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Posted: 10 years ago
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Guys am back with the next part ..am updating it in 2 parts..so love ya guys

A LONG AND LONELY ROAD

She saw him standing there in a crispy black shirt and a denim jeans talking to someone in his serene voice which seemed to be lullaby for her!
Suddenly he turned around and saw her looking at him
"Sanyukta"...saying he cut the phone abruptly
"Hey ,you here?"...with a tone of disbelief
"yeah,for the past one hour I was here .."said Randhir and added "waiting for you"
"me"...again with a tone giving an impression that she had a eaten the worst pudding in her life.
"yes you"
why is it so?
I was arranging a birthday party at my home
yours?
of course not, Aaron's birthday party
oh I should have guessed!
so he wanted to call you for the party
huh
will you come for the party

for a moment she thought he was going to kneel down and propose her
but she was jerked out of her dreams by his voice

She surely wanted to go to the party but she never intended to meet him again...not after the havoc created by him in her heart!!

btw it is on nxt Friday
She acted like she was in deep thoughts while she was trying her level best to wriggle out from this
Friday?...Oh god I am supposed to serve food at one of my clients party ..so I guess I won't be able to attend the party..."She said in a full stretch


But kaustuki who was watching their encounter was surprised when when sanyuu lied.
So kausatu interfered the convo
"Excuse me, Sanyu I just got the call from the client that party was shifted to Thursday."
"What?"...asked a perplexed Sanyu
"Yes,Nice day to you ,Randhir"...said an innocent k
"nice? Best!"...with a tang of love sweeping in.
So?
Then perfect!...giving Randhir thumps up!
Oh really,then the time is Friday 7 at my place
okay
can I have your number
oh sure
8373838289
yeah got it
I will text you the address.
then it is fixed
yeah ,then bye
Bye
Sanyu heaved a sigh of relief when she saw him getting into the car
😆
Edited by CaLYpSoAmante - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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"Party@ his place?To see him again...no way!"
She walked straight to the kitchen trying to sort out all her doubts.
She looked up and saw kaustu standing
there with a look of victory plastered on her face.
"Which client saanyuukta ?"...asked kaustu
"you knew that I was trying to get out from that party,but you spoiled it,idiot"...barked back
"Sanyuu lets o back to your home"..asked kaustyu
before she could react to the situation ,she was pulled inside the car
She didnt protest becxause she was elated seeing that her bestie was in talking terms with her...THANK GOD!!!!!!!!
Kaustu drove to the flat and waited for Sanyu to open the front door...!!
"Now we are here,just tell me what is going in your stupoid mind !"...asked a furious kaustu hovering above Sanyu
"Calm down baby because I am okay I mean am absolutely fine "...lied Sanyu
"really sanyukta! I had been with you for the last 20 years and you think that I will just believe your bullshit made up stories"...with a tang of enrage!!!
"what do you mean kaustu, ?'..asked Sanyu choking on her words
"plz sanyu I mean no harm to you,you are my only family and if you are not disclosing your heart then I think am not trustworthy_...asked kautu looking everywhere but her face
"No,Dont say that kaustu .I know am a little over reacting or being a bit of drama queen..."she said
but I will tell you every single thng !you know Randhir right?
for that kaustuh nodded
"I dont know whats happening to me ,I think I have fallen for him'"
fallen for him?"...said Kaustu with an exasparated voice
within a few weaks ?This must be an infatuation"

The last thing she wanted to hear came as a blow to her ..INFACTUATION
no way ... her pure love was again misjudged!!Wait a sec ..my pure love? I never knew it was a love ...said Sanyu battling herself

Sanyu you think u love him
sanyu nodded vigorously
but you are not sure about his feelings
again she nodded vigourously
Ok then you should surelygo for the party
you think so?
yeah I am damn sure of that
yeah..she said meekly
so go get him presents
okay I will go
Now I will get you one dress ..hehehe
No ...I will wear one kurta or something ...with a pleading voice
no..not if you are my bestie..with a victory smile twitching on her thin lips

So bye I will go get him presents..So you could do the bit of your work"..emphasising on the word "WORK"
let it be"...Kaustu said
So Sanyu bid Goodbye to her and unlocked her car
She drove past HIS office with a hope that she would see him looking out of his office windows
She went to the kid store and bought some gifts and not to forget about books
She waded her way back to the car with happiness jiggling in her
She went to her flat and parked the car in the garage
She unfastened the door shouting at the top of her voice
Kaustu ..Kaustu...kaustu
why the hell are you shouting ?
"I..I no nothing .."..said sanyu lowering her gaze
"okay ...here is your dress"...said kaustu trying to hide her giggles
"Thank you...my lovely bestie"..."sanyu said with a wink
Sanyu opened the cover of her dress and saw a black cloth swiftly placed inside
She took it outside ..."oh my god ..k this is so transparent I am f**king not gonna wear this."
"Common show a bit of your skin ,idiot "...said k faking anger
"oh god...when did I asked you to help me?"..collapsing on the nearby couch
"precisely 3 hours ago"..said k laughing
"Now there is a whole week for you to battle with your mind...now go and have your dinner"..said k crossily
Soon sanyu and k had dinner and had a pep talk and then both bid bye
Since Kaustu was staying at her place as her flat needed a bit of painting works so they went to respective rooms

