FF:TeRE IShq MeiN||LasT PaRt

Welcome Friends!!!

First of all I want to thank everyone for liking my previous FF "Hum Tum." So like promised, I'm back with my new FF, and this time its called "Tere Ishq Mein..."

This FF is going to be on a similar base to SZ, where Akash and Roopa are in love (not engaged) and Manya loves Akash. Om, just like in SZ, is aware of this while no one else is. Karan will be in the story as well, being a flirt. Only, they are not police officers, but study in college😃

Manya Sharma: Same as in SZ-shy at times, but brave from the heart..in love with Akash...best friends with Roopa, Akash and Om

Akash Rathod: Same as in SZ-flirtatious, "Attracted" to Roopa, best friends with Om and Manya, hates Karan

Om- Is not aware of it but is falling in love with Manya, always there for her, best friends with Akash and Manya

Kiran and Rehan-In love-same as in SZ

Goppu-Roopa's "Humdard", same as in SZ

Karan- Flirts with Manya, is not fully in love but slowly is being attracted to her...Akash's enemy

They all study in a college called SZ College. They all hang out, except Karan only comes around for Manya (isn't part of the gang). Akash and Karan hate each other because they are both on the football team and like to compete against each other rather than be a team......

Thanks everyone, expecting some comments😳Hope you all like it just like Hum Tum. And don't worry, there will be maaany Akanya scenes in here, but to make it more interesting, Karan will be the trigger of it. I've read many threads where people want Akash to be jealous of Karan and fall in love with Manya, and since its taking too long for SZ to do it, I decided to do so😆I'll put in some Omanya scenes for the fans as well, but Akanya will be my main focus😃So what do you guys say? Should I go ahead with it?

yes plzzzzz
i read your other ff but didn't comment on it but will on this one
good luck with this ff
plzz continue

u hav to rite if u dont im, gonna get mad(jokes 😆 )

continue plzz itss is good storyyy

first off all fabulous idea 😃

goodluck with making the next part😳
and continue soon plss 😉

Thank you everyone!! 😃



Manya was a bit hesitant before entering the canteen. She could see Akash and Roopa seated at the group's normal table, arguing about something. A hand on her shoulder startled her. She turned around and saw her best friend, Om. Om smiled at her.
Om: Kherri kyun ho?
M: Woh...Akash aur Roopa...
Om: Tumhe Akash aur Roopa ki fiker kerne ki koi zarurat nahin hai. Main hoon na!
Together they walked into the canteen and sat down on the table with Akash and Roopa.
A: Aye, Madam Moiselle, samjao isse!
R: What? Main kyun samju? Tum samjo! Om, do something!
Om and Manya looked at each other, helpless.
M: Kya hua?
A: Main isse samja raha hoon ki dance araha hai, right? So we should go together!
M: Obviously...
R: Manya! Main kisi cheez se tie down hona pasand nahin kerti! I got many offers! I want to go with someone else!
Om: Lakein Akash ka kya...
A: Exactly! You're my girlfriend, yaar!!
R: Tho maine kab kaha main nahin hoon?
A: ugh! You know what Roopa, do what you want!
M: Aap dhono fight kerna bandh karoge! Akash, Roopa ko tum force nahin ker sakte!
A: MAdam Moiselle, you're right. Agar isse meri care nahin hai, tho main kyun karo!
He stood up on the seat and clapped his hands.
A: Ladies and gentlemen! I have an announcement! Koi apni date dance ke liye khud nahin chunnai ga! There will...be a date auction!
Rehan and Kiran were seated at a table together.
K: Date auction? Mathlab?
A: Mathlab yeh...ke dates auction hon gi! Jab bhi ek person oopar stage per hoga, neeche vaale oos per bid kerein ge! Aur woh paisa jayega dance ke budget mein, so we can have a rocking dance!
Everyone clapped excitedly. Manya grabbed Akash's hand and pulled him down.
M: AKASH! That's sick!
A: Kya sick? I think its perfect!
R: Yeah, Manya. Yoon sabko patha chal jayega who wants them the most!
Manya frowned as Akash smiled at her.

