sanga FF - part 25 pg 33 (27/02/09) - Page 6

Originally posted by: .xganga.x

Noooo. . . that can't happen!
?xXx?
I am stll waiting. . . sorry only got on the computer now!
and you can't stop writing!

awwwwww!! okay i will continue for a few more parts but if there are still hardly any comments i may abandon it!! i dont wont to but the lack of comments is not very motivating

Part 9

RECAP

RMM: jhanvi tum use shaadi nahin kar sakti! Mera beta rahul tumse pyar karta hain!! jhanvi you cannot marry him! my son rahul loves you!!

Everyone's face is shocked!

Ganga: maaji?? mother??

RMM: ha jhanvi, tum ho jo us ki khushi vapas lot kar laye ho! Tum ho jo rahul ka hasi (laughter) lot kar laye ho! Tum ho jo mera beta pyar karta hai! Raat dhin voh teri baare mein soch ta hain! Please tumne uski saath shaadi karni paregi! Varne voh pori (fully) tara toot jaye ga!! Please jhanvi yeh khushi, yeh hasi ko mit ne na do! yes jhanvi, you are the one who has brought back his happiness! you are the one who has brought back his laughter! you are the one my son loves!! day night he thinks about you!! please you have to marry him!! otherwise he will break down!! please jhanvi, dont let this happiness, this laughter go!!

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Saagar is shocked he doesn't know what to do! Ganga also doesn't know what to do, all of a sudden she gets dizzy! She faints and saagar catches her in his hands! Shubodh, khurana uncle and rahul mehra's mum are shocked!

Saagar: ganga! Ganga utho!! Ganga please utho!! (he hugs her) ganga! ganga wake up! ganga please wake up!

Khurana uncle: saagar beta chalo hospital lejate hai! saagar child lets take her to the hospital!

Shubodh: ha, chalo saagar! yes, come on saagar!!

RMM: mein tumko hospital mein milti ho rahul ki saath! i will meet u at the hospital with rahul!!

Shubodh: ji! okay!!

Saagar carries ganga in his arms and takes her to the car!

He has her on his lap!

Saagar: ganga! Utho na ganga! Please!! Mujhe chor kar nahin jana! Ganga mujhe tumari zaroorat hai! Utho ganga! ganga!! wake up ganga! please! dont leave me and go!! ganga i need you!!

Khurana uncle heard this and had tears in his eyes and so does shubodh! They look at them in awe!

They reach the hospital! Saagar runs in with her!

Saagar: please koi mujhe madad karo! Meri patni…… (he thinks about what he said) voh yeh achank bahosh hogaye!! please somebody help me!! my wife..... she suddenly fainted!

Nurse: okay! Please take her into that room a doctor will be with you shortly!

Saagar: ji!! okay

Saagar takes her into the room and khurana uncle and shubodh follow!

A doctor comes in a few minutes!

Doctor: please aap bahar jaye hai! Mujko isko examine karna hai! please, can you go outside! i need to examine her!!

Saagar, khurana uncle and shubodh leave the room!

Shubodh: mein shanta ko phone karta hoon aur bata ta hoon ke jhanvi hospital mein hai!! i will ring shanta and tell her that jhanvi is in hospital!

Khurana: haa, par ganga aur saagar ka sach abhi chupa ke rakhna hoga, tab tak ganga ko phir se hosh na aaye!! yess, but we still have to keep saagar and gangas truth a secret, atleast until ganga does not regain consciousness!

Shubodh: jee!! Saagar??? okay!! saagar??

Saagar was lost in his thoughts and was walking around the hall!

Shubodh: (thinking) yeh ganga se kitna pyar karta hai!! Mein usko chor tha hoon aur begum (shanta) se baat karoon! (he loves ganga so much! i will leave him and go and speak to shanta!!

Shubodh walks away to the telephone box!

Saagar: (thinking) ganga, phir se kismat ne humari saath khel khila! Tum shaadi ke liye raazi hogi par shaadi ho hi nahin payi! Kyun hota hai yeh sab humari saath? Kyun? Please bhagwan ganga ko bachana! Please voh meri jaan hain! Uske kuch hogya to mein….. mein apni jaan dedonga! ganga, again fate has played a game with us!! you agreed to the wedding but it never happened!! wahy does this all happen with us? why? please god save ganga! please she is my life! if anything happens to her... i will give up my life!!

Khurana uncle puts his hand on saagar's shoulder!!

Saagar: beta, chinta karni ki koi zarorat nahin hai, ganga theek ho jaye gi! child, there is no need to get worried, ganga will be fine!

Saagar has a faint smile! He sits down and thinks of the times he has spent with ganga! (him finding out the truth that their love was true! Him saving her from falling down the ditch when guridya was in a camp! Him trying to put the sindoor on her and her stopping him)

The doctor comes out the room!

Saagar: doctor?? doctor??

what do u think the doctor will say? will ganga be fine?? will they actually get married? what will happen when everyone comes?? keep reading! and please do leave ur comments!

