FF:TeRE IShq MeiN||LasT PaRt - Page 6

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Part 9:
Manya entered the park, hugging herself in the chilly weather. She walked slowly and sat near a lake, watching the birds fly around.
M: I miss you, Akash...
Manya hugged herself as she watched her reflection in the lake's water, sighing to herself. Suddenly, a reflection appeared next to hers. She gasped as she noticed whose face it was...it was no other than Akash.
A: Tho phir laut ao na mere paas, Manya!
Manya couldn't help herself. She jumped up and grabbed him a tight hug, crying. Feeling his embrace once again, she held him tightly.
A: Aye, Cinderella! Tumhe kya laga? Tum aao gi aur main udhar tumhare liye rautha rahoon ga?!
M: Akash, main tumse--
A: Ab koi fiker nahin Manya. Hum phir se saath hain na?
M: Nahin, Akash. Kya tum jaante ho, jab tum Roopa se pyar kerte thay, main tumhe oos waqt bhi chahti thi?
Akash stared at her.
A: Kya?
M: Haan, Akash. Valentines Day party mein main Roopa ki nahin, apni baat ker rahi thi!
A: Tho...tho phir tumne kaha kyun nahin?
M: Kyunki main tum dhono ki khushi chahti thi, Akash...
A: Lakein hamari khushi mein tumne khud itna ghum utta liya, Manya?
M: Akash, agar tumhe oos din patha chalta ki main bhi tumse pyar kerti hoon, aur tum Roopa se kerte, then who would you choose?
Akash smiled at her.
A: Honestly?
M: Hmm...
A: Main dhono ko nahin chunta. I'd let my love go away for the sake of my friendship. Kyunki tum meri sabse achi dost bhi ho, Manya, aur tumhe dard dhay ker main apna puar nahin pa sakta tha. Lakein tumhe yeh nahin patha chalne dhaita ki main Roopa se pyar kerta hoon. Verna..
M: Mera dil toot jaata?
A: Exactly..
He grabbed Manya from behind and held onto her tightly.
A: But now all's fine, right?
M: Nahin, Akash. Kyunki aaj tumhari jagga per main hoon..aur meri jagga per Om.
A: Huh? Om? What does that have to do with anything?
M: Akash, Om...Om mujhse pyar kerta hai!
Akash stared at her for a moment, then burst out laughing.
A: OM?!
M: It's not funny, Akash!
A: Come on, Manya. Don't tell me tum iss liye New York agayee...
M: That is why--
Akash started to laugh again.
A: Wifey, wifey, wifey!! Om hamara best friend hai. All you have to do is tell him that you love me! He'll be happy for us!
M: Teek oos tarha jaise main khush hui thi, Akash? Tumhare aur Roopa ke saath se? Woh un--un ansoon ki wajjah se khush hoga? Yaan woh bechain raatein? Yaan woh din ke har pal jo tumhari yaad mein main guzare?
Akash stared at Manya.
M: Tumne khud kaha tha na, Akash. That you wouldn't choose either of us.
A: Manya!
M: Haan, Akash! Main jaanti hoon mujhe kitna dard hua tha. Aur Om ko woh dard--nain! Oos ne mera hamesha saath diya hai, Akash! How can I just tell him I don't love him?!
A: But do you love me?
M: OF course I do, Akash...I...
Manya's cell phone vibrated, leaving her a message from her mother to come home urgently.
A: Chalo, main tumhe chod dhaita hoon...
Silence filled the car as Akash and Manya sat down. Akash kept giving her glances, but Manya stared straight ahead.
Manya got off the car once her house came into view.
M: Aao na...
Akash smiled at the awkward distance between them.
A: Uh...no...I'll meet you later...
She entered the house, and her mother, (MM) suddenly thrust a sweet in her mouth.
MM: Manya, tune pyar bhi ker liya aur humein bataya bhi nahin?!
M: Ma, aapko yeh kaise--
MM held Manya's hands in hers.
MM: Tune sach mein aaj humein bahut khushi dhi hai, Manya. Itna acha ladka chunna hai! Aur beta, humein yeh rishta bil kul kabool hai! Aray, hum tho shaadi ki plannings ker rahe thay!
Manya stared at her, confused. MM pulled Manya's hand and pulled her into the living, revealing dresses and jewelry spread out. Her father, a woman and a man were looking through everything.
M: Yeh sab...?
The man and woman stood up, hugging Manya tightly. The woman smiled warmly.
W: Kitni khoobsurat ho, beta.
M: Uh..thanks, but...
MM stood behind the man and woman.
MM: Aur yeh hai tumhara hone vaala sasural, Manya...
Manya stared at them, shocked.
M: Oh...tho aap Ak--
Manya stopped abruptly as a figure appeared from the kitchen. It was Om.
M: OM! Tum?
Om grinned.
Om: Kyun? Maine kaha tha, main aaon ga? Lo main agaya!
Manya swallowed her spit as she stared at everything.
M: Ma..!
MM: Sach mein beta. Aaj aisa lagta hai sab bauj hut gaya humse. Aray dekho na, tumne khud ke liye ladka tho chuna, aur humein kisi ke besati sehne ka bhi koi darr nahin. Kyunki tumne heera chuna hai!
Om laughed and smiled at Manya. He came close and whispered,
Om: Itna bhi muth sharmao, Manya. Agar tum sharma gayee tho main kya karun ga?!
Manya looked up at him, shocked. She turned at the door and wondered about Akash.
------------------Meanwhile---------------------------
Akash was driving when he suddenly felt like he had to throw up. He stopped the car and rubbed his chest.
A: Mujhe aisa kyun lag raha hai jaise...main...itni bechain kyun ho rahi hai mujhe?
------------------MAnya's House------------------------
Manya went up in her room, holding her head tightly.
M: Kaise bathaa dhoon sabko? Baat tho shaadi tak..kya karun? Sab...sab itne khush hain. Kaise sabki khushiyan barbaad ker dhoon? Her cell phone rang, and she saw it Akash's number. Manya picked it up from her bed and pressed the End button, sighing. She looked in the mirror at herself.
M: I'm sorry, Akash. Lakein apna pyar paane ke liye nahin main apne ma baap ka dil dhuka sakhti hoon, nahin unke armaano ka...
She looked on the bed where her wedding accessories were laid out. She picked up the bridal dress and hugged it, crying. Akash on the other side, slammed the phone down angrily.
Pyar Mere Nu, Lag Gaiyan Nazran...

