Fan Fiction: Armaan (M-S-G)*UPDT- Pg 6* - Page 2

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-Jwalamukhi- thumbnail
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Guys! I need more comments! Please guys!
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Posted: 18 years ago
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sry for commenting late 😳 its gr8 yarr 👏 👏 loved ganga's entry 😳 😳 😳 cont.soon hun 😃 😳
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Here is another part.

Part 2 - Meet Madan & Sagar

In Mumbai:

The same day, at 12:00pm a guy was shown running on the treadmill. His face was also not shown. The after he was finished on the treadmill he went to the washroom and took a shower. And came out got dressed wearing a white t-shirt and jeans. Then he went downstairs for breakfast. A girl we eventually found out is called Naina says Good Morning Bhai. The guys face is shown and it is Madan. Madan says Good Morning, takes a bread, puts butter on it and says that he will eat it on his way to collage.
N: OK bhai. Bye.
M: Bye.
Just when he is about to leave he tells Naina that if Sagar is late today too then tell him that he will get rusticated and blinks at her. Naina blinks back and says don't worry, Sagar Bhai won't get rusticated. Madan leaves.
After that Naina goes back to eating her breakfast.
An alaram clock rings n the guy who was sleeping on the bed turns it off. Then another one rings, then another, and onther and then in total 15 alram clocks ring. The guy finally wakes up and the alram clockes turn themselves off. Then the guy checking the alram clock, whos face is still not shown is shocked and says s**t and gets goes to the bathroom and gets ready while the song "Main asia kyun hoon" from the movie Lakshaya plays in the backround.

This is it for this time guys.

Sagar will be shown next time.

Edited by *Shifali* - 18 years ago
thesaint148 thumbnail
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Wow shifali. great intors to Madan, Sagar and Naina.

very interesting. continue soon dear. 😊

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Posted: 18 years ago
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great job so far shifali!...waiting for the next part 😃
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Awsommeee shilfi!! 😃 👏 👏
Plz do continue soon! 😳
Btww luvved the whole Alarm Clock thing! 😆
-Jwalamukhi- thumbnail
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Will be updating the next part in a bit.
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Posted: 18 years ago
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wow..Jus read ur ff
its kwel and im likin it
Continue soon
-Jwalamukhi- thumbnail
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Thank u guys for u lovely comments but if u want me to continue like this then I need more comments!

Part 3 -

The guy comes out from the bathroom, wears a pink t-shirt and a pair of riped jeans. Combs his hair and looks into the mirror, we come to see his face and he is Sagar and says "How am I looking beautiful?"" I bet I am looking more hotter then usual right?""Well, thank u for your loving comment." At the door Naina who was watching it all starts laughing like mad. After a minute or so Sagar gets irritated and says: SHUT UP!
And Naina suddenly becomes quite.
N: Bhai, who are u calling hot?
S: What do u mean? Can't u see the guy infront of u? Me!!!
N: Oh really! Well if u are hot then don't worry, u will get cold feet in abt...lets see 10 mins as uar results are supposed to be posted today and lets see what dad says about it.
S: Oh don't worry sis. I have a perfect plan to not show my results to dad.
N: Oh really, OK lets see whos luck favours this time.
S: We will see.
N: And oh btw...u r 2 whole hours late for collage and u know who Mr. Sinha is right?
S: WHAT! 2 hours but my clock says 9:00am!
N: Actually, I started flirting with ur clock yesterday night and it went all crazy...and went 4 hours before time.
S: I am going to kill u but 1st I need to reach the collage.
N: U have to take your bike as bhai took the car.
S: Arrr!
After that Sagar leaves.
Naina to herself says: Ab ayga maza!

When Sagar reaches the collage, there was no one in the corridors or anywhere to be seen. He is confused and starts to go inside his classroom but when he is abt to enter, a voice saying STOP stops him.

Promo: Who is that mysterious voice?

Edited by *Shifali* - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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wow rocking!! Shifali sory 4 not commenting on the other 2 parts..me was so busy aint been in sangam section...so i read all of them!!

you should go into serial bussiness...i mean they are so creative and they just rock! 👏 👏 👏 keep it up!! its soo kool..gr8.cant wait 4 the next part!! 😃 👏

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