Hey bubblz91,
I have just read your ff all the way through and its out of this world.
I absolutely love it. I can't wait to read the next installment.
I wish it was like this in real life although I have enjoyed all the romantic moments recently between S/G.
I loved the way everyone (nearly!) discovered the truth so quickly.
Maybe she's pregnant (how long has it been since they were together on that last night in Kundanpur?) She could have been hiding this fact from all or maybe she didn't know til now. Maybe like you hear nowadays she's been through the whole pregnancy and not shown or anything and is well into the pregnancy.
That could erase the problem (RM and Kaveri).
S/G would have no way but to get married.
Please continue soon.
I can't wait to know what happens and what the doctor says.
Luv Munira

Thnx for part 1-9 i have enjoyed it so much especially the romantic scenes between Sagar and Ganga can't wait for the next part. post the next part soon. thnx once again can't wait to find out what has happened to Ganga. 😛 😛 😛

Originally posted by: sweetangel2028

Hey bubblz91,
I have just read your ff all the way through and its out of this world.
I absolutely love it. I can't wait to read the next installment.
I wish it was like this in real life although I have enjoyed all the romantic moments recently between S/G.
I loved the way everyone (nearly!) discovered the truth so quickly.
Maybe she's pregnant (how long has it been since they were together on that last night in Kundanpur?) She could have been hiding this fact from all or maybe she didn't know til now. Maybe like you hear nowadays she's been through the whole pregnancy and not shown or anything and is well into the pregnancy.
That could erase the problem (RM and Kaveri).
S/G would have no way but to get married.
Please continue soon.
I can't wait to know what happens and what the doctor says.
Luv Munira

awwww thanks!! i really appreciate u leaving ur comments and thoughts 😉

well i will update the fanfic in a few days maybe da 5th or 6th! until then u will have to wait!!! maybe she is pregnant or maybe the doctor will say that she is in a coma!! 😉 im not that cruel!!! haha!! all i can see is u have to wait and i hope the wait is worthwhile!! 😳 so do keep reading!!

xxxx

Originally posted by: Neha-Anand-4eva

Thnx for part 1-9 i have enjoyed it so much especially the romantic scenes between Sagar and Ganga can't wait for the next part. post the next part soon. thnx once again can't wait to find out what has happened to Ganga. 😛 😛 😛

thanks for commenting!! i will try to post the next part by the 5th or 6th!! until then your going to have to keep wondering what could have happened to ganga!! 😉

YAY!
I just read it and its so cool!
Can't wait to see what happens!
Keep writing!!
?xXx?
Sunayna

Originally posted by: .xganga.x

YAY!
I just read it and its so cool!
Can't wait to see what happens!
Keep writing!!
?xXx?
Sunayna

thanxxxx 4 commenting!! will update soon!!

xxx

Part 10

RECAP

Saagar: beta, chinta karni ki koi zarorat nahin hai, ganga theek ho jaye gi! child, there is no need to get worried, ganga will be fine!

Saagar has a faint smile! He sits down and thinks of the times he has spent with ganga! (him finding out the truth that their love was true! Him saving her from falling down the ditch when guridya was in a camp! Him trying to put the sindoor on her and her stopping him)

The doctor comes out the room!

Saagar: doctor?? doctor??

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Doctor: im sorry, ab hum kuch nahin ke sakte! Uski condition stabilized ho chuki hain! Par next 24 hours bohot critical hain! Usko stress vaje se unka blood clot hogaye hai, jahan accident me uske chot ayi thi!! (im sorry, we cant say anything right now! her condition has been stabalised! but the next 24 hours are really critical! due to stress she has a blood clot where she was injured during the accident!)

Saagar had tears in her eyes!

Saagar: kya mein usko mil sakta hoon??? (can i meet her?)

Doctor: jee par only for a few minutes, unko aaram ki zarorat hai! yes, but only for a few minutes, she needs the rest!)

Saagar: jee!! (okay!)

He runs into the room! He looks at her looking so innocent! He then walks over to her slowly! He sits next to her and holds her hands!

Saagar: ganga mujhe maaf kardo, meri vaje se tumhara yeh haal hain!! tumko itna stress diya, tumko pareshaan kar ra, aur ab tum yahan hospital mein ho!! Mujhe maaf kardo ganga! MaineMaine kitni zid kari tumne apna ne ke liye! Mujhe nahin pata ke tumko pa kar aisi saaza mile gi! Im sorry ganga! Mujhe tumko is tara pareshaan nahin kar na tha! Mujhe maaf kardo! (ganga please forgive me, because of me you are in this state! i gave you all this stress, i troubled you, and know you are here in the hospital! forgive me ganga! i was so stubborn to make you mine! i didn't know that by getting you i will get this sort of punishment! im sorry ganga! i shouldn't have troubled you like this! forgive me!) (he breaks down, and cries uncontrollably and puts his face down on the bed)

Outside shubodh comes back and is speaking to khurana uncle!

Shubodh: kya hua, ganga theek to hai? (what happened, is ganga okay?)

Khurana: abhi kuch nahin pata! (we don't know anything right now)

Shubodh: aur saagar? (and saagar?)

