FF:TeRE IShq MeiN||LasT PaRt - Page 8

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Manya nodded her head.
M: Main..main teek hoon, Akash...
Akash held her arm, inspecting it.
A: Nain, Manya, tum..
Manya smiled at him.
M: Akash? Chooriyan hii tho thi. I'm fine, really.
Akash looked up at her in the eyes and smiled.
A: Yeah..but..dard ho raha hai?
AM laughed and pushed Akash playfully.
AM: Itna pyar kerta hai tu ussai? Bas chooriyan hii tho thi!
Akash blushed slightly and stood up, walking away. He stopped and turned to look at Manya, who was also looking at him. She quickly turned away.
------------After party, outside-----------------------
Manya was walking in the backyard, holding a rose in her hand. Akash came and looked at her.
A: Manya...its cold...andher chalo...
M: Huh? OH, no, I like it out here, Akash.
A: Tand nain lag rahi?
M: Tand..hai, but...its okay...
Akash smiled and took off his coat, placing it over Manya's shoulders. He held her for a minute, staring into her eyes.
A: Manya?
Manya looked at him.
M: Hmm?
Akash let go of her shoulder, looking around.
A: Woh..woh..I'm sorry..
M: Sorry?
A: Haan..woh..you know, the whole thing..
Manya smiled.
M: Ek baat bathao, Akash. Kya tumne yeh iss liye kiya because you love me yaan iss liye kyunki tum jealous thay?
Akash laughed and stood in front of her, holding her hands softly.
A: Aye, Cinderella...(Whispering) Tumse pyar kiya hai maine. Sache dil se pyar. Aur jab tumhe kisi aur ka hote hue dekhne laga na, Manya, tho doosre rishte peeche hut gaye...mujhe koi dosti, koi..koi ehsaas nahin tha hua. Bas ek khwaish jaggi dil mein. Aur woh yeh ki main tumhe apna bana sakun...
Manya stared into his eyes, tears forming slowly.
M: Tho phir mere saath itna rudely kyun behave kiya?
A: Kyunki oos pal mein mujhe meri Manya nahin nazar ayee thi. Oos ek pal mein mujhe tum mein woh insaan nazar aya jo meri Manya ko mujhse door kerna chahta tha. Aur yeh mujhse bardaasht nahin hua. Lakein jab main apne room aya-aur tumhe dekha..tho phirse mujhe woh MAnya dikhaii dhi..jiske liye main kuch bhi ker sakta hoon...
M: Kya ker sakte ho?
Akash laughed.
A: Abhi bhi proof chahiye?
Manya laughed and playfully hit his arm.
Akash stopped laughing and smiled, holding her hand.
A: Main tumhe kuch dikhana chahta hoon, Manya...
Manya followed him to the outhouse, where he opened the door.
A: Tumse bahut pyar hai mujhe, Manya...
He turned on the light and Manya gasped. Portraits of her laughing, smiling, talking and doing various things covered the whole room. Manya walked across the room, staring at herself in the images. In one she was pouting, in one she was laughing with her head turned upto the sky, in one she was smelling a rose with her eyes closed, and in one she was playing with balloons on the beach.
M: Yeh sab...?
Akash smiled sheepishly.
A: Yeh thi meri Manya jise main oos raat doond raha tha. Woh MAnya jo--jo mujhse inteha ka pyar kerti thi...
He pointed to one her pictures in which she and Akash were dancing, and their love shone threw the whole image.
A: Main oos Manya ko doond raha tha jisne mera intezar kiya.
M: Lakein woh Manya tumhe mili nahin...
A: Aur main ussi Manya ko doondte doondte pagal ho gaya. Kya mujhe woh Manya dho gi?
Manya laughed.
M: I don't know, Akash. Kyunki jis Manya ko tumse pyar tha, woh MAnya Sharma thi. Aaj main MAnya Rathod hoon...
Akash laughed and turned on the music. The song "Tumse Hi" from Jab We Met turned on. Manya looked at him as he bent down on his knees again.
A: Ji karta hai teri har baat maan lu,palkau ko bandh karke tujhe ankhau me chupalu...Manya...kya tum meri ankhoon mein ek ghar sajana chaho gi?
Manya said,.....

