Mohbat Kabhi Maine Ff Part 17 ENDING!!!!! - Page 2

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Posted: 17 years ago
#11

FInallyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy wooohooooooooooooooooooo😆 Pleeeeeeeeeeeeej continue soooooooooooooooon😛

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Posted: 17 years ago
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hi guys i can't wait for sat/sunday so i will post 2day n thanks 4 the compliments 😊 😊 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
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PART 1


SO HERE WE GO (REMEMBER THE EPI. WHEN RUPA FINDS OUT THAT MANYA LOVES AKASH I WILL START FROM THERE IN A COLLAGE VERSION SO MANYA HAS GONE THERE TO GET A DEGREE, AND RUPA KNOWS THAT MANYA LOVES AKASH SO NEXT DAY...)

MANYA IS PACKING HER BAG FOT HALF TERM HOLIDAYS WHEN KIRAN COMES IN.

K. HI MANYA TUM PACKING KAR RAHI HO KYA.
M. HAAN KIRAN MAIN SIFAF DEK RAHI THI AGAR KUCH REHNAHI GYA.

JUST THEN THERE WAS A KNOCK AT THE DOOR IT WAS OM


K. HI OM TUMNE APNI PACKING KARLI
O. HAAN HUMNE TOH KAAL RAATH HI HAR LIYA LONDIA MAIN YAHAN TOH MANYA HO BYE KEHNAIY KE LIYE AYA HOON
M. OM TUM APNA KHYAL RAKNA OK AUR SAHI SILAMATH VAPAS ANNA. MAIN THUMHE BOHTH MISS KAROON GI SHAYAD SAB SE ZYADA MISS KAROON GI
O. [LOOKS AT MANYA IN CONSERN AND SMILES SHYLY] SACH MAIN BHI THUMHE BOHTH MISS KAROON GA HAVALDARNI( HE CALLS MANYA THAT BECAUSE HER DAD WAS IN THE POLICE)

KIRAN WAS WATCHING OM AND MANYA ALL THAT TIME AND SHE WAS SMILING WIDLY O GAVE MANYA A BIG HUG AND SAID BYE WITH A SAD SMILE AND KIRAN TURNED TO MANYA

K. OH MY GOD KYA THUMHE DIKAYE NEHI DETHA MANYA
M. KYA DIKAYE NEHI DETHA KIRAN
K: OM
M: KYA OM, KIRAN YUM KYA KEHNE KI KOSHISH KAR RAHI HO
K: MANYA ... OM TUMSE PYAAR KARHA HAI. POORE COLLAGE KO DIKAYE DETHA HAI PAR THUMHE MEHI DEKAHI KETHA
M:KYAAAAAAAAAAAAAA OM AUR MUJSE PYAR.

THINKING TO HER SELF YEH MAINE KYOON MAHI DEKA, AUR OM KO PATHA HAI KI MAIN AKASH SE PYAR KARTHI HOON, OM PAR KYA BEETHRAHI HOGI
K:OK MANYA BYE

KIRAN LEAVES AND MANYA GRABS HOLD OF HER BAG AND LEAVES
WHILE SHE WAS WALKING OUT THE GATES SHE KEPT THINKING OF WHAT KIRAN SAIN

BEHIND HER WAS SOME ONE RUNNING CALLING OUT 'MANYA MANYA ROKO'
IT WAS AKASH WHO WANTED TO SAY BYE TO MANYA BUT MANYA SAT IN A TAXI AND LEFT AND LEFT AKASH STANDING THERE SPEECHLESS WITH THOUSANDS OF QUESTIONS IN HIS HEAD…
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Posted: 17 years ago
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PART 2 WILL BE UP BEFORE SATURDAY KK
HOPE YOU LIKE PART 1
N SORRY FOR ANY SPELLING MASTAKES
PLZZZZ COMMENT THANK U
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Posted: 17 years ago
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fabulous part 😃
loooking forward to next part 😊
continue soon 👏
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Posted: 17 years ago
#16

Fabulous part👏 but can you plese not use all Caps because it's considered shouting on the net😊

Thank you & continue soon😳

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Posted: 17 years ago
#17

So here is part 2 ( I think it is quite long)

Manya reaches her house, but all the way through she couldn't stop thinking about Om. Manya rings the doorbell at her house but no one is opening the door, so Manya gets really worried, when a hand touches her shoulder, manya jumps and turns around, it is her mum.

