FF:TeRE IShq MeiN||LasT PaRt - Page 9

Originally posted by: ~~BaBy~AnGel~~

aaaaaaaaaaaawwwwwwwwwwwww 😭 😭 😭
my akash is in pain 😭
i hope he gets better can't wait for the next update i am dying here good t now that he will be alrite
n btw anya's sari was georgous aash would go latto (crazy}over her


ur 22222222222 talented if u make a drama/movie i will feel sorry for ekta kpoor, farah khan, aditya chopra and karan johar

p.s IF YOU DO MAKE ! THEN PLZ HAVE sz srars in it 👏

haha make akash the lead role he is dam hot

still include some famous stars that are pimp rite now like...sharukh khan, rhithik roshan, preitey zinta, ahsweria rai BUT PLEASE NO ABISHEK BACHAN include his father tho

^^ 😆 😆 Akash would soo be the main lead! 😆
Thanks everyone! 😳

Part 14:
Manya covered her red eyes as the sun shone through the window. She had been awake the whole night for Akash. Manya paced around, tears slipping through her eyes. She remembered Akash throwing roses on her, laughing.
Manya was leaning against the hospital wall when the doctors came out of the room.
M: How is he now?
Before the doctor replied, a loud scream from inside the room echoed the hallway. It was Akash's voice.
A: MANYA!!!!
Manya jumped, looking at the door. She raced inside the door, pushing it open.
M: Akash-!
Manya stopped and noticed the bed was empty. She looked around, holdind the door behind her. She felt someone pull her sari. She turned around and saw Akash, bent down, his head bandaged.
M: Akash! Tum-tum utte kyun--
Akash suddenly thrust something in her face. Manya looked down and started to laugh. He was covered in band aids, blood still peering out. But in his hands was Manya's ice cream cone.
Tears raced down Manya's eyes as she grabbed the cone and pulled Akash towards her, hugging him tightly. She cried in his shoulder, relieved.
A: Aye, Cinderella...! Tumhe kaise laga ke main tumhe chod--ow!
Akash winced in pain as his foot touched the ground. Manya wrapped his arm around her shoulders and walked him to the bed. Akash laid down and smiled at Manya.
A: Aye, Cinderella. Rauna band karo na...
Manya held his hand in hers.
M: I thought I lost you, Akash. Tumhe aise khoon mein dekh ker--
Akash sat up in bed and kissed her forehead.
A: Itni jaldhi peecha nain chodoon ga, Cinderella!
Manya laughed as the nurse came in, smiling.
N: Mrs. Rathod, he only needs a few more days of rest. He'll be okay then.
Akash pouted.
A: No way. I need more days of Manya loving me like this!
Manya pushed him, laughing.
A: Ouch!
Manya jumped up, holding him.
M: Oh my God, Akash--
Akash burst out laughing, putting his arm around Manya and hugging her tightly.
------------------A Week Later-------------------------
Manya entered the hospital room, smiling. She saw Akash laying on the bed, sleeping. She tip toed over to him and leaned over him.
M: (whispering) I love you, Akash...
She bent down and kissed his forehead lightly. As se turned around, Akash opened his eyes and grabbed her hand.
A: Aye, Wifey!
Manya turned around, surprised.
M: Tum tho sau rahe--
A: Tum itne special words kaho aur main sau raha hoon?
Manya smiled.
M: Well, my Prince Charming, ghar jaane ka waqt agaya hai ab. Let's go, I brought clothes for you to change in.
Akash smiled naughtily and raised his arms.
A: I'm ready! Change me!
Manya rolled her eyes and threw the clothes in his face.
M: Shut up and change!
Akash laughed.
------------------At home-------------------------
Manya entered the door with Akash's arms around her shoulders. She walked a limping Akash into the living room as he grinned at her flirtatiously. Suddenly, Manya stared at the person sitting on the couch and gasped.
M: Tum?!

Sorry for the short update guys; but I have loads of HW to get to and its almost ten at night now! So I'll update tomorrow after school, like around 5. Hope you can wait! 😆

that was relly good! i have a feeling the guy living room is karan!

that was so cute and yaya u didn't kill akash lol 😊 .

akash is alive 😃 !
fab part ! 👏
continue sooooon 😳

that was real cute cant wait till like the next update ;]

