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Posted: 17 years ago
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I just realized I had forgotten the precaps for the past two parts! So I will post precap from now as well 😃 And thanks for the comments..they're what keep me going!

Part 11:

Manya entered Akash's room, glaring at it angrily.
M: Jerk. Khud ko samajta kya hai? Om ke saath aise behave kerna...how would he feel if I had done that to him and Roopa?
She kicked off her heels and changed into her regular outfits, opening her hair. Akash stepped in and saw her combing her hair. He stopped walking and stared at her, wondering, Main tumhe kaise bathaoon, Manya...main tumse kitna pyar kerta hoon. I really didn't mean to be selfish and hurt Om or you..lakein main tumhe kisi aur ka hote hue kaise dekhta?
Manya saw from the mirror that Akash was standing by the door. She gave him a dirty look.
M: Mere paas muth aana, Akash! Tum ek jaanwar ho, jaanwar! Socho, bechara Om..!
Akash rolled his eyes and flipped himself on the bed.
A: Aye, Cinderella, relax.
M: CINDERELLA?
Tears filled her eyes as she spun to face him.
M: Don't dare call me that, Akash Rathod. Main oos Akash ki cinderella thi jis ka ek dil tha! Na ki..iss pathar dil ki...
Akash rolled his eyes and flipped through a magazine.
A: Yehi tho, Manya. Pathar dil kehti mujhe ho, aur khud bhool gayee tumne kya kiya mere saath...
Manya jumped on the bed, pointing her hairbrush at him threantingly.
M: Maine kya kiya?! Doosroon ki khushi chahi?
Akash grabbed the brush from her hands and combed his hair.
A: Kya tumhe meri khushi nazar nahin aati? Andhi ho?
Manya glared at him.
M: Tumse acha tho Om hi tha, Akash!
Akash jumped up and pointed the brush at her.
A: Aye!
M: Kya karo ge? Brush se meri jaan lo ge?
A: Manya! Tumhara pati hoon main!
Manya stood up and flipped her hair.
M: Huh! Pati! Maang mein sindoor ber ker tum mujhe apna pati samajne lage? Jao, jao, maine tumhe apne dil mein yeh jagga nahin dhi hai!
A: Haan, kyunki tum ho jagga rakhti ho. Ek ashiq ke liye aur ek pati ke liye. Aur mujhe banaa diya kambakht ashiq, aur Om ko pati banane chal perri!!
Manya glared at him.
M: Acha hua mujhe tumhari yeh side nazar agayee, Akash!
A: Kaun si side, huh?
M: Yeh--yeh jerk ki side! A-a loser!
A: LOSER?! ME?!
M: Haan tum! Main jaanti hoon, Akash, that you love me and all...
A: LOVE? Bhool jao, sweetheart!!
M: OHHHH?! Tho phir itni jalan kyun hui tumhe? Ek Romeo ki tarha dhervaze todte hue aye thay, tum, Akash, mujhse SHAADI kerne!
A: Aur kyun na aata! You think ke jab tumne meri zindagi berbaad ki main tumhe "hehe" kerte hue Om ke saath jaane dhaita?!
M: KYUN? Maine tumhe Roopa ke saath jaane diya tha!!
A: AUR WAHIN REHNA CHAHIYE THA MUJHE!! And excuse me, what do you mean by JAANE diya tha? Main tumhare paas aya hi nahin tha!!
M: Aur kitna acha waqt tha, Akash! Me without you!!!
A: Oh? So mera saath itna burra hai?
M: BAHUT! Its like HELL!!! I'm living with..with an attempted murderer...
A: WHAT?!!!
M: Of course!! Tumne Om ko maarna chaha!
A: Oy, hello, madam! Main itna bhi deewana nahin hua abhi, okay?
M: Oh please! You're smitten to me, Akash! Obsessed! Issi liye mujhe utta laye yahan!
A: Utta laya? Tumhari maang mein sindoor berra hai!
M: Oh? Tho agar koi bikhari meri maang mein sindoor ber dhay tho--
A: Kyun berre ga? Kya khaas baat hai tumne?
Manya walked close to him and whispered,
M: Woh tum bathao mujhe, Akash.
Akash peered at her closely.
A: Excuse me, Manya Sharma, but--
M: Sharma? What Sharma? I'm Manya Rathod now, sweetheart. Tumhare parents bahut achai hain. They just accepted me, Akash. Now watch what I do.
A: TUM? Tum ker bhi sakti ho? You're just a--a midget!!
Manya corssed her arms.
M: A midget you apparently can't live without!!!!
Akash stopped talking and stared at Manya. He walked closer to her as she kept moving back, till she was pinned against the wall.
A: Pyar tho aaj bhi hai tumse, Manya. But honey, you don't deserve it!
He walked out the room as Manya grabbed the hairbrush and flung it behind him. She heard him laugh.
A: Missed!!!!
M: UGH!!!!!!
She walked out the room and saw him walking, picking up her heel and throwing it across to Akash's head. It hit him hard as he fell down the stairs.
Manya's eyes opened wide as she raced after him. He landed with a hard thud.
M: Akash!!!