Sanyu undressed and slid into the blankets and stared at the ceiling thinking about him and soon she drifted asleep

Soon her phone buzzed
she groped for her mobile and kept near her ears
"hello"...said s yawning
"sanyukta just come near the window "..somebody whispered from the other end
"Randhir ?"..suddenly her sleep left her hearing his voice
"come fast"...said Randhir grumpily
She juped from her bed and entered her feet into the slippes and she opened the windows
Randhir jumped inside and s slipped but she was caught in the midway with a pair of strong arms
"you are looking beautiful in this loose tee"...he said smugly
"shut up "...said s blushing
their noses were brushing and Randhir hand went near her nape pulling her closer towards him
"Randhir what are you doing ?"...said s shyly
"just admiring you"...he said in his husky voice sending chills
He brought his lips and pressed with her and started ...

"Dad stop this !what are you doing ...kissing your son without brushing
"dad nleave me ..." Aaron spatting on the floor
Suddenly Randhir woke up and muttered "Dream?"
"what dream ?"...Aaron asked with a grin
"you again saw Sanyu"...Aaron said again passing grin towards him
"shut up...dont dare to babble about this to sanyukta
"Give me my psp ..then I will keep my mouth shut
"oh god"...Randhir muttered under his breath

I know for the past 2 parts there was no sandhir scenes..but dont worry nxt ntime npakka sandhir scenes
love you guys
take care
Gowri:-D


This part nis dedicated to my two beautiful friends Ananya and Rashi
Love bayou lots...muaaah!!!!!!
Edited by CaLYpSoAmante - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#73
awww...
the update was cute but yet emotional..
thanks for reminding me in scrap..
vese i have already lined it up for my free time/.
amazing as always..
keep writing
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Posted: 10 years ago
#74
Update was really cute n amazing...
Loved it...
Especially the dream wala part☺️
And also that line when aron says kissing you son without brushing...oh gis that was too hilarious..
Update sooon...
N ya thnx for the pm dear..
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Posted: 10 years ago
#75
Okay now this is quick
After checking ur previous update record
This is ur fastest update till today
Great achievement lol


I m not praising I m complaining
Bcz I want frequent updates of this mindblowing story

I so in love with this story


Omg sanyu k kya reaction dia on seeing rd
He was inviting her for aaron b'day party

Sanyu trying so hard to avoid the situation
She don't want to put herself in any kind of embarrassing situation


Bt jab kausto jesi friend ho toh bachana mushkil nhi namumbkin hota h


She was trapped


Awww I loved sanyu n kausto bond

Omg sanyu confessed that she loves rd


Kausto the love guru giving love tips


Sanyu so exited for the party
I just hope party me sab good ho


Omg hot dream
Rd was dreaming all this
Aaron teasing his dad


Cnt wait for next
Update soon


Love u
Keep smiling
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Posted: 10 years ago
#76
Hey gowri...
It is awesome !!
It is a different concept n a unique one too...
u penned it very well...
The title is very catchy...I mean it can attract readers...
the way u r taking the story is very impressive..BRAVO !!
U r doing a commendable job for sure..
Now Randhir having dreams of sanyu n so sad of aaron...😆
Sanyu had fallen for RD..
Intriguing plot for sure. fascinating me...
well done..Its just superb,marvelous..
Thanks for the scrap..
love,
Harika..Keep smiling..It looks good on yu
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Posted: 10 years ago
#77
Oh my! I really wonder how I missed this awesome story?!
Thank you so much Gowri for PMing me this wonderful fiction.

The story started off with a marvelous note, i.e. SanDhir bickering and now is heading towards a beautiful phase, i.e. SanDhir romance. I'm loving this transformation.
There is this one character in this fiction whose characterization is just mesmeric. With slight naughtiness added to his innocense, I guess Aaron is the best character in this fiction. Well, did he just tease Randhir in the end of second part??😆😆 That was certainly hilarious... Beta baap se zyaad samajhdaar hai.🤣
The story is heading constantly and radiantly and your description of scenes is adding wonders to it.
I'm eagerly waiting to know what'll happen in the party?? And what's with Aaron's mother?? Where is she, rather, why isn't she with them??

Ah! Do update the next chapter soonish!!
Eagerly waiting for it.

Regards
Keya
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Posted: 10 years ago
#78

Originally posted by: samridhigoodiez

awww...

the update was cute but yet emotional..
thanks for reminding me in scrap..
vese i have already lined it up for my free time/.
amazing as always..
keep writing




Thank you ...
😆
Will try my best to update asap...,but am such a lazy pig ..so ...maph dena ..

Love ya
Muaah ...Keep writing & commenting 😉
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Posted: 10 years ago
#79
read ol parts in a go
& ol updts r suphr awhesmm
m in luv with this ff

last part is 2 emtonl bt suprb
loved it 2 the core..

updt the next part soon
m waitn

& pm me if possible..
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: ishq2051

Update was really cute n amazing...

Loved it...
Especially the dream wala part☺️
And also that line when aron says kissing you son without brushing...oh gis that was too hilarious..
Update sooon...
N ya thnx for the pm dear..



Thank you...:-D
You liked the dream wala part ...hehehehehehe
I will pm you for sure
Love ya
GowriB-)

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