Mohbat Kabhi Maine Ff Part 17 ENDING!!!!!

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Posted: 17 years ago

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I love ure ff
I think Om&Manya are so much better than Manya&Akash
Plzzzzzzzzzz continue

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Posted: 17 years ago

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Plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz continue im dying to read more,, lv it!!!

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Posted: 17 years ago

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Posted: 17 years ago

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LUV IT plz continue it is amazing

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Jiiya

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Posted: 17 years ago

#45

thanks for the comments
i will post soon alittle busy now but i promise i will post sometime 2dy 😉 😉 😉

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Jiiya

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Posted: 17 years ago

#46

oh sorry for keeping u wait been very busy got my exams coming in may and just revising for that anyways i think i will end your wait now and thank u sooooooooooo much for the comments 😉

Part 5 (woaw it looks long)

they were in their own little world as they swayed around but they were not the only ones dancing to this song...

Kiran and rehan were also swaying in Kiran's bedroom, Goppu and sanju were arguing (as usual) Om was thinking about manya and karan was thinking about Roopa and whenever Roopa thought about akash, karan's image would come to her head. While akash and manya were in their own little world manya closed her eyes and in front of her eyes was that dream she had about Om and for awhile manya thought that she was dancing with om but after awhile they had stopped dancing and manya opened her eyes and found akash infront of her, akash as about to say something to manya but she ran of to her bedroom. Later that night akash asked Roopa to come on the terrace with her.
R: hi akash, mujhe yaha kyon bulaya
A: well roopa mujhe tumse kuch kehna hai
R: kya akash aur ithne ghabraha kyon rahay ho
A: roopa ghabraney ki toh bath hai
R: kya bath hai akash mujhe abhi bathao
A: actually roopa main tumse yea kehna chahtha hoon ki main tumhari ek dost se pyar kertha hoon aur iss liye humare beech aur kuch nehi ho sakta
R: KYA akash is ka kya mathlab hai aur tum kis se pyar karthay ho
A: m……m……m……manya se
R: WHAT
A: haan roopa main manya se bohat pyar kertha hoon

Roopa had tears in her eyes but from inside she was really happy for manya and akash. She went running to her room with her eyes watering but eager to tell manya that she has found her true love. roopa walkd into her room and her mouth droped with shock she looked up she saw it was full of flowers, roses with candels around the room and on the dressing table was a gorgeous card with hearts around it roopa opened it and it had written:

jabse tum meri zindagi main aiy ho meri zindagi ko k neyi rooshni milgai hai aur tumne mera dil choora liya hai
mujhe wapas nehi chahiye kyun ke mera dil tumhare pas hi safe hai aggar mere paas hotha toh kab ka kho jatha, jab se tum meri zindagi main aye ho mujhe neend nehi athi hai aur mujjhe aisa lagtha hai ki dunya ki sarri khushi mere paas hai

I LOVE U ROOPA

roopa turned around and behind the door was standing........ karan with a box in his hand,
R: karan yeh sab kya hai
Karan walked up to roopa and leaned against her so that she was pinned to the wall he put his finger on her mouth
K: sssssssshhhhhhhhh kuch math kaho roopa
Karan went down on his knee's and opened the box and in the box was a flower with a pendant necklace it was in the shape of a love heart with a diamond in the middle of it
K: roopa will you marry me
R: karan ye sab kuch
K: nehi roopa kuch math kaho savay haan ya na
R: (roopa remembered when akash said I LOVE YOU ROOPA and the time h said that he loved manya) haan
K: haan, haan, tumne haan kaha HAAN KAHA oh roopa I love you
Karan hugged roopa as she just laughed at his reaction and everyone else came in to see why karan was screaming, and they found the room decorated with karan and roopa hugging
A: YEH KYA HORAHA HAI
Karan and roopa stopped hugging and turned around looking down in embarrassment
A: kya roopa tumne mera dil already thod diya ithni jaldi
R: shut up akash dil mera tumne thora aur karan ne apne pyar se mera dl vappas jor diya
Ki: haan voh toh teek hai lekin voh shor kaisa
Ka: voh main aur roopa sh…sha…shadi kar rahey hai
Whole gang: KYA
Everyone went outside and built a fire there akash, karan and Roopa told their sides of the story. They just sat around the fireplace for awhile and just told each other about their past lives. While karan was telling everyone about his and manya's childhood roopa came and sat down next to akash and kept nudging him to tell manya that he loves her. Just as akash was about to say I love you to manya gopu got up and told all the boy's to sing a song for someone over here
G: ab kum ek neya game khel thay hai
S: arrey kera game gopu das na
G: well mera intution kehtha hai ki ajj sarray ladko ne apna pyar ka isahar kerna kai aur sabko apni sapno ki rani mil jaye gi. Ab hum karan se shuru kareynge phir rehan gayega phir main phir om and then akash
Karan sang jab se tere naina from saawariya doing the towel dance (that ranbir does in the movie)
Rehan sang ishq ka kalma from dhan dhana dhan goal
Gopu sang lets rock now soniye from bhool bhuliya
Om sang tumse hi from jab we met
Akash sang jaane kaise from raqeeb
G:ab sab ne gana ga liya ab har ladki apni ankhe band kareygi aur jo ladka us ladki ke sammne jayega vo ladka us ladki se pyaar ka isahar kerega
All the boy's went in front of the girls and slowly gopu said the girls names
First he said roopa and she opened her eyes seeing karan in front of her holding a flower
G: kiran ab tumhari barri
Kiran opened her eyes and saw rehan in front of her holding a bhanu/bear(not real just a teddy)
G: sanju ankhe kholo
Sanju opened her eyes and saw gopu infront of her and she slapped him
S: oye gopu tu inna besharam hega va ki tu inni der baad minnu pyar da iskar karda va
Gopu just smiled in pain of the slap
G: manya ab tum kholo
Manya very slowly opened her eyes and saw two hands infront of her she looked up and her mouth dropped, in front of her sitting on one knee was…………………………………

Precap manya ran into her room crying
M: yeh maine kya kiya, mera faisla sahi hai ya galat mujhe keh galat kyon lagta hai some one walks in the room over hearing manya he puts his hand over his shoulder and she turns around and see's……………

Thank you for the comments and I hope you liked it
Please comment and tell how is it 😃 😃 😃

Edited by ~~BaBy~AnGel~~ - 17 years ago

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Bahar

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Posted: 17 years ago

#47

i liked it very much! 😃 continue sooon pls 😳

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Jiiya

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Posted: 17 years ago

#48

thank u bahar for commenting 🤗🤗🤗
thank u the rest of u for not commenting 😆 😆 😆

if it goes like this i will think u guys hate it so then i will have to make it rubbish and i don't want to do that so pllzzzzzz comment to booooooooossssssstttt my confident 😭 😭 😭

thank u
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