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Posted: 10 years ago
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Guys i have updated this work with great pain

You know exam time and ma's shout is heard even when i am upstairs so guys am really sorry

But don't worry after the exams you will be getting double updates becoz i have finished writing the whole

Only this typing is hard!!!![puppy look]

Vagaries of mind

Randhir was amazed by the love that sanyu was showering at his son

But he was pulled out of his thoughts by sanyu's click of finger

S:hey you there?

R:yeah come !!!!

While they were walking towards the canteen ...there was an awkward silence hanging in the air

Both of them felt each other's uneasiness and...

S[to herself]:what should i do ? why is this jerk not talking to me?

R:to himself: why did i call this girl to accompany?..wait i will talk to her first

S:i will talk to him then

Sanyu brain: why? let him do that ..its him who asked you to accompany him!

Sanyu heart: but you know am just trying to break this silence!!!!

Sanyu brain :what to break the silence ..you have to break his nose first

Sanyu heart :why should i?

S brain: remember his review...

S regaining the control : shut up !you are making me crazy

Rd:what ? am sorry if i am making you crazy?? Are you still irritated wd me ?

S:sorry i have to go!!!

Rd: what is wrong with this girl?

Sanyukta come back but sanyu disappeared round the corridor rddoesnt felt comfy to drink the coffee so he went back to the room while thinking about'her'

A:daddy where is she?

Rd:which she ?

A:i mean sanyu

Rd:sanyu getting irritated that even her son has scored a part in her heart but he was still a stranger to her heart

A:dad tell me

Rd:she went

A:what? Did you said anything to her to upset her

Rd no way horrified at the thought

A:okay i should believe you then but...

Aaron spotted sanyu's clutch near his bed

A: dad

Rd :what is it? Aaron ,where did you get all these idiotic ideas?

A:dad,sanyu left her clutch here

Rd:"clutch?

A:hmm,give it back to her!

Rd; yeah but if the nurse comes here tell him that i will come in half an hour

A:okay tell my thank you to her

Rd;okay

Rd [to himself]: thanku ..imitating aaron's face in half anger and half happy

A:bye dad

Meanwhile

At mamma sophie

Kaustu : hey where were you?

S: my phone was in the clutch ...my clutch

Shit!

Kaustu:what happend?

S:i kept my clutch in the aaron's bed

K:its easy to get ...why are you tensed

S:yeah why should i?

S[to herself]:i am don't want to meet him ...whenever i see him i feel a burning sensation!

I don't want to interfere in his life ..he has got a family ..i should not see him again

K;sanyu ..what are you thinking ?

K slapped her hard in her arm and sanyu jolted to the pain

S;what the hell?

Are you nuts?

K;i will if i am going to see you standing motionless at times

S:whats your problem ! move away from my way!!!!

K:whats with this girl?

Sanyu in the kitchen

Sam:hey sanyu just check my new veggie soup

S went near the drawer to take her apron and was trying her level best to make a knot behind her

While sam [the youngest chef in the restaurant] who always get excited to make sanyu eat his recipes

Which was all the time a visual treat as well as mouth watering

Sam creeped behind sanyu but sanyu turned absent mindly

And there was ..down it lay the superb and tasty veggie soup

Sam;no

Sanyu's white apron now had orange and red stains

Sanyu was already irritated by rd and now this!!!!

She was never into hysterics but at the moment she felt like that !!!

She was shouting to herself and moving out of the cabin while k pushed her outside

K:what is your problem ?

S:hell wd you

And ran out of the restaurant

While rd who came there to return the purse was hell shocked

to see sanyu wearing those stained apron

and shouting at everyone in the restaurant !!!!!!!

rd:snayukta wait there!!!!

But sanyu was deaf to all

She straightly got into the car and drove off

Leaving rd doubting his own senses!!!!

Poor rd he didn t know he was the rootcause for all the dramas

He went inside

While kaustuki was trying to call sanyu

Suddenly th e mobile started ringing in t he the clutch

Rd was butterly startled by the sound

rihanna-love the way you lie sang with out a stop creating imbalance in his walking

rd took the phone carefully from the clutch

he tried to read the name that was flashing on the screen

rd-kau..st..u..ki

suddenly kaustuki heard her name being called out she suddenly turned and

saw rd standing at theback

k-you called me!

rd-no

k-then! Hey hae sanyu's phone !

rd suddenly rememberin gthe purpose regained his mental power

and said yes

k- oh she told me that she left at your plce

rd-can you just give this back to her!

k-where? Giving him a sideway grin

rd-shewastherewithme..imeanwithmyson!

k-sorry i have somany works over here ...so if you can ..only if you can ..drop this clutch at her plce..

its quite near

rd was waiting so much for that plee!

rd-okay, can yiu give me the address

k-yeah!

After getting her address

rd bid kaustu

and he drove the car with happiness jolting in him

he dove to apartment according to kaustu directions

he parked the car in the parking lot and got down with multiple songs brewing in him

he ran his fingers through his hair and kept his collars perfectly

while walking to the front door

he smelled his mouth twice

but he was so surprised that he always checked him whenever he was aroung her

why is it so?

I am falling for her so deeply ?

No,you should think about your son

Okay!!!!!!!!

So he left the clutch near the door before turning back to check on the tiny lights playing in the room upstairs !!!

He walked out unaware of the two eyes watching his moves

Thats all guys

Will update soon and pray for me !!!!

Love ya gowri!!!

If i have missed in pm ing someone

Am really

Edited by candyfreak - 10 years ago
Nitra thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
#52
Its ok concentrates on ur exams and this update is awsm...all the best
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Posted: 10 years ago
#53
Gowri their date was funny.. N a cute update.. Loved it. Thanks for pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
#54
Oopsy..
All the best for ur exams..
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Posted: 10 years ago
#55
It was nyc
N don't be sorry
Its okay
Update whenever tym permits

The update was superb
Sandhir r confused with their feelings
Sanyu hell irritated bcz of rd
Shouting on everyone

Rd going to sanyu house to give her clutch back
Sanyu thinks rd has a family

All the best

Luv u
Keep smiling
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Posted: 10 years ago
#56
the update was super cute! their date date and confusion and clutch.
it all shaped up pretty well, atleast we can hope so ;)
I loved it. and update whenever you can and all the best for your exams.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#57

Originally posted by: samridhigoodiez

Gowri their date was funny.. N a cute update.. Loved it. Thanks for pm


thank you!!!!!😉
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Posted: 10 years ago
#58

Originally posted by: Nitra

Its ok concentrates on ur exams and this update is awsm...all the best

thank you 😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
#59

Originally posted by: newmoon18

It was nyc
N don't be sorry
Its okay
Update whenever tym permits

The update was superb
Sandhir r confused with their feelings
Sanyu hell irritated bcz of rd
Shouting on everyone

Rd going to sanyu house to give her clutch back
Sanyu thinks rd has a family

All the best

Luv u
Keep smiling

helloo,long comments dene walli ladki!!!!! "winks"
i just love to read long comments ..
.and thank you for giving me
chances to read like that
love ya
gowri
CaLYpSoAmante thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
#60

Originally posted by: newmoon18

It was nyc
N don't be sorry
Its okay
Update whenever tym permits

The update was superb
Sandhir r confused with their feelings
Sanyu hell irritated bcz of rd
Shouting on everyone

Rd going to sanyu house to give her clutch back
Sanyu thinks rd has a family

All the best

Luv u
Keep smiling

thank you...long comments dene walle ladki!!!!!
love ya
gowri😃

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