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Posted: 17 years ago
#31
THAT WAS SOO good plz write soon and this time don't make us wait for so long lol jokesu can take ur time we understand u must be busy =)
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Posted: 17 years ago
#32
WOW!!ur really good, im also a fan of akanya so i lved it when akash got jealous1 😆 please continue im really impatient so please hurry!!!(sorry) 😆
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Posted: 17 years ago
#33
way to go . u r doing a great job writing this fanfic plz continue and post as many parts as possible for now
lol bye
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Posted: 17 years ago
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fab part loved itt 😳
continue soooon 😃
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Posted: 17 years ago
#35
i was very busy cos of exams plus i as very ill but i promise i will start posting soon n thanks for the comments

p.s i probably change the name but the name so i thought i should tell u so u don't think i have stopped writin and if u have any nice names plz tell me

thanks 😉
Edited by ~~BaBy~AnGel~~ - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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so here is part 4 guys hope u like it

woaw this looks very long

everyone look's at them and they blush furusily akash came in to see what the racket was about and he looked at manya.
A: toh madammossel mujhe miss kiya
M: main tumhe miss kyun karoon gi main tumhari girlfriend nehi hoon ki main thumhe miss karoon gi
A: maine kab kaha ki tum meri girlfriend ho aggar tum apne app ko meri girlfriend samaj thi ho mujhe koi aitraaz mehi hai
M oh please akash roopa tumhari girlfriend hai uske paas jao
A: iska mathlab tum mujse pyar nehi karthi ho
M: maine yeh kab kaha akash {not realising what she is saying)
A:oh to tum mujse pyar karthi ho (grinning)
M:oh akash please leave me alone

A: main tumhe kabhi akela nehi choorunga manya, main tumhare saath hamesha rahon ga (walking closer to manya so that she is leaning against the wall) ek saaya ki tarha, thumhe zindagi ki har kushi doonga aur main tumhari har kushi apni zaroorath banaunga aur tumhare sapno ko apne palko pe sajaoonga, in ankho main anson nehi anne doonga aur in hontoon par hamesha hassi sajaunga. tumhare liye main chand aur sithare nehi launga kyon ke hum humari ek ney dunya banaunga aur us dunya main ek neya assman banauunga aur main assman main tumhe sajjaunga chand sitharoon do hattakar kyon ke tum chand sitharoon se khoobsurat ho

manya blushed and she pushed akash away running into the fields behind the house while she was running it started raining heavily and manya stopped to catch her breath when she turned around she expected to see akash but no one was there so she paniced because she thought that she was lost so she was about to run back when someone grabbed hold of her hand when she turned around it was akash he had his head down and then she saw the rest of the gang running behind him even om and karan akash started humming
A:(saying)
O jaan-e-jaan yeh sach hain ki
Mein apni mohabbat ka izhaar
Kabhi khul ke na kar saka
Magar meri aankhen
Hamesha meri dil ki haalat batati rahi hain
Aur tu hain ke mujhse bekhabar aaj bhi hain
Mere dil ki har dhadkan sirf tera naam leti hain
Sirf tera naam


manya look's into akash's eye's as akash lifted his head up
A:

Mohabbat kabhi maine ki to nahin thi
Kisiki nigahon se pi to nahin thi
Magar yeh achanak hua kya, ho ho ho
Mohabbat kabhi maine ki to nahin thi
Kisiki nigahon se pi to nahin thi
Magar yeh achanak hua kya, ho ho ho
Tu saanson mein samaye
Tu dhadkan ko churaye
Kahi deewana ho jaoo na tera
Tu saanson mein samaye
Tu dhadkan ko churaye
Kahi deewana ho jaoo na tera
(karan came from behind and held roopa's hand singing aswll)

K:Pehli nazar ka pehla nasha
Dil mein utarta jaaye sanam
Sharmake mujhse milna tera
Jaadoo sa karta jaaye sanam
Yeh beqarari aisi khumari
Pehle kabhi to mujhpe na hui
Kabhi dil pe yoon bekhudi to nahin thi
Kisise mujhe aashiqui to nahin thi
Magar yeh achanak hua kya, ho ho ho


A:Kitne hi chehre dekhe magar
Maine chuna hain bas ek tujhe
Har pal ho meri baahon mein tu
Mil jaaye aisi kismat mujhe
Dil yeh pukara tera nazara
Karta hi jaoon o jaan-e-jaan
Mujhe pehle itni khushi to nahin thi
Yoon mehki hui zindagi to nahin thi
Magar yeh achanak hua kya, ho ho ho

A&K:(both swaying with manya and roopa the rest of the gang start dancing aswell
)
Tu saanson mein samaye
Tu dhadkan ko churaye
Kahi deewana ho jaoo na tera) 2
Mohabbat kabhi maine ki to nahin thi
Kisiki nigahon se pi to nahin thi
Magar yeh achanak hua kya, ho ho ho

