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Raina

@rainshine_11

Voyager

Posted: 17 years ago

#11

thanx for ur comment...
i no some scences are kinda like SZ
n ill try to make it diff 😊

Finally looking for their waay they reached the university. Riiya met up with Prachi Vi and Adi.
"OMG! i was so worried bout u!" Prachi said
"r u ok?" Vi asked
"IM fine, this is Abhay!" she said pointing
when she looked around she found abhay and adi hugging
n shaking hands
"so sum1 ran away w/ my car!!!"

U go here?Riya questioned 😕

"im a freshman too yea din i tell ya?"

no.......um so u no adi...cool

Dayz pass........
Riya gets into her schedule
her n prachi share a room
n often chat w/ parents in USA

"So di howz india,.....hard?" Rohi asked
"not really.. i luv it!"
"Really?... right....."
"give it to mom"
"hey beta howz it gng?"
"gud"
"n prachi"
talk to her
while prachi's talking she steps out of the room
goes downstirs and walks down the hallway besides the game room.......she doesnt notice but it wet and she slips
.....
n falls into some1's arms
.....................
ahe looks up and finds abhay
"Hey abhay u here?"
"Yea playin here with the guyz!"
"listn i gotta go cya"
He walks away
she keeps on walking
and thinking deeply
wen she knocks someone's books
she helps them pick them up looks up and finds a really pretty girl
"im sry i wasnt payin attention" riiya apoligized
"its k it happens"
"btw..........im riya"
"hey im tanya havent seen ya u new?
"yea i jus moved from USA, im new this year."
"im a freshman too. I ll cya round bye"
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life wasnt very colorful yet
but wat mite happen next
any suggestions?

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Meena

@princessmandy

Inactive

Posted: 17 years ago

#12

nice can u finish the rest now?

Edited by princessmandy - 17 years ago

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Raina

@rainshine_11

Voyager

Posted: 17 years ago

#13

Guyz i think the story mite turn out better if u guyz help
so i want u to add on to the story
n loosen it n make it long and cute 😆
hope u guyz agree 😛

Edited by rainshine_11 - 17 years ago

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Priya

@::Prem$_Priya::

Rocker

Posted: 17 years ago

#14

It was soooo good, I couldn't stop reading,plzzz continue it was getting really good!!! 😃 😃

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Raina

@rainshine_11

Voyager

Posted: 17 years ago

#15

thanz guyz
but i want u to add on
i mean it like write some parts of the story to make it continue
i thought it mite come out better
i g2g i ll continue l8r 😳

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Raina

@rainshine_11

Voyager

Posted: 17 years ago

#16

Months went by n the 1st yr completed
there was a party for the freshmen n every1 was invited
Praachi riya n tanya hung out together
Suddenly Tanya's phone started ringin
she said she was talkin to her cousin
T:sry that was my cousin Abhay!! yea so hes here so ill introduce u to him
==========there he is---------
wen riya looked and shook his hand she couldnt really see cuz of the dark n he had glasses on
but suddendly tanya suggested riya to dance with abhay
A: no thz im really uncomfortable dancing
tanya pushed riya n abhay n e wayz
..................................
the music was playin n nor riya or abhay were talking
..................................
R: so u play n e sports?
A: yea (he said taking off his glasses)
Riya noticed him n said
OMG its u!
A:yea u din notice
R: no not really
A: i don really wanna dance
R: alright.....(they go sit down) Toh tum yahin peh rehte ho
A: yea
Prachi calls riya
R:sry excuse me
A:koi baat nahi, mein bhi chalta hun.
.....................
.....................
R: ok bye
______________________________________________
The next day
during lunch
Riya is walking with Prachi wen sum1 bumps into her and she trips n falls
That sum1 helps her get up
wen she looks around its abhay
A:OMG im so sry, r u ok ??
R: yea im fine
P: shes deff fine
Riya glared at her n Prachi started giggling
Adi:I think she likes u
coming from the door into the cafe
R n A: WHAT????!!!!!!!
R: we r friendz rite?
A: yea
R: n e wayz v no eachother for like a yr n we r buddies rite?

A:yea

R: n v have neva thought of eachother that way rite?

A:yea? I alwayz thought u liked me

R: no how cud u think like that??

A: well ur alwayz really nice n just talk so openly

P: thatz how she is

R: yea

Everyone then head to their rooms.

Abhay is walking around the ground at nite

when she sees some1 wearing jeans with a tank top

He runs up there n sees that its Riya

A: hey

Riya jumped surprisingly n hits Abhay

A: So wat r u doin here? He says letting his hand rest on her shoulder

............................................................ .........

. ............................................................ .........

sry g2g guyz ill continue l8r

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Raina

@rainshine_11

Voyager

Posted: 17 years ago

#17

Guyz i no not lotz of people actually read this but 4 those who do if u could comment I'D REALLY APPRICIATE IT
HOPE U DO 😕
R: well i was taking a walk, until i tackled a duffer
A: oh really ?? who??
R: well let me guess................ u!!!
A: aw.............come on u cant hate me that much
R: wat makes u think i hate u?
A: let me think
Abhay said stopping n turning towardds riya w/ both hands around her
so u dont hate me ??
Riya got herself free n started walking to her room when thunder rumbled
n she got so afraid she screamed n ran into Abhay's arms. Holding him so tight.
..........................and............................... .....................
............................................................ .........................
thats wen Prachi came in snapped her fingers n Riya realized she was day dreaming

P: wat happened?
R: nothing i din realize wat i was doin i was thinking of---
P:of who?
R: no one ........ jus ..............um... the essay due tommorrow for Rita maam
P: or abhay???
R: yea ..what???!!! course not idk wat ur talking bout
Saying that she left the room.

