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Posted: 15 years ago
#71
wowowowoowowo chapter nine is sooo funni
and amazing
ur really talented!
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Posted: 15 years ago
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CHAPTER- 10
The episode starts with ragvir and saalekh going for a morning walk , they all walk towards the beach, ranvir gets excited seeing beach he runs towards the water , he calls saalekh and ragini to join him for a swim but ragini is all scared so ranvir comes and pulls her into the water , ragini tells ranvir its k ranvir u can leave me i am fine now , it is not so scary after all then he tells ragi i took this hand from ur father promising him that i will never let it go forever šŸ‘ then how can ask me to leave u now that too in this place which has strong currents coming . He says ragini u made my life beautiful , i just can't imagine my life without u , u make me complete, u are present and future and holds her face and they both share an eyelock.
Saalekh see this from far and alekh whistles and calls ragvir but they are so lost then alekh takes a whistle from the lifeguard and blows it in ranvir's ears . Ragvir get shocked hearing the sound and loose their balance and fall in water, alekh gives them a hand and says sorry mere bhai bahut bhuk lage hain i called u but laila majnu are so busy in morning romance that they completely forgot about this world then ranvir says oh!!!!! really me too lets go and they all have breakfast at a restaurant on the beach...........................................................................................................
After reaching the resort ranvir has a message from an unknown person at the lobby of the resort , ranvir reads the message and gets all tensed he rushes to the reception and asks the to book him a flight back to agra as soon as possible, he tells them it is emergency . Meanwhile he goes to ragini and tells her to pack her stuff as he got some very important work in agra and he needs her with him as it is very important . Ragini agrees and says did u tell jijaji ranvir?? then ranvir says no ragini i can't because bhaiyya and bhabi are having a good time here together i don't want to spoil their fun so u also don't tell them . They hurry to the airport but while going he gives the manager of the hotel a letter which should be handed to Mr. Alekh Rajvansh. Ragvir reach agra........( After the beach saalekh go site seeing meanwhile ragvir go to cottage to collect camera )
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Alekh and sadhana are walking when alekh sees a blind women selling bangles he gets very sad and goes to her and buys a pair red and pink colored bangles with all his money. Sadi is so amused seeing alekh like this , she hugs him and says u did the right thing alekh , i am so proud of u , then alekh takes sadi's hands and puts the bangles he bought for her , then saalekh share an eyelock. Their romance is disturbed by the crowd who are making their way to the city's biggest market . Sadi holds alekh's hand and they both see the shops together when sadi says what happened to ranvirji and jijji they didn't come yet , alekh tells her yes even i feel the same i will call them and find out but he can't find his mobile he tells sadi that he forgot his phone in the resort. Then they both agree that they should go back but before going they call ranvir from a telephone booth but his phone is switched off .After reaching the resort manager hands him ranvir's letter, alekh reads it and tells sadi that ragvir went to agra cause some important clients have come from london to do deal with them then he holds the letter and says ranvir mere bhai u always think about my happiness but it is now my time to repay u for all this love and asks the manager to get him 2 tickets to agra as soon as possible . Saalekh board the flight in tthe afternoon.
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Ragvir reach rajvansh house , vasu is shocked to see them cuming so she asks them what happened then ranvir says nothing he jus had some important work in agra so he came back . he informs her that saalekh are fine and are having a great time there, He then tells her that he has to go now and goes to his room to take some files while going he tells ragini that he will not be able to come for dinner he tells her not to get worried and goes , ragini is thinking how everything happened so fast and recalls her best moments with ranvir in assam

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ranvir reaches office and manager tells him about something, ranvir is all worried..............
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saalekh reach agra
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Posted: 15 years ago
#73
lovely priya so ur mystery tracks start...gr8t....but also try keeping romance šŸ˜†šŸ˜†šŸ˜† as i luv that
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Posted: 15 years ago
#74
šŸ¤— where r u? Aapko ye scropt RS ji ko deni chshiye thi. Atleast mystrey track mein hame kuchh better toh milta. Gr8 jobšŸ‘šŸ‘ . Keep it on šŸ‘šŸ¼
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Posted: 15 years ago
#75
Thank u for the support , get ready for some never expected twists ( i will never create misunderstandings between our jodi's and the romance b/w them will also be continued ) so worries .....................