Hope you liked it 😳 And don't worry; at the end Akaanya will be together! Just wait and watch how! 😃

loves it ! 😳
please continue sooooon! 👏

nice twist! i was shocked to find out that was om at maanya's house!! 😆

Lolz thankss everyone!!

Part 10:
------------------One Month Later-----------------------
Akash threw the phone against the wall, shouting.
A: You can't do this to me Manya!!
------------------Meanwhile-----------------------------
Manya looked at herself in the mirror, dressed as a bride. A tear slipped down her cheek as she remembered the night Akash proposed to her.
MM: Manya, beta! Baraat aati ho gi, tu thyar hai na?
A few girls giggled and joked around about Om. Manya looked out the window at the moon, whispering in her mind,
Mujhe maaf kerna Akash...lakein main apni khushi se zyada doosroon ki khushi ko maiinay dhaiti hoon...

--------------------Akash's Room----------------------
Akash stared at the moon as well, angry tears blurring his eyesight. He thought, Tumhe itna chaha ki ab tum se door rehna sazaa lagta hai, Manya...kya doosroon ki khushi meri khushi se bhi zaroori hai?
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A few girls sat down, applying henna on Manya's hand and laughing and talking. Manya sat silently.
The song came on,
Na dil ko lagate na hayraan hote
Kash hum mohabaat se anjaan hote anjaan hote
Yeh kaise khushi hai joh gaam leke aye
Mohabaat ke badle mili hai judaai
-----------------Akash--------------------------------
A maid entered Akash's door, handing him a glass of water. Akash stared at the glass, picked it up and slammed it. The glass cut through his hands, blood pouring out. He fell on his knees and shouted,
A: MANYA!!
Zamane se rasmo se yeh dil bekabaar tha
Mera saath dene mei agar tumko daar tha
Tu pahele na itna maherban hote...
Kash Hum Mohbbat Se Anjaan Hote..

