Love Story made by -R@iN-

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Posted: 17 years ago
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this is a love story guyz

hope u like it.....I guess its kinda related to SZ but prob not that much....I want ur comments if u like it👏btw..it may not look connected at all rite now but mayb ull c the connection l8r😉

Ring!!Ring!!........" Riya get up, sweetie!"........Tanisha snatches the blanket from the bed and taps her foot..."Riya get up or else you're going to be late for school!"..She opens her eyes and stares at the clock until she sees that she only has 20 mins left. She grabs her towel takes a bath and straightens her hair. Puts on a hollister t-shirt and a pair of jeans along with her perfume and matching jewelry. She seized her abercrombie tote which has all her school stuff and went on. Hurriedly runs downstairs, she gulped down some milk and took a few bites of her sandwich, placed on a pair of flip-flops and started for the new morning............ Riya was almost by the car when someone from behind yelled at her. " I got the keys di!" Riya turned and saw her brother arrive beside her. " Rohit, you missed you're bus again, come on now, I don't want us both being late." Zoom!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! and off they went!

At school...." Class Turn to page #34 Paragraph 3" instructed Ms. Henry," now as you can see.........." Suddenly, Riya's tote started vibrating. She sneaked into her tote, grabbed her phone and turned it off. After class, she headed towards lunch and met her friends by the table they normally sit on, and went to buy food. She checked her phone and figured it was Vibhor.

After returning to the table she looked around, " Where's Vi ?" Riya questioned. " I dont know!" Prachi said digging into her pizza.

" I think I saw him going to the library.." Danielle replied.
" Wow! Vi and the library..........but he has been going there ALOT!" explained Felicia.
"Like, lets go talk to him........after we're done eating!" Riya pointed out.
Riya, Prachi, Danielle and Felicia went to the library. Riya saw Vibhor...."hey Vi," she gave him a hi-5 and sat down with everyone. The table was crowded with Riya, Prachi, Vibhor, Danielle, Felicia, Jacob and Trent.
"So, what are you guys doing here?" Prachi asked.

" We were just helping Vi!" explained Trent.
"No! I was doing my work, while they were telling me bout how there were going to prank call Ms. Sertyum."

RING!!!!
The bell for 5th period rang. And everyone went their ways. Riya, Prachi, and Vi had the same class, so they walked together. " Hey guys I have to talk to both of you so stop by my house after school."

"I'll just ride with you" Prachi said.

After school....................Riya, Rohit and Prachi rode home.
There they found Vi talking to Tanisha.
" So, what's there to talk about?" Vibhor asked.
"well.........I'm applying for a uni in India." Riya spoke gently," and I wanted to know where you guys are going,so?"
"Really? Me and Adi were talking bout that a few days ago.....he has a friend that is going too. His name is ....."

"Really what uni?" Prachi asked." Me and Prachi looked at ........."
" Di, come here!" Rohit called.
"I'll be back......."Riya said and went upstairs to Rohit with his one homework question.

Riya came downstairs....."OMG! Riya he looked at the same uni we did, St. Mary University"
"Cool so we go together......You, me, Vi, and Adi. Right?"
"Yeah...COol!!" Vibhor said and left.

Senior Year at Fairmiont Highschool was ending. There was the Prom, good-byes and finally the day came when they were leaving.
" I have my cellphone, ipod ........" Riya went over her list.
She grabbed her purse and walked down the stairs for last time before leaving, remembering to come back.
There everyone was Prachi, her parents, Vi, and his parents, Adi and he's parents, Riya's parents and Rohit.
..................
All the luggage was out of the cars and on the trolleys of the airport.
Since they were going as a groups or more like bro's and sis' no one was really worried. but just sad.
Sad because they were traveling from Illinois, USA to Gujarat, India.

During the flight, they're seats were close and took turns switching so they wouldn't be bored. Now since everyone's sleeping---------------------------------------------------- -
Next time I ll give ya intros of everyone hope u like it so far😳

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Posted: 17 years ago
#2
if u guyz read it plz comment so i no to continue or not!! 😕
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Posted: 17 years ago
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It was nice!But am confused about who the characters are..Maybe you should put in a chracter sketch.

