sanga FF - part 25 pg 33 (27/02/09) - Page 7

Wow fabulous .....! 👏 👏 👏
Thanks a lot for such a lovely part .

Originally posted by: Neha-Anand-4eva

Thnx for this lovely part. i really hope Ganga get's better soon and i think it's Shanta who put's her hand on Sagar and has listened to his convo i hope it's Shanta i really liked this part i hope nothing serious has happened to Ganga. i really liked this part thnx sweetie for posting it thnx once again pos the next part soon can't wait.

awww thanks for commenting!! by the way do you read the hindi bit? if u do is it really bad because my hindi isn't all that???😳

Originally posted by: swani_saku

Wow fabulous .....! 👏 👏 👏
Thanks a lot for such a lovely part .

thanks!! i just hope u enjoy reading it as much as i enjoy writing it! by the way do you read the bit in hindi? if u do please tell me if its bad or not?? 😳

Thanks, that was really good and i can't wait for the next part!
Sorry for the late reply!!!!!!!!!
I reckon it is going to be someone like Shanta or Shubodh (even though he knows)
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Keep writing!

Originally posted by: .xganga.x

Thanks, that was really good and i can't wait for the next part!
Sorry for the late reply!!!!!!!!!
I reckon it is going to be someone like Shanta or Shubodh (even though he knows)
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Keep writing!

thanks!! hmmmm u will have ti wait for the next part to find out!! i will try to update either tomorrow or even today! 😉

Part 11

thanks so much for your comments keep them coming! heres the next part!

RECAP

Meanwhile saagar has gone to the hospital mandir!

Saagar: (crying) bhagwan tum mere saath aisa kyun kar rahe ho! Kya pariksha hai yeh? Kyun mujko tarpaar re ho?? Maine kya kiya yeh paa ne ke liye? Kyun nahin mujhe kush dekhna chaate? Kyun mujhe aur ganga ko saath jeene nahin dehte? Mein pyar karta hoon use aur tum yeh pyar ko dekhane ke liye moke bhi nahin de te!! Mein meri jaan dene ke liye tayar hoon uski jaan bachan ne ke liye! (he falls to his knees) Please bhagwan usko bachana, meri jaan lena chate ho to le liye par uski nahin lena! Voh kitni masoom hai, voh sab ki bhalaa chaati hai aur tum uski jaan lena chaate ho? Kyun? Kya kar ra usne, ke usne yeh sazaa mili?? Please bhagwan! Mujhe meri ganga vapas de do! Mujko uski zaroorat hai! Voh meri zindagi hai! Voh nahin to mein nahin! Voh meri sab kuch hai! Meri kushi, meri gham, meri dost, meri jeevan saathi! Sab kuch bhagwan sab kuch! Please usko jald se jald theek kar do!! Meri jeena mushkil hain uske bina! Please!! Usko theek kar do!! (god, why are you doin this with me! is this a test? why are you making me pine? what have i done to deserve this?? why don't you want to see me happy? why don't you let me and ganga live together? i love her and you dont give me a chance to show this love! i am ready to give up my life to save her life! (he falls to his knees) please god save her, if you want to take my life take it but don't take hers! shes so innocent, she cares about everyone and you want to take her life?? why? what has she done, taht she is getting this punishment?? please god! give me my ganga back! i need her! she is my life! if she isnt alive then neither am i! she is my everything! my happiness, my sadnees, my firend, my life partner! everything god everything! please make her better quickly! without her my living is hard! please! make her better! )

………… saagar?? (someone puts their hand on his shoulder) (saagar??)

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Saagar looks up! Hes shocked!!

Saagar: didi?? (sister??)

Shanta: saagar, maine sab kuch soon liya! Jhanvi theek ho jayengi! Bhagwan usko jald se jald theek ho jayengi! Mein jaanti hoon ke ab tum ek dosro ke kitna khayal rakh te ho!! Voh zaroor theek ho jayengi!! Bhagwan bhi itna insaafi nahin hai ke voh shekhar aur jhanvi ko unki paas bula le, voh zaroor jhanvi ko theek kar denge! Dekho ek hafte mein voh phir se ghar aur office sambhal lengi! Usme taakat hai yeh lad ne ke liye!! (starts crying) (saagar, i heard everything! jhanvi will be okay! god will make her well realy quickly! i know how much you care for each other! she will definately be better! even god isnt that unjus that he will call both shekhar and jhanvi to him!cannot take her and shekhar, he will definately make jhanvi better! watch in a week she will start taking care of the house and the office! she has the courage in ehr to fight this!)