they all stop dancing and roopa is about to slip when karan catched
her from the back and they had an eye lock for a long time
on the other hand akash's arm's are wraped around manya's waist and he wouldn't let go of her when om's mother came and called everyone into eat. while they were walking, manya was walking with om and om sliped but manya held om and while they are walking back to the house om has his hand around manya's shoulder. when thy reached the house manya droped om of to his bed room and everyone went to eat. manya realisies that om is not going to come for dinner so before she stats to eat she filled her plate up with more food and she walks off towards om's room
M:(standing at the door) can i come in.
O: ofcourse havaldarni au na
M: main tumhare liye khana lekar aiy hoon
O: mujh bhook nehi hai manya
M: deko om maine kal raat se kuch nehi kayya aur ab mujhe bohth bhook lagi hai and jab tak tum nehi khao ge main bhi nehi khaungi
O: (thinking) tum mere liye apni bhook ki kurbani de rahi ho mujhe aisa kyun lagtha hai ki tum bhi mujse pyaar karthi ho
M: (holding a bite of roti with salan her hands) tumne apne haatho se toh nehi khana hai lekin mere hathon se tum kaoge na
om nods his head
manya feeds om while he just stares at her and om feeds manya with his hands aswell
after they had ate everyone was sitting in om's room while manya was sitting between akash and om an om's bed.
O MM:toh bacho tum sab koh ab yaha hi rehna hoga humare saath aur ab toh holiday's bhi hain
M: karan shyad thumhe bhi jaana hoga tum toh apne bhaya ka gussa jante ho na
K: maine bhaya se keh diya hai ki main ek dost ek ghar par hoon tumhare saat, vaise main kaise ja saktha hoon, maine apni ek chiese kho di hai
O: kya koh gaya hai tumhara
K: meri sab se keemthi chiese jab mil jayega toh bathadoon ga
while karan was talking manya walked up to the terrace to get some fresh air and akash followed her. manya stood on the balcony on the terrace and she was shivering, akash came from behind and put his jacket around her, she got scared and tured to see who it was and when she saw akash she smiled and turned around so that the wind blew her hair back into akash's face
A:(thinking)wow manya kithne khoobsurat lagthi hai, akash bachooo yeh thumhe kya ho raha hai tum manya se pyar...
manya turned around and akash as on the floor on his knee's with his hand out and he asked manya for a dance
manya smiled shyly and placd her hand in akash's hand and then akash wraped his arms around manya's waist and she rested her head on his shoulders with her arms around his neck

the song came on
pehli nazar mein kaisa jaadu kar diya
tera ban baitha hai mera jiyaa
jaane kya hoga, kya hoga pataa

iss pal ko mil ke aa jee lein zaraa
main hun yahaan, tu hai yahaan
meri baahon mein aa, aa bhi jaa
o jaanejaa, dono jahaan, meri baahon mein aa, bhool ja
o jaanejaa, dono jahaan, meri baahon mein aa, bhool ja

baby i love you
baby i love you

baby i love you
baby i love you, so…

baby i love you
oh, i love you

i love you
i love you so…
baby i love you

har dua mein shaamil tera pyaar hai
bin tere lamha bhi dushwaar hai
dhadkanon ko tujhse hi tarkaar hai
tujhse hain raahatein
tujhse hain chaahatein
har dua mein shaamil tera pyaar hai
bin tere lamha bhi dushwaar hai
dhadkanon ko tujhse hi tarkaar hai
tujhse hain raahatein
tujhse hain chaahatein
tu jo mili, ik din mujhe
main kahin ho gaya laapataa
o jaanejaa, dono jahaan, meri baahon mein aa, bhool ja
o jaanejaa, dono jahaan, meri baahon mein aa, bhool ja

kar diya deewana, dard-e-faasle
chaen chheena ishq ke ehsaas ne
bekhayali di hai teri pyaas ne
chhaya suroor hai
kuch to zaroor hai
kar diya deewana, dard-e-faasle
chaen chheena ishq ke ehsaas ne
bekhayali di hai teri pyaas ne
chhaya suroor hai
kuch to zaroor hai
ye dooriyaan jeene na dein
haal mera tujhe na pata
o jaanejaa, dono jahaan, meri baahon mein aa, bhool ja
o jaanejaa, dono jahaan, meri baahon mein aa, bhool ja

baby i love you
baby i love you

baby i love you
baby i love you, so…

baby i love you
oh, i love you

baby i love you
i love you…

they were in their own little world as they swayed around but they were not the only ones dancing to this song...

precap: roopa walkd into her room and it was full of flowers, roses with candels there was a card on the shelf with hearts on it roopa opened it

jabse tum meri zindagi main aiy ho meri zindagi ko k neyi rooshni milgai hai aur tumne mera dil choora liya hai
mujhe wapas nehi chahiye kyun k mera dil tumhare pas hi safe hai aggar mere paas hotha toh kab ka kho jatha jab se tum meri zindagi main aye ho mujhe neend nehi athi hai aur mujjhe aisa lagtha hai ki dunya ki sarri khushi mere paas hai

I LOVE U ROOPA

roopa turned around and behind the door was standing........

thanks for the comments i hope u liked it

p.s if anyone read my precap for part 3 it said about manya was thinking about someone else . sorry guy's but i just edited it out but i promise more omanya love will be in the air and sorry for any spelling mastakes my E on the keyboard is not working properly

plz comment n more the comments more longer and interisting 😆

thank u

Edited by ~~BaBy~AnGel~~ - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
#37
loved itt continue soooooon! 😳
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Posted: 17 years ago
#38
still only 1 comment i think u guy's hate it and don't want me to continue 😭
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Posted: 17 years ago
#39
dont be sad i loved ur storyy plzzz contunieeeeeeee
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Posted: 17 years ago
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me is happy now i will cont. in afew hours

thanks for coments

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