M: Ma app, ap ne toh mujhe dara hi diya
MM:kya meri beti ithni kamsor ho gai hai ki apni maa ko bhool gaye
M: nehi maa, maine toh app ko bohth miss kiya, by the way dadu kaha hain nazar nehi aray hai.
MM:dadu andar hai. Main chabi apne saath legai toh isi liye dadu darvasa nehi khol paye, chalo andar mana beta.

Manya walks in and when she get's in she forgets all about om and akash. After meeting dadu and monto (her lil brother) she goes into her bedroom where she takes out her diary and atarts to write about om and akash. While writing she falls asleep when she has a dream.

She see's herself running in a big field. (at the collage campus) when she stops to catch her breath, she turns around and see's no one there, just then two hands slip around her waist and she turns around and it's om!!!!!

O: kaho na havaldarni
M: kya kahoon
O: vo jo main barsoon se sun na chahtha hoon vo theen pavithra shabd
M:[laughing] vo theen pavithra shabd, om tumhari buri hindi ko kya hogya
O: hey, mere hindi ke barre main kuch math kaho, b the way maine hindi classes liye siraf thumhare liye
M: kya thumne yer sab mere liye kiya CHOOOOOOOOOOO CHWEEEETTTTT
O: toh vo theen pavithra shabd manya
M: oh vo, ok here I go (she goes close to om, so close that their cheeks are touching, and manya goe's close to om's ear) [screams loudly]
MAIN MEHI KAHOON GI!!!!!!!!!

Manya is about to run away when ir starts to rain heavily and om quickly grag's hold of manya's waist [tum se hi music in the back ground]
Om slowly turns mana so she is facing him and he grabs her waist tightly and manya looks into om's eye's and they have an eyelock

O: deko manya asmaan ko bhi yeh mansoor nehi hai ki tum jao, kaho na I LOVE YOU
M: om hum bheeg jayenge chalo andar [she tries to move but om has her held very tightly]
O: nehi manya jab tak tum nehi kehthi, hum yaha se nehi jayenge.
Manya puts her head down, and slowly say's…
… M: IIII LLLOVEEEEE YYYYOOOOOOOOOUUUUUUUUUU!!!!!!!!!
?: I LOVE YOU TO MADAMMOSSEL
manya looks up in shock of horror AKASH is standing there in front of her……………………
… just then the phone rings and manya gets up thinking about her dream when her mum comes in the room
MM: manya thumhare lie phone aya tha [looking worried]
M kiska tha ma
MM: roopa ka
M: kya, usne kya kaha tha ma [getting up]
[ manya was thinking that roopa probably rang to tell her that she and akash are getting married]
MM: OM….
M: OM KYA MA
MM: OM KA ACCIDENT HOGYA
M [TEARS ARE FALLING FROM HER EYES] KKKKKKKKKKKKKYYYYYYYYYYYAAAAAAAAAAA

Precap: the whole gang is at om's house when om is trying to get up when manya comes there and she runs to om and hugs him, they fall on the bed and om and manya have an eyelock
G: mera intusion kehtha hai ki indono ke beech kuch na kuch toh hoga
Akash walks out the room fuming with anger( as in jelousy) 👏 👏 👏



HOPE YOU LIKED IT PLEASE COMMENT!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Edited by ~~BaBy~AnGel~~ - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
#18
seriously cant wait till part 3 tis is awsome
no marvelousno
amazing

ok ok simpler words just
lovely
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Posted: 17 years ago
#19
omg i m luvin itt!plz continuee!! 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
#20
please keep continuing! 😉 btw nice part! 😳

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