Prachi then used her cellphone dialed a number n said "Yep" what u said was right.

Riya's walking with her books in her hand
n Tanya yells her name.......but riya doesnt turn around......
Tanya runs up to her n scares her so that she squeaks
.."EEKK!!! omg u scared me!!"
"so what were u thinking about?"
"Oh nothing..jus an assignment"
"Rite sure thats wat every1 says, btw i jus got a phonecall n um....i think u r lying"
"Whatz the phone call have to do w/ me?"
"Nothing really, but um-"
"k bye i have to go to the library"

In the library, she's reading a book whle thinking when some1 comes sits by her

when she looks its abhay

"Hey NRI"

"Whats up?"

"Nothing jus finishinig this book"

"Wow u read hindi?! Thats cool"

"It is aint it? I also speak n write n read gujarati, btw that's what im as u no--"
Suddenly her purse starts vibrating n she recieves a text message"

Hey Riya,

v r waiting 4 ya

hurry up!!

-Sanchanya->

"what happened?"

"Nothing i totally 4got i have dance practise"

"U dans---?"

"Cya l8r"

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Tisha

@iLuvU_1

Inactive

Posted: 17 years ago

#18

I would love to comment...
Its great! I love it..so far.. 😃
But i dun understand 1 thing? how is this related to Salaam Zindagi??😕
Like..no Akash and Manya..

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Raina

@rainshine_11

Voyager

Posted: 17 years ago

#19

i no its not really related
but its a luv story
n well
um..................im gonna make someone's parents aakash n maanya
but im still thinkin bout it 😕
sry

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Raina

@rainshine_11

Voyager

Posted: 17 years ago

#20

She heads out the library n Abhay follows her
Shes goin thru her purse wen" **** Where r my keys? .............OmG I remember givin it to prachi. Now what? U cant get a ride until ur out of campus n that will take me 20 mins of walkin!"

"If u dont mind. Mein tumko chhode dhe sakta hun"
"Really?"
"Sure"
"thank u so much"
Riya hugs him n he smiles

"So ur bike?"
"Its jus outside campus."
"What?!!!!!"
"Jus kiddin. Its jus 2 mins away. Ill go get iit"

ON THE WAY THERE....................................................... ..........
"I din no u dance"
"Mein toh bachpane se karti ae rrahi hun"
"Such mein. Lekin tum toh-"
"America mein bhi dance classes hote hai. By the way, mein bollywood dance karti hun, not traditional like--"
"Right turn?"
"yea now keep going...........bas yahi pe. Tik hai bye"

Riya's walking away wen Abhay grabs her hand
"Tum wapas kese ane wali ho"
"Woh mein Prachi ko phone kardu gi"
"Akar woh no aa paye toh mujhe phone karde na OK?"
"thanz bye"

INSIDE---------

"hey sonali"
"OMg wat took u so lng?"
"Wheres Sanchu?"
" U mean Sanchanya" SOnali corrected
"Yea yea wateva"
"Here I am" Sanchanya came in" i was outside but um who was that?"
"Who?"
"That guy--"
"Friend of my other friend. Prachi took my scooty so he dropped me off"
"Ohhhhhhh"
"Hey guyz shut up. Chalo ab mein tumko humare group se milwati hun" Payal stepped in
"Payal tum hi samajdar ho chalo"
Riya n payal headed into a room n followed sonali n Sanchu
"Guyz this is Riya, Sonali, and Sanchanya but u cud all call her Sanchu. These are your teachers forr the the March dance performance. They have auditioned in Jan. and have more experience and will giude you. Now u guyz can talk ill have to go ill b bac by eve but i guess by the some of u will be gone. bye"

"Hey Guyz. Lets introduce ourselves im riya r. singanya. Ive moved to india just a few mon------"

the day passed n everyone got to no eachother.

Riya was called by prachi

"Hey riya. UM.... im sry i kinda left ur scooty @ the park. Cuz Adi dropped me off n i totally 4 got."

"WHAT!!!!!!!!?????"

"i g2g bye"

"PRACHI............listen-"

"dial tone"

Then riya remembered

Riya's walking away wen Abhay grabs her hand
"Tum wapas kese ane wali ho"
"Woh mein Prachi ko phone kardu gi"
"Akar woh no aa paye toh mujhe phone karde na OK?"
"thanz bye"

riya called abhay

"hey abhay"

"riya?"

"yea i um.....-"

"ill b there in 2 mins"

"k thanz"

Riya's sitting on the benh waiting.....

one by one everyone leaves....

"bye riya"

"bye sanchu"

Afternoon gets darker like night

but abhay doesnt arrive.

RIya calls abhay but his phone is off.

All around was just trees n more trees.

Suddenly she starts walking the direction abhay is going to show up.

"ring ring"

her phone starts ringin

"Hello"

"hey riya i got ur scooty so don worry"

"really thank god. listen is abhay around"

"he left to get ya like half an hr ago. he'll be reachin ya any min"

"k bye"

"wait....im goin to start packing ur bag. remember we r visiting ur cousins over the weekend"

"yea k "

"n VI n Adi r cumin too."

"k bye"

"wait ......k bye"

Riya keeps heading that direction.

Walking slowly she was thinking about todays meeting wen----

some 1 snatches her purse and runs off

she follows him

she gets close and grabs him by the back of his shirt when he throws the purse into the woods.

leaving im there she goes after her purse and the theif runs away.

Her purse was silver so it was noticiable but it was deep inside.

When she saw her purse ahe grabbed it and heade walking the direction she came from

When she heard some moaning.

She looked around

n she saw movement

she thought it was a an animal

but it was........................................

Edited by rainshine_11 - 17 years ago

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