'Straight From The Heart' - My First OS - Page 7

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Posted: 11 years ago
#61

Originally posted by: asyshi

Just one word...Beautiful!
Cnt reli describe in words wat I felt wen I read dis masterpiece.. Its truly Enchanting


Awww...Thank You So Much. I am Glad You Liked It!😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Thank You😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
#63

Originally posted by: Sunshine_Ami

at the starting I was like 😲 😡 kya inni courage k mujhe sarth os bhej diya!! 🤣

But when I reached till the imperfect place... oh too cute it was... just amazing one!! the way she expressed her feelings for her MCP was so touching!! I really really liked it a lot!! 👏 ❤️


LOLLZZ! Pou! I Dont Wanna Die So Young! Then Why Should I Send You a Sa-rth OS? 🤣
I am SO Glad You Liked it! Love You!😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
#64

Originally posted by: Ms.P.K.Tunn

Bas? Ittu sa?

I was wishing for more :(

still I loved it !!

Keep writing!

Loads of Love :*


LoL! Issey Zyada Likhti Toh Torture Zyada Ho Jata! Thank You For Liking It. Love You!😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: varshamitra

Sweta, I don't know how you managed to bridge the gap between fact and fiction. I really wish that she writes this letter one day... and probably that day isn't soon... I am hoping it will come someday...

We all create that sort of silo or cocoon of feelings and expectations that tend to make us narrower in our approach of whom we want to be with and what characteristics we would like to have in our life partner... in short, my belief is, that the concept of a "dream man or woman" is completely a beautiful myth.

Atleast, I haven't not met anyone in my life who was not surprised by love !

And that is why they say, love happens... and your left with a feeling... like... "OMG, can I actually love him or her... they are so different than what I thought my life partner would be"... and I think that is a b'ful feeling...

No doubt, Parth is THE perfect guy and seems like a person Sanyukta has imagined to be with... but then the real reason is why is she feeling unsatiated... or is she too choked with the qualities... I don't know !

I believe it requires courage to accept a life partner with imperfections... reasons could be different for people... but when you accept someone who is not perfect or does not truly match with the guy in your imagination... you are actually taking a "risk"... going beyond your comfort zone and accepting someone "unconditionally"... you are actually making efforts to believe in someone knowing that their thoughts don't match with you 100%

And that is why I believe that, you should go with someone who compliments you and not supplements you...

Parth and Sanyukta, are simply the "Same" ... they might live a very stable and comfortable life because they truly "supplement" each other... but I don't know if they will have that sort of "magic" and sort of push each other to achieve their dreams (innovatively).

On the other hand, I don't know if Randhir and Sanyukta, will have a "happily ever after" sort of relationship, but they will surely make it worth living for... they simply compliment each other... when you have so much passion... chances are VERY high that you might up in a heart break or a broken marriage because, to be honest, I feel too much passion, love and care just sometimes drives us nuts !!! It leads us to that "black hole" of pain and ache...

But, even if it is only for a single moment... I bet it is worth experiencing and ENOUGH to live for a lifetime !!!

So, open your cages and let your hearts fly... don't be afraid to get hurt because pain is just an OPTICAL ILLUSION !


Oh My God Varsha! Where are your hands? I feel Like kissing them How In depth things you write! I Love you for that!😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Sorry Sorry Sorry ..Sweta...mujhe maaf kar do...please...i have un res the comment..and this comment will put ur os on the front page...please broom se maat marna
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Very nice.. absolutely straight from heart.. now pls share a few pages of Randhir's diary too.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: SwetaRocking


Oh My God Varsha! Where are your hands? I feel Like kissing them How In depth things you write! I Love you for that!😳


Sweta, you have written marvelously. It is written straight from the heart.. so emotional, deep and b'ful.. i just cant explain... I miss our crazy chats and i knew you always had that in you. I am so glad had that you finally penned down your first OS. You were my first friend at IF and will always be special. I would be waiting for your next update. Keep writing !!!
Simply loved it and it was written so b'fully that i transferred into another world while replying... 😛
Love ya 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hey Sweta,,You are that raw gem...First try,,and I am dazed to no extent..I always felt that you have it in you whenever i used to glimpse your posts...Its tremendous and commendable ,,being your first one -shot...It has that inherent brilliance and an artistic touch of whorling emotions..A very amazing job done...A conflict of passionate love and compassionate friendship,,it couldnt have a more wide and befitting outlook..The tussle between these ,,well has no ends..But well,,people mistake passion for short duration and disregard it as just an impulse-a sudden,,raging outburst of emotions..Passion is endearing and enduring too..I dont know about the survival of a passionate relation but i surely know the bliss and euphoria that one moment of passion gives...Well,,may be,,for some,,it is worth that..And so sorry for so late reply,,had been busy with assesments...Your first os,,i wouldnt miss it for anything..Stay blessed...Himani
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Oh.My.God.
It is a rare feat to leave me speechless [look at how haughty I sound! xP] but this BEAUTIFUL, abso-effing-lutely beautiful piece of work has left me beyond words.

You're so brilliant! Thank god I checked my PMs today :')
Do write more, Sweaty? :P

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