Khurana uncle: voh under gaya hai ganga se milne! Voh puri tara toot chake! (hes gone inside to meet ganga! hes fully broken down)

Shubodh: ab shanta aa ri hai, to saagar ko batana ke uska pyar ko chupa ke liye usko thora se shaant ho jana chaiye! (shanta is coming now, so we have to tell saagar that to keep his love a secret hes going to have to quiet/calm down a bit)

Khurana uncle: jee! Tum jao usko batane! Voh tumari baat sune ga! (yess! you go and tell him! he will listen to what you say)

Shubodh: jee!(okay)

Shubodh also goes inside! He walks over to sagar and puts his hand on his shoulder!

shubodh: sab aane wale hai! Please shant ho jao varna sabko tumara aur ganga ka rista ka pataa chal jayega! (everyone is going to come! please calm down otherwise everyone is going to find out about your and ganga's relationship!)

Saagar: pataa ho jane dijiye!! Aur kitna chupaiyenge! (let them find out! how long are we going to keep it hidden)

Shubodh: saagar jo hum chaate to hum shanta ko bata de te! Par ganga chati thi ke voh sabko patai! (saagar if we wanted we would tell shanta! but ganga wants everyone to find out from her!!)

Saagar: jiju yeh sab meri vaje se hua hai!(jiju this has all happened because of me!)

Shubodh: nahin saagar! (no saagar!)

Saagar: ha jiju, maine usko pareshaan kara, humara pyar ko apnaa lene ke liye! Aur ab uski halaat dekho!! (yes jiju, i troubled her, for her to admit our love! and now look at her state!)

Shubodh: saagar! yeh kisi ki galti nahin hain!! Tum thori na jante ki aise hone valaa hai! Yeh to kismet ki khel hai! (he squeezes saagar's shoulder) ab baar chalo saagar aur usko araam karne do!! (saagar! this isn't anybodys fault! you didn't know that thiss was going to happen! this is one of fate's games! now come outside and let her rest!)

Saagar gets up and slowly lets go of ganga's hand! He kisses her on her head!! And slowly walks out!

Outside the room – shanta comes with kanchanji!

Shanta: saagar? ganga ko kya hua??? (saagar? what happened to ganga?)

Saagar looks at her and walks off!

Shanta: are usko kya hua??? (crying) koi mujhe batao kya hua? Kaise hai voh?? (what happened to him?? someone tell me waht happened? how is she??)

Shubodh: begum! Hum mandir mein the aur achanak voh behosh hogi! Ab uski condition stabalized hai par doctors kuch nahin ke sakte! (crying) (shanta! we were in the mandir when all of a sudden she fainted! her condition has been stabalised now, but the doctors cannot say anything!)

Shanta starts crying and sits down!

Meanwhile saagar has gone to the hospital mandir!

Saagar: (crying) bhagwan tum mere saath aisa kyun kar rahe ho! Kya pariksha hai yeh? Kyun mujko tarpaar re ho?? Maine kya kiya yeh paa ne ke liye? Kyun nahin mujhe kush dekhna chaate? Kyun mujhe aur ganga ko saath jeene nahin dehte? Mein pyar karta hoon use aur tum yeh pyar ko dekhane ke liye moke bhi nahin de te!! Mein meri jaan dene ke liye tayar hoon uski jaan bachan ne ke liye! (he falls to his knees) Please bhagwan usko bachana, meri jaan lena chate ho to le liye par uski nahin lena! Voh kitni masoom hai, voh sab ki bhalaa chaati hai aur tum uski jaan lena chaate ho? Kyun? Kya kar ra usne, ke usne yeh sazaa mili?? Please bhagwan! Mujhe meri ganga vapas de do! Mujko uski zaroorat hai! Voh meri zindagi hai! Voh nahin to mein nahin! Voh meri sab kuch hai! Meri kushi, meri gham, meri dost, meri jeevan saathi! Sab kuch bhagwan sab kuch! Please usko jald se jald theek kar do!! Meri jeena mushkil hain uske bina! Please!! Usko theek kar do!! (god, why are you doin this with me! is this a test? why are you making me pine? what have i done to deserve this?? why don't you want to see me happy? why don't you let me and ganga live together? i love her and you dont give me a chance to show this love! i am ready to give up my life to save her life! (he falls to his knees) please god save her, if you want to take my life take it but don't take hers! shes so innocent, she cares about everyone and you want to take her life?? why? what has she done, taht she is getting this punishment?? please god! give me my ganga back! i need her! she is my life! if she isnt alive then neither am i! she is my everything! my happiness, my sadnees, my firend, my life partner! everything god everything! please make her better quickly! without her my living is hard! please! make her better! )

………… saagar?? (someone puts their hand on his shoulder) (saagar??)

who is that person? has someone found out about their realtionship?? keep reading and you will find out! please leave your thougths and comments!! 😉

Thnx for this lovely part. i really hope Ganga get's better soon and i think it's Shanta who put's her hand on Sagar and has listened to his convo i hope it's Shanta i really liked this part i hope nothing serious has happened to Ganga. i really liked this part thnx sweetie for posting it thnx once again pos the next part soon can't wait.