Precap:
Manya screamed as the bangles cut through her skin. Akash's mother jumped back, surprised. Akash, from the other room, heard Manya's scream and raced in. He saw blood pouring out of Manya's arm and raced to her...
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Posted: 17 years ago
#62
wow...i wonder what will happen now
plz cont
😭
pakirani thumbnail
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Posted: 17 years ago
#63
awwwww...hope they become sweet n lovey-dovey!!!
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Posted: 17 years ago
#64
caint wait till next part 😳

There is some action in this FF,,AND I LOVE ITT 👏
continue soon 😳
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Posted: 17 years ago
#65
wow such suspense luved it keep me alive! 😉
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Posted: 17 years ago
#66
Thanks everyone!! 🤗

Part 12:
Manya raced downstairs to him and nudged him. Akash didn't move a single bone.
M: Akash!
Akash stayed where he was. Manya panicked and slapped him.
M: Utto na!!
Akash's body lay still. Manya picked up his head and put in her lap, shaking him, ready to cry. Suddenly, his eyes opeend wide and he leapt upto Manya's face, screaming,
A: BOOO!!!!!!!!!
Manya shrieked and pushed him away from her, screaming. She suddenly realized he was just kidding when he burst out laughing.
M: You--You jerk!!!!!
Manya glared at Akash as he fell back to the floor, laughing hysterically.
A: Damn, Manya, you--!!!
Manya stared at him, glaring at him. Akash stopepd laughing and rubbed his cheek.
A: Ow, Manya. Itna sakht tapad?
Manya glared at him.
A: Mujhe hisaab chahiye, Manya.
Manya took a step backward.
M: Hisaab mathlab?
Akash grinned and raised his hand as Manya stared at him, screaming. She raced out to the backyard where Akash followed, his hand raised.
A: MUJHE HISAAB CHAHIYE MANYA! MAIN BHI TAPAD MAROON GA!!!
Manya stared at him, yelling,
M: Pagal ho tum!! AHH!! Door hutto mere se!!
Akash laughed and chased her around the backyard, when suddenly he bumped into his mother. His mother stared at his raised hand.
AM: Kya ker rahe ho tum, Akash?
A: Uh..
M: Main batati hoon, aunty! Yeh mujhe tapad maarna chahta hai!
A: What? Nain, nain, Mom...woh..
AM: Akash!!
A: What? Maine kya kiya?!
AM held Manya by the shoulders and yelled at Akash. Manya stuck her tongue out at him and giggled.
Akash glared at her.
AM: Anyways, aaj raat ko party hai. Tum dhono ki shaadi ki khushi mein.
M: Khushi?
Akash narrowed his eyes at her to shut up, and she did.
AM: Haan, khushi. Be ready by 8, okay?
M: Okay, Aunty. Lakein aap please Akash ko samjiye na. Mujhe maarna chahta hai!
Am playfully slapped Akash, only hitting him harder. Akash winced in pain as Manya cracked up from behind. The moment AM left, Akash looked at Manya.
A: Idhar a, you midget!
M: Ayee!!!
Manya started running, and Akash followed her. He grabbed her by the waist, only for his foot to slip. With Manya in his arms, he suddenly toppled to the ground. Manya looked down and realized they had landed in a pile of roses. The wind picked up and the roses blew around them, as Akash laid ontop of MAnya staring into her eyes.
Manya stared back.
M: Uh..move!
She gave him a hard push and he fell backwards. Manya stood up and started walking inside her house when she felt a pull on her dupatta. She thought it was Akash. She turned around, only to find her dupatta stuck on the bush. She looked at Akash who smirked and stood up.
A: Hamesha peeche nahin kanchon ga, Manya.
Manya walked upto him.
M: Mujhe koi shauk bhi nahin hai!
As she walked away, she felt a push on her hair. She shrieked in pain and t urned around, realizing it had gotten stuck on Akash's button. Akash jumped on her shriek, only pulling Manya along with him.
M: AKASH!!!!
A: Oh!! Sorry, sorry, sorry!!
He grabbed her hair and gave it a hard tug, pulling it out.
M: Ouch!!!
Akash reached for Manya but she spun around and walked inside the house, leaving him alone.
-----------------The party------------------
Manya was watching Akash talk to Rehan and Goppu in the dining room as Akash's mother put on bangles on her arm, talking and giggling with a few other ladies.
AM: Yeh achi hai na, Manya?
Manya nodded and smiled but kept giving glances to Akash. He was wearing a tux, drinking wine, and laughing with his friends. He suddenly tripped, and Manya reached out as if to catch him. Akash regained his balance just as Manya reached out, and the bangles cut through her arm.
Manya screamed as the bangles cut through her skin. Akash's mother jumped back, surprised. Akash, from the other room, heard Manya's scream and raced in. He saw blood pouring out of Manya's arm and raced to her.
A: Manya!!
Manya watched, surprised, as Akash placed his mouth on the blood. He let go of it and applied a band aid which AM had brought, rubbing her arm.
A: Tum teek ho na, Manya? Tumhe kuch hua tho nain? You okay?
MAnya stared at him.

Sorry, but no precap this time, but promise to update faster!
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Posted: 17 years ago
#67
that was really really really really good...that was amazing cant wait till the next parts
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Posted: 17 years ago
#68
aww that was so nice... plz write soooon 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
#69
i can't say i loved it cos i more than loved it uuuuuu rr awssssooome 😆 😉 plzz cont. 👏
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Posted: 17 years ago
#70
Thanks everyone! 🤗 Will update soon; I got some hw to do before 😕 😆

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