-----------------Date Auction---------------------------
Manya stood in the crowd in the auditorium as the host, Goppu, introduced himself.
G: Ab shuru hoga auction. May we have our first candidate?
One by one almost everyone went up, and almost all of them got dates.
G: Next candidate, MANYA SHARMA!
Manya's face was red as she climbed the stage. She was the only girl wearing a traditional dress, and everyone stared at her.
G: Let's start the bidding!
Manya suddenly saw a hand raise into the air. She looked though the crowd and saw Karan smile at her flirtatiously.
K: 1,000!
Akash glared at Karan angrily.
A: 2000!
K: 2050!
A: 3050!
At the both time, they shouted,
A/K: 7000!!!!
Silence was in the crowd.
G: Wow!! Manya Sharma, ab aap chunnai gi apna saathi!
Akash smiled victoriously at Karan. He knew she was going to pick him. They were best friends, right?
As Manya climbed down the stairs, she thought of the Valentines day party. How Akash had said he loved Roopa. How he had hugged her...
Manya suddenly passed Akash and stood next to Karan.
Akash stared at her.
A: Manya...!!
Karan smiled at Manya.
K: Thanks so much, beautiful! Tumne tho mera din sajaa diya!
Manya looked at him and didn't reply back. She just walked away to Om.
Om: So yeh kya tha? Karan over Akash?
M: Haan, Om. Kyun ki Akash ke saath dance kerke...main apne dard ko aur barhana nahin chahti.
Akash came over to Manya and grabbed her hand.
A: Aye, Madam Moiselle..tumne kiya kya?
Manya looked over at him.
M: Woh..Akash..uh..
Akash laughed.
A: No worries, Manya. Kyunki dance tho tum mere saath karogi.
M: Aur woh kyun?
A: Because I know it!
Manya looked at Akash.
M: Akash, did you bid on me because you wanted to go with me...or to win over Karan?
Akash stared at her.
A: Manya, kya tum meri dost nahin ho? Why couldn't I bid on you? I love you, yaar!
Manya stared at him in the eyes as he said this.
M: What?
A: Yeah! You're my best friend, of course I love you!
Manya laughed.
M: Yeah...
A: Lakein yeh dekhna, Madam Moiselle. Dance hum dhono hi kerein ge!
M: Oh really?
A: Yep. Its a promise!

-------------------Dance---------------------------
Manya stepped into the SZ gym as Karan stepped in front of her.
K: Wow, Manya...you look...stunning!
M: Thanks.
K: Manya, itni force smile tho muth dho, yaar! Hum itne bhi burre nahin hain!
Manya smiled at him and looked around. Roopa was dancing with a random guy, laughing.
Suddenly the lights went dim. A spotlight went in the center. Akash came out, looking hot in a black tux.
A: Yeh dance...oos ke naam!
He pointed his finger to Manya. Roopa looked at both of them, confused.
Akash came to Manya and bent down.
A: Ab isko inkaar kaise karogi, Madam Moiselle?
Manya smiled at him.
M: Aise!
She grabbed Karan and started dancing with him, sticking her tongue out at Akash. Akash nodded and went up on the stage.
A: Everyone! Let's play a game!
They all sat down and Om grabbed a teddy bear.
A: We pass around this teddy bear. As the music stops, whoever has the bear, has to do whatever we tell him!
They all started playing as "Dil To Pagal Hai" was playing. Goppu was in charge of the music. The music stopped as Manya was holding the bear.
Akash stood up.
A: Tumhari sazaa Manya...is that you have to dance with me!
Manya looked at him as he came close.
M: (whispering) Cheater!
Akash laughed and held out his hand.
A: Akash Rathod apne vaade nibhata hai!


Manya and Akash are slowly dancing to "Humko Maloom Hai" from Jaaneman. Akash held her lightly from the waist as they swayed, looking at each other.
Roopa suddenly stood up.
R: Enough! Manya, tum...

Will Roopa spoil the dance? And why is she doing that? Is it possible she's turning negative? And why does Akash want to dance with Manya so bad? Stay tuned...this was just the beginning...the next parts are going to be more interesting!

👏 awesome!! im loving it!! plz continue!! 😛

WOW.... This was great 👏
Do continue 😃 😳

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amazing, you have to continue!!!!