Saagar: didi?? (and they hug) (sister??)

Saagar: (thinking) didi to aise baat kar re hain jaise unhe nahin pata ke mein ganga se pyaar karta hoon! Lagta hain voh meri poori baat nahin sooni! Thank god! Usko pata chalo to ganga ko aur bhi stress hota! (sister is talking like she doesn't know that i love gnaga! it seems she didnt listen to my full talk! thank god! if she found out then ganga would be even more stressed!)

Shanta: tum jhanvi ka kitna khayal rakhte ho, shekhar bhaiya kush hote yeh dekh kar ke bhabhi-devar ka rishte kaise pyaara hai! Sab galat femi door hogaye aur ab kaise rishta bana hai – maryada ka, kushi ka, dosto ka, aur saath ka! Ab koi yeh rishta ko koi nahin toot payenga! (you take so much care of jhanvi, shekhar would be so happy to see this relationship between sister-in law and brother in law is so beautiful! all the misunderstandings have been cleared and know look at what relationship has been formed - one of respect, one of happinesss, one of friends, and one of being together! now noone will be able to break this relation!)

Saagar is shocked and has tears in his eyes!!

Saagar: (thinking) didi kash tumko hamari sachai jaante!! Mujhe pata nahin aap kaise react karogi jab tumko pataa chale ga ke mein aur ganga ek dosre ko pyar karte hai! Ek dosre ko chaate hai! Aur voh jhanvi nahin ganga hai aur uski aur shekhar bhaiya ki shaadi kabhi hui nahin thi! didi mein chaata hoon ke jald se jald saach sab ko saamne aajaye! (sister, if only you knew our truth! i dont know how you will react when you find out that me and ganga love each other! we want eaach other! and she aint jhanvi but ganga and she never did marry shekhar brother! sister i want the truth to come ebfore everyone really soon!)

They pull out from their hug!!

Shanta: ab chalo hum sabhi ke paas jaate hai! Voh humko doondte hoge! Chalo! (now come we go to everyone! they will be looking for us! come!)

Saagar gives a faint smile!!

Saagar: jee (okay)

They go towards where shubodh and khurana uncle were!!

Shubodh: saagar?? tum kahan chale gaye the?? (saagar? where did you go?)

Saagar: voh jijaji…. Mein mandir gaya tha!! (brother-in-law... i went to the temple!)

Khurana and shubodh look at each other and give faint smiles to each other!!

Khurana uncle: beta ab tum betho aur thoda aaraam karo!! (child now you should sit down and get some rest!)

Saagar: uncle mein kaise aaraam karo jab ga…. (he thinks about what he was about to say) jab… ghar ki kisi hisa isi halat mein hote hai! (uncle how can i rest when ga... (he thinks about waht he was about to say) when.... someone part of the house is in this state!!)

Khurana and shubodh look at each other again!

Shanta: tum logo yahan betho aur mein kuch peene eke liye liya ti hoon!! (you lot sit down here and i will go to get something to drink)

Shubodh: mein chalta hoon!! (ill come!!)

Shanta: nahin tum yahan ruko mein liya thi hoon!! Bua meri saath chale gi! (no u stay here i will go to get it! bua will come with me!!

Shubodh gives her a smile and says okay!!

Shanta walks away with kanchanji!!

Shubodh turns around and looks at saagar!!

Shubodh: saagar!! tumari halat to dekho! Tumara aisa haal hai to ganga ka kya hoga!! Tumko himat rakhni hogi, ganga ke liye! Jab use hosh aaye ga to woh tumari sahara ke liye dhoonde gi!! Aur usko sahara dene ke liye tumko bharosa rakhna parega bhagwan par!! Who sab theek kar denge!! Aap ke aap bharosa rakho, tumari prathna khali haath nahin jayengi! Tum kamsoor nahin par sakte saagar!! aap yahan beth jayo! (saagar! look at your state!! if your state is like this what will happen to ganga! how have to keep courage, for ganga's sake!!) when she becomes conscious then she will be looking for your support! and to give this support you will have to keep faith in god! he will make everything okay! keep faith in yourself, your prayers will not go empty handed! you cannot become weak saagar! sit down here!)