A few hours later, Manya sat ready on her bed, waiting for the baraat to come. Suddenly, Manya heard screaming downstairs. Manya stood up, holding her wedding lehnga and ran to the stairs. MM was holding her heart, worried.
M: Kya hua, Ma?
MM: Manya! Dekho, Om!
Manya looked at the Om and saw him, wearing his bridal suit, bleeding. His forehead was bleeding and his dress had gotten dirty.
M: Om..?
Om: (To Manya's Mom) Kuch nain, Aunty. Main araha tha...tho gaadi...someone's car just pushed me over. Woh tho meri kismat thi main bach gaya, verna...
Manya stared at the blood on his hands and body. She leaned against the wall, picking up her phone and dialing Akash's house number. A female voice answered, obviously the maid.
M: Uh...Akash...?
MAID: He went outside right now. He was really angry, and he took the car keys. He seemed like he wanted to kill someone!
Manya hung up on the phone, breathing heavily.
M: Nahin, Akash aisa--kya oos ne Om ko--
MM came up the stairs, smiling at Manya.
M: Tu fiker muth ker, beta. Sab teek hai. Chalo neeche ab..
Manya, her eyes down, climbed down the stairs with her mother. Om looked up and smiled, wondering how beautiful she looked.
They sat down and the "pandit ji" started doing the rituals. Suddenly, Manya heard a loud car tire screech. They all looked and saw Akash burst through the door, his eyes red in rage.
A: RUK JAO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Manya's heart pumped fast as Om and her stood up.
A: Yeh shaadi nain ho sakti!!!
Om raced over to Akash, startled.
Om: Akash? Kya hua?
A: Manya mujhse pyar kerti hai!
Om stood still, his eyes wide in shock.
Om: Kya?
A: HAAN! MANYA MUJHE CHAHTI HAI!!!
Manya's father raced to Akash and slapped him hard.
MF: Tumhari itni himat! Tumhe koi haq nahin hai ki tum humein aise badnaam karo!!!
Akash looked at Manya, his eyes full of anger.
A: Bolo Manya. Sach kya hai!!
Tears raced down Manya's eyes.
M: Akash..!
A: BOLO MANYA!!!
M: Haan..haan..
MF held his heart and suddenly collapsed. Everyone raced over to him, Om calling an ambulance. Manya leaned against the wall, crying.
Om went to Manya.
Om: Kyun, Manya? Kuch kaha kyun nain?
M: Kaise kehti, Om? Kaise tumhara dil todti?
Om: Tho apna dil tod diya? Nahin, Manya...
M: Dekha Om..Papa ki halat...
Om: Woh teek ho jayein ge, Manya. Its just a shock. Lakein tu...tu mujhe sach tho bathati...
M: Om..
Om: Mera dil bahut dhuka hai, Manya. LAkein iss liye nahin kyunki tum mujhse pyar nahin kerti. Per iss liye kyunki tum mujhe sach ke kaabil hi nahin samja...
Om shook his head and walked away, leaving Manya to stare at her father being taken away in ambulance. Manya slowly walked to Akash, crying. He glared at her angrily. She yanked his collar.
M: Kyun, Akash? Kyun kiya aise?
Manya fell down to her knees, crying. Akash stared at her.
A: Mujhe ansoon dekar tum apna ghar nahin sajaa sakti, Manya.
Manya, shocked, looked up. She stood up and stared at him.
M: Tho tumne meri zindagi berbaad ker dhi?
A: Aur tumne? Tum tho Om ke saath ji paathi Manya. Kyunki doosroon ki khushi mein--doosroon ki khushi mein tumhe main nazar nahin aata, Manya?
Manya stared at him and grabbed his collar again.
M: Mere Papa ki zindagi, Akash! Om ki...Om ki yeh narazgi--
Akash pushed her away from himself and clapped his hands.
