sanga FF - part 25 pg 33 (27/02/09)

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hey i decided to start a saagar ganga fanfic!! as dere aint dat many in da forum!!! its my first tym so i may not b good!! n im tryin to use hindi coz it sounds beta buh even my hindi aint dat good!! so dere may be a few mistakes!! buh i wud luv for you to leave ur comments and suggestions!! 😃
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Posted: 17 years ago
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heres part 1! sorry for the mistakess

Saagar: ganga! Tum apne apko kyun aise saaza deriyo (why are you giving yourself this punishment)

Ganga: kyun ki mein majboor hu (because im helpless)

Saagar: kaise majboori??? Kaveri ki vajase?? Bolo ganga kya hai yeh majboori (what helplessness? because of kaveri? speak ganga waht it this helplessness?)

Ganga: ha saagar mein kaveri didi ki vaje se majboor hu!! (yes saagar, because of kaveri i am helpless)

Saagar: to ap is majboori se mita do, is majboori ki vaja se tum hamara pyar mitana chati ho, meri sasson ko mitana chati ho, meri zindagi ko mitana chati ho!! (so get rid of this helplessness, because of this helplessness you want to forget our love, you want to get rid of my breaths, you want to get rid of my life)

Ganga: saagar!!! Yeh kaise baate kare ho!! (saagar! why you talkin like this)

Saagar: sach to kare hoon!! Jo tumne mujhse door jaane ki koshish ki to acha nahin hoga!! Mein mar jaonga tere bine!!! Mar jaonga ganga mar jaoonga!! Tum samaj ni koshish kyun nahin karte!! Mein tumhare bina nahin rahe sakhta!! Tumhare bina rehna to namoomkin hain!! (im telling the truth! you trying to go far away from me is not goin to be good! i'll die without you! ill die ganga ill die! why dont u try to understand! i cant live without you! its impossible to live without you!)

Ganga: saagar yeh tum kya kahe rehe ho?? (saagar, what are you saying?)


Saagar: ha ganga!! Jabse mein kundanpur se vapas aaya aur mujhe laga ke tum mar gaye ho to mera jeena mushkil par gaya tha!! Din bhar tere tasveer dekh kar or yaadon se jee ra tha or raat pe tere sapno dekha karta ta!! Aise jee aara hoon (yes ganga! since i come back from kundanpur and thought that you had died my living became so difficult! all day i would look at your photos and think of you to live and in the night i dreamt of you! i have been livin like this)

Ganga: saagar! Tumne mere baare mein socha!! jab tum kundanpur the gaye hue the, tab mein bhi teri yaadon mein jee re the, yeh soch kar bhi ke tumne muhe dokha diya tha, tab bhi mein tumhari baari mein soch thi ayi!! maa mar gayi aur mein akele ho gayi par tab kaveri didi aur khurana uncle tha jo mujko sambala!! To tum batao kya mein kaveri didi se aisa dokha de sakti hoon??? (saagar! did you think about me! when you went from kundanpur, then even i wa living in your memories, even though i though you had betrayed me, i kept thinking about you! when mum died and i was alone it was kaveri and khurana uncle that looked after me! so you tell me can i betray them like this?)Batao saagar!!! …….. aur jab mein yahan pochi tab bhi mein tumhare khayalo mein khoye hui thi!!! Par hum dono anjaan the ke hum itne kareeb thi or pata ni chala!!! Kismat ne aisa khel khila ke taufan baar ta gaya!! Pehle tum London chale ge, phir jab tum vapas are the tab mujhe pata chale key eh sunny jo kaveri didi ka pyar tha, koi aur nahin par mera pyar saagar tha!! Aur mene socha ke mein yahan se door chali jaongi. Tab tum ne apke ankho ko chuke!! Phir madan se chala aiya aur tumko shak hua ke mein ganga thi! mene phir se door chale jaane ke socha!!! ( tell me saagar!!..... and when i came here evern then i was living in your memories! but both of us were unknown that were this close and we didnt even find out! fate played such a game that the storm kept gettin worse! first you wnet to london, and when you were coming back then i found out that the sunny who kaveri loves, is no one else but my love saagar! and i thought i would leave her! then you lost your eyes! then madan come back and you were suspicious that i was ganga! i decided to go far away from here!!) par khurana uncle ne mujhe rauka!!! Aur phir maine shekher ji ko shaadi kari!! Phir se taufan aiyaa aur uksa murder hua!! Tab maine office join karna decision liya, shekherji ka khatil ko pakar ne!! tab kismat ne phir se khel khilya aur humara dil mein ek dosre ko liye nafrat bhar di!! Aur ab hum yahan khare hai, kash hum is more pe hum nahin the!! (but khurana uncle stopped me! and then i married shekhar! again a storm came and he got murdered! then i made a decision to join the office, to catch shekar's killer! then fate played another game and filled hatred in our hearts for each other!! and now were standing ere, if only we were not at this stage!)