Precap:
Manya waited as Akash ordered her ice cream cone. A hand tapped Manya's shoulder. She turned around and gasped..

omg! is that guy karan or om, the one who tapped her shoulder??????

i think its karan...I THINK THIS PART WAS REALLY GOOD...PLEASE CONTINUE SOON

LOVED this part!!
continue sooooon! 😳

Thanks everyone 😃 Omg I'm in my photography classroom right now, and we're supposed to be on photoshop making a portrait of ourself, and here I am on IF 😆 😆

Part 13:
Manya smiled and said,
M: Nahin, Akash...
Akash looked down, disappointed. Manya bent down and waved her hand across his face.
M: Main tumhari ankhoon mein hum dhono ke sapna sajana chahti hoon. Aur tumhare dil mein apna ghar...Itni jagga hai?
Akash laughed and they both stood up, as he held her hands softly in his.
A: Itni jagga hai ki samundar bhi nain ber sakke ga...
M: Aur woh sab jagga sirf mere liye hai?
A: Haan..nain, agar koi aur mili tho--
Manya hit him.
M: AKASH!
A: Ow!!
He laughed and hugged Manya tightly. He whispered in her neck,
A: Aye, Cinderella...
M: Hmm...?
A: I love you.
Manya smiled and rested her head against his shoulder.
M: So you're a jerk, you're totally rude sometimes, you're--
A: Hey!!
Manya giggled.
M: But you're mine, and I love you, Akash...
Akash let go of her and stared into her eyes. He pointed out at the moon and they stood under the moonlight. Akash bent down and picked up a dozen of roses, throwing them on Manya. She giggled and threw some back at him. Roses flew all around, as Akash and Manya stood under the moonlight, staring into each other's eyes, slowly smiling. As Akash looked at her, the song came on,
Naam tere tho humne apni zindagi ker dhi
Tujhko Maana Khuda Tujhi Se Bandagi Ker Li,
NAam tere tho humne apni zindagi ker dhi,
Tujhko Maana Khuda Tujhi Se Bandagi Ker Li,
Teri Bahoon Mein Hai Saara Armaan Mera,
Chaand Taroon Mein NAzar Aye, Chehra Tera,
Chaand Taroon Mein Nazar Aye, Chehra Tera...
JAbse Mere Dil Pe Hua Hai Sanam, Pehra Tera...
-------------------In the morning----------------------
Manya opened her eyes as she felt something fall on her eyes. She blinked with her eyes closed, and opened them slowly. She gasped as she saw roses falling over her. She sat straight up in bed, laughing. The whole room was decorated with roses and balloons. Her bed was covered with roses, decorated with roses binded together to make a border around the bed. Her closet, dresser, every part of the room had been decorated. Manya saw Akash leaning against the closed door, grinning at her.
A: Morning, sweetheart.
Manya laughed and sat straight up in bed.
M: Akash, yeh sab--
A: You know, Manya, tum kitni gehri neend mein sauti ho?Like a pig who can't be awoken..
M: AKASH!
Akash laughed and fell on the bed with Manya, giving her a light kiss on the forehead.
A: Happy marriage, jaan..
Manya looked at him and held him tightly.
M: You promise never to leave me, Akash?
A: Manya, I'll never leave you...unless...
Manya stood up, glaring at him.
M: UNLESS?
Akash laughed.
A: Unless I find someone else, of course...
Manya opened her mouth in surprise, and then picked up a pillow and threw it in his face.
M: Loser!
Akash laughed and grabbed her waist, laughing.
A: Tumhe itnaaa pyar karun ga ki kabhi meri kammi mehsoos nahin hogi, Manya!
--------------------Three Hours Later-------------------
Akash and Manya stepped into the carnival, as Manya held his hand tightly. He looked at her, smiling.
M: Kya?
A: You know ki tum sari mein bahut cute lagti ho?
Manya blushed and giggled. Akash gave her a pretend dirty look.
A: Itna khush hone ki zarurat nain ai...
Manya pushed him playfully as he laughed.
M: Akash, mujhe ice cream chahiye...
A: What?
M: ICE CREAM CHAHIYE!!
Akash rolled his eyes.
A: Abhi aye nain aur moti shuru bhi ho gayee...
M: You did not just call me moti!
A: Did too!
M: AKASH!
A: MAnya!
Akash laughed and went to the ice cream truck. Manya waited as Akash ordered her ice cream cone. A hand tapped Manya's shoulder. She turned around and gasped, whispering,
M: Tum...?
