too . then ragvir turn around and say ohh no!!!!!!! and ragvir blush😳😳😳. They all come back to resort!!!!!!! Alekh falls on the bed and says god iam so tired ,sadi comes to him and says mee too then he pulls her and she falls on him then he kisses her 😉😉😉.sadi breaks free and says alekh leave me then alekh tell i am still tired jus one more pls and kisses her again ......................................................( to be continued)..........
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Posted: 15 years ago
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hey guys the new chapter is posted hope u all enjoy it 😉.
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Posted: 15 years ago
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i request all the people who view my ff to post their opinions on my writing cause it will cheer me up and keeps me charged for writing more
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Posted: 15 years ago
#70
I just found this today and want to say I love it! Its so cute and romantic! can't wait for the next part!

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