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Posted: 10 years ago
#41
Awesome gowri..
Loved it..
M really waiting for the next chapter.
Btw thanks for pm
Sweety..
Love u..
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Posted: 10 years ago
#42

Originally posted by: newmoon18

Hay gaur I the update was superb

Totally rocking
Parth getting engaged to vids
Now sanyu going to show him she's the best

N kausto is in charge rd n Aaron in sanyu restaurant
Rd was hell surprised

Sanyu on a date in her own restaurant
Rd everywhere luking for sanyu
N sanyu too luking for him she was least in trusted in dat Sam

Sandhir face to face

Aaron coughing
Precap intrstng
Excited for it

Update soon wtng

Keep smiling 😊

yeah am gonna follow your orders
i mean "keep smiling"
because reading you peeps makes me so happy so i cant help myself from smiling too much
thank you again
take care

gowri😉
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Posted: 10 years ago
#43

Originally posted by: samridhigoodiez

Awesome gowri..
Loved it..
M really waiting for the next chapter.
Btw thanks for pm
Sweety..
Love u..

than you!!!
take care
i was not able to comment for your earlier comment
i am sorry but thank a lot for your motivations!!!!!!

gowri😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
#44

HELLO!i wont be able to update the nxt parts quickly as my PSA exam is in the nxt week

plz pray for me

enjoy the story

part ---------------------------5

sanyu was too shocked to see the sudden reaction from aaron anh his papa

rd:sanyukta ,tell me whats happening

s:how do i know

s:aaron ..baby can you hear me

someone from the crowd murmered

crowd:it might be food poisoning

rd to himself: food poisoning huh!

Rd thinking it was food poisoning shoved sanyu from aaron and took him in his arms and ran to his car

Meanwhile the ustomers started retreating back

Everybody feared of food poisoning !!!

But people who believed in sanyu and her food sat and ate without any fear

Kaust:sanyu,what was it?

S:i don't know but i want him to be safe and sound

K: the boy or his dad emphasising the word dad

S:what i mean him ! i mean both of them

I think he thought all this was caused by my food

Oh god why ?

K:just go and check on that boy

S:i am totally afraid !

K:what?

S: yeah i will jsut ..yeah make sure everything is okay!!!!!

K:yeah i will !

S:hmm

K:then get going

S;should i?

K: DO I WANNA KICK YOU OUT?

S:YEAH AM GOING

AT THE HOSPITAL

DOC; MR RANDHIR ...the symptoms was just of an appendecite ..it is common in all children and take care of yourself

I think you are not quite well at the moment

We have to go for a small surgery so you can take your time in the visitor's lounge

Rd: but!

Doc:sir please let us do our job and assure you tha..

Nurse:sir can you plz come to the ot

Doc;take care

Rd: yeah

Randhir was too tired to sort out million questions poking inside

But his mind was perfectly focused on the undignified manner he behaved in the restaurant ...he felt truly ashamed of that

But his guily consciousness was powerfully overtaken by the mighty sleep

Meanwhile sanyu parked her car in the parking place and hesitated for a sec

But soon changed her mind and walked in with a full attitude

While she helped herself near the ot

The nurse was frantically searching for rd who at the moment was dozing near by

Sanyu went straightly to the nurse and asked about aaron

The nurse was too eager to explain his conditions which satisfied sanyu thoroughly

N:would you like to see him?

S:yes i do

When sanyu he was fast asleep

The nurse left the room leaving a sleeping aaron to sanyu

Sanyu touched his silky head and under her little stroke he felt uneasy and tried to get some more nice from that hand

Adn woke up with a sudden urge to see the owner of the hands which stoked him to a lullaby

A: aunty

S:hey son...how do you feel now

A:i don't know..what happend

S:it was nothing you were facing an adventure and end you overcome those adventure

A:hmm without my knowledge ?

S:huh

S:yeah...leave those !

A:where is dad?

S: he is in the lounge

A:what happend?

S:it was nothing actually he was also a part of the adventure but he doesnot have that much courage as you have ..you little soldier

A laughed hard but that resulted in a fit of cough

S: hey are you okay?

A:i think so

But the nurse interrupted sanyu from asking questions

N:mam doc wnts to meet the patient's mother

S:mother?

Yeah i will come

Aaron wait till i come ...you are okay with that

A:but plz come as early as you can

Sanyu went out with the nurse and afterwards went to meet the doctor to discuss about the precautions

Sanyu heard it as aaron was her own blood and thanked doc for all his services

While she was returning from doc's office she saw book and magazine's rack

She went there and took twinkle from there

S[to herself]:he might like this

Sanyu went straight to the room

S:hey there!

A:you are here! I was so bored

S:what about reading stories

A:where?

S:tada

A:twinkle ...thank you!

At last it was sanyu who was reading to him

But aaron soon dozed off

While sanyu was patting Aarons silky hair

Randhir came in

Rd: sanyukta?

S:shh keep your voice down!

Rd:why are you here?

S:why cant i be here?

Rd;i mean am soory i should not have behaved like earlier

S:its okay i understand

Rd:you wanna come for a coffee

S:yeah but wait for i sec

Sanyu went slowly near the bed and covered aaron with bedspread

And kissed him lovingly!!!!!

Precap

Coffee time!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Comments plz...

thank you everyone for their supports and motivations

love ya all

gowri😉

Edited by candyfreak - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#45
The update was awsme yr
I so luved it to the core

Rd was so concerned for aaron dat he insulted sanyu
Bt sanyu was worried for Aaron
Thank god now he's fine

After so much courage sanyu came to meet him
She got so attached to him
Aaron too liking her

Precap intrstng
Wtng for update

N abut PSA don't worry its easy u will do awsme
All the best for it

Keep smiling
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Posted: 10 years ago
#46
Awesome update dear.. I just loved it.. <3
read all parts in one go.. n this is amazing..
so sorry for not commenting on the previous parts...
but from now on I'll comment in every part..
keep writing..
all the best for your exams..
love
Ashka
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Posted: 10 years ago
#47
Superb yar sanyu worried for aaroo and rd is feeling guilty precap is awsm coffee..

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Posted: 10 years ago
#48
wow... such a sweet update Gowri...

Sanyu caring for Aron...and Aron becoming fond of Sanyukta...

Can't wait for the coffee time !!!! Update soon

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Posted: 10 years ago
#49
Update was jst awsome
Loved it to d core
It ws fab...
Lovelyyy
Thnks for pm
Love yaa
Dhruvi
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Posted: 10 years ago
#50
Awww m.really sorry.. M hell late this time... I loved the update.. Nicely written.. Waiting for next part.. Precap sounds interesting. .

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