In front of her..stood no other than..Karan.
K: Hey, beautiful...
Manya stared at him, shocked.
M: Oh...hi, Karan...tum yahan...?
K: Meri chodo, Manya. Tum sari mein? You look damn gorgeous, you know that?
Manya stared at him, and then nodded slowly.
M: Uh..thanks..
Karan smiled and held her arm.
K: Come on, rides per--
A hand suddenly covered Karan's, which was holding Manya's arm. Karan stopped and turned, looking at an angry Akash.
A: Haath chodo uska, Karan...
K: What?
A: Maine kaha uska haath chodo!
K: Kyun? Ker le ga tu?
M: KAran, Akash aur meri--
Karan slightly pushed Akash. Akash toppled backwards and into the street. Suddenly, a truck going that way raced over to the side, hitting Akash.....
Everyone's heads turned. Karan's eyes grew wide open in shock. Manya stared at Akash fly over the truck and land on the ground again, blood pouring out.
M: A--A--AKASH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Everyone raced to Akash. Manya stood still, staring at his body lay. An ambulance reached, picking him up. KAran looked at Manya.
K: Manya! Manya!
He shook her, and she stood still. She suddenly pushed him, hard.
M: Maar daala ussai!
K: Nain, MAnya, he's alive..he's just--
M: Chod dho mujhe!
Karan held her shoulders.
K: Manya, calm down, he'll be fine--
Manya spun around and slapped Karan, hard.
M: Mera pati hai woh!!!
Karan held his cheek, staring at Manya.
K: Pati...?
Manya turned around and raced to the ambulance, which had already put Akash in. Akash's words rang in Manya's ears. Tumhe itna pyar karunga ki kabhi meri mohabbat ki kammi mehsoos nahin hogi..
Manya fell to the ground, shaking. Akash's blood covered the sidewalk. A police officer requested her to move. He accidentally stepped on her sari's "pallu", causing Manya to fall down slightly. As she stood up, Manya realized her "maang" was wet. She touched it and noticed Akash's blood had covered her sindoor. She held the blood in her hands for a second.
M: Tumhe kuch nahin hoga, Akash...kyunki aaj yeh Manya Sharma nahin keh rahi..aaj yeh ek patni ka daava hai...
She stood up as Karan came after her.
K: Manya--
Manya turned and glared at him.
M: Haath muth lagao mujhe!!!
Manya raced to Akash's car and sat inside, turning on the engine. She followed the ambulance to the hospital, crying. She reached shortly behind the ambulance, running into the hospital. She stood near the emergency room. Just as she stood, the paramedics wheeled in Akash, covered by blood. Manya could see that he was still breathing, moving up and down in pain. Just as he crossed Manya, Manya felt a tight pull on her sari. She turned around, surprised, and saw Akash's eyes opened a bit, pain searing out of them. Tears raced down her eyes as his hand slipped away from her sari, slowly entering the emergency room...The wind suddenly picked up, entering from the windows. Manya's hair flew back as her sari flew...the song came on,
Chad Na Jaavin...Pyar Nibhavii...
Dunya Nu Na Pyar Diyan Kadran...
Pyar MEre Nu Lag Gaiyan NAzran...

Precap:
Manya was leaning against the hospital wall when the doctors came out of the room.
M: How is he now?
Before the doctor replied, a loud scream from inside the room echoed the hallway. It was Akash's voice.
A: MANYA!!!!

Hope you guys liked it 😳 And OMG plz don't cry nothing's gonna happen to my hottie 😆

awesome update! I love this fic! 😃

awww poor akash 😭
i hope he is alright..

really interesting FF Just Love itt 😳

caint wait till next part continue soon😳

Thank you everyone 😃 Will be updating soon!

Manya's sari:

awww that was sooo cute
i was on the brim of tears

plese update soon

aaaaaaaaaaaawwwwwwwwwwwww 😭 😭 😭
my akash is in pain 😭
i hope he gets better can't wait for the next update i am dying here good t now that he will be alrite
n btw anya's sari was georgous aash would go latto (crazy}over her


ur 22222222222 talented if u make a drama/movie i will feel sorry for ekta kpoor, farah khan, aditya chopra and karan johar

p.s IF YOU DO MAKE ! THEN PLZ HAVE sz srars in it 👏