Mohbat Kabhi Maine Ff Part 17 ENDING!!!!! - Page 3

really cute!! OMG i cant wait for the update! 😳

Plz continue your ff because it is really interesting
and let me know when it starts becaused i find it very
interesting to read and by the wa akanya look hot togather and any way om and manya are just freinds
it is just that om likez manya, manya doesn't like om
and any ways karan and manya also look good togather but akanya\akash manya look awsome togather.

yeah i agree.but it is also good to see how other pairings will look scince we don't actually know who manya will be paired up with in the serial

exactly as Payal put it. and i personally really like Omanya together and regardless of the outcome in the serial, at least its possible to visualize omanya in this Story! 😊

yes but since we don't actually know what is going to happen in manya's love life, it is a good thing we can visulilze what we want to happen. i am guessing that there will be a love triangle but i m not ezactley sure what 2 guys it is going to happen with. what do u all think?

p.s sorry for my spelling

thanx for da replies i will post the next to updates within the next 1 o 2 daiz...

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plz post the next update soon lol its hard to wait! 😭

sorry i couldn't post the update but primise i will do it 2mrw
i was to upset of the new's f sz finishing 😭

and if any1 has any idea's they would want in my ff i would happly try to put them in the ff

and very srry for keeping every1 waiting impaitiantily
like that saying
sabbar ka phal hamesha meeta hotha hai
or is it 😆

so here is part 3 guys ( i promise i will post faster next time 😊 )

sorry it is not long but i promise the next one will be longer


manya fell on the bed in shock
M: OOOOOOOOOOOMMMMMMMMMMM
MM: fikar math karo beeti sab kuch teek ho jayega mujhe lagtha hai ki thumhe Om ko milna chahiye sab hai veha: gopu,rehan, sanju, kiran, roopa aur haan akash bhi vaha hai

manya hesitated when she heard akash's name
m:(thinking) kya mujhe jaana chahiye, main akash ko roopa ke saath mehi dehk sakthi lekin mujhe meri ego ko beech main nehi la sakthi om ke meri saroorath hai.
MM: manya kaun si soch main pargai ho tum
M: ma main om ke paas jaungi usse meri sab se zada zaroorath hai.
MM: teek hai manya main thumhara bag thayar kar thi hoon tum ja kar tyaar ho jao

while manya was getting ready the words she said to her mother kept rolling around in her head
M: kya ho raha hai mujhe main om ki ithni chinta khyoon kar thi hoon kya main om se pyar... nehi nehi yeh mera vehem hi hai

..............afew hours later...........

manya got hold of her bag and she was about to leave then dadu calles her
DDU: manya beta tum vaha kaise jaogi
M: dadu app meri fikar math karo kisi na kisi tareekey se main vaha phoonch jaungi shayad mujhe bus leni pari ge

while manya was speaking a person came in.

s: main hoon na thumhara personal transport thumhe om ke ghar phoonchane ke liye
manya turned around
M: KARAN tum
K: haan main, jab aunty ji ne mujhe phone kiya toh main sara kaam kaaj chorkar yaha agaya
manya looked at her mum as if saying
M:thumne karan ko kyon phone kiya
K: deko aunty ji apki beti apki tharaf kaise kek rahi hai and anyway's usse meri yaad kab athi hogi main toh siraf is ka x-best childhood friend hoon na
manya grabed her bag and hit karan on the back of his head
M: chalay (karan nodded rubbing his head)bye ma bye dadu
MM+DDU:bye manya apna khyaal rakna

manya and karan left the house they were chatting catching up. manya told karan about what happened with her and akash and how om likes her.

manya and karan reached the house manya saw om trying to get up tears fell down manya's cheeks.
akash see's manya
A:manya bhi agi
everyone looked at manya but manya looked at om.
akash was exepting manya to come to her but she ran to om and huged him, they fell on the bed, om and manya had an eyelock
G: mera intusion kehtha hai ki indono ke beech kuch na kuch toh hoga
Akash walks out the room fuming with anger( as in jelousy) manya get's up of om and blushes furouisly and everyone turns looks at karan
M: yeh mera childhood friend karan hai
but karan's attention was in someone else he looked deaply into roopa's eye's
K:(thinking)yeh tujhe kya hua hai karan beta tum is georgous ke liye abhi dil de bete
M:(walk's upto karan and whisper's in his ear)ye roopa hai akash ki girlfriend.
K:(whispers back)thumhai sothan
manya punch's him hard in the stomach
K: OUCHHHHHHH
everyone look's at them and they blush furusily



precap: manya walk's out to the terrece and she be's shivering akash come's and put's his jacket around manya, she smile's and turn's around so that the wind blow's her hair back
A:(thinking)wow manya kithne khoobsurat lagthi hai akash bachooo yeh thumhe kya ho raha hai
on the other hand manya was thinking about someone else


sorry for the spelling if u don't understand any words just reply and i will give you the mening in english

i hope u like it
thank u 😊

enjoyeddd it just put some more partss its reallyy good