'Straight From The Heart' - My First OS - Page 8

Originally posted by: sparkling_gems

Very nice.. absolutely straight from heart.. now pls share a few pages of Randhir's diary too.

Originally posted by: --ScarletRed--

An OS from Sweta... Oh my Gosh!!!
This is your first OS, eh?? You've got to be kidding me...
My words fail to describe how beautifully amazing this OS is.. Even the word awesome can't justify simply justify it coz it's beyond that.

I'm eagerly waiting for the day when Sanyukta's heart would responds in the same way as you have depicted.
Every word, every quote seemed to portray a new emotion and in a magnificent way.
I simply loved this flawless OS...
But the only thing that hiked my anger was the length of the OS. I really hope that next time I get a much larger one...
It was a treat to read this OS and it made my day...

I'm eagerly waiting to read more OS and SS from you so you better begin with another work.
It was really nice to know that you've dedicated it to the cafe behnas... Love you the more for that...
-- With love
Kajal

Originally posted by: anki08

Hey Sweta,,You are that raw gem...First try,,and I am dazed to no extent..I always felt that you have it in you whenever i used to glimpse your posts...Its tremendous and commendable ,,being your first one -shot...It has that inherent brilliance and an artistic touch of whorling emotions..A very amazing job done...A conflict of passionate love and compassionate friendship,,it couldnt have a more wide and befitting outlook..The tussle between these ,,well has no ends..But well,,people mistake passion for short duration and disregard it as just an impulse-a sudden,,raging outburst of emotions..Passion is endearing and enduring too..I dont know about the survival of a passionate relation but i surely know the bliss and euphoria that one moment of passion gives...Well,,may be,,for some,,it is worth that..And so sorry for so late reply,,had been busy with assesments...Your first os,,i wouldnt miss it for anything..Stay blessed...Himani

Originally posted by: TheDreamyKid

Oh.My.God.

It is a rare feat to leave me speechless [look at how haughty I sound! xP] but this BEAUTIFUL, abso-effing-lutely beautiful piece of work has left me beyond words.

You're so brilliant! Thank god I checked my PMs today :')

Do write more, Sweaty? :P

Originally posted by: PrussianBlue

Hey Sweta!

I LOVE MADE OF HONOR! Patrick Dempsey! <3

Loved this one! Brings a totally new perspective to the triangle that the three of them are!

Very well written! Didn't feel like it was your first OS!

This was not torture! Don't you say that!

Love you, my KBG! :*

Always,

Aru!

Originally posted by: sweetieswagata

one word for this amazing OS

"PERFECT" 👏👏