sandhir ff :risentimento#part 8updated on 12:)

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hello ...am again wd a ff and i read a novel yesterday and this idea suddenly popped out so bear wd me...me ...enough of my talks now the story starts .this is entirely different from saddahaq
the title risentimento means hatred in italian
this story is merged wd italian taste
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Destined to be enemies or sweethearts?

On any given day sanyu could usually find a compelling reason to eat choclate ...maybe the sun was shining too much or the clouds had drifted away
but today the case was neither ...sanyu bit into a luscious pleasing chocolate cannoli oozing with choc filling
anu :if you have one more bite from that cannoli you will gain 10 more pounds .now you lost your job too
s:it was not my fault ma how can i know that my boss was a mental patient who needs medicines rather than the files

a:but you didint get any warning right .now you have to get married soon .okay!what about the boy who runs the nearby store parth

s:ma stop it..i dont want to get married soon .i want to live the life and enjoy it.

a:sanyu!just look at your sister she is married to a doc and presented me with three beautiful grandchildren and your brother ...he had becom ethe priest
s to herself:tchh so whoever the unsuspecting future daughter in laaw had escaped a fate worse than death

as a middle child sanyualways felt somewhat ignored,she wasnt as smart as her bro or pretty as her sis .she was just.well,an ordinary girl

s:oh stop it ma ...i know how to live my life and i will do as my mind says
now you want me to enter into a relationship with soe store boy

a wonderful idea came ot her mindand she smiled at her own superb idea

s:ma i have decided to agree wd you
i am going to open my own restaurant

the plate crashed down
it was a bad omen

THE CAL RIPKEN COMPANY

RANDHIR paced in the confines of his office,wondering why in the hell the editer in chief ,vardhan ,had asked him to see

he wasnt worried that he would be canned and his sports column was one of the most popular at the paper
he straightened the collar of his polo shirt and flicked the lint off his trousers

suddenly the door opened and vardhan strolled in
v:rd my boy how the heck are you?love dthe last column you wrote on soccer .very nice .very nice indeed

rd:so am not going to get my promotion at all
what the hell is this sir am truly deserving for this post and you denied it again

v:but the lady's nephew wante dto be in hta post so we are not able stop him from casting forward
but he is a total looser so within 6 months you will be getting in those chairs

rd : so which department am in?

v:you know that elish went for delivery so her post is vacant for 6 months

rd:so what?no .no way . elisha is the food editor and restaurant critic .you are not suggesting ...?

v:now rd ,you have got the potential to handle this food sect .i know you will be able to do this my boy

rd stormed out from the office ,cursing his stars




now its time for their meet ...what will happen when sanyu opens the restaurant and rd as the food critic ...wow its going to blast
what if rd hate italian food and sanyu specialized in italian food ?
the fate and destiny coming together ...!!!!!!
so stay to hear what will happen when rd review her food
now comments please

part 1-----1
part2-------2
part3--------3
part4----------5
Part6...vagaries of mind...9
Part7...wrath of destiny...10
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Part 8____a long and lonely road..page 12
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hey! Dear
lovely written👏
love it😳
update soon
plz pm me
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Param_love

Hey! Dear

lovely written👏
love it😳
update soon
plz pm me
😃

thanks man !!
will update soon ...hope so !⭐️
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Posted: 11 years ago
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hello peeps!
i hope u are not bored with my new concept...fingers crossed!!
the part2

kaustuki:so tell me has he asked you out yet?

sanyu:yeah(stammering a bit)

k:oh gosh!he is not so handsome but yeah good!

s: dont imagine too much

k:okay i guess..and thanks for calling me as the manager of your new restaurant

s:the dynamic duo together at last

k:yeah got to go ...my bf is waiting outside

s:go and enjoy
she and k had done everything together as children :sleepovers ,spelling bees ,selling lemonade etc...

sanyu bought a new apartment after her acute decision ...she felt happy for being an independent lady after all the hurdles she faced in doing so
she painted her rooms with baby pink ...and kept the virgin mary's frame in her closet
she felt so relieved seeing her shiny new apartment...

her restaurant opened at last with a sizzling blast

the foods were accepted and encouraged so much that tear droplets formed in her eyes

she had never her heard this much appraise ...she knew that she was a good for nothing girl but now she changed the whole world by starting a restaurant of her own ...she felt so proud of herself

now she was driving to her hotel ...with all the excitement jiggling in her

she drove into the parking lot

she opened the front door to see people rushing in an dout
she sighed

she straightly went to the kitchen and saw the senior chef spatting on the floor

she felt horrified at the site

s:what are you doing ?

k came from nowhere and threw a paper to her

there was a photo of a handsome geek with twinkling eyes

k:dont look at his face but to his writing

the paper says
"ruskin street wants another italian restaurant ...
enter mama sophie the newest addition to the dining scene in the little india
newest but certainly not the best

one must give the owner ,sanyukta aggarwal ,points for trying ,but her endeavor falls short

if one rates the noodles by the rupees then i guess mama sophia will get five stars.the weigh more than this country's debt
what is the chef hiding in those food?...not certainly the taste but terrorist
it was so gruesome
whole it was dull and plain ,to say the least"

what the f@#k?
yeah i felt the same ...how can he just say some something like this?
s:i want to punch the shit out of this guy!!!

the way she elt towards the photo was changed entirely after the review...now those twinkling eyes turned into monster's eyes
i want to see this guy immediately

our people will believe in this review and wont spare to come inside
oh god ...is this going to shut down before blooming
she broke down ...hugging her knees

k :dont worry sanyu...the people are rushing into the place
it is booked all over

s:really

k:i swear baby!

s:but i want to meet this guy!

sanyu rushed outside without glancing back she wanted to take his revenge

she drove in dashing speed neglecting all the signals

she got into the office

receptionist :how can i help u madam

s:can i meat the restaurant critic

r:you mean randhir singh shekawat

s:yeah him

r:wait a min ...i will ask whether he is free or not

r to rd:sir here is a lady waiting for you
her name is sanyukta aggarwal and she desperately want to meet you

rd remembered the lady the lady with a horrid hair and to top it all with braces
he was not so interested in seeing her but he knew she cme to chew his ass off for writing those reviews but he have to meet the devil before it appear in your doorsteps

rd to r:let her come

r:you can go

snyu stormed inside without knocking

what do you think of yourself you man ...huh
you can write any shits you think...is that you think
i really respected your sports column but this is too much
plz do what you know ..your taste buds i sso bad so plz leave me and my restaurant !!!!!

saying that she went off in a rapid speed

rd was amazed
what?she is so beautiful ..then who was the girl he saw thee?
he dint waste on the other lady but the one who came to his office blasting his chair

sanyu pov

oh he was so damn cute

i want to kiss him at the moment ...sanyu concentrate on parth your bf ...forget him

i hope i didint make you peeps doze off in your sofa

plz comment
i am so desperate to read ur comments⭐️
Edited by candyfreak - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Gowri,
its a brilliant concept, and i am just loving it..
food critic and restaurant owner..
its surely getting interesting..
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hey! Dear
loved it...
plz pm me when you update

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Posted: 11 years ago
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the concept looks interesting .Really loved it .
please do update soon gowri
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Daawat-E-Ishq... nice...
Thanx for the PM... looking forward for the next chapter..
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Posted: 11 years ago
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hey chhotu
loved it
looking forward for other parts..
thnx for pm
love
dhruvi aka talky di
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Part 2 was damn interesting.
Randhir criticised her restaurant and she in turn came and told this and that..
what! Parth is her bf😲
and yesh! I m happy to c sanyukta like an independent woman..
now update soon gowri..waiting...

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