Saagar: ganga tumne itna dookh paya aur abhi dookh pana chati ho!! Kyun mitana chati ho humara pyar ko, kyun mujhse door karna chati ho??
(ganga you got all this pain and you still want more pain! why do u want to forget our love, why do u want to make me far from you?)

i kno this is short but i jus want your opinion on whether or not i should continue!! please leave ur coments and suggestions!! thanks 😉


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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: hot!!

i think u shud continue. its gud! 😆 but wanna give u one opinion k plzzzzzzzz improve ur grammar. i hope u dnt mind 😉 u told to give suggestions so i did.

anyways best of luck!!

loool okay fnx!! yhh ill try!! im trying to write in hindi!! but its nt rilli good haha!! i will try!! english jus sounds a bit random wen wrtitn this stories! so fort id try in hindi haha!! fnx for commenting tho 😳

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Posted: 17 years ago
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wow ...... fabulous yaar finally i get 2 c a sangam f.f i thought of startin 1 myself but im goin 4 a holiday in a week so mayb ill write it after i cum bak .....continue soon 👏 👏 👏
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Posted: 17 years ago
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I can't read hindi, but i can listen to it and understand 😃
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Could you maybe put English translations in
i get some of it though!
its really good!!!!!!
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: Aisha00

wow ...... fabulous yaar finally i get 2 c a sangam f.f i thought of startin 1 myself but im goin 4 a holiday in a week so mayb ill write it after i cum bak .....continue soon 👏 👏 👏

fank you for commentin! i was gettin a bit worried as noone was replyin and dere had been 30 views but thank you for commentin i will continue soon 😃😉

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: pollydolly

I can't read hindi, but i can listen to it and understand 😃

ill try to translate it into english nex ttym n ill try to edit the frist part! so u can tell me waht u fink 😉 thanks for tellin me tho! 😃

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: .xganga.x

Could you maybe put English translations in
i get some of it though!
its really good!!!!!!
?xXx?
Ganga

okay ill try to put the english with it!! 😉 tahnks for commenting! 😃

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heres part 2!! fank you for all ur comments! #

Saagar: ganga tumne itna dookh paya aur abhi dookh pana chati ho!! Kyun mitana chati ho humara pyar ko, kyun mujhe door karna chati ho?? (ganga you got all this pain and you still want more pain! why do u want to forget our love, why do want to make me go further away?)

Ganga: kyunki pyar ki bhar aur kuch rishte hota hai jo nibhane par te hai!! Isliye mein tumko bhoolna chati ho meri farz ke liye!! (because apart from love their are other important relationships that have to be abided to! thats why i want to forget my love for my repsonsibilities!)

Saagar: par…………
(but)


Ganga: kya mein tumse kuch pooch sakti hoon? (can i ask you something?)

Saagar: kya?? (what?)

Ganga: tumne achanak meri liye kyun itni nafrat karne lage hue the??? Maine kya kiya the ke tum har moke pe mujhe niche dikhana chati the??? (why did u all of a sudden start hating me this much? what did i do that at every opportunity you tried to make me small?)

Saagar: ganga… mein bhi is saawal ka jawab bhi nai janta!! Shayad isliye kyunki maine soocha ke tum ne mujha dokha diya tha shekhar bhaiya ko shaadi kar ke. (ganga.... even i dont know the answer to this question! maybe because i thought that you betrayed me by marrying shekhar bhaiya!)

Ganga: par tum to aisa inzaam laga re the ke tum ne mujhe jaana nahin tha?? Kya mein tumse khatil lagre thi?? kya tumhe laga ke mein yeh itni gihre hui hoon ke mein yeh sab kar sakti thi?? (but you accused me of such things, that you didn't even know me? do i look like a muderer to you? did u think that i could stoop this low and do all these things?)

Saagar: nahin!! Par meri ankho mein pata banda hua tha balbir or papa se!!! mein kya karoon! Mujhe maaf kardo ganga!! Please!!! Im really sorry ganga!!! Mujhe maaf kardo!! (he folds his hands) (no! but i had blindfolds on my eyes from balbir and dad!! what could i do? please forgive me ganga! please! il really sorry ganga! please forgive me!!)

Ganga: (crying, puts her hands over his) saagar!! please mein samaj sakti hoon tumhara dard!!! (saagar!! please i can understand you pain)

Saagar: (looks at her) jo samaj sakti ho to kyun mujhe ab bhi sazaa deri ho!! Mujhse door jaa ne koshish, humara pyar mitana yh saaza nahin hain to kya hai???? (if you can understand then why you still punishing me! tryin to get away from me, trying to forget our love if this aint punishment then waht is it?)

Ganga: (crying) mujhe nahin pata!! Par tumne mujhe vaada karna parega??? (i don't know! but you have to promise me?)

Saagar: kaise vaada?? (promise what?)

Ganga: tumhari meri kasam ke tum mujhse bhool ne ki koshish karoge?? (fro your and my sake you have to try to forget me?)

Saagar: mein yeh vaada nahin kar sakta!! (i cant promise you this?)

Ganga: kyun nahin?? (why not??)

Saagar: kyunki tumhari meri kasam ke jo me yeh vaada pura karoon to kaveri ko tumne pura sach bataana parega!! (because for your sake and mine if i fulfil this promise then you have to tell kaveri the truth!)

Ganga: nahin saagar!!! kaveri didi ko humara pyar ki kuch baat nahin pata ho sakti.. (no saagar!! kaveri didi cannot find out anything about our love..)

Saagar: to phir mein tumse bhool hi nahin paonga!!! (and walks off) (so then i cannot forget you!!)

what will happen next?? will ganga finally give in?? tune in and youll find out 😉


Edited by bubblez91 - 17 years ago

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