Fan Fiction: Armaan (M-S-G)*UPDT- Pg 6* - Page 3

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-Jwalamukhi- thumbnail
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: dramaholic

wow rocking!! Shifali sory 4 not commenting on the other 2 parts..me was so busy aint been in sangam section...so i read all of them!!

you should go into serial bussiness...i mean they are so creative and they just rock! 👏 👏 👏 keep it up!! its soo kool..gr8.cant wait 4 the next part!! 😃 👏

Oh yaar! No worries and thank u for reading all of them.

And no thank u for the offer for going into show business as i am also not that creative!😆

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Posted: 18 years ago
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wow shifali .. great going ... loved sagar's intro ... 😊

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Great 3rd part...Love it 😊 😊 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
#24
gr8 part yarr 👏 👏 😃 just loved 😳 continue soon 😛 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
#25
Awsomeeee.... u shud continue itt
and I think the Mysterious voice is Mr. Sinha 😉
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Guys. Sorry I couldn't continue for teh past days but I will update the new part soon.
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: Pori

Awsomeeee.... u shud continue itt
and I think the Mysterious voice is Mr. Sinha 😉

Well, keep on reading😉 and commenting!

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Part 4 -

Sagar stops in his steps after hearing the voice and thinks that it is the principal and turns around. He sees his Maths teacher Mr. De standing there and smiles. Mr De asks Sagar some questions.
M.D: Where were u and what are u doing here at this time when u are supposed ato be in class?😡
S: Actually the thing was sir, My dads uncles, sons, friends, friends, grandpas, brother, chachas, son got really sick and I had just come from their house and couldn;t go to sleep, kept on thinking about the guy so woke up late and got late by coming to collage.
M.D: What?😕
S: Well, to put it in short, my long lost relative fell sick and I had gone to visit him.
M.D: Looking suspicious asked: What had happened to him.
S: Was dumfounded adn answered that the guy had nympocircupsa of the intenstines where all his body stopped working and he couldn't even move etc..
Then when Sagar turned around to look at M.D, his teacher had tears in his eyes adn said to Sagar that if he wanted any more holidays to visit a relative like that then he would have them and goes away. Sagar on the other hand was really happy and started wistling.
After collage waas done, Sagar collected his results adn threw them in the garbage bin.
When he got home, Sagar tippy toed to his bedroom seeing his dad sitting on the living room sofa.
Tip, toe, tip toe but the lights came on and his dad, Mr. Sinha said Stop adn Sagar stopped.
Mr. S held out Sagars results and asked him as to what that was. Sagar was horrified on seeing his results.
Sagar told Mr.S that if he wants to give a lecture to Sagar as to what I did was wrong and all then he can feel free to but Mr. S didn't say anything except that to do well next time. Sagar to himself was like waht the heck in wrong with dad and went away.

In Mussorie.

The next morning, Ganga woke up, took her bath, got dressed and went downstairs to the prayer room. When she reached there, she didn't find her dad but only Savitri. After that, eeven at breakfast time till lunch time, ML didn't come. Ganga got worried adn asked Savitri as to where ML was and Savitri answered saying that he had gone to the bank to arrange some money.
Ganga: Money? But why?We are not poor, we hav loads of money.
S: I kknow we do but ur dad doesn't want us to get used to all that so thats why he is doing it like a normal person.
G: OK, but why do we need the money?
S: Ganga, let ur dad come as we have to talk to u abt something adn just when Ganga was abt to say something, ML came.

Promo: What will ML say to Ganga?

Edited by *Shifali* - 18 years ago
mango thumbnail
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Posted: 18 years ago
#29
hmmm... i wonder...
can't wait for the next part....

😃
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Posted: 18 years ago
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wow awesome part!, can't wait for the next 1, do contiue 👏

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