A: Waah, Manya, waah! Yahan main mer jaoon tho koi baat nahin. Lakein Om ki narazgi tumhe jaiz nahin?!
Manya stared at him in disgust.
M: I thought you loved me, Akash.
Akash went up to her and whispered,
A: I do, Manya. Lakein main un mein se nahin hoon jo chup chaap pyar mein bevacoof banne. Tumne mujhse kuch vaade kiye hain, Manya. Woh vaade nibhane ka waqt agaya hai!
Akash grabbed a plaet full of "aarti" materials and suddenly, filled Manya's "maang" with "Sindoor..."
Fast music of "Humko Maloom Hai" played as Manya stared at him, shocked.
MM: Manya!!
Manya spun around and stared at her mother.
M: Ma, woh...
MM: Khoob sila diya tune hamari vishwas ka, Manya. Khoob sila diya!
Manya turned and stared into Akash's eyes.
M: Yeh kya kiya tumne?
Akash laughed.
A: Pyar kiya hai, Manya. Tumse pyar. Aur oos ki sazaa ab bugat raha hoon!
M: Sazaa?
A: You made me a fool in love, Manya. Mujhse pyar kiya aur bina meri feelings ke baare mein soch ker woh kiya jo tumhe teek laga. Ab main tumhe bataoon ga, ke jab Akash Rathod kisi cheez ko chahta hai, tho ussai pa ker rehta hai!
M: Oos Akash ka kya hua jise maine..maine pyar kiya tha?
Akash grabbed her shoulders roughly, his eyes glaring into hers in rage.
A: MAAR DAALA! Oos Akash ko TUMNE khud maar daala!! Tumhe patha hai Manya, kitna dard hota hai jab tum kisi se pyar karo aur woh tumhara soche bhi na? BAHUT DARD HOTA HAI, MANYA! Aur woh dard mujhe oos ladki ne diya jiske bughair main ji nahin patha!!
Manya winced as he yelled her. She closed her eyes and turned away, crying.
A: Dekho, Manya! Meri zindagi berbaad ker dhi tumne! Oos haste hue insaan ki hassi cheen li tumne! Jin ankhoon mein tumhare liye pyar ke sapne sajaye thay, oon ankhoon ko tumne khoon ke ansoon rulaye!! Ab main dikhaoon ga, Manya, tumhe, ki DARD kya hota hai!! Bahut shauk tha na tumhe, doosroon ki khushiyoon ka? AB MERI KHUSHI yeh hai, ki tum bhi ustherhan tadpo jaise MAIN TADPA TUMHARE LIYE, MANYA RATHOD!!!!!!!!!!!!
Manya's eyes opened wide at these words. She stared up and looked into Akash's eyes, trying to find the love she had the first time he told her she loved him. And she did find that love in his eyes. But that love was blinded by anger and rage...

Hope you liked it 😳 Feel free to suggest some things..and don't worry..it won't be that Akash doesn't love Manya..we'll definitely have Akanya scenes coming up soon 😳

this part scared me pleaz dont make my aakash be so agresive pleaz ur surly kill me

Originally posted by: jinil

this part scared me pleaz dont make my aakash be so agresive pleaz ur surly kill me

Lolz don't worrrry at all he won't be aggressive, how could I do that to my hottie?😆The enxt part will make everything clear😳

Originally posted by: 26javey26

nice part

Thanks😃

Originally posted by: sonikudi1

Lolz don't worrrry at all he won't be aggressive, how could I do that to my hottie?😆The enxt part will make everything clear😳

tha god i just want tension on my head what wud i do do

any way

JINIL: yeh tumne kya kia akash!😆

OMG i love ur writings!
I read ur last ff
and jst wanna say UR AWSUM...
plz cont soon 😉

Originally posted by: rainshine_11

OMG i love ur writings!
I read ur last ff
and jst wanna say UR AWSUM...
plz cont soon 😉

Thank you so much!😳