sandhir ff :risentimento#part 8updated on 12:) - Page 4

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Wooow jst read ur ff frm part 1!! Amazing n very innovative concepts n plot !! do continue soon n plz do pm wen u update d nxt part !
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Posted: 10 years ago
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hey there everyone ...!!!!!!!!
now the nxt part..ibut before reading all your comments made my heart a rush
my happiness is not having any bounds ...an thank you again for all your beautiful comments...

part...4

Sanyukta went to her new apartment which was near to her bustling restaurant

sanyu fished out her cell and called her best friend kaustu

s:hello!i want your help

k:got that...will come in nxt 20 minutes

sanyu after cutting the line

:that was quick

First she went to her kitchen which smelt of the new pista paint smell

She opened her too much filled fridge to get something to munch on till kaustuki arrives

While she took her newmade carrot cke slice ...the door bell rang

S:kaustu come in..its opened

k:hey there baby !how are you?everything fine

s:yeah kinda

k:what happend?why are you looking so gloomy

s:its about my ex

k:what about that idiot?

S:yesterday he came to give the invitation card

K:invitation card?

S:his engagement with that vidushi

K:i just cant believe my ears...he is getting engaged to that idiot

S:yeah andstarted tearing down those carrot cake

K:but sanyu i thought that you were not that much fond of that guy

S:its not about him...its about her

K:what is with her? You mean vidushi

S:yeah ...yesterday she told me that i am not that preettty thats why no one likes to date me or marry me

K:and you believed her

S:but it is evident

K:what is evident?are you insane...you are far more pretty than that jerk

S:really!!!!!

K:you wanna prove her!!!

S:yeah

K:tmrw onwards you are going to follow my rules and i will be with you in every second...OK!!

S:OK BUT MAKE SURE YOU DONT DRAG EVERY IDIOTS TO MY RESTAURANT ..you know i don't want someone to tag behind but someone who will bw with me forever

K:you are goonna get your prince charming

S:thank you and try my new recipes

While in rd home

Randhir:aaron ,are you ready...?

A:coming dad

R:here you are

A:take me to mamma sophie

R:mamma sophie?you want Italian ?

A:hmmand my frndz told that mamma sophie is the best in the town

R:really ...ok now buck in

In the restaurant

Randhir went near the opening but was surprised to see a bursting queue infront of MAMMA SOPHIE

NOW HE AND AARON too was in that queue

Randhir was really surprised whether it was the same restaurant he wrote those comments

But he was pulled out from his thoughts by the conversation of aaron and an old man behind him

Old man;son ,have you ever tasted the food of this restaurant

Aaron:no uncle ..its my first time over here.have you tried anything from here!

Oldie :yes son thats why i got my whole frndz...saying that he turned and showed him

Randhir out of curiosity turned back to see a long queue

RD [to himself]:I hope these people are illiterate

But soon randhir number was called out and he helped himself to a seat near the window

A:dad can i order whatever i want

R:yeah

A:dad are you here?

Where are you looking to?

R:huh?i mm...ean yeah

A:daddy

But the conversation was hindered

Waiter:what do you want Sir?

But rd was looking everywhere for the lady who had stomped into his office creating a HAVOC IN HIS HEART WHENEVER HE SEES HER!!!!!!!!!

MEANWHILE IN THE APARTMENT

K:sanyu !are you coming or not?

S:nooo

K:hear me ..you are the one who called me here to tell that you wanna prove that vidhushi she

is wrong but now what????????????????

S:but

K:no buts dear

S:but i don't want that guy

K:what is the problem ? he is the best looking guy in this whole town

S[whispered]:no ...he is far better than him...thinking about the guy possessing the twinkling eyes

K:what did you say now?

S:nothing ...to herself[no sanyu he tried to ruin your only business ...you should not fall for him]

K:sanyu...did you hear me

S:but do you really want him to come for date in my RESTAURANT

K:i am not going to hear your blabbering

Come wd me or i will go by myself to anywhere but not near you

S:yeah[half heartedly ]

Snayu and kaustu went to the restaurant while the waiter was serving food for rd

Sanyu just check who is here

S:omg he is so punctual

K:he is so interested in you

S:yeah

K:look he is coming near you

K:hey sam

Sam:hey![but looking at sanyu]

K:sanyu ..but sanyu was not looking at their direction

K was getting really irritated...:sanyu and shoved her near the corner and asked

:sanyu sam is here and where the hell are you looking?