The new mantra of youth " ALL IZZ WELL " ,
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Posted: 15 years ago
#76

Firstly thank u all for u support and love for my ff thank u soo much. i started my writing with small scenes separately but when i tried this i thought i was scared but ur support motivated me and i am writing 10 chapters wow it is a great feeling thank u all for the lovešŸ˜‰šŸ˜‰šŸ˜‰. i will write more 😊😊😊. Tmrw i will post new chapter filled with humor and romance so get ready !!!!! i sincerely request all those ppl who read my ff to post their comment .

Hey guys if u have any suggestions about the jodi's romance pls feel free to send me pm's i am so greatful to u .
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Posted: 15 years ago
#77
CHAPTER 11

Saalekh reach home , they go to vasu's room and take her blessings then they both give ragini a pleasant surprise. Allu asks ragi where is ranvir ?? from morning i am trying to call but i can't reach him, ragi replies sorry jijjaji ranvir got some important work so he went , allu asks her where is he now? ragi says i don't know and he told me he will come late he has some meetings with clients . Allu replies then says k, i will go to office, inderjit knocks the door he goes and hugs alekh my son , how was ur holiday, why did u come back so early? ally says papa how can stay there and enjoy when my family needs , me my brother and father are working hard how will i stay there? my happiness is with u all i don't need to go on any holidays when i am with my family cause u all are there for me and i am there for u and he holds his father's hands and says papa u don't worry at all u and mom have worked hard enough for the company and for this house now it is our turn let us do it , u and mom go for holiday, then inderjit says i am so happy alekh , i am proud of u and ranvir u both are very responsible and hardworking i very very happy. vasu also comes and says yes inderjit they are grown up now , then inderjit says u know vasu alekh suggested that u and i should relax he said we can go for holiday , how about a second honeymoon just u and me in the bahamas , vasu blushes šŸ˜† and says inderjit kids here noooo and walks away feeling shy then inderjit turns to alekh and god alekh today 8th wonder happened ur mother blushed and ran away shy , i am seeing different vasu wow i am in a mood to celebrate this how about a small party what do u say, alekh says k papa anyways ur anniversary is coming soon we have a grand surprise for mom . inderjit then walks off . Alekh says k i better go to office and help ranvir he is all alone but ragini says no jijaji he will come back soon u should rest anyway ranvir will come home in another 1 hr so its k u can go with him tmrw , then saalekh go to their room.......................................................
After reaching the room alekh struggles to open his tie he asks sadi to help him she says k and comes to alekh and opens but allu gets mischievous and hugs her and takes the opportunity and kisses her on lips, after some time they break apart and sadi realizes what jus happened and blushes and walks to the cupboard to put her clothes, allu also walks behind her with some sarees in hand goes to her and gives them to her, while giving he holds he hands she struggles to break free and says alekh i have to go now i need to cook dinner with jiji now pls let me go , then alekh says k i will let u go only when u promise me that u will accept my gift and hands her the gift which he had hidden in the wardrobe. she asks him what it is , then he says open it and see for your self , sadi opens it and finds a white sleeveless night gown with a laced coat on top of it, sadi is surprised and says no alekh i can't wear it i am feeling shy then alekh says oh come on sadhana i am ur husband and this is our room who will look at u tell me , pls wear it u promised , then she agrees to wear it reluctantly and tries to walk off when alekh kisses her on the cheek and says thank u for accepting my gift , i am sure u will agree, i love too much then sadi says mee too ...........................

All the rajvansh are having dinner then ranvir turns up from office, he is shocked to saalekh there and asks what happened i told u not come then allu says ranvir first have dinner then i will talk with u . they all have dinner then allu and ranvir go for walk in the lawn, allu asks ranvir what happened is everything k there in the office then ranvir says no bhaiyya the our manager Mr.pratik verma is getting threatening calls from an unknown person to tell the tender price of ur company , when he didn't agree they kidnapped his 1 yr daughter and told him that they will kill her if he doesn't work for them in revealing all our company secrets , allu says k ranvir we will work on this together we will save her daughter, now let us find out who is doing this?????????????????????????
To be continued




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Posted: 15 years ago
#78
hello all the new topic is posted šŸ˜‰. Hope u like my mystery track so pls do comment . if u like my writing don't forget press like buttonšŸ˜‰.
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Posted: 15 years ago
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No comments so sad šŸ˜”.
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Posted: 15 years ago
#80
wowowowowo
a mystery track
thats sooo cool
your writing is so creative and adventurous
amazing, you should def post on RS blog
lovin saalekh's kisses
soooo cuteee

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