Fan Fiction: Armaan (M-S-G)*UPDT- Pg 6*

I am writing a Fan Fiction on Madan - Sagar - Ganga.

It is a love triangle between them so lets see who gets the girl.

This is just a character sketch and I am planning to update it after I get some comments.

Characters -

Madan - He is a normal guy from a rich backround and is very down to earth. He is very short tempered so if anything makes him angry he can't control his temper. He is the elder of his brother. He goes to collage.

Sagar - Sagar is a big flirt who only sees girls and only girls everywhere he looks. He is the younger brother of Madan. Sagar thinks that everyone who falls in love end up being dishearted so he doesn;t believe in love.

Ganga - Ganga is from a small city and has got great values. She stands up for her beliefs, believes in god & can't see anyone being hurt. She has come to Mumbai to fulfill her fathers dream adn also further on in her studies. Her father is a well know business man but he wants his daughter to stand on her feet so thats why he makes her feel that they are really poor. He asks his friend to let Ganga stay at his friends house while she is studing in Mumbai. Ganga is 2 sided - She acts with a person seeign their character - Like if someone is mean ot her then she is mean to them adn if someone is nice to her then she is nice to them.

Others -

Gangas dad - Manohar Lal - He is a well known business man but still makes his daughter adn wife stay in a small town so they don't get used to ash or araam.

Gangas mom - Savitri - She understands her husband adn daughter really well and always supports them.

Sagar & Madans dad - Vikram - He is best friends with Manohar Lal & always tries to get both Sagar adn Madan what money and life mean.

Sagar and Madans mom - Laila - She is really modern and doesn;t care abt her house or even family. She only cares about money and parties.

Naina - She is Sagar and Madans little sister and Vikram's angel. She always does what her dad says adn is very down to Earth.

Do comments and tell me if I should continue or not

Love,
Shifali.

Updates -

Part 1: page 2
Part 2: page 3
Part 3: page 4
Part 4: page 5
Part 5: page 6

ohh sounds interesting!!plz continue soon!

wow itz so cool i wish ka main bhi itna acha FF likh sakti 😭 but u r totallyl amazing hope to see the next part sooon 👏

Love Diya 😊

omgg sounds wunderful!
plz do continue! 😃

hmmmm sounds good.

continue dear. 😊

Thank u guys for ur comments.

Here is Part 1 -

It is bright a sunny morning and a girl is shown waking up. She looks at the clock which is pointing at 9:00am and the girl is shocked. She runs to the bathroom, takes a quick shower, dress up wearing a pink churidaar, pink sandels, combs her hair to one side, puts a pink bindi on her forehead, and runs downstairs. Her face is still not shown. The girl goes to her dad who is doing prayers with his wife & the girl quickly takes the blessings of the goddess and faces her dad while her dad does the prayers. After the prayers are finished, The girls dad blesses her and says "Jithi raho beta" The girls face is shown and it is Ganga. After that Savitri Gangas mom asks Ganga some questions.
S: Ganga, aren't u afraid of the god? U always take ur dads arshirwad 1st and think of him as god...Why?
G: Cuz mom, God is my friend and as u said, god can't be everywhere so he sent someone for everyone that they can say as god and I feel that My dad is the best dad in the world adn so thats why I call Shri. Manohar Lal Shah as my philospher, guide and god.
S: Be quiet and once in a while also take the god as ur god too and hits Ganga lightly in the back of her head.
ML: Ganga beti...When are ur results coming for ur exams?
G: Oh dad. I was just about to go to collage to get them as today is the last day of collage.
ML: OK..then hurry up. I don;t want u to be late.
G: Oh by the way, forgot to tell u that the principal called you to Collage too.
ML: OK. I will get ready.

So toghter Ganga adn her dad go to meet the principal adn collect Gangas results. While coming home, Ganga asks he ML if she can go to her friends house for the end of the year party and ML agrees. After they come back home, Gangas mom questions her husband as to what the principal said. ML answers saying that the principal told me that Ganga is very very intellegent and told me that girls like her should get a better education so the principal suggested that Ganga goes to Mumbai to further her studies.
S: Does ganga know abt it?
ML: No...I don't want her to know that we are really rich as I don;t want her to get used to the ash or araam.
This discussion goes on and ML couldn't think if he should let Ganga go and finally he says..."Yes, I do want Ganga to finish her studies so I have agreed to let her go to Mumbai."

This was it for today guys...Do comment.

Promo: Will ML change his mind & will Ganga agree to go to Mumbai alone?

Great part Shifu!..she's going to mumbai(does the happy dance)..YAY!..

great going shifali.

hope ML agrees and ganga's journey of education starts. 😊

Awsommee Shifu(btw do yu mind if i call yu that?? 😳 )
im sure she'll go to Mumbai!if not, how will she meet sagar or madan?? 😆 [:D/]

^^Oh..I don't mind u calling me that.And I won't give away the suspense as to if she will go to Mumbai or not but it is kinda obvious. 😆