[Talking and smiling at sam was quite a gift to kaustuki]

But sanyu shoved her and walked straight to the table near the window

S:hey you

R:h...e...y[fumbling for words]

S:what are you doing here?

R:huh? I am really sorry for whatever i said to you

Sanyu was not expecting such a straight sorry and was surprised

R:hey you here

A:hey what is your name ..prettylady?

Rd sat gaping at aaron for such an outspoken qn

S:sanyukta..dear!! waht is your name you sweet lair ?

A:aaron ..do you know her before?

s:yes ...aaron

but aaron was fidgeting to answer sanyu beacause he was choking and coughing an dat last vomitted


precap

rd angry with sanyukta

this is the most lengtheist chappy i have ever udated

only beacause of your motivation

love you all

gowri

and do comment and like and criticism tooo 😳


Edited by candyfreak - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#33
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Hey! Gowri
lovely, lovely, lovely, lovely, lovely,
lovely, lovely, lovely update dear😳😳
lovely, nicely n beautifully written👏👏
love it to the core❤️
Beautifully you've described the scenario
OGOD...SanDhir meet!!!😳
Randhir doing hard work...to get apology frm Sanyu!!!🤣
Aaron is a naughty n sweet boy😳🤣
love Sanyu n Aaron Conv...😃
Precap...Randhir anger on Sanyu!!! OMG what happen??
Ur an awesome, fabulous writer👏👏
Update ASAP
Eagerly waiting
Thanks for pm


Edited by Param_love - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#34
Hay gaur I the update was superb

Totally rocking
Parth getting engaged to vids
Now sanyu going to show him she's the best

N kausto is in charge rd n Aaron in sanyu restaurant
Rd was hell surprised

Sanyu on a date in her own restaurant
Rd everywhere luking for sanyu
N sanyu too luking for him she was least in trusted in dat Sam

Sandhir face to face

Aaron coughing
Precap intrstng
Excited for it

Update soon wtng

Keep smiling 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
#35
Loved the chapter! It was amazing
I loved sanyukta and kaustuki's bonding! And now Randhir has a son? That's quite interesting! Its gonna be so much fun reading the upcoming chapters! Loved how Randhir was mesmerized by the crowd he saw for the restaurant!
Loved the chapter!
The precap is very intriguing! Continue pretty soon gowri!

Keep writing,
Love,
Karishma. :* <3
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Posted: 10 years ago
#36

Originally posted by: karishmagsewani

Loved the chapter! It was amazing
I loved sanyukta and kaustuki's bonding! And now Randhir has a son? That's quite interesting! Its gonna be so much fun reading the upcoming chapters! Loved how Randhir was mesmerized by the crowd he saw for the restaurant!
Loved the chapter!
The precap is very intriguing! Continue pretty soon gowri!

Keep writing,
Love,
Karishma. :* <3


hey thanks bud !!!!!
i mean really...am so glad that you invite your fndz to read the ff
thank you again for all your sweet comments
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Nitra

Awesm thanks for pm

you are welcome!!!!
and thax for the comment😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
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thank you😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: anuaskif

Hey Gowri *frowning*


Itna late update and fir ittu chotu sa update??? Not done yaar...

*thinks.. its was your exams...*

Okay koi baat nai..

*Happily waves hands*

The update was stupendo-fantabulous *stolen term hai... but fir bhi use kia*

I think that Randhir's son will like Sanyukta's restaurant and will want to keep going back there every week... and Randhir will be hell irritated *grins*

Update soonish dear

Luv,
Anu


thank you...you may be wrong
but thanks for the long comments because i love reading
love ya
gowri😊
Edited by candyfreak - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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awesome lovely lovely lovely
superb amazing fab lovely
very very nice writing
awesome and interesting
superb. keep it up.
love it. update asap.😃

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