'Straight From The Heart' - My First OS - Page 5

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Behen firstly thank you so much for dedicating this amazing piece of work to us cafe sisters
love you.
damn proud to have such an awesome dedication
😳
like seriously girl u write so well...
u should write more
would love to read longer more scripted versions 😉
ittu se drabble se humara kya hoga? 😛
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Now coming to the os itself...
I am firstly sorry behena...
i read this in the morning...
but i was left speechless at the beauty of what you had written
i just couldnt find words to praise this...
Its so beautiful and ahmazing...
like it signifies everything we've been shouting and trying to put across to people all these days...
you penned everything down to perfection sis.
You've made us all proud
You've shown what is sandhir and why we love them with this
thank you so much for writing this
it was an enchanting read though i was ready with madhus gun at the begginning para's i knew my behen couldnt do such a crime...and i was right...loved every bit of it.!!! Write more...would love to read more from you... :)
love.
ari :)

p.s tu phamous ho gayi behna along with ur os...twitter pe charche hai iske 😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
#42
Just one word...Beautiful!
Cnt reli describe in words wat I felt wen I read dis masterpiece.. Its truly Enchanting
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Posted: 11 years ago
#43

Originally posted by: SwetaRocking


Chandz! Galey Mil Yaar! Dil Khush Kar Diya!!! I Am So Goddamn Happy You Liked It. I t means a lot really!! Yes, I will Try To Write More . Thank You So Much For The Encouragement.
@Bold- OMG!! I LOVE those lines. Beautiful!

i m glad u liked it i thought i was a bit boring😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
#44
at the starting I was like 😲 😡 kya inni courage k mujhe sarth os bhej diya!! 🤣

But when I reached till the imperfect place... oh too cute it was... just amazing one!! the way she expressed her feelings for her MCP was so touching!! I really really liked it a lot!! 👏 ❤️
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Posted: 11 years ago
#45

Sweta, I don't know how you managed to bridge the gap between fact and fiction. I really wish that she writes this letter one day... and probably that day isn't soon... I am hoping it will come someday...

We all create that sort of silo or cocoon of feelings and expectations that tend to make us narrower in our approach of whom we want to be with and what characteristics we would like to have in our life partner... in short, my belief is, that the concept of a "dream man or woman" is completely a beautiful myth.

Atleast, I haven't not met anyone in my life who was not surprised by love !

And that is why they say, love happens... and your left with a feeling... like... "OMG, can I actually love him or her... they are so different than what I thought my life partner would be"... and I think that is a b'ful feeling...

No doubt, Parth is THE perfect guy and seems like a person Sanyukta has imagined to be with... but then the real reason is why is she feeling unsatiated... or is she too choked with the qualities... I don't know !

I believe it requires courage to accept a life partner with imperfections... reasons could be different for people... but when you accept someone who is not perfect or does not truly match with the guy in your imagination... you are actually taking a "risk"... going beyond your comfort zone and accepting someone "unconditionally"... you are actually making efforts to believe in someone knowing that their thoughts don't match with you 100%

And that is why I believe that, you should go with someone who compliments you and not supplements you...

Parth and Sanyukta, are simply the "Same" ... they might live a very stable and comfortable life because they truly "supplement" each other... but I don't know if they will have that sort of "magic" and sort of push each other to achieve their dreams (innovatively).

On the other hand, I don't know if Randhir and Sanyukta, will have a "happily ever after" sort of relationship, but they will surely make it worth living for... they simply compliment each other... when you have so much passion... chances are VERY high that you might up in a heart break or a broken marriage because, to be honest, I feel too much passion, love and care just sometimes drives us nuts !!! It leads us to that "black hole" of pain and ache...

But, even if it is only for a single moment... I bet it is worth experiencing and ENOUGH to live for a lifetime !!!

So, open your cages and let your hearts fly... don't be afraid to get hurt because pain is just an OPTICAL ILLUSION !

Edited by varshamitra - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#46

Originally posted by: KiShaholic.

Omggg wow wow! I am absolutely speechless Sweta. You have written SO WELL. Sanyukta's POV is so well penned down by you good god! I think Durjoy must have written the trio's track in a very similar manner.. I'm DAMN sure now! I tweeted this to the makers. I hope they read it! OMG. EPIC!


Thank You SO Much Yams!😳 I am So Happy You Liked It! And You TWEETED It To The Makers? *Dies*😆

Love You! Muaahhh!❤️
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Posted: 11 years ago
#47

Originally posted by: duskykaaya

it is awesome Sweta...I am in love with this OS...This truly defines Randhir Singh Shekhawat..I really hope that the show makes this OS true...Keep writing..PM me whenever you write your next OS,SS,FF or article...
Love
Kaaya


Thank You Kaaya. It Feels Good to know that all of you lovely people are liking it. Yes, I will PM you whenever I write next. thanks again. :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
#48

Originally posted by: richurachna

it is awsome...

u have penned down d emotions of sanyu superbly
keep writing dear


Thank You So Much😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
#49

Originally posted by: iraa_parsh

Had hai...I was offline :'(
Res!!

Edited:
First of all Thankyou for the dedication...hayeee!! Tu itni sweet kyu ho rahi hain day by day...shittt fevicol special episode ka asar ho gaya hain 🤣 🤣

Bwahahahaha! Fevicol Special epi ka nahi! Meri Meethai Ki Dukaan Ka efeect hain 🤣

Jokes apart...this sweet gesture brought a wide smile on my face.
Next time tell me before you post something...I won't be on page 3 then...like I'm right now. :'(

Sorry Re! Even I didnot know I was Gonna Post It!

Now coming to OS:
Dahling it was ethereal I swear! Such depth and how eloquently you depicted it. Muaaah you made me proud like you always do.You know that right?
This is what every SanDhir fan shouts and makes others understand that "Why SanDhir?" This is the reason why sandhir...
This OS was just perfect!!
I loved it.
I want to read more from you.

God! I Had To Reach Out For The Dictionary to understand those lines😆 Your Vocab Masha Allah! Thank You Basket! I am Effeng Happy You Liked it!
Guess what I have an idea! I'm going to PM to you right now.
Keep writing I Will! Thank You!
Love ya
Samaira
Love you too!!

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Posted: 11 years ago
#50

Originally posted by: LoveRantara

This was so beautiful

One of the best I've read


Awww..Thank you So Much😳

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