Sorry for the delay, guys, but I promise to update soon!! 😃

Part 15:
Om stood up from the couch, shocked to see Manya. He looked at her up and down, swallowing in her image in a sari and sindoor.
Om: Manya?
M: Om?
A: Okaaayyy then!
They both looked at him. Akash grinned and Manya helped him sit down.
Om: Kya hua tujhe, Akash?
Akash filled Om in on what happened.
Om: Oh, I see...
He stole glances at Manya who was staring at the ground. She sighed.
M: Om...woh...
Om: Kuch kehne ki zarurat nain ai, Manya...
A: Lakein tum yahan kaise?
Om: Sach bathaoon?
A: Yea...
Om: Main tumse baat kerne aya tha, about the whole marriage thing. Main jaanta chahta ki kya yeh vakai mein hi sach hai ki..tum aur Manya..lakein Manya ko dekh ker..
Manya blushed furiously with embarrassment.
M: Om, woh aisi baat nain-
Om: Manya! Ek baar keh ke tho dekha hota iss dost ko. Main khud tumhara haath Akash ko dhaita!
Tears slipped out of Manya's eyes.
M: Kaise keh dhaiti? Tum hamesha mere liye mere saath hote thay, Om. Mere toote hue dil ko tumne kitna sambaala. Aur main tumhare saath-
Om: Tho kisne kaha mera dil toota jaata?
He walked over to Manya, and held her shoulders.
Om: Teri khushi mere liye zaroori thi, Manya. Agar woh khushi Akash mein thi na, tho koi dil na tootha. Main tho..aur khush hota..ki main tujhe tera pyar dhay saka!
He held Akash's hand and placed Manya's in it, tears filling his eyes.
Om: KHush raho!
With that he spun around and walked away, wiping his eyes. Akash stared at Om in pain.
A: Manya...maine usko...
Manya placed her head on Akash's chest.
M: Nain, Akash. Main Om ko jaanti hoon. Shiyad ussai thoda dard hua hoga, lakein main yeh bhi jaanti hoon ki woh yeh jaan ker zyada khush hoga kyunki mujhe mera pyar mila...
-------------------Next night--------------------------
Manya awoke from her nap, yawning. She looked around and saw Akash was not with her. She sat straight in bed and saw a packed present next to her. She opened it and smiled. It was a beautiful sari that Akash requested her to wear. She took out a note and read it.
Manya, aaj tho dil chahta hai ki har khushboo tumhare aanchal mein samait dhoon. Har raat ko tumhari chandni se sajaa dhoon, tumhare har raah ko pholoon se sanwar dhoon. Tum mere saath ho, yeh meri khushnaseebi hai. Tumhari har ek adaa pe mujhe pyar aata hai, tumhari har muskaan pe dil jaata hai. Aaj yeh dua hai meri oopar vaale se, Manya, ki tumhe main apni zindagi ki har pal mein paoon. Aaj ek aisa khaas pal maine thyar kiya hai, Jaan. Yeh dress pehn ke neeche ajaana, sweetheart, tumhara deewana tumhara intezar ker raha hai. Aur itna intezar bhi muth kerana ki hamari jaan hi chali jaye!
Manya kissed the piece of paper and giggled. She dressed into the dress, wearing her bangles. She took the sindoor bottle in her hand, circling it tightly. She slowly walked downstairs.
AM smiled at Manya.
AM: Kitni khoobsurat bahu hai meri! Kisi ki nazar na lage!
-------------------Outside-------------------------
A hand slammed the steering wheel angrily. A car raced towards Akash's house where the party was taken place...
-----------------Akash's House-------------------------
Manya looked around for Akash as everyone praised her dress. Suddenly, a spotlight appeared. Akash was standing there, smiling flirtatiously at Manya.
A: Kaise kahun ki un nigahon mein kya tha
Jo bhi tha bas ek ajib sa nasha tha
Woh dekhna der tak hamari taraf , aur phir mud jana
Shayad unki uss shararat ka naam haya tha
Jo bhi ho,chahat to thi un nazron mein ,
Unke dil ka fasana,un nigahon se bayan tha
Tha shor bhi bahot, aur main bhi dur tha
Phir bhi maine sun liya, unhone chupke se jo kaha tha..
Everyone applauded as Manya looked down shyly. Akash walked over to Manya and handed her the microphone teasingly. Manya rolled her eyes and took it in her hands.
M: Sapnay ki tarha tujhe saja ke rakhoon,
Chandni raat ki nazron se chupa ke rakhoon
Meri taqdeer ne diya hai mujhe tera saath kahin,
Ab jii chahta hai zindagi bhar tujhay apna banaa ke rakhoon..
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A black car sped towards Akash's house, the steering wheel rotating furiously.
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Akash held Manya's hands and pressed his forehead against hers, smiling.
A: Meri ek kkhwaish hai, Manya.
M: Kya?
A: Ke tum hazaro ke beech mein aise hasso jaise phool baharo ke beech mein hota hai.
M: Itna pyar kerte ho mujhse?
A: Na. Jis din tum mujhe samundar se mera ek ansoon la ker dho gi na, Manya, oos din main tumhe pyar kerna chod dhoon ga...
Manya laughed as everyone clapped. The song came on,
Aadha sa wada kabhi
Aadhe se jayada kabhi
Jee chahe karlu is trah wafa ka
Chode na chote kabhi
Tode na tute kabhi
Jo dhaga tumse jud gaya wafa ka

Mein Tera sharmaya hoon
Jo bhi mein ban paya hoon
Tumse hi tumse hi
Raste miljate hai
Manzile miljati hai
Tumse hi tumse hi
Akash and Manya were holding hands, dancing slowly. Akash held Manya's hand and spun her around, bringing her close to his chest.
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The black car stopped in front of Akash's house. A security guard came upto the window and knocked on it.
SG: Who is this? Aapka naam list mein hai?
The window rolled down and a hand came out and grabbed the SG's neck.
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Na hai yeh pana
Na Khona hi hai
Tera Na hona jane
Kyun hona hi hai...
Manya laughed as Akash picked her up in his arms, spinning around. Suddenly the lights turned off.....everyone stood in the pitch black silence......
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The car door stood open as the person stepped out, revealing black shoes. The SG lay on the ground as the person walked towards Akash's house....

Precap:
Akash fumed with the light switch, suddenly, when Manya's echoing scream filled the house.
M: AKASH!!!!!!

WOW! 👏 what a suspens 😳
i really caint wait till the next part 😳
i wont get sleep tonight..i will be thinking about the black shoes and the owner of the black shoes 😆
ill gues its karan 😳

pleaseeee writh soon part 16!

luvs,
Bahar

veryyyy niceeeeeeeeeee Part i love it