Fan Fiction: Armaan (M-S-G)*UPDT- Pg 6*

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Jwalamukhi

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Posted: 18 years ago

#31

Originally posted by: mango
hmmm... i wonder...
can't wait for the next part....

😃

Ya...they are kinda stupid promos😃..easy to guess.

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Jwalamukhi

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Posted: 18 years ago

#32

Originally posted by: dramaholic
wow awesome part!, can't wait for the next 1, do contiue 👏

Ya...thanx...I wish I can continue rite now but I need more comments so tom is a promsie.

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Jwalamukhi

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Posted: 18 years ago

#33

Part 5 coming in about 10 mins.

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Jwalamukhi

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Posted: 18 years ago

#34

Note: I am experimenting with my font size so from now on, instead of Comic Sans MS size 2 I will be writing in comic sans MS size 4 so if u have any thing to say about the size of the font then feel free to express ur feelings here.

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Jwalamukhi

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Posted: 18 years ago

#35

Part 5 -
Ganga is shown getting on the train to Mumbai and her father and mother wish her best of luck. Her father cries while Ganga tries to pacify him and gets on the train and the train starts to slowy begins to gather phase and then Ganga could see nothing of Mussorie except the train tracks on the other hand.
Just then Ganga starts to think about the conversation she had had with her dad where he had told her that she needed to go to Mumbai for further studies alone and how Ganga didn't like that feeling, and how her dad had made her agree by giving her his kasam and when she was asking him as to where she would live, him telling her at his friend - Mr. Sinhas house...Ganga getting on the train and how she asking not asking him where Sinha uncles house was and if they would come to pick her up from the station...
Then she suddenly fell asleep.
Then when she finally woke up, it was just 5 mins before the train landed in Mumbai. The time finally came and Ganga stepped in the Mumbai station. She was surprised to see so many ppl there and see how crowded it was. Then she went and sat at a bench that was completly empty. Some time passed and then she saw 1 old man, and a girl walking on the platform with a board saying Ganga Shah from Mussorie and Ganga got up and went to them.
G: Namaste, I am Ganga.
The guy: Oh, I am Mr. Sinha and this is my daughter Naina. ML told me all about u and how u were comming, I can't believe how young u were when u left and how tall u have become Ganga!
Ganga gets happy seeing so much love for her and then she turns to Naina.
G: Now I remember uncle! I used to come to ur house alot and Me, Madan and Sagar used to play alot! And I also remember me and Sagar fighting too!
Naina: Hey!
G: Hey! I know! U must be Naina! We used to call u Na when u were little! And hugs Naina and Naina hugs G back.
Toghter they get into the car and while driving, Naina shows G Mumbai.
In Sinha Mansion -
When they reach Sinha mansion, Ganga sees Madan first and goes up to him and says Hi.
G: Hi! Remember me?
Madan: No! Who are u? Then looks at her and says, Ganga!
G: How did u know?
M: Ur smile.
G: Ahhh! How sweet!
So where is Sagar adn looks all around for him.
Then she sees Sagar coming and goes upto him.
G: Hi!
Sagar: Who the heck are u?
G: I am Ganga! Remember! We used to fight alot when we were little?
Sagar turns around where Ganga wouldn't see him and then turns back to Ganga: Oh...I don't remember u! Are u the girl that I used to call, Campakali?
Ganga: Yes! and then says! How dare u call me that again!
Sagar starts running and Ganga runs after him and then Sagar runs outside into the garden, Ganga falls and then Ganga trips on Sagar and then falls on him. So right now it is Ganga over top Sagar and they stare at each others eyes for a long time.

Edited by *Shifali* - 18 years ago

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Pori

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Posted: 18 years ago

#36

aww.. the last two parts were sweet

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Jwalamukhi

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Posted: 18 years ago

#37

@ pori: Thanks!

Looks like no one else likes my FF 😭 😭

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bhool gayi! :|

@mango

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Posted: 18 years ago

#38

aww cho cute...i thought they might be rude or something to her...but they weren't!
...poor madan...here too he won't get ganga 😭 😭

btw the font is fine shifali...

great part!!..and no its not easy to guess at all...