Saagar has tears in his eyes and sits down!! Shanta comes back!!

Shanta: are sunny! Itne kyun ro rahe ho? Jhanvi theek ho jayenge! Usko kuch nahin hoga!! Shubodh, mein tumare liye chai laiye hoon, lo!! Aur uncle tumare liye juice!! (and she gives him the juice) saagar lo, tumare liye bhi juice laiye hoon! Lo?? (sunny?? why are you crying this much?? jhanvi will be okay! nothing will happen to her! shubodh, i have brought u some tea, take it!!! and uncle for you some juice! (and gives him the juice! saagar take it, i have brought you some juice too! take it??)

Saagar is lost in his thoughts and doesn't notice!!

Shanta puts her hand on his shoulders! Saagar comes out of his thoughts!!

Shanta: juice… lo… (juice... take it...)

Saagar: mujhe nahin chaiye didi, tumhi pee lo!! And he gets up and goes for a walk! (i dont want it sister, you drink it!)

Shanta: are?? Saagar? tum kahan ja rahe ho?? (saagar? where are you going??)

Saagar doesn't reply!!

Shubodh: jaane do usko!! (let him go!)

Shanta: par…?? Shubodh uska haal aise kyun hai! Lagta hai voh jhanvi ka kuch zyada hi khayal rakhta hai!! (but...?? shubodh why is his state like this!! it seems like her cares about jhanvi more than i thought!)

Shubodh and khurana uncle look at each other!

Subodh: shanta? Yeh kanchanji kahan hai? (shanta? wheres kanchanji??)

Shanta: gudiya abhi school se vapas nahin aayi thi, isliye bua ne kahan ke who usko sambhale ga, to jab hum drink lene ke liye gaye the, voh phir ghar chali gaye!!! Aur mein gudiya ko parishaan nahin karna chaati! (gudiya still hadn't come back form school, thats why bua said that she will look after her, so when we went to get the drinks, she went home! and i dont want to trouble gudiya!!)

Shubodh: par gudiya ko to buda lage ga jo usko pata chale ke humne is baat ko chupaya!! (but gudiya will feel bad if she found out that we hid this ftom her!)

Shanta: voh bachi hai, jab hum bade bhi nahin sambhal sakte to gudiya kaise sambhal payengi! (shes a child, when us elders cannot even cope then how will ganga cope!!)

Shubodh: ha, par… jhanvi unki maa hai, usko jaan ne ka haq hai! Voh sambhal payengi ke nahin voh abh miyne nahin rakhte! Ek kam karta hoon, abh gudiya vapas aa chuke hogi, mein ghar jaake gudiya aur bua ko yahan pe leya ta hoon!! (yes, but... jhanvi is her mother, she has the right to know! whether she can cope or not is not important right now! ill do one thing, gudiya will be back by now, i will o home and bring gudiya and bua here!)

Khurana: is ki koi zaroorat nahin hain! Voh khud hi poch gaye!! (there is no need for that! they are already here!)

They all look up! Gudiya and kanchanji are walking towards them!

Just then the doctor comes!!

Shubodh: doctor? Koi kabhar?? (doctor? any news??)

Doctor: patient ka pati, mr saagar bhatiya kahan hai?? (where's the patients husband mr saagar bhatiya??)

this is the end of part 11! what will happen next? will kanchanji, shanta and gudiya find out about the relationship between saagar and ganga? keep reading to find out! and please do leave your thoughts and comments 😉

is that like a letter scramble??
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thnx bubblez91 i really loved thi part i hope Shanta didi comes to know about Sagar and Ganga's realationship i wonder what the doctor want's to say to Sagar about Ganga i hope not something serious do continue can't wait for the next part. I thought Shanta heard Sagar's convo.

Originally posted by: Neha-Anand-4eva

thnx bubblez91 i really loved thi part i hope Shanta didi comes to know about Sagar and Ganga's realationship i wonder what the doctor want's to say to Sagar about Ganga i hope not something serious do continue can't wait for the next part. I thought Shanta heard Sagar's convo.

aww thanks! well u will have to wait for the next part to see if shanta finds out! and shanta heard only the end of saagars convo! hence why saagar goes i dont think she heard everything! was that bit confusing??

I think it will be like Gudiya will say This isn't her husband this is her brother-in-law or something. . . . loving it!
Hopefully Ganga is okay. . . and the doctor is their to tell him good news!
Can't wait for the next part!
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