Anu
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Posted: 17 years ago
#4

K.. Its good i started to kinda find out who the characters were.... so u can continue on :P

Edited by princessmandy - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Hey just a small choti request, it u dont mind could u put up a charcter sketch too! Pretty plz as I love it so far!
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Posted: 17 years ago
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It's really good and i'm starting to get a feeling of what's going to happen next 😃
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Lets have the Intro of all-

Riya: Girl born in India but came to America at the age of 7 and lived in America ever since. She visited India and is in daily touch with her cousins but is a NRI.... She has dark brown eyes, black hair, normal face-not long and not round, pretty peach skin tone and has an american accent. Fluent with Gujarati but not hindi. Loves Bollywood music. Always dressed nicely with the Aeropostale, Abercrombie and Hollister clothing. Along with jewelry .And is always comfortable around anyone. B-day:Oct 16. 18 yrs old. 5.8 ft


Prachi: Born in America. Knows Riya from 5th grade. Prachi n Riya=BFF. 18 yrs old. B-day: May 18. Has a crush on Trent since 10th grade but isn't always comfortable around everyone.Her dressing is similar to Riya. Wears make-up. And is dark brown hair with dark brown eyes. Peacher skin tone than Riya. 5.6ft

Vi(Vibhor)- Prachi and Riya's buddy since 8th grade. Real supportive. Knows how to treat girls/women respectively. Has dark brown hair with brown streaks. 19 yrs old. B-day: Feb 22. thou yr older same grade as Prachi n Riya. Some wud say real cutie.5.11ft



Adi(Aditya)- 20 yrs old. B-day: March 7. Soph. in university. Lives in India but is visiting for a break and is now returning with everyone else. Kinda annoying but not that bad once you get to know him. Riya's neighbor. Dark brown hair with really pretty blue eyes. About 6 ft.



Tanisha- Riya's mom.

Rajeev- Riya's dad

Rohit- Riya's bro. 15 yrs old. 5.6ft. Really ANNOYING. but trys to be the man when dad's away on work business.



Hope u like it as i continue 😕
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Posted: 17 years ago
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plz guys i no lots of people r reading ths so if u are plz comment 😭 i jus want a comment, correction or a suggestion
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Posted: 17 years ago
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They reach India.................................
so they're in the customs when..........Vi and Prachi get out before Adi and Riya, and went to get coffee for everyone.
Adi didnt see anyone around so he texted Vi and wrote:

Hey v
k dude i gotta go 2 my g-ma's house 2 meet her
ill c ya @ the uni
I put the map in Prachi's purse

l8r
Adi


Vi felt his phone vibrate, read his message n told prachi.
By now Riya was with them
They headed towards the buses.
They got on the travel agency to Gujarat from Delhi.
It was afternoon and they were ready for the journey.

Later that evening.......

They stopped at a station for 5 mins...Prachi n Vi were sleeping.
Riya grabbed her purse got off and went to buy some food. She bought some water and snacks.
By the time she got back.........the bus was leaving she ran after it yelled for it to stop
but......................................................... ............................................................ ..

She got her cellphone out of her purse and called Prachi..."this number is ................." she quickly dialed Vi's and ir ringed..........."RING"................Vi picked up his phone and .......

"Hello......Who's there?"



"Its ME! RIYA!!!!!!!!!!!"



"wat nonsense"

he turns the phone off n goes to sleep



Riya decides to go bac to the store and will call Vi at dawn...

At morning she starts walking the direction the bus left and has informed Vi

Vi said he n Prachi will wait for her by adi's g-ma's house.



Riya's walkin wen a car passes by

she asks for a lift.

It was 3 college boys.

the driver says yes.

She hops in.



Suddenly they stop the car

one of them holds her hand......

She's fighting them off wen another car comes by.

stops and out steps a boy..........

he starts fighting n helps Riya out.

.............



....................



those guys run away...

"hey, im abhay!" the boy says



"btw ur welcome."



"thanz"Riya says she goes and picks up her purse lying by were the car was that flew away



"do u wan a ride" Abhay asks

"Where are u going?"



"Gujarat, I am a new stud for St. Mary University" Riya explains



"Really?" He says, " so were r u cumin from?''



"um............ USA"



"Cool.........uh an american that explains how u were w/ those guys"



"excuse me i din need ur help. I cud have handled it jus fine."



"really?"



"Yea?!"

Just like this they drive thru and arrive at a dhabaa in the middle of the jungle.

They eat and she pays sayin for being there and the ride.

They both get fresh and walk around for a few mins before the long drive.

They see the near by river and on there was a wood bridge.

The river wasn't very deep but the bridge was for sitting and viewing the sunset

They talked and really kinda got to no each other

He grabs her hand n

?
?
?
?

..............................

Pulls her down with him into the water

Soakin wet she starts screamin n throwin water at eachother



Meanwhile this theif finds a key at the dhaba were abhay n riya were eating.

The key belonged to Abhay's car

it had dropped wen he was getting up out of his sweater pocket.



They return to the dhaba to leave and find their car GONE

...........................

Abhay gets frustrated

" what bullshit?"



Riya calms him down and get a ride from this truck driver eating at the dhaba

the truck driver is going the same direction until a ppoint

Happily they agree

n r grateful to have a ride until there

......................

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During the ride

Riya is very sleepy

so she grabs Abhay's arm and rests her head onto his shoulder

...........................

............................

Abhay has a weird feeling n lets his hand free and makes her tilt to the other side

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Cute..hehe, alot of the scenes in this part were in SZ already..

but I don't